[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2019 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
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Date: 06 Jan 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
This chapter is so heartbreaking!!! *sobs*
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
*fanning myself frantically*
Date: 04 Jan 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 11
My teeth are hurting!! This chapter is so sweet and it's giving me cavities!!!
Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
Perfect wrapup to this story, which had everything, laughter, tears, heartache and joy! Love will always win out and end beautifully as well!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
I look forward to the epilogue, and the twenty-eight chapters of outtakes! This has been one of the most wonderful stories I've ever read. I'm thrilled at the way you made it all turn out right, with a happy ending!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 29
What a rollercoaster ride this was! I have no words worthy of this chapter, it was absolutely the best! I think you made magic in this one!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
This was surely the best chapter yet! I couldn't help the tears when Edward called Carlisle Dad, and the angels literally sang and Seth was so proud! This story has choked me up before, but this time they were happy tears! I try not to dwell on why Seth is with Edward but I'm dreading his death so much!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
It touched me deeply when he got that heart inked over his heart, and had a matching pendant made for her! Their connection blows my mind, and I can only describe it as profound!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
It's taking some time, but everyone is getting better now they know the truth behind Edward's previous demeanor! I have decided Seth has no choice but to be enthralled with Isabella, she's an amazing woman! Edward is such a lucky guy!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for the short look at Carlisle and Esme going home after their son's big reveal! They aren't bad people, just human, with the faults that entails. As for Bella and Edward and the kids, that was the perfect opening for talk of their own child. I knew she would want a part of him, if she was forced to live without him!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
What happened tonight at Bella and Edward's house was sort of like lancing a boil and letting out all the poison! Now they all can heal! You must have wrestled with the last few chapters to make them as real as you did!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
That must have been the crowning blow for poor Edward, after all the years and all he had to endure! No wonder he felt they never wanted him! The last couple chapters have been truly gut-wrenching to read, I can only imagine how they were to write!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
That whole story was heartbreaking, to say the very least! What was done to that boy was as bad as if they had beaten and starved him , instead they beat and starved his heart and soul! No damn wonder he tried to forget all that!
Date: 04 Nov 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 21
As horrible as it was for him to hear, she needed to unload all that so much! If this doesn't destroy them, it has to bring them closer to each other! Crossing my fingers and hoping for the best!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
I don't know enough words to describe how powerful their loving was in this chapter! WOW!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was such a satisfying way to tell of that snake, I'm so impressed by Bella! This change that has taken place in Edward seems to have a ripple effect, first with Anna and then some with Alec! Great influence, too! It's sort of like the good in Edward's life is rubbing off on others in need of it!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was really nice and so touching, that Seth was rendered speechless! Edward is so different from what he was it just amazes me!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
The contrast between the dynamic of Edward and Isabella, and Vincent and Anna is staggering! Could there be two couples more different? I think not!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 16
A simply wonderful chapter! It's no wonder Seth is proud of Edward's progress, he's made great strides!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward seems to be getting better at these apology sessions. I'm looking forward to the weekend as much as Edward is, maybe.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter, and yes, I can see why it was your favorite, so far! I'm voting for Edward having gone home to move all her things back into their shared bedroom! Must be his present for her!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the tissue warning, that whole chapter was just a bit gut-wrenching!
Date: 03 Nov 2014 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Isabella must be so proud of her husband's efforts to change and be nicer to his family! He sure is good with Jack and Emma, maybe he can be better for Carlisle, too! I wonder why it hasn't occured to him that he and Bella could have a child?
Date: 03 Nov 2014 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 11
Rose is a woman after my own heart, if you feel it, say it and let the chips fall! It's so much easier to be up front and honest, too bad it takes notice of looming mortality to show that to Edward! Now he needs to get straight with his adoptive parents.
