Date: 20 Mar 2011 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Wow how can Renee stand there and say things like that with a straight look on her face!!
Author's Response:
its horrible and i would never be so cruel to my own ever, some women arent maternal and that goes for renee, thank you so much for your review
Date: 20 Mar 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
oh eddie better watch himself. he is falling.....
Author's Response:
yea, he is such a sweet heart
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
well the trueth is out there now, hopefully charlie can nail james's ass and help jake out of trouble.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect
maybe miss bella should have checked her phone more often. good for you jake! i hope you really hurt the fucker!
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
i wonder how long until bella tells her parents? so good the rose reached out to bella.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread
bella and rose have a lot to talk about even if they don't know it yet.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul
as a teen mom myself i can not imagine my mom sending me away to deal with my problem.
Author's Response:
i agree, i was at once time also, baby at 16. i was pretty much on my own. My daughters father was my rock, I was one of the lucky ones during that time. thankyou for your review
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
poor girl. and big desisions to be made now.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
okay hate that ending the chapter was a build up to Renee return and only in the last chapter did she appear it was just to much of a cliffie.
Author's Response:
sorry for your displeasure of this chapter, i understand not everyone will enjoy this story, thankyou for your review
Date: 17 Mar 2011 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
If I was Edward I would get in touch with Esme and have her fax the horrible letter from Renee. This should show the judge that Renee would not be a good person to let the child be near. She deserves no rights. The Newton mother is a mother of a rapist. Case closed. Edward and Bella should just get married. They will not have to worry about this crap.
Author's Response:
Edward came prepared:) i agree thankyou so much for your review
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Love it...can't wait wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
thankyou
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Renee is nuts...one second she is calling this baby a bastard spawn and the next she is saying she is there to protect her rights as a grandmother. Neither of these women deserve any rights to this child. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks so much!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Please dont leave the update to long.
I am going to be sitting on pins and needles till I know what Renee and Michelle are up to. Grandparent rights... she just called the child a spawn... PLEASE Renee, grow up and act like and adult and not a 2 year old.
Right to do what, see the chile, if Bella chose to keep it, she could decided to tell them to fuck off... I like that one better.
Author's Response:
promise it will be up soon:) wont let you hang long
Date: 15 Mar 2011 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
I knew Charlie would see how Edward loves Bella. I love the Jake and Emily hit it off. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
I had a feeling this is what Edward wanted. I love it! I am sad for the baby, but she will be taken care of by Edward and Esme. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much, i love a good daddyward story
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
I am surprised Mike is not the one to do it. I understand Edward backing off a little. He feels close to this baby and it is going to be hard for him to let go too. Charlie is calling the baby his grandbaby. This is going to be hard for everone. Great job...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
OMG I am so pissed. she wants her rights as a grandmother to be heard when neither of them could be good mothers. Damn they both have a hell of a set of balls to pull bella in to court. it is bella's baby and charlie is her parent and is behind what she wants. if she wants to raise her baby she can. which is what she is thinking of doing with edward. but she wants him to be the father. i am shocked and pissed. i wonder if bella can sign her rights to her dad and edward. i am sure bella wants to be in her daughters life but maybe this will force her hand. i am sure she doesn't want those to shitheads to be anywhere near her child. my good her husband killed her son for raping all those women. what judge would give her custody. renee they have your own writing of you being a bitch to your own daughter
Date: 15 Mar 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 11 Karma's present
The first thing that comes to mind is Mike did it.... I can't wait to see. Great job...thanks!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
soon, i promise
Date: 15 Mar 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
I love Charlie! He made sure Renee got what she deserved.
I am so sad that Victoria's baby didn't make it. I hope Victoria is okay. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
thank you:)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 8 Poison Pen
Wow....Renee is one piece of work. I can't believe a mother could say those things to their child. I think when Charlie finds out about this letter, Renee won't be in that house anymore. She doesn't deserve a daughter as sweet and beautiful as Bella. It just makes me so sad for Bella. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
ah bloody hell was a cliffy lol id smack that bitch if she was my mother.
