Date: 25 Jun 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
well hot damn! at least the 3 unwanted cullens will be leaving soon.
Author's Response:
Yes, they will all be leaving for their pilgrimage soon. XOXO
Date: 25 Jun 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
so much eddie and alice hating going on! it is too funny!
Author's Response:
Well, do you like Edward and Alice? XOXO
Date: 25 Jun 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow bella's story kinda sucks but she has riley and vic and irena and larrent. i think it is so funny how everyone is hating hardcore on eddieand alice
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella had her family with her so she didn't fall into deep a depression. XOXO
Date: 24 Jun 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
uh oh looks like brother found her. time for some explaining i think.
Author's Response:
And boy will there be some explaining... XOXO
Date: 24 Jun 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well bella definately controlled that situation! And who the hell is her brother!?!?!?!
Author's Response:
Ah, the brother...wish I could tell ya but his name slipped my mind. XOXO
Date: 24 Jun 2011 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh boy! Eddie is an asshole, em is loud as ever, daddy c is going all parental, and jasper had to pull out the major! This is gonna be a fun night!!
Author's Response:
You've got it! Thanks for your review. XOXO
Date: 24 Jun 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
Heehee I am lovin how everyone is hating on eddie! And bella she seems like a pretty cool chick!
Author's Response:
Bella is pretty cool, but she'll be going through some tough times. As for Eddie, not everything is as it seems. XOXO
Date: 24 Jun 2011 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
this one sounds like fun!
Author's Response:
Thank you and welcome to the crazy ride. XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
I don't know where you come up with these conversations, but they are too damned funny for words!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, my brain is an odd universe. XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
LMAO!!! Another spermal expulsion?!? That was too damned funny!!! I had a feeling it was Bella's friend's wedding upstairs.
Author's Response:
Ah, Peter's horrific excuse for leaving the funeral, I mean wedding, to go to a real party. I'm glad you liked it. XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG!!! Esme faking sex on the phone was fucking classic!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh, yeah, Esme was perfect in her excuse to cut Alice short. *wink* XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Esme is a bit OOC, but I like bitchy-don't-fuck-with-me Esme. ;)
Author's Response:
Esme's personality will do a 100 percent turnaround by the end of the story. These vampires have issues--real ones that they have to deal with. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
Holy hell that was fast, but damned fucking hot!!!!
Author's Response:
The reason why I mated them quickly is because this story is mainly about how the two of them deal with their relationship and with their family. XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
Spermal expulsion? That is most definately a new one. LOL!
Author's Response:
Um, yes, Edward suffers from spermal expulsions. XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
First off...Edward is such a pussy! I just want to smack his puritanical ass around a bit.
And second, Peter + Emmett seems like a dangerously funny combination!!!
Loved it.
Author's Response:
Oh, Edward is a pussy and his puritanical ass will certainly get smacked right out from underneath him.
Peter and Emmett are a great pair! Thanks for your review. XOXO
Date: 23 Jun 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oooooh, I love this beginning.
Author's Response:
Thank you and welcome to the story! XOXO
Date: 22 Jun 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 55
how is Maria controlling the newborns without Jasper? The numbers should be fluctuating wildly; in fact with a vampiric army of that size she should have exceeded the point of diminishing returns about 250 vamps ago--too many to feed inconspicuously, too much internal killing and too difficult to replace the dead ones. Not to mention logistical problems of housing, training quarters and miscellaneous supply as well as transport. She's nuts; they should have turned on her months ago.
Author's Response:
You'll have the answer to Maria's control of the newborns in a couple of chapters. *hint: it'll be from Edward's POV*
Like Jasper said, Maria can be extremely ingenious sometimes, but at the same time she has become careless. Then again, so has Jasper.
You'll just have to wait to see how it plays out. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 55
This was an awesome chapter. There was SO much going on, I don't even know where to start in this review. I am satisfied with the way that Jasper removed his head from his ass and realized what he and the others were doing to everyone. As for the Major coming out to play after the fight with Bella and Amber, that was border line hawt and freaky. How weird. I think Bella handled it as best as she could, and despite not know what the next move was going to be, she went with it knowing that Jasper was in there too. As for Jasper going all emo when he realized that the real Major and Bella had met, at least he didn't get jealous that "someone" else had marked Bella, does Jasper even remember what he does when he slips into the mind set? Is it like split personality? I think Amber is a going to be a good double agent, she's seems easily gullible, just wondering if that newborn that Maria has can erase that bond Chelsea created and cause Amber to fold and dish the dirt on Jasper? I don't see why Chelsea is freaking out, if there is a newborn that can neutralize powers, can't she sneak up on this mofo and break their bond with Maria and create another with Jasper? Hmm?
Author's Response:
Date: 21 Jun 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 55
well im glad that their time away from eachother didnt last long! but i hoep that they can get on the inside before anything major happens
Author's Response:
Don't worry, they'll be back and stronger than ever. *wink* XOXO
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 55
JPOV: Woo hoo for sush for putting him in his place. Esme is actually wise here. Wow tanya's pissed. Go Get Her? Peter is an idiot if he thinks it will be that easy. Amrita is a blast. Glad to see she is willing to listen but is staying apart for awhile. At least he figured out he was an arse and how to fix it. Awww for eating together. I agree move in with B. LOL for Poor Amar. Umm how can B&R be kind, courteous and polite in one sentence, but then right after you say Rose is rude to her? Oops for not checking messages. Hmmm Beach sex leads to sand in all the wrong places. hee hee. Aww for jealous Rex. Aww for Riley making B make up with P. ROFL for the girls and "play dates" Uh oh Major's coming
BPOV: hmmm Major's a bit of a caveman. surprised he didnt grunt. lol. Wow did he ever claim her.