Date: 02 Nov 2014 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 10
Rats! If only I didn't need to get some sleep! This getting really good! From the looks of it, Rose is about to put Edward's feet to the fire!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 9
Don't know what Seth thinks about Edward's progress, but I think he did pretty well, for starters! He sure made an impression on Jasper, Emmett, Marcus and Alec! Not to mention his driver and secretary!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
So there is trouble ahead at Cullen Publishing, and I'm wondering how that all factors into Edward's short future! The confrontation with his friend ought to be enlightening!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
Seth keeps prodding Edward to start making amends with his whole family, a few friends and colleagues. If his time is limited, he best be busy! The hints of his awful childhood are making me nervous, too!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
This amazing day had an equally amazing end! I had tears in my eyes over the way Seth said goodnight to them both!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Crossing my fingers for the both of them, I'm invested in this story, rooting for the two of them to have the marriage they need and deserve!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope that she will be able to handle the truth of what caused his transformation! After all, he's the one with the angel helping, not her!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
I admire Edward for facing up to the fact of his demise and wanting to make amends before he goes! Now I wan to hear what he's going to tell his wife!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good boy, Edward, for paying attention to Seth! Now get busy doing what he told you to do!
Date: 02 Nov 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looks like Bella's prayers may be about to be answered! Looking forward to what Seth will be suggesting to Edward!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
I LOVE THIS STORY AND HAVE REALLY ENJOYED READING IT!!! :)
Date: 08 Oct 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 30
Awww...this is so fantastic!!! :)
Date: 08 Oct 2014 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 29
SO FANTASTIC!!!!
Date: 07 Oct 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 28
This is so freakin unbelievably fanfriggentastic! I love this story so so much!!
Date: 03 Oct 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
Fanfriggentastic!!! :)
Date: 02 Oct 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well, that was quite lovely!!! :)=)
Date: 29 Sep 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think I may have already mentioned how much I love this story! ;)
Date: 29 Sep 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG! This is so fantastic!! I wonder why Jasper is so angry? ;)
Date: 29 Sep 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Fanfriggentastic story! She may just have to move heaven and earth to keep him around! lol I love this!! :)
Date: 29 Sep 2014 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my! I love this story so much already! I am so hooked! :)=)
Date: 29 Sep 2014 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is so fantastic!! :)
Date: 29 Sep 2014 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
This is such a fantastic story!!! :)
Date: 29 Sep 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
I LOVE THIS ALREADY!!! :)=)
Date: 28 Sep 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Awww...that's a nice start! :)=)
Date: 28 Sep 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
OMG! I think I am going to love this!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 31
absolutely awesome story ;) thanks so much for posting it here ;D
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow!!!between the last chapter and this chapter I don't think I have any tears left. I have read all your stories on fan fiction and I think this is the best one yet. I hope and pray that you never get tired of writing about our Edward and Bella. You are a very talented writer and I love all your stories.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love this story and I know it's already completEd but can I please have the Seth out take....I really want to know where he goes.
Date: 18 Jul 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wonderful story though I was hoping that Edward would have told Bella about Seth.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
this was a very intense chapter and I really enjoyed it!
Date: 16 Jul 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
ooooooohh you tell him Eddie!!!!
Date: 16 Jul 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am really enjoying this story but am waiting for Edward to explain to Bella all about the plane trip -- Seth and all -- I think she would not only understand but also, believe him too!
Also, are you still sending out the extras?
Date: 16 Jul 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Well I hope that he gets his kids that he saw
Date: 15 Jul 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think that he should tell these 3, at least, what happened on the plane. I think that they would understand especially after seeing all the changes he has already made.
Date: 15 Jul 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Is the reason that the state of CP because Bella is going to get pregnant before Edward's time is up? That would actually be a grand thing in my book though. It would give Bella a part of Edward to keep with her!
Date: 15 Jul 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am really enjoying the story thus far. I hope it continues to keep my attention like it has so far!
Date: 14 Jul 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
HMMMM! This just might be very interesting, indeed!