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 7 Home and Heartstrings
I love Edward's POV. Thanks!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 6 Flight or Fight
Bella needed to tell her story. Keeping it bottled up was not helping her. I hope she will feel better now. That kiss was pretty sweet, but I hope it doesn't get them into trouble because of their ages. Great job....thanks!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
wow those two cunts have some nerve. they deserve each other. hope the judge sees through their BS.
Author's Response:
i so agree with you
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
are Renee and Michelle out of their freaking minds!? i hope Edward had them banned for life from the child
Author's Response:
no question about it, edward would never let them near his child:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
I am trying to wrap my head around Bella's attitude. Edward and she are dating. Heck, he is trying to adopt her baby. She wants Edward, but she acts like she wants nothing to do with her daughter. If that is the case, why would she look at schools in the state? She is a walking contridiction. Maybe it is because she is so young, but she needs to get her shit straight.
I hope that this cusotdy fight will snap her mind into the right place.
How dare those bitches sue for some custody. Renee is a serious bitch. I hope that they bring the letter that Renee wrote to Bella. That right there is proof that she could give a shit about her grandchild!
I love that you made Edward a virgin. So sweet.
Thank you for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, Huge part is that she is young, she wants to be with him, she loves her daughter, but given how her mother raised her, she doesnt believe she would make a good mother for her daughter. she doesnt want to get her hopes up that things will actually work itself out, she is full of self- doubt. feel free to ask anything :)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
freaking renee, good chapter, you had my blood pumping there with the things i wanted to do that woman!
Author's Response:
me too, cant stand the woman:) thankyou so much
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
thankyou so much
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 5 Cause and Effect
I am glad the truth is going to come out, but it is sad Jake is in jail and not James. Great job...thanks!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
renee just called the kid a bastard spawn and now she wants her rights preserved clearly the woman is crazy
love the story can't wait for more
just keep up the good work
Author's Response:
thankyou so much, renee isnt maternal at all, she justwants to hurt bella
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
I am glad that Rosalie was paying attention and talked to Bella about what she saw. That will be a lot of help to Bella. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much
Date: 14 Mar 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
WTF? Are you kidding me. The nerve of these two wackadoodles!!!!! Grrrrr.
I love how Edward stood up for Bella to Renee.
Author's Response:
wakadoodles... my new favorite word.lmao. thankyou so much for your review
Date: 14 Mar 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
omg they better not get that baby please and i need more
Author's Response:
I promise very soon, thankyou so much for your review:)
Date: 14 Mar 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
I'm nervous for Bella and Edward and their child now that Renee is being selfish and joining the dark side.
Can't wait to read what's next!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much for your review, it wont last long:)
Date: 14 Mar 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 Common Thread
I hope Bella learns in these session that she didn't deserve this. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much:)
Date: 14 Mar 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 Discarded Soul
I can't believe the way parents treat their kids sometimes. I think it is very sad. They ship their kids off when they need them the most. I really wish Bella would have been honest about what happened to her. This was not her fault. Great job..thanks!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
How sad for Bella. I hope they can get James for this. I can't wait to get caught up with this story. Great job...thanks!
Author's Response:
ty so much for your review
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Okay, I want to kill Renee & Michelle myself. I hope they have their asses handed to them by the judge. Edward and Bella and Charlie don't deserve any of this shit. They need an attorney with them.
Great chapter! Until next time!
Author's Response:
Jane came with them, she just hadnt showed up yet,...:)
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
well in the end i hope that it goes bella and edwards way! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
promise edward will be prepared and protect his family
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
OMG is Renee for real. She doesn't want anything to do with the baby, she just wants to hurt bella. As a grandma myself I sure hope neither one of these women get to be any where near the baby. They can spew their hatred somewhere else. Thanks for sharing
Author's Response:
thankyou... first one so far to see her motive, thankyou so much for your review
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
no WAY! that women is crazy!!!!! why would you do that to her when you just called your "granddaughter" a bastered!? You have some nerve lady! and the Rapists mother...you have no rights what so ever your son raped her! You have no rights in my book ladies!!!! update soon please
Author's Response:
i agree:)
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
:)
Author's Response:
ty
Date: 14 Mar 2011 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Oh noes. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
wont last long i assure u
Date: 14 Mar 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
FUCKING BITCH! I HATE HER SOOOOO MUCH! SHE NEEDS TO GO DIE IN A HOLE! I love your story and I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon!