Ches POV: OMG for wierd makeovers. LOL for amber's new loyalties. Woo hoo for Bella being right. LOL for Amber offering randall to edward. Chelsea's POV is a nice change.
Hope you dont mind the long running commentaries
Author's Response:
Sush and Esme actually kept their heads and were able to explain to Jasper that he wasn't listening. Part of the reason why Tanya is upset is because she knows the whole story through Rex who is Bella's confidante. Amrita is a firecracker.
Yep, our vampires are nuts with their eighties makeover of Amber. At least her loyalty is in the right place now.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 54
Oh Esme. I don't even know what to say about her. She's...awful. 'Mother-in-law from hell' is a good description. Her point of view in Chapter 45 made me want to vomit. I'm glad Irina, Bella, Riley, Amrita, Eleazar, and Peter gave her pieces of their minds. I doubt that she actually listened, though.
Who is Amanda's father?
I'm glad Jasper's team won the paintball match.
I'm glad that Carlisle and Esme aren't mates anymore. Carlisle doesn't deserve to have to put up with her.
Rosalie is right. One needs to have one's own identity. One's children being one's identity is not healthy.
I can't believe how bad Bella is at math. Even I, who can't stand math, and pretty much flunked algebra, can add (and subtract--and multiply and divide, too, somewhat) in my head.
Good grief! Victoria sure is something else when she's drunk.
No rides in Lotuses with Riley driving for me. My favourite speed is 'stop', so my reaction would be about the same as Bella's.
'The next time I visit Daddy at his grave, I'm telling on you!' I love this line. I absolutely love this line.
Not again!! How come the guys always manage to get themselves skunked?!
Can Bella work at Newton's again? Something fun always happens when she works there. I love that she got Rich to spend so much money. He deserved it.
Oh for goodness' sake. Screaming over grenades, really? Don't pull the pin. I probably wouldn't want them stored in my house, but they aren't something to scream over. After all, candles have open flames.
I think Charlotte is right. 'Be proud of whatever assets God gave you'.
Guys: 1. Shooting is not difficult. 2. Hunting and knowing how to use a gun are not the same thing.
I'm so jealous of Bella. I would love to get a gun and permit for my birthday.
Eighty-six pages?! Oh my goodness. That is a bit long.
I really don't think Alistair was at fault at all. I think Esme is the only one at fault. I don't care if she deluded herself into thinking that Carlisle and Bella had sex because of a mental collapse or jealousy or whatever, she's still to blame. I don't think counseling will do her much good because the impression I've gotten is that deep down, she doesn't truly want to change. I feel sorry for Alistair, having to put up with her. And frankly, I'd really prefer it if Esme was miserable, and didn't 'find true happiness'. Although if you need a good guy to kill off, please kill her off instead of someone else. After Chelsea breaks the bond so that Alistair doesn't have to suffer.
Maria being on Facebook is hilarious. And smart.
No frat parties for me. No way.
I love the scene with Pierre and Jessica.
Poor Rose! That was awful!
I'm definitely steering clear of the Palms Hotel.
Chelsea is something else. And way too talkative.
Lauren being nice was a nice surprise. I like this Lauren.
I'm glad Rex and Tony could meet. I think it's good for them.
No amount of money is too much when it comes to Legos.
I would say that I was completely lost after 'I prefer the TIGI Bedhead line for shampoo', but I was completely lost in Chapter 47 at 'over a hundred bucks'. I use whatever shampoo my mother buys--usually Mill Creek--and the boar bristle hairbrush I've been using for at least fifteen years. And I only wash my hair when it needs it.
I'm glad Tony was changed. I think it's good that he and Rex have each other. I think it's good that Bella and Rosalie changed Claude. He and Tony should not have to be apart. I wondered if Tony was an incubus when all the women were so drawn to him.
Okay, we've destroyed the diary, the ring, and the locket, now we just have to take care of the cup, the diadem, and the snake.
Rule number one: In an emergency, don't panic. Panicking causes mistakes. Mistakes cause disaster.
I looked up the average snowfall for Cheboygan. When they're done with the property, can I have it?
Rule number two: Do not completely trust Alice's visions. They are not perfect!!
Rule number three: Preparation is the key to success--preparation for things going wrong.
Jasper, Peter, and Alice: Well, well, well, Captain Bligh--looks like you've got a potential mutiny on your hands. You'd better 1) start using your heads, and 2) start groveling to Fletcher. If you don't, I can guarantee that Bella and everyone else will do their own planning and take down Maria--after she finishes you and your henchmen off. And did it ever occur to you that maybe, just maybe, Maria is feeding you false information and sitting somewhere laughing at how stupid you are? After all, you yourself, Jasper, said 'You have to have a brain to become a powerful dictator, Rose.' A wise man once said,'we are only as strong as we are united, as weak as we are divided. Lord Voldemort's gift for spreading discord and enmity is very great. We can fight it only by showing an equally strong bond of friendship and trust.'
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for your wonderful, detailed review. I sent your review reply in the form of a private message as it was rather long winded. XOXO
Date: 13 Jun 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 54
I have really loved this chapter. I think that Bella has done the right think walking away, Jasper shpuld know better by now. He is putting Alice and Peter before his mate. Peter is her grandfather and he should not want her under that amount of pressure. Alice even told them not to add to her stress and then does it herself. When will they learn they are ment to be a team and at the moment they are anything but. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Alice, Peter, and Jasper have inflated heads right now due to their gifts and their experience. Bella's reaction will teach all three of them a much needed lesson. Put it this way, even Charlotte and Mike don't care about Peter and Alice at this point. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 54
Yummy men.
APOV Go Alice. Run baby. Glad Amber is on thier side. WOW 500 newborns travelling across the US..... the V should take notice.