Date: 12 Jun 2011 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 31
Thank you so much, Erin, for the wonderful story!! It really did warm my heart and make me cry, but for the best of reasons! Thank you for sharing--it was an honor to read!! Bonnie
Date: 06 Jun 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 31
Loved it! Thank you for this story, super sad to see it end!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 31
You are an amazing writer and I look forward to reading The Breakers. I just want to say that I loved The Greatest Gift and I am sad to see it go. Thank you for taking time and writing such great stories!!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 31
thanks awsome story
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 31
wonderful ending. no tissues needed, but a few more smile lines may have formed.
Thanks for writing and sharing with all of us.
Date: 05 Jun 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 31
im excited that they got their happy ending!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 31
wonderfull story i loved every chapter.
Date: 27 May 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 30
Aw - poor UncleWard!! :-D BTW, the kiddy parts of this had me ROTFLMAO, but the first bit was kind of depressing! Stil, great job hon!!
Date: 22 May 2011 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 30
sad to see this story go but excited to see what you have instore next ! loved this bella and edward! cant wait til lthe epi
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 30
Great chapter as always. Glad they got to go to Ireland.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 29
YAY!!!!! Ok so I am sad that Edward got hurt-but I am SO happy he came back!!!!1
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 29
i have loved this story soooo much! thank you so much for not killing edward! and i was right about the baby, yay!!! wish it didn't have to end...
Date: 15 May 2011 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
You scared me there, but i had hope.... loved the chater, can't wait for the ending.
Date: 15 May 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 29
Really I think I started crying when I read the first sentence of this chapter!!! Oh my this one was a hard one to read but I am so happy that he is alive and they are going to have a baby. Oh and don't even get me started Seth!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter! Loved it. I never doubted you for a second!
Date: 09 May 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 28
im excited to see what happens next chapter
Date: 09 May 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Aww he called Carlisle Dad...fantastic!!! I love this story and look forward to our Sunday updates but I am so scared now that it is coming to the end. I will have faith when you say it will have a HEA.
Date: 08 May 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 28
Hmm, what day do you celebrate it? Here in Ireland it's already happened.....
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
You are a true artist. I love this story so much
Date: 08 May 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
Awesome chapter. I had a lump in my throat the whole time.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
choked up and happy for them all ... still chanting HEA HEA HEA
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 27
keeping up the chant *HE HEA HEA* i love this story
Date: 02 May 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 27
well i hope she gets preggo! and soon !
Date: 02 May 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
sorry, still faithfully reading, sometimes i just have to run and forget to leave a review. Iwill admit i am trying to keep the faith, but i am getting nervous. ( HEA - HEA - HEA) my nightly prayer !!
Date: 02 May 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
Sorry - 's just some parts of this are depressing!! :-( Even more so since you seem so intent on killing off SuitWard!! :-(
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2011 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
The tattoo was such a cool idea. Glad he got to reconnect with Sophie.
Poor Seth. He's gonna have a breakdown soon.
Date: 28 Apr 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 26
well i hope that they decide that they want to try for kids! im excited that everything is out in the open an they are getting better and better every chapter
Date: 25 Apr 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm very glad that a friend recommended this story. I read it until the last chapter last week and was looking forward to an update. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for the HEA you have promised.
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 26
i am still keeping the faith * sits in a meditating pose chanting HEA HEA HEA*
great chapter.. kepp up the good work
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
thanks good chapter
Date: 24 Apr 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
sweet chapter. Seth does know how to push buttons. Glad he got one on one time with Em. Hope he and Carlislse can work stuff out.
Date: 23 Apr 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
well im exicted t osee what happens next
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
Every day we live on borrowed time.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
Ugh - you're STILL going to kill him off?! I might have to stop reading now then, so I don't cry later on!! :-(
Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 25
{gasp} u snuck in a seceret bonus scene....naughty naughty. lol
Sweet chapter. Glad to see them spending quailty time together and with thier niece and nephew.