Author's Response:
Wow i so agree, i feel the same way thankyou for your passionate review,
Date: 14 Mar 2011 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
I cant believe Renee one minute she is calling the baby a bastard and the next she is saying she wants to be a grandparent what a bitch. Edward still has his V card wow I loved what he said to Bella about wanting to have there first time to be special.
Author's Response:
Renee sole goal is to do anything she can to hurt bella, what better way then to try and destroy the life she wants her daughter to have, edward didnt come to forks un prepared... yes edward still has V card, shocking. thankyou so much for your review:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
Love it!!! I hope the judge totally FORBIDS Renee and Michelle from EVER deeing that precious little girl! I can't wait for all of the weddings coming up too:)
Author's Response:
Edward came prepared...:)
Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 16 Bad Company
The judge just needs to see the letter that Renee wrote to Bella and to learn that James raped Bella....Then he'll laugh his ass off and throw them both in Jail for wasting the courts time.
Raspists families don't get rights.
With Renee's criminal behaviour she won't get any either.
Hopefully, Bella will file restraining orders against these horrible women.
Author's Response:
ur so right... Edward came prepared... promise:)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Gosh you scared me for a moment with bella thinking her water broke. Loved the comment in the end. Love your story
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 9 Anatomy of Loss
Renee is lucky Charlie only had her arrested. How a mother could be so vilecas to send her daughter such a letter.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1 Stolen Innocence
So happy it wasn't Jacob that raped her. But hate how she won't tell her parents the truth.
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Well Edward sure let his declared his feelings to all this chapter.I was just picturing Bella taking off in a speed because she thought he water broke an bursting in on Edward it's kind of funny don't you think.
Author's Response:
thankyou so much for your review, i love that this chapter made some laugh cause we all needed some humor to cut the drama some
Date: 07 Mar 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
You would think he would at least wear boxers, since he lives in a house full of females who could go into labor at anytime. I found that so funny, especially when he said go to sleep Bella.
Author's Response:
thankyou so much, i wanted to add some humor to an already emotional story. thank you so much for your review
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Well it is really sad that Emily and Jacob found each other and then Jacob had to leave!!! I really hope that he comes back and gets the girl!!!
Author's Response:
I always believe what is meant to be will always find a way:), thankyou so much for your review
Date: 05 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
I am so glad that their relationship is out in the open now and they can kiss in front of people. It seems Tanya is a littel jealous. Oh and Renee is coming back? That can not be good.
Author's Response:
I am too, Tanya certainly is jealous... unfortuntely Renee coming back is never a good thing, thankyou so much for your review
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
awesome chapter >;) can't wait til the next one
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much for your review
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
that was scary there for a few moments. i am glad it was not bella it wasn't her time. emily had a boy healthy one at that. love that she and jacob are getting along well. seems there might be something there.
i am hoping bella and edward talk about tanya. seems tanya might want to spark things up. but it seems edward and bella are figuring things out as they go along. hope she is able to get a scholarship since i know she won't let edward pay for it
Author's Response:
Bella has had way to much stress for me to spring a way to preemie baby on her. Tanya will be a nuicence for only a short time. This Edward will not be naive and fall for that trap... Thankyou so much for your review, look forward to them as always
Date: 04 Mar 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
wwell isnt Skankya a troublemaker.
Author's Response:
I am hoping for a minor problem
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
ugh! Renee is coming back! better get the pitchforks out......
Author's Response:
i agree.. but Renee was never just gonna walk away... at least i warned ya
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2011 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
I love that Bella thought her water broke and how she walked in on NAKED Edward!
I can understand people sleeping though the water breaking, it is the pain that I can not fathom.
I have a offer for you, i am not sure if you have a beta but I would be happy to proof read your story before you post if you would like. I live in Australia so I am not sure if the time differece would be a problem for you, my turn around is excellent just ask Michele that writes People Like Us. and Missie that writes For The Love of Domination. I think the latest I have every been for either of them was 1 day.