JPOV: Eleazar is funny. Vito sounds like a lovely piece of work (NOT) . glad Vicky gets her revenge. Cheboygan, really? Eww for jasper having to kiss lola. LOL for beauty parlor. felix is a great asset. And Chelsea too. LOL for Gianna and a purse. Sounds like tony and carlisle need some ass kicking lessons. Ewww peter is just creepy now.
Cant say I blame Bella for being upset. at least she told him she needs some time and he let her have it instead of being a wanker. Greece???
BPOV: Donkeys???? ROFL. Oh Jazz....you are approaching her the wroing way. cant blame her for going off on you. Oh Yeah Bella Cut his ass off......stay out of business that doesnt concern her??? WTF.
RexPOV: Glad rex is on her side. they are being assholes to everyone esp Bella. Go cahr, Chel, and Rose. peter should have been cut off awhile ago too. cant blame bella in the least for leaving. maybe peter and alice should be without thier heads for awhile.
Author's Response:
Don't worry, Jasper will receive a thorough dress down from one of his sisters and some good advice from someone unexpected. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 54
i started to tear up in the end of this chapter! im glad that she leaving but i hope taht in the end it dosent cause any problems with this fight !
Author's Response:
Bella and Jasper won't be apart long. She's just giving him a hard dose of reality. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 53
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE (and ON and ON and ON) update soon! Oh my GOD this is an amazing story! Seriously--I didn't know that there could be such a long story with a plot still, but you've amazed me by adding different elements and subplots. AHH! Amazing job...can't wait for more (like, literally. PLEASE UPDATE :P)!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you for the compliment. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story. I'll update as soon as I can. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 09 Jun 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 53
Awesome, the hits just keep on coming!!!!!
Author's Response:
Aww...I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 53
Claude would make the perfect Quartermaster--the guy knows how to find/get anything! Every army needs supplies, right? At least they have a timeline, now.
Author's Response:
Claude is perfect and wonderful. That's why I had to keep him. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jun 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 53
Rex POV: Love that he is taking care of mom and like to pay his own way. Lego room....haha. Awww rext playing second fiddle to Tony. Poor Carlisle, Go Char.....shut the boy up. Gtwat? what a name, Go Chelsea!!!
Garrett: arent you in for a big surprise. LOL for the "man" talk about hair. ROFL.
Bella POV: Some punishment...... sounds yummy to me....mostly. Go bad ass tony....kick thier butts. Wow drunk tanya is really dangerous,. LOL for alice's plan esp the car part with Chelsea. OMG eddie cursing!!! And getting punched. LOL Panties...wow Alice has changed.
Jasper POV: Lucky ducky in the casino, Hee hee for jealous guys at the pool party. When will he learn not to order her around. Yummy after pool fun. LOL for how clause woke up. Wow another incubus in the family. ROLF for gianna and chelsea fighting over him. aww for Bella and Jazz's college. Too bad about his TX house. glad he is rebuilding. She went running crazy over 30 months? kinda odd.
Author's Response:
Date: 07 Jun 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 37
sorry I missed my flight ;o
Author's Response:
You missed your flight? How? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jun 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 14
Fantsticly, fun! Love that Victoria is Alice's new sire!
Author's Response:
That master's bite will come into play tremendously in future chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Jun 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
best Mike Newton ever!
Author's Response:
I never thought Mike Newton was a bad guy. He was actually a pretty normal teenager who happened to have had a crush on Bella Swan; that's why I made him into a good guy.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love love love how you brought Victoria, Riley and the others in. Can't wait for the wedding of the virgins!
Author's Response:
Victoria, Riley, Irina, and Laurent were all just victims of circumstance in the Twilight books. I wanted to see what would happen if circumstances were a bit different for them. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh wowzers. I love Esme's POV...fantastic. And who is this brother??
Author's Response:
Esme can be a firecracker, but there's a lot more lurking beneath that strong personality that'll eventually backfire on her. You'll have to read on to find out who the brother is. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
I was litterally shouting at my computer screen... Eddie is such a douche. I love how Alice is going on their honeymoon... seems appropriate LOL. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Edward is an absolute freak of nature. Can you believe that Alice is actually going honeymooning with the happy couple as a chaperone? Weird. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 04 Jun 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
OH my, this looks to be very fun!
Author's Response:
Welcome to my crazy story. It'll be an emotional roller coaster throughout the story. Please feel free to PM me if you have any questions. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
THIS IS HANDS DOWN IN THE TOP 3 THE FUNNIEST FANFIC I HAVE EVER READ, AND I'VE READY HUNDREDS!!! GOOD JOB!!
Author's Response:
Wow! I'm so happy that you're enjoying the story. Thank you very much for your uplifting review! XOXO
Date: 01 Jun 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 52
Well I am finally caught up with this story and I lOVED LOVED LOVED this chapter. I was laughing out loud at some of the goings on here. Loved the part where Rex runs into his brother....LOVED IT. I am adding you on to my favorite author. Can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for adding me to your favorite author list, I feel so honored. Tony Fantasia was meant to come into the story from the very beginning. I always meant for Rex to run into his human brother because it's something that can feasibly happen to a newly changed vampire with living relatives. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 31 May 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 52
Amazing chapter!!! :) Can't wait to see the next one!! :)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy that you enjoyed the chapter. This chapter is actually one of my favorite ones. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 30 May 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 52
i like the chelsea ! i think thats what the already crazy group needed!
Author's Response:
I agree with you. The group needed a good hearted crazy woman who wields a ton of power. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 30 May 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 38
I could not help and make a comment about this chapter. I was LMAO when I read the part the Peter was Bella's & Riley's great grandfather, I thought that was brillent. I don't like this Amber chickie. LOVE LOVE this story....
