Date: 17 Jul 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 43
Mother of midlife crisis' is right! Holy Hell!! I totally get why though, I think I would have one too!! LOL.
Very very sad for Emm. I can't believe he shouldered that pain all by himself for all those years. Happy to see him and Rose are working things out.
Now I have to ask... how do you keep everything straight? This story is wonderfully detailed and full of twists and major characters.
Great chapter and great writing all around!
Can't wait to see what happens next with Carlisle!
Author's Response:
It's Carlisle's time now, watch and see how he and Esme completely unravel.
Emmett's probably one of the strongest characters in the story. More so than Jasper because he can think straight through his pain for the most part.
Somehow I manage to keep the characters straight. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 42
LOOOOVE IT! Love Felix and Gianna! Love Alice... too funny, glad her and Mike are working on the lovin's! Ncie to see the rift between Bella and Charlotte is starting to heal, and that Char is taking on the role to train her. I too forget that Bella is still really new, she is more human than all of them.
Getting nervous as to what is going to happen in the five years. I'm feeling some emotional chapters coming.
Author's Response:
Felix, especially, is going to be an important addition to the family. Everyone is working on their relationships with each other. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 41
Hey Mama!
Thanks for fabu chapter #41! I love, love love Bella's advice to Rose. It was awesome to here her admit that you can't work on a relationship alone! Jasper and Bella have a great thing going now, hopefully the others can work on their relationships.
Author's Response:
Bella learned while she was gone from Jasper that nothing was getting resolved in her relationship. *wink* Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 15 Jul 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 39
Soooo Maria IS the second demon!!
Fabu chapter! Great to see Bella and Jasper are getting back on track! Love that he wouldn't let her run again and that she sat down and told him where to go about the overprotectiveness. Loved the toga party and am happy that Alice is now part of the family.
Author's Response:
J and B are back on track for sure. I told you. They needed the time apart. A big reason is because much of the relationship was forced upon Bella by Jasper and she was never allowed to grow up and be independent. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 15 Jul 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 38
Bella has everyright to be pissed, His answer was totes lame. I am guessing there is more to the Amber/Jasper relationship. Jasper just gets his mate back then royally fucks up again.That being said, I am kinda getting tired of Bella running off. I get that she is pissed, really I do, but if she wants to be treated like an adult, she needs to act like one. I think she is pretty selfish and it doesn't seem as though she is taking what Sushmita very seriously, and I think she needs to. She definately had a hard human life, but in the end she has comeout on the other side with a familty that loves her and who seem to be working on their overbearing protectiveness.
LOVE that Bella and Riley are Peter's great-grandchildren! Such a great story twist! Happy that Peter was able to find out about his past and is feeling complete!
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, things will all pan out soon. Well, in a couple of years. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 15 Jul 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love it! So happy for them, the family really does treat them so differently. Are we going to find out why? I feel bad for the guys, they really were trying to be understanding and have a talk. Esme is really pissing me off, you weren't kidding about about her personality backfiring!
Author's Response:
Yes, you will find out why eventually after Esme really goes haywire. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 15 Jul 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 35
Noooo not the blonde locks!!!!!!
Great chapter! Love that you took them to Canada!
Author's Response:
I had to sheer those locks. They were getting unruly. Canada is great! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great chapter! Love virgin Edward he is such a teenage boy LOL. Too bad about Peter and Charlotte... but it is tru, Jasper needs to stop blaming himself. Hoping that the Rabbit isn't what bring the attention of the Volturi LOL!!!
Author's Response:
You're really hooked on the Volturi, aren't you?
Virgin Eddie's cute, isn't he? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
Tanya and Charlotte aren't being smart at all... they are kinda selfish not thinking about how they are affecting the family. I'm thinking that the Volturi are going to step in here soon... too many incidents are being erased. Love that Eddie and Amanda are building their relationship. TOTES JASPER's WAY!
Author's Response:
Tanya and Charlotte were immature and selfish. Tanya will be remorseful, but this is going to affect Char's relationship with Pete in a serious way. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 31
Bahaha, Peter deserved it!!!