I would be happy to help if you would like.
Author's Response:
yes i would like that those are some wonderful stories and i would be honored
Date: 03 Mar 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
ahh man renee's coming back?!WHY..... damn..
well the ring thats interesting,sad emily is leaving :( what is bell going to do about school?and charlie knows!oOo tanya is a B**** yeah she needs to change from claire conflict of interest.update soon
Author's Response:
She will look into schools there but if nothing pans out for her in Arizona she will go to New hampshire. Tanya wont last long. and even though Claire has no malice towards Bella, she had no choice but to change. Thankyou for your review
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
OMG I cant wait for the next chapter to see what is going to happen with Renee the bitch from hell and what about a ring. What the hell is wrong with Tanya she just cant stop being a bitch can she LOL. Charlie took the info very well things will be good as long as Edward does not hurt her.?
Author's Response:
Renee had to come back it was inevitable... Tanya wont lasr long, i assure you, i have enough villians in this plot;) thankyou for ur review
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
:)
Author's Response:
thankyou
Date: 03 Mar 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Looooooooooooove the story, you got me hooked for about 4 hours in my chair. Update soon!
Author's Response:
aww thankyou, for a frist time writer i am so blessed
Date: 03 Mar 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Good Chapter.....
Author's Response:
thankyou
Date: 03 Mar 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
thankyou
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
I think Bella needs a new therapist.
Tanya needs to back off.
Hopefully Renee returns in a body bag after suffering a cruel and painful death....
Author's Response:
I agree, I dont ever forsee any malice with Claire, but it will be a conflict now with tanya.. the Tanya thing wont last long and Renee always brings destruction
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next one!
I have had two pregnancies and both were like night and day. I didn't sleep through my watering breaking. I've never really heard of that. I did go through 10cm of labor at home, w/o realizing it and my baby was born within 10 mins of getting to the hospital. It was a close one. I had been at the hospital earlier that day and the dr sent me home. I just thought I was being a pussy and wouldn't give in to going back to the hospital until it was almost too late. My water broke within 5 mins of my daughter being born. It was crazy.
Have a great rest of the week and a great weekend!
Author's Response:
My son's water didnt break till he was born and then he came out with his hand on his head.. My last was the worse i thought my spine would split in two. i know know what back labor feels like. thankyou for your reciew i always enjoy hearing everyones stories
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Please update soon, I love this story.
Author's Response:
thankyou so much
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
great chapter, but i don't think Bella could handle stress of a tanya proportion with this baby. Please do not throw any monkey wrenchs into a beautiful story
Author's Response:
tanya isnt gonna last long, bella has to much to deal with already, thankyou for your review
Date: 03 Mar 2011 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 15 Thankful Blessings
Edward is soooooo wonderful! please update soon!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thankyou so much, i love sweetward
Date: 03 Mar 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
It is so good that Bella is going to try to go to school in Arizona so that she can be close to Edward and the baby!!
Author's Response:
Thankyou for ur review
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
Awesome!!!!
Author's Response:
thankyou
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
gotta love rosalie protective mumma bear. awesome chapter - enjoy setting up your new house - until next time :)
Author's Response:
thankyou so much. rosealie is one of my faves here
Date: 23 Feb 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
I hope your getting settled in, in your new home. I am so happy that they have finally admitted their feelings for each other. I knew that Charlie figured it out. lol
Author's Response:
i have got settled and we are adjusting. i am glad they admitting feelings... This edward was gonna give me whiplash..lmao i kinda thought people would catch on abt charlie knowing..lol
Date: 23 Feb 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
I had a feeling that Charlie would be able to figure out Edward's feelings for Bella. I'm so glad that Jacob was able to surprise Bella w/ a visit and I like how he and Emily are really getting along. It's good to know that Emily is happy around him.
Author's Response:
Jacob needed to come back in the story... this was a good way
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
Wonderful chapter, it would be nice to see Bella let her guard down, and accept the fact that Edward loves her. It is going to be interesting to see what happens in the future.
Love it.