Author's Response:
Oh Amber is nothing, but trouble. She's a combination of a bad egg and a brainless dolt. Keep reading and you'll eventually find out what I mean.
I wanted Peter to have a greater connection to Bella and Riley. The three of them all have big hearts.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 30 May 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 52
Hmm. Tony would be an interesting lure to use on Maria. Smart, military experience, (I noticed that he was regular army instead of Marines) At least their family line is continued by the five other brothers. Nice chapter, you wrapped up and set up a lot of stuff, there!
Author's Response:
Tony and all of his military prowess was meant to come into the story from it's inception. I always meant for Rex to run into his brother. Now, you know why Claude kept making appearances in the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 52
BPOV: Hard to think of Tanya as tame. lol. Awww Tony flirting.....Jasper's gonna have a shit fit. lol Captain's going home a REALLY happy guy tonight
JPOV: Eugene huh? Interesting. LOL He's getting the benefit of horny and drunk Bella. Poor felix getting slapped. Awww food poisoning....poor CircusCircus. Tanya needs stripper pole lessons some more. Oh wow Tony is Rex's Bro.. uh Oh. hee hee for the dumpster comment. Uh Oh....throw the girls under the bus there tony. Awww poor Rex/Tony's mom. Go bodyguards......that manager is a moron. Hmmm Sexy stripping Jazz....Yum....opps for commando. Uh Oh no more peaceful room. Man I want to be at Stoneys with Chelsea around. Could use some lovin (non-self induced: LOL)
Author's Response:
Compared to Chelsea, Tanya is a pussycat. Bella flirting with Tony doesn't really affect him, he'd prefer Jasper flirting with him.
Rex and Bella are crazy, they'll do anything to keep themselves from getting bored. I feel bad that I had to use the Circus Circus buffet as a scapegoat, especially considering they really aren't that bad. I want to go to Stoney's and watch Jasper ride the bull commando. I'll meet you there.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Author's Response:
Compared to Chelsea, Tanya is a pussycat. Bella flirting with Tony doesn't really affect him, he'd prefer Jasper flirting with him.
Rex and Bella are crazy, they'll do anything to keep themselves from getting bored. I feel bad that I had to use the Circus Circus buffet as a scapegoat, especially considering they really aren't that bad. I want to go to Stoney's and watch Jasper ride the bull commando. I'll meet you there.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 27 May 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
I found you story and few days ago and have been reading before and after work for the last few day. Normally I do not comment on a story until I am totally caught up with the story, but I have to say that I AM TOTALLY LOVING YOUR STORY!!!!!!
I love how you wrote each of the chacters and the way they are acting. I am loving the part of Amanda as a newborn lap dog totally didn't see that at all, I have been laughing my ass off on some of the chapters. Can't wait to read more this weekend and hopfuly get caught up with the story....
Author's Response:
Hello and welcome to the crazy adventure. This is my very first fanfiction so when I get comments such as yours, it makes me absolutely ecstatic. I'm so happy that you're enjoying the story. I hope you get caught up soon. XOXO
Date: 25 May 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 51
Ok, Chelsea has no verbal or action filter, but at least she likes to make people happy! You almost owed me a new keyboard--I laughed so hard, coffee sprayed over my desk! Luckily I missed the electronics, LOL. Great chapter, the image of Castle Volterra turning into a sort of Vamp Club Med was great!
Author's Response:
You're right, Chelsea is sans filter, however, she's a genuinely good soul. Think about it, she made the Volturi lair into some sort of a mating camp. Phew! I'm glad your keyboard made it through. Thank you for your review. More from Vegas next. XOXO
Date: 25 May 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 51
well im excited for the new chanages~!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the changes! Carlisle deserved a mate. Thanks for reading and reviewing. More from Vegas next. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 51
Bella POV: Wow talking to Esme rationally too. the Tshirt was funny too. Glad her and edward had a good talk. Awww poor bella mad cause the boys are doing better in school than her. Ahh Chelsea appears. LOL Another teeny bopper to join the party.
JasperPOV: Em is so goofy. Lauren is a porn star....ROFL. Wow Go Laurent. Kewl that he freed all those peeps. Ahhh carlisle's new mate. Chelsea and amanda are gonna get along real well I think. Wow her get away plan was briliant. Woo hoo Jane's dead. LOl for projection. woo hoo party time. Wow carlisle not wasting any time. Woo hoo Mile High Club. Ahhh Claude's Tony. How sweet. Awww jealous Rex and Jazz are so cute. Man they need some downers for Chelsea....She's making my head hurt from all the talking. Guess I'm going to the wrong clubs in vegas. ha ha.
Author's Response:
Bella needed to make amends with Esme. Edward's always been her confidante. As for Bella and school, well, I wouldn't want to start pulling C's just because my hubby decided to join me.
Yes! Lauren Mallory is a porn star and she keeps our vamps happy. As for Laurent, he's always been the most stable because he's loved and lost the most out of everyone.
Now, Chelsea may be a chatty character, but she's exactly what Carlisle needs.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. By the way, I'll go clubbing with you in Vegas next time I'm in town. Of course, I'm not so sure if they let moms in, but there's always a start. I wonder if I can bring my kids along? More from your town next. XOXO
Date: 25 May 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 51
Loved it!!!!! Chelsea is a riot!!
Can't wait for more!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Chelsea's a bit talkative, but a ton of fun. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 51
Great as always
Author's Response:
Aw! Thank you very much! I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story. More Vegas adventures next. XOXO
Date: 19 May 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 50
I am really loving this story. I think it was a classic move on Bella's part to pretend to not know Jessica. Ithink that Jessica and her husband deserve each other. I wouldn't want to be in Jasper's shoes when Bella finds the films that are being taken of her without her knowledge cause i can't imagine she will be happy. Look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy that you're enjoying the story. Thank you for your review.