Totally agree with Jas[er giving Carlisle the talk. They arent little kids, and them being punished is just weird. Carlisle and Esme take the whole parent thing a little to far sometimes. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
You're right about Carlisle and Esme, and this chapter is the start of Carlisle's breaking point. You'll see what I mean in roughly ten or eleven chapters. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 58
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see the last few chapters :)
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you liked the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2011 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
fabulously fun! Love Bella and Rose's time together! And I loved Emmett taking care of his family!
Author's Response:
Tennessee was great. This chapter showcased the two couples that are closest to each other and Bella and Rose's time together does foreshadow future events. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 14 Jul 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
LOVE Mike!! I have always had a soft spot for him, and I love that you aren't making him a dick! I sorta kinda feel bad for Alice and I think it was nice of Jasper to calm her. Cant' wait to see what happens next! Great writing all around, I have no idea how you keep everyone straight! I love that they are usually all in a chapter and I love all the different POVs!
Author's Response:
I could never understand why Mike Newton is so maligned in fanfic, the only thing he did was have a crush on Bella while in high school. Alice's NPD is a serious disorder, she'll need help from everyone. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Jul 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 58
Only one thing to say: AAAAWWW!
Author's Response:
Aaaawwww! Glad you're enjoying it still. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 58
Ok, first I totally squeed when I saw the update email! Then, I actually breathed a huge sigh of relief when I knew Jasper was safe. I actually thought "Ok, now I can breathe again!" Haha :)
Yay! Riley saved the day! Team Jasper still intact LOL
I like how this has all played out. Can't wait for more of course :)
Author's Response:
Of course Jasper was going to survive and, as for Riley saving the day, he wasn't about to have J die because if J dies then his kid sister does too.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Jul 2011 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 58
im glad that they are happy and healty and together ! defeated maria and gave her a taste of her own medicne
Author's Response:
Did you know that happy, healthy, and together are the words I try to live by. That's so funny that you wrote that.
Maria was defeated, yes, but she was also given a bit of closure by B and J.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 58
Major: IDIOT MAN. lol for being in hell with maria. Awww Pround Grandpa Peter. Ugh now why would you turn your back on that stupid biatch???
Major Mate: Woo Hoo Go Riley!!! Amanda is so funny. ROFL for Walmart plug. Awww for B & J's speechs.
Sushmita: Hope she's right and B&J can live HEA. Yea I'd keep money. I have a feeling the Volturi wont always stay away. Love her heart to heart with B. LOL for no Char school
Jasper: Glad he realizes how wrong he was. Awww he's sad about his SUV. Hmmm Sounds like a party with all the alcohol. Hmmm I need to go to Colorado sometime. Hear is beautiful. Glad the boys are helping S&S. Woo Hoo for cooking school again. Steak sounds good. LOL for Bella and the Ferrari trade commend. uhhh I would have went with purple too. Great idea Esme had. Wonder what is up with Jenks....but considering B&J have been married for 20 years, I bet he wants to retire. guess we'll see. Ah Ha I was right. Wow three forgers in the family now kewl. I gotta get to HI someday. Law school sounds like a great idea.
Onto India: Wow for the money talks. Peter is right....not a bad day indeed. Glad Sahil is finally speaking up for himself and mate. Sushmita too. Amar/Amrita have some growing up to do. Felix's story was great. Peeping Tom's LOL. Aww for Rex's jealousy.
A beautiful thing indeed
Author's Response:
Major: Aren't they idiots? I can't believe they turned their backs on Maria.
Major's Mate: Riley's a football star, after all. What Walmart plug? *looks up at sky, whistling* As for the speeches, they gave both B and J and even Maria closure.
Sushmita: You're probably right about the Volturi.
Jasper: He's a grown up boy and finally come into his own. It took him almost two hundred years. I wonder if men are that far behind women on the evolutionary scale.
India: I want a half percent of their money. It was time for Sush and Sahil to leave the nest. As for the peeping Tom's, well... like I said, they're about two hundred years behind.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Jul 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
Yep thought it would be Mike! Oh I can't wait to see how you work him in to the mix!! Great Christmas Day!