Author's Response:
thank you.. yea it is nice to allow Bella to start feeling things.. she has to be able to feel if she hope to get past everything with james
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
Edward just better bite the bullet and tell Charlie the truth. Bella should also. Edward should also help her look into schools. They need to be together. Bella is not going to be able to concetrate at school when Edward and the baby are all the way in Arizona. She will miss them and be worried about the baby.
Author's Response:
Thankyou:)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
:)
Date: 23 Feb 2011 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 4 Mothers Embrace
Just a correction in Chapter 4. You say that Esme and Bella are heading "to Port Angeles for party supplies." Port Angeles is in Washington state near Forks, while you have placed the Cullen Home for Unwed Mothers in Phoenix, Arizona. I don't think they would drive 2,000 miles for party supplies. Just saying....
Author's Response:
i was aware, my beta is going through this chapter and when it gets cleaned up i will post with the correction, thankyou for the review
Date: 23 Feb 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
good chapter.....
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
Oh please let her find a school there. Great Rose the protector LOL. I am so happy they told each other there feeling for each other. How is Charlie going to feel about them being in love.
Date: 23 Feb 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
oh shit how'd he figure it out? what is edward going to say?update soon
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
i love that jake got to come with charlie to see bella. wow rose you go girl. very protective got to love her. it seems like the girls are moving on and getting their lives together. even seems as if jake has meet someone. bella and edward are figuring things out. it is great she is looking into schools around the area. they seem to know they want each other, they crave each other. edward will be a great father and i think she will be thanking him for the chance to be part of her daughters life. she just can't afford what her daughter needs but it doesn't mean she loves her any less. i think charlie will be thrilled as well since he talked about wanting the baby. love it
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
It's sad that Bella's baby has a heart defect and Edward adopting the baby is real good I don't know how Charlie is gong to take it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
damn, Rose is a little pitbull...lol. Wonder how Charlie is gonna take the news.....
Date: 23 Feb 2011 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
Best Part:
it feels like home when I am around you, You are my home, remember that journal I gave you?”
“ yes”
The translation on the cover says “ Your heart is my new home”
Author's Response:
thankyou so much:)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
thank you sor such an emotional story!!!
Author's Response:
thankyou so much
Date: 22 Feb 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
Good chapter with lots happening. I'm glad that Edward and Bella are finally acknowleging their feelings for each other and Bella is going to look for schools in the area.
Author's Response:
thankyou
Date: 22 Feb 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thankyou for being my 300th review... means alot to me
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
I genuinely love this story:) Poor Jacob! Comforting his friend and almost gets his but handed to him on a platter!
I hope you are getting settled from your move. I know how bad it sucks I am moving in 2 weeks so I feel for ya! Can't wait until the next update:)
xoxoxo,
Jo
Author's Response:
good luck with your move... it went well. we are adjusting but i dont want to do this again for awhile ty for yr review
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
well cant wait to see what happens nex and i hope she decides to stay close to home with the baby
Author's Response:
im pulling for them...:) thankyou for ur review
Date: 22 Feb 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
wow prtective rose is cool.
awwe emily and jake.
hmmmm wonder what charlie will do now.
Author's Response:
Thankyou... next chapter will be up soon:)
Date: 22 Feb 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
: )
Author's Response:
TY
Date: 22 Feb 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 14 The heart won't lie
wow, loved this chapter !!!! I can see charlie plain as day liek he is standing in my living room, rocking on his heels looking at Edward ha ha haha !!!
Author's Response:
I'm trying to get better with my desciptive words.... thankyou so much:)
Date: 03 Feb 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
AWW It is really sad that Bella's baby is sick but it is wonderful that Edward wants not only the baby but her and is willing to wait on her until she finishes school.
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
I love this Edward. He's the best!
Author's Response:
thankyou, hes pretty special... daddyward is awesome
Date: 02 Feb 2011 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 12 skeleton's in the box
I think that Claire and Charlie should get together. If Claire isn't married. I forget if she is or not. We'll see.
Date: 02 Feb 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
Edward is so sweet! I really love this story! Good luck with the move and I can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
Thankyou:)
Date: 02 Feb 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 13 The ties that bind
wow didnt see that one comming ! sad that the baby is sick and i hope that everything works out !
Author's Response:
HEA all the way... i promise