Jessica and her husband deserved everything that happened to them.
As for Jasper's little video, hmm...maybe Amar will be in more trouble for filming it. XOXO
Date: 18 May 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 50
that was too funny seeing jessica! excited to see whats instore next for this bunch !
Author's Response:
Jessica provided comic relief and an update of the gang in Forks.
More to come soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 50
JPOV: Gianna is so funny. EWWWW Jessica. LOL for Carlisle's "death" and subsequent outrage. Ewww Leah and tyler??? OMG the Jess/Pierre thing was funny.
Aww poor Rosie and her singer. Wow Edward and Alice dont even have rooms in the house. Harsh. Glad Jake and B got to talk.
Loved the vegas atuff. Amrita is funny. videos without telling B....naughty naughty
Author's Response:
Gianna's hilarious. She's spank happy.
Jessica is gross. I think they were dealt with perfectly by Rexy and Bella.
Carlisle was furious about the situation with Esme--that's why he ripped apart the Forks house. It was her pride and joy. Carlisle's particular about who his family members are, hence rooms for just J/B and Em/R.
Rosie needed to meet her singer so she could empathize with everyone else.
Amrita is scary. Jasper and Bella are terrified of her.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 18 May 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 50
Loved the ballroom scene with Jessica--Poor things had no idea what they'd gotten themselves into, LOL. Amrita has been emailing 'homework' to charlotte? All they need is a website and they'd make millions! Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Rex and Bella handled Jessica and her husband perfectly. They deserved getting roughed up a bit.
Amrita and Char are nuts--really nuts. I mean, they scared Jasper and Bella off. LOL> Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 18 May 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 50
Great chapter!! wow... Loved how everything turned out.... I think that Rose needed that to grow a bit more :) Loved the last minute trip to Vegas and the meet up with their Indian friends :)
Author's Response:
I can tell you that the incident with her singer has helped Rose empathize with everyone a lot more.
Jasper and Bella always have fun in Vegas. They'll make one more trip over there soon. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2011 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 49
Great chapter to bad Esme made herself a oest andf cause her to lose some family.The frat party was grteat what the hell is threading ?
Author's Response:
Threading is really huge in Massachusetts right now. It's an alternative to waxing where women remove hair using intertwined pieces of thread. I have no idea how they do it, but it works. The ladies who do the threading usually have little kiosks set up in the malls. However, in India, Pakistan, and the middle east--threading has been the preferred way to remove hair for centuries--at least that's what I've been told.
Esme is going to have a lot of making up to do. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 49
JPOV: awww poor jazzy missed the concert. Woo Hoo For BellaRosa Isla. Glad Rex stuck to his guns. Esme was a bitch. C was generous with the div settlement. Yeah for Mike and amanda. Esme will never give up the "kid" thing if they are all living with her. Dont blame Alistair though since Esme lied to him. Skippy is Felix, right? Commercial.....ah maria i guess. awww poor horny Vicky. Gotta love Em.
EPOV: The Alice/Walmart thing makes me giggle every time. Woo Hoo Party Animals. LOVE time warping. Awww poor Em. ROFL Orgy. Wow esme did something nice. Now I can see Alice as a manager. Ok Eddie. She's got two hundrend million dollar....its not like you are throwing her out on her arse. Glad eddie gets that mate comes first.
EsmePOV: At least she is finally acknowleding her own issues and responsibilities in everything that fell apart.
IrinaPOV: Dealerships do try to screw with women. My ex went with me when I got my new car. LOL. Bella still hates driving huh. ROFL for gianna spanking felix. A Vampire getting pickpocketed? ROFL. Aww poor alice for the bus and phone and car. Nice party for her though.
Author's Response:
Rex will always stick to his guns when it comes to Bella. We'll delve more into their relationship soon.
C was very generous with his settlement. I'd settle for a million, heck, I'd settle for half a million.
I wanted to have everyone have a bit of fun because the next chapter is pretty angsty.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 10 May 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 49
Loved this chapter..... One of my favorite stories.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 09 May 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 49
Great couple of chapters!!! Can't wait to see the next one ! :)
Author's Response:
We're going to delve a bit into Rose next chapter and we go to Irina's benefit ball. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. XOXO
Date: 09 May 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 49
day in the life of a college kid! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Yep, Mike and Bella sure know how to have fun. Remember, those two actually survived college as humans. The benefit ball is next. XOXO
Date: 09 May 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 48
well i hope in the end she mellow out now since she has a mate! keep the udpates comming
Author's Response:
Esme will have to wallow in her depression for a bit. *wink* XOXO
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 48
ok i love the fact that you had the girls kick the boys asses at war games and i love the fact that mike worned them that charlie would of taught bella how to shoot a gun that was just to funny and i love the fact that esme finally got hers for the way that she has been treating bella and rose and i cant wait to see what happens when they start teaching carlisle how to fight that is going to be good why do i have a feeling that he is going to be bad ass fighter so please update soon and i will keep writing reviews
Author's Response:
See, this is what happens when men underestimate women. They get their bums handed to them. Carlisle, a fighter? Hmm...let's find him a mate first. XOXO
Date: 09 May 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 48
Alistair and Esme? That could work--she's a homebody and will cater to his reclusive tendencies so he will never leave her. I do love Carlisle's burst of testosterone-fueled self disgust at the end, that was so like one of my brothers!
Author's Response:
I think Esme can bring Alistair out of his shell. Esme, on the other hand, needs the stability of a real mate. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 48
Wow Rex gets all sorts of goodies. Poor boobless Alice. nice of her to buy the bra's for the girls though. LOL for the salon.