Author's Response:
Don't judge Mikey too quick. *wink* Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Jul 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh Oh I know who Alice's mate is!!! Or at least I think I do!! Great chapter! Love teenage Amanda!
Author's Response:
Amanda's growing up, isn't she? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 13 Jul 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
I really liked having Amanda's POV. It is nice to know that she is thinking about actual things and isn't just a brain full of mush...LOL.
Drunkward was very funny!
Author's Response:
Yes, Amanda's brain is developing nicely. Drunkward was adorable, wasn't he? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 12 Jul 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter! Loved Alice;s POV! Laffed outloud at her decorating the room and thinking Walmart wasn't so bad! Who is this mate?? Loved the Toys for Tots, my father is the Chairman of the Fire Fighter's Toy Drive in our city, such a great cause!
Alrighty on to the next !! Honk honk for climax!!
Author's Response:
I'm a huge supporter of Toys For Tots. I have my kids bring some of their unopened toys to the bin each year. They get so much from birthday parties and whatnot that they'll never use.
Alice is a bit nuts. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 12 Jul 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
I am so happy that Bella realized that she had been quite selfish when it came to Jasper. What he did was really shitty, but now she knows why. As for the women... holy hell I wanted to slap 'em all. And Carlisle too.
I had one of those weddings... not mine, everyone elses. If I could do it all again, it would be on a beach! LOL. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I do have to warn you that the impromptu wedding will come back to bite Jasper in the tuckus. *wink*
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 09 Jul 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 42
not good please don't kill pete!!!!
Author's Response:
I'll think about it. *wink* Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 08 Jul 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 57
No he can't do that. Bella can use her sheild as she did with Charlotte. Take about leaving us hanging. Please update soon. I hav to say i love this story thanks for writing it.
Author's Response:
He loves Bella--what else did you think he'd do. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 08 Jul 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 41
okay i always say this and i mean it jasper is awesome i love him!!!!!!!! em get your head out of your ass!!
Author's Response:
Jasper is awesome, isn't he? He really cares about Rose, too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2011 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 57
Rex: Alz is such a horrible disease. Glad b is there for him. Aww poor rex. It was hard but glad he did that for his mom. Sweet seeing his family. Thank God for Bella being there. Sucks that they didnt even tell Bella the password to the computer. Bella runs a good meeting. Woo hoo Esme. Love the irony there at the end.
Peter: poor P. Hope he doesnt do anything stupid. Guess his "gift" is on the fritz if he doesnt know she is still alive.
Ed: Interesting observations ed. Maria is being smart actually
Tanya: Sweet thoughts. glad she is not jealous
CarlisleL lol for chelsea being stronger
Felix: ROFL
Major: about time you recognized her worth
Bella: LOL for lead foot Esme. Damn b.....talk about a purchase. OMG for Rose and Gianna. Amanda is a cool little technology geek huh. Sex weapon. Leave it to mike to think of that. Bella should be proud of herself like Rex said. LOL for Chelsea's comment.
Kate: Great plan. maria is going to regret training her vamps so well. Aww poor Tahoe.
Jasper: Yea jazz.....you are stuck in the hole and the "non important" vamps get to save your arse. lol Love Char's comment. Oh Jazz you moron...do you really think they'd just let you take over? MEN!?!?!?! Maria yelling at the girls is funny. she thinks she's still in charge. haha. ROFL for their online names. Go bad ass chelsea. not a girl to piss off. oh yeah....the captured ones dont know about her flame retardance yet. Hope Bella shielded him in time.
Author's Response:
Rex: Alzheimer's is a horrific disease, but at least he was able to give his mom a fitting end on her terms.
Peter: He can be a bit emotional sometimes, don't you think?
Edward: Jasper always said that Maria was intelligent.
Tanya: She's a sweet girl and loves Rex and Bella deeply.
Carlisle: He knows his place is under his wife.
Felix: Nutty, but actually enjoys the fight.