Men are morons...melons. jeez. Oh boys You are going to pay during paint ball. Go Bad ass bella.
Carlisle should work for Michel Moore on his next documentary. 86 pages. LOL
Esme is really delusional. Least Carlisle is being rational and taking responsiblity for his mistakes. Gawd Esme is such a jealous biatch. Alistair is such an idiot. Go Grandpa Peter! Glad Daddy C is gonna learn to fight. He needs to for the Maria thing.
Hmmm wonder when C will find his mate.
Author's Response:
Yep, Rex is well connected. I was actually thinking of Klinger in Mash when I wrote the part about Rex.
As for Alice, those water pads are the closest she's going to get to boobies.
As for the salon, the lady that does my nails has the uncanny ability to yak on the phone and do my nails. I get annoyed, though, cause she doesn't pay attention to me at all. Eh, eight bucks--can't complain.
Carlisle can be a bit long winded.
Esme isn't in her right mind at all. In her day, divorce was considered the pinnacle of shame on a woman so she can't handle the idea. Alistair was just acting on instincts. he was only protecting his mate. Remember that Esme lied to him to.
As for Daddy C's mate...hahahaha! I can't tell ya. I've been sworn to secrecy by myself. XOXO
Date: 22 Apr 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 47
Wierd....I never got an email from TWCS on this one. Ah well. Knew you posted elsewhere so over I popped.
Glad B went with R to blow off some steam. Sexy mate times in the hotel. ROFL for the eddie and mike getback. WOW hope the girls get commissions. Elezar is so funny. Manscaping, ha ha. Poor Bella, still be blushing if she could. Glad Sush is doing better
Author's Response:
You know something, I received a PM from someone stating that they didn't receive an alert from TWCS either. Maybe it's a technical glitch.
Riley needed to blow off steam desperately. Jasper needed to well...um...he always needs to, you know... Sush is fine now.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 47
well i cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
The boys will be playing with melons in the next chapter. XOXO
Date: 17 Apr 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 46
I am not trusting where Esem could take her resentment of Bella nad Rose. If Maria got hold of Esme she would have a lot more info on this huge clan.
Author's Response:
Esme is not in her right mind right now. Her delusions will come to a crescendo in a couple of chapters. XOXO
Date: 16 Apr 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 46
wow!!! Amazing chapter!
I for one am happy that Riley flipped out on her!!! Someone really needed to, hopefully Vicky can keep her in check for a bit LOL :)
Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Riley was due for a flip out. Esme crossed the line, unfortunately, she's not done lying to herself yet. You'll see in a couple of chapters. XOXO
Date: 15 Apr 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 46
poor vicky trying to get a cig. Aww poor Char crying.. The Peter thing has me really nervous now. Poor b and math. OMG Vicky drunk. GO IRINA!!! Esme needs to be taken down a few notches. Wow for sumshira story. School and lessons...OMG ROFL so much I'm gonna pee.
Peter POV: Esme is really getting annoying. Cant believe she said that about C, R and B together. Jeez. Jasper is going to start to pull away soon. Wow Esme has to butt in again. Go Amrita . Guess riley had enought of Esme's crap. Poor guy.
Author's Response:
Riley is a bit of a health nut so Vicky tries to hide her bad habits from him. Char and Sushmita are both feeling pretty bogged down by what their gifts have told them. Bella and her math--yep, she's pretty bad.
As for Esme, she's not in her right mind right now and she's going to get worse. XOXO
Date: 14 Apr 2011 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 46
whoa. Esme's issues run deeper than I thought. Poor Riley, he's overworked and not even getting paid for it. I agree that the Indian contingent needs heavy training right away, as well as follow-up training in strategy and control for all the others. I wonder if some of this is because their group is so large--unlike the Volturi, they don't have Chelsea to create the unnaturally strong bonds the Italians have. They have too many adult predators and the central authority has crumbled, causing the pack to fragment naturally along normal lines. Esme can't accept it and it threatens potential alliances and future stability. She needs to get her head out of her ass; she reminds me of Renee sometimes. Always her own little fantasy over reality.
Author's Response:
Riley really was due for a mental breakdown. For goodness sakes, he's been having to council everyone from Alice down to Edward and that's after he gets home from work, too. Everyone respects him, though--even Esme.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 46
my god that was some fucked up shit! way to much family drama for me! keep the updates comming!
Author's Response:
Yep and there's more drama to come--some fun, too, of course. *wink* XOXO
Date: 11 Apr 2011 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 45
Well they certainly had fun this chapter.
Author's Response:
Well, that's what you do on vacation. You have fun. *wink* Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 45
I really am starting to become wary of Esme. Only because I love bella so much and it feels like Esme is harboring some resentment towards her. I'm actually liking the way the dynamics are changing along with each relationship.
Author's Response:
Esme is extremely jealous of the fact that Bella prefers Carlisle over her. It's ridiculous really. We'll delve more into Esme next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Apr 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 45
Poor Charlotte. With her gift it must be hard to see a mating bond fade away. I loved Sushmita making her husband tell the truth about the BJ's, that was great. As for Esme, I am ambivalent--she really is a grat Mom, but she has never been able to let her children grow up, possibly due to the death of her infant son. She's never had to deal with empty nest syndrome before. She may be SuperMom, but she needs to decide if she still wants to be a wife. Excellent chapter!
Author's Response:
It's killing Charlotte to see the bond slip away. Sushmita is an extremely powerful vampire--more will be revealed next chapter.
Your summation of Esme is absolutely correct, but there's actually more going on which will be revealed next. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Apr 2011 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 45
Hi,
Great chapter...it was very detailed and I liked getting the POV's from other characters. The whole discussion on BJs cracked me up...that was hilarious. I really found the guide calling Alice a boy effing funny too...that's a burn!
As for my opinion on Esme, it sounds like she really isn't Carlisle's mate after all..I wonder who she should be with? Hmm? Only time will tell...
Thanks for sharing...
Corina
Author's Response:
Poor Alice--she wasn't blessed with "assets" like the other women in the family.
There's a ton going on with Esme. We'll delve a bit more into her next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 45
Amazing chapter!! Can't wait to see the next one! :)
Author's Response:
Aw...thank you. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. More on Esme next. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 45
well i hope for esme she starts to get over her inscrities and hopefuly she can get better and not try to change carlisle im excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Esme feels scorned by Carlisle right now and she's deeply jealous of the fact that Bella and Rose prefer Carlisle over her. More on Esme next. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 45
Wow big chapter. Loved seeing a little amanda in there. The stripper stuff and the BJ stuff was hilarious. Esme needs to get out of the mommy role if she wants to keep any of those people in her life.
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. The next one's even longer. Amanda is not a major player in this story, but I like to put her in there every now and then. Her loyalty lies with Bella through and through.
Esme is not herself right now. She feels scorned by Carlisle. More on her next. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Apr 2011 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 44
'Flaming Pink Hell' sounds like a very accurate description of that suite. I think I'll steer clear of the Palms Hotel. It sounds way too wild for my tastes.
Bella's roof-top tropical oasis sounds nice.
I agree with Charlotte--'I don't care what anyone says, heels are uncomfortable. I won't sacrifice comfort for vanity.' I think that if people's heels were supposed to be off the ground, their feet would look like Barbie's.
Alice, of course your and Jasper's awful sex life was Jasper's fault, because it couldn't possibly be yours.
Good grief! Alice, Amanda, Irina, and Victoria should have to wear scarlet Hs. If they watch strippers, they have no right to get mad at their husbands for doing the same thing. Public or private, it makes no difference--watching strippers is watching strippers.
Swinging for Fitness? Oh, Alice--anyone with half a brain can figure out that fitness is not why Bella swings from the tree and the pole.
I'm glad Bella and Charlotte are working on their relationship.
I'm so jealous of Jasper and Bella getting the papers and the sword that I'm a lovely shade of emerald green. I would dearly love to have a real Confederate sword.
Carlisle's mid-life crisis--
First, I love it. I laughed, and laughed, and laughed.
Second, I agree with Jasper; Carlisle is acting like a teenager.
Carlisle reminds me so much of Janie in 'The Face on the Milk Carton' that I find myself wondering when he's going to change his name. (Janie added a y to Jane and a t to Johnson to make Jayne Johnston. Then she added an e to Johnston to make Johnstone. Then she added a y to Jayne and removed the h from Johnstone to make Jayyne Jonstone. Her teacher asked her if she was going through an identity crisis.) Carlisle's name isn't really boring, but I suppose Carlliisle Culenne would be more interesting.
I understand how Carlisle feels. I've had to be mature, responsible, and practical my whole life, and I'm tired of it. I want to have a whatever-a-mid-life-crisis-is-called-when-the-one-having-it-is-young. I want to be immature, irresponsible, rebellious, and impulsive. Unfortunately, right now I have to be a mature, responsible, practical adult. It's a real pain. I'm glad that Carlisle has the opportunity to have a mid-life crisis--for him, and for me--I'm living vicariously. I wouldn't want to do the same things he's doing, but I would love to do the same kinds of things--move out, act impulsively.
Poor Emmett! And Rose! I'm glad they're working on their issues.
Jasper, you and Bella became Carlisle's babysitters because you two are the most responsible.
Carlisle not having any towels reminded me of when Peter moved into his apartment. I laughed and laughed.
I'm liking Garrett less and less. (I'm a Confederate sympathizer, a Confederate at heart, and on top of that, I'm fairly pro-monarchy.)
That poor, poor florist! I was 'thoroughly uncomfortable' too, and I wasn't there.
Four vacuums?! Merlin's beard! One is more than enough. Bella should have gone instead.
And what's with this tanning stuff? Vampires look much better pale.
I'm glad they were able to restrain Amrita. That must have been a very, very horrible experience for her.
I love this story. It's wonderful and hilarious. I wouldn't at all mind if you decided to make it the story that never ends and post about five (long) chapters every day. Unfortunately, I have a feeling that's not realistic.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 44
I'm normally an Edward and Bella fan but decided to give your story a try... and am glad I did. I was a little sad about your Edward at first but you brought him around and pulled the story together... and picturing Bella and Jasper together is not too hard to do now. You Daddy C is fun and I, for one, and glad to see him acting his age... Anyway, thanks for sharing and I'm looking forward to more...
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I wanted the family members to at least have the opportunity to redeem themselves in this story. There's more to come--especially with the Daddy C, Esme situation. XOXO
Date: 01 Apr 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 29
i have never laughed so much from reading a story, i have tears running down my face, my husband looks at me like i have lost my mind, i with out a doubt love, love, love this story , this is one of favs, hands down love it
Author's Response:
Oh my goodness, how I missed your review, I have no idea. I apologize profusely. I'm so happy that you're enjoying this fic. I, for one, am having a blast writing it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 44
ok first let me coment on chars gifts to them i loved it especially when they finaly understood what it was for i glad the amrita didnt loos control on the plane that would of not been good yes i think that vicky should return the pinky and return it in person and she may pick up the sent of maria on her or around where she lives then vicky can use the master mark to find out what she told maria and yes i agree with you the volturi are creeps after all of the loyal sevices that he did for them but what do expect from the volturi brothers i would love to go to striper class with not only rex but with jasper, emmett, and peter maybe even doctor love i cant wait to see what happens when bella teaches there indian friends how to preform the art of fellatio that is going to be funny considering what she cant do with a cock pop i cant wait to see what else you come up with next so please update soon
Author's Response:
Date: 30 Mar 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 44
Chapter was awesome as always.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. XOXO
Date: 28 Mar 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
LOVE MIKE!!