Major: He's actually smarter than Jasper.
Bella: She kept her head together, that much is for sure.
Kate: She's actually pretty level-headed.
Jasper: Well, dang it, he jumped into the flames.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 08 Jul 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 57
well i didnt see that one comming! im excited for the next chapter to see whats everyones reaction will be and what happens next
Author's Response:
Yeah, it kind of hit you out of nowhere, didn't it? Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2011 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 57
I can't believe Jasper did that - I hope Bella had a shield around them both, but Maria didn't get it around her - maybe just her hands or something, since Jasper didn't get the searing pain they usually do when a mate is in pain....hmmm, looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for sharing! Until the next update, take care & have a great week.
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait until the next chapter for your answers. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 57
I love that the vamps who were considered weak or not worht taking by Maria were her downfall! Ahhhhhh, sweet, sweet ironic justice. Now Bella and JAsper burning, well that really stinks!
Author's Response:
All of the so-called "strong" vampires including the ones on our team overestimated themselves. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 40
skunks r us!! bella and rose are professional skunk cleaners!! jas and bel seem to have it together. the guys from india are going to be rudely woken up when they come to the states!!
Author's Response:
Yep, those two girls can start a skunk odor removal business at this point. The guys from India will shock the socks out of ya. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 39
oh the party! glad to see bell and jas got it together. now we have maria to deal with yuk! glad vicky bite esme that should be interesting.
Author's Response:
It took a while, but B and J pulled it together. Vicky's bite to Esme is actually pretty significant, especially Carlisle's reaction to it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 38
cool when they described peter's daughter it reminded me of bella so i thought that is why he likes her but when they said he was her great grandfather that would be the resemblance. it's neat! jasper wtf!!! why did you act that way. why?
Author's Response:
Wasn't Jasper a real jerk?
I'm glad that you enjoyed the bit about Pete and Bella being related.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 37
oh boy i wonder what is going to happen next i am sure that terrible vamp that gives my name a bad rep is going to show. i wonder who the first person is that is going to give them trouble. the plane ride was classic!! love it. glad they are back together for now.
Author's Response:
Ah, but I love the name Maria, it's really a pretty one.
The plane ride was nuts. Glad there were no kids aboard. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
yeah girls!! you are talking about my old stomping grounds in NYS. i went to college near rochester and my hometown is 30 minutes from binghamton!!! it is fun to see them in a story and know that you have been there done that. i am glad they broke away. i am sick to death of esme and vicky. the ones that need the punishment and the guidance are the ones not getting it... i do feel sory for jasper though i have a soft place for hm in my heart
Author's Response:
Rose and Bella needed to run and I'm glad you feel the same way.
Really, you went to college near Rochester? I went to Syracuse so you'd better believe that I know that particular area, Binghamton, Rochester, Syracuse, etc. very well. I lived in the area for five years.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 35
jas come on you are awesome you aren't being the major you are being a wussy... come one dude you are the hottest vamp you can't be so insecure. bella loves you and only you... pete it's about time you hot your head out of your ass!!!
Author's Response:
Jasper is incredibly insecure considering who his alter ego is. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 57
wow... great chapter.. so sad... are Bella and Jasper really gone? :(
Please don't make us wait too long for the next one.
Author's Response:
I can't answer if Bella and Jasper are really gone--that'll defeat the purpose of the cliffhanger. *wink* I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 57
Bad, bad Mama! Evil cliffie you left us with, you naughty thing. I hope Amrita comes after you with her crop! I must say that you take 'make love not war' to new levels, lol. You're going to have trouble topping this one. What a show!
Author's Response:
Okay, maybe that ending was a teensy bit evil, but come on, you can't expect a bed of roses all the time. *wink* Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 34
ed you are soo clueless!! i am laughing so hard my stomach hurts poor jas!!! i love that everyone had to tell him what to do... you are sooo great!! i love this story. char you are getting what you sowed!
Author's Response:
Yes, Eddie's clueless but you've got to hand it to the guy. At least he didn't hesitate to ask for help.
P.S. After the next chapter, we're getting a bit angsty--bear with both Jasper and Bella, they need the time to work stuff out. It'll all end by chapter 40, I promise. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 56
Oh my word, now I have to wait for updates!!!!! I literally almost bit my nails and I am definitely on the edge of my seat. Don't leave me hanging for too long haha :)
Author's Response:
Why are you on the edge of your seat? I thought I left everyone on a cliff. I'll put you out of your misery soon. I'm posting the next chapter in a couple of minutes. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 33
the flying rabbit! hah!!!1
Author's Response:
I had to give the rabbit an appropriate farewell. *grins* XOXO
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 55
It is so easy to forget that Bella's not totally innocent in the almost destruction on their relationship. It is the mark of a good story when the writer can make the reader focus solely on one character and forget that the other character is still there - if that makes sense :)
At least Jasper realized Bella was right before it was too late!
Author's Response:
Bella and Jasper were both responsible, but in this case, more of the fault lies with Jasper. At least they were able to salvage their relationship and hopefully they're strong enough to defeat any obstacles which may come their way. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 32
well jas as always asked his mate to the prom the best!!! he is soo hot i know i already told you that but had to state it again. amanda and ed are cute. glad to see ed getting his head out of his ass!!! tan and char and way out of line i wish they could have been punished more!! get a grip girls
Author's Response:
Tanya and Charlotte were beyond out of line, but Jasper knew that it wasn't his place to punish them. Though, when you think about it, Rose and Bella got a far more severe punishment for nothing really. Like I said, this whole punishment thing will come to a crescendo.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 07 Jul 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 31
good job jasper!!! alice and peter huh? yuk can't wait to see what the two super hoes did!!
Author's Response:
All I can say is poor Pete deserved his punishment for waving his tackle around. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
cool with the reinactment. my husdband does rev war reinactment!! i really never hear of anyone else doing it!! cool!! i love it. yeah they were way tough on them. damn char running around naked and being so forward should be punished more than that!! oh well the favorites always get judged harder!
ps: thanks for responding to my reviews it's great!!
Author's Response:
That's great that your husband does rev war reenactments. They have so many of them here in Massachusetts. Of course, this was the hub of the Revolutionary War, but being a history freak, I love the fact that your hubs is into the reenactments. A high five for that one!
You're right, they were way too tough on Bella and Rose. Neither of them need parents and it'll be Daddy C that realizes this first.
You're very welcome for responding to your reviews. I appreciate the fact that you take the time to chime in on my fic. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
i love the four of them the best!! they are the best!!!
Author's Response:
Ah, you're talking about Em, Rose, Jasper, and Bells. Yes, I love the four of them the best too! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
mike is awesome i am so glad he puts alice in her place!!! love it!
Author's Response:
Isn't Mike great? When you think about it, he really wasn't a bad kid in the original series either. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
alice has more i am sure... wow love all the pain they gave her she so deserves it. wow all of them in high school together all the boys in the school are sure going to get an education!!!
Author's Response:
Alice deserved her punishment to be sure, but there's more to her than meets the eye. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 52
Make Tony and Claude vamps PLEASE?!?!? Hahaha :)
Author's Response:
Tony and Claude as vampires, hmm...I'll have to think about that. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
mike mike!1 wtf!!!!! jas is so hot!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Don't judge Mikey too quickly. You might end up eating your words. *wink* XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 51
Nice...I sort of saw it, but then again I didn't see Bella and Esme speaking again :) I like how you throw little nuggets like this in there :)
Yay! Carlisle found his mate! Love it!!
The clan in Vegas is a scream for sure!!
Author's Response:
It's all about forgiveness in Bella's case.
Carlisle's mate is a nut, but a loveable one.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
jasper is just like my husband if he tries to fix it he breaks it!!! ed is cooling out!!
Author's Response:
I modeled that part of Jasper after my husband. Case in point, I'm still waiting for the garage door which was working fine until he fixed it to be fixed. I've been waiting since 2006. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 50
Another excellent chapter! I can't believe that I didn't see Rose meeting her