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you like how I've written Mike. He really wasn't a bad kid in the Twilight books--just hormonal. XOXO
Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 43
well its about time he had a mid life crises! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree that the midlife crisis was long overdue. Let's hope he gets through it. XOXO
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 43
wow!! So much happened and I totally agree with Carlisle, his midlife crisis is long over do! Poor Emmett :( at least him and Rose took some big steps forward in helping their relationship :) Can't wait to see the next one!
Author's Response:
Carlisle's mid-life crisis is long overdue and it will be long too. Em and Rose will pull through. XOXO
Date: 22 Mar 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 43
Carlisle: Woo Hoo n the new car. aww his feelings are hurt from the club non invite. OMG for waxing. Woo Hoo for new hair and clothes. There is a saphire out here in vegas too. OMG Jail?!?!?!?!?! Wonder if there will be papparazzi pics in the paper
Glad Em and Rose are doing better. Wow for em's story. lol for accident. Poor Esme. She must be frantic.
Wow Carlisle. Didnt know you had it in ya. Go Boys helpin daddy C.Oops for the insurance. Awww for Major TLC
Author's Response:
I wonder if Carlisle will let me wax him... Seriously, though, I hope he gets through his crisis.
You live in LV--you're so lucky! I wish I lived there. I'm freezing in Massachusetts.
Em and Rose will recover. Jasper and Bella will help them through.
As for the cars--naughty Jasper! Naughty Bella!
Date: 21 Mar 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
tsk tsk tsk jasper you are going to be in a big pile of shit
Author's Response:
Oh, Jasper needs to fear for his life. He's in deep cacas. XOXO
Date: 21 Mar 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
ah this story makes me grin like an idiot
Author's Response:
I grin like an idiot when I write it. XOXO
Date: 21 Mar 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 18
Amanda hehehe - lmao
Author's Response:
Only a complete brain transplant will work for her--hence the dog. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 42
so the next part of the reading is about to come.
Author's Response:
Oh, yes, and Carlisle is going to go crazy. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 42
I think Peter's survival must depend on a choice Char will make. They seem to hav quite the army themselves!
Author's Response:
They do have quite the army. Let's see what Maria comes up with. XOXO
Date: 12 Mar 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
ah emmett always there to lend a hand......lol
Author's Response:
Yes, Emmett's a trooper--he's also not very imaginative when it comes to excuses. XOXO
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
awesome chapter
Author's Response:
Jasper + Corvette = SEX
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 2
LMFAO
Author's Response:
Bella's got a backbone now, doesn't she? Thanks for the r and r. XOXO
Date: 12 Mar 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
this sounds really good - can't wait to read the rest oh does "edwards human" know he isn't
Author's Response:
Welcome to the story. It's a wild and crazy ride. You'll meet Edward's human in a few chapters. Bella is coming up next. XOXO
Date: 12 Mar 2011 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 42
well that was intresting in more ways than none! cant wiat to see what happens next chapter and what trouble they get into
Author's Response:
Oh, the next chapters a doozy because Carlisle's going to flip his lid. XOXO
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 42
Great chapter. Too bad Em didnt go. I could see him having fun in the Franklin Institute. I love that place.
Sounds like Ms Alice is making great strides. Good for her. '
Yeah few of the girls were definitly hypocrites.
Happy that Char and B are working out. Felix and G: new more to the motley crew.
Author's Response:
Em would have loved Philly, but he needed to make up with Rosie.
Alice is making great strides--so are Bella and Char. They all need to get along for the coming demon.
Felix is a trained Volturi fighter--absolutely necessary! XOXO
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 42
Great chapter! are we going to have another time jump? Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Not now. Our vamps still have issues to get through. They basically have five years to become mentally and emotionally strong and united. XOXO
Date: 11 Mar 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 41
Oh Emmett. You'd save yourself a hell of a lot of hassle and heartache if you learnt from other people's mistakes, instead of your own. Actually, you'd save yourself a hell of a lot of hassle and heartache if you learnt from mistakes, period. Being overprotective and domineering are not the key to a healthy, happy marriage.
I'm glad Jasper and Bella are finally okay.
I think the Building Trades program will be good for Jasper. He wants to do that stuff, and it must have been mortifying to be told that he was horrible at it.
Alice actually enjoys working at Walmart?! Are you sure you didn't type 'Walmart' by mistake? :) She's come a long way.
I loved Jasper and Peter's texts to Bella at the casino. I laughed and laughed.
I think the boys either need lessons on hunting, and how to handle skunks, or, they need to find some other activity that involves shooting. Jasper and Garrett might be better off finding an activity that involves guns from their human years. Re-enacting or something. Speaking of Jasper and Garrett, I'm tired of them arguing with Rex over which guns real men use, so I'm going to throw my two cents in (in favor of my favourite weapon, of course): Real men use swords. Only wimps use guns.
Author's Response:
Date: 10 Mar 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
I feel like I can smell the mothballs and Lysol! YUCK. I love the line about Edward living in a stinky home!
Author's Response:
Ah, well, a vampire is always attracted to his mate's scent. That's true even for Edward and Amanda. Thanks for your review. XOXO
Date: 09 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
this is the worst story ever do something else please
Author's Response:
When I don't like a story, I generally stop reading it without leaving a review because I appreciate the fact that the author is trying her best at writing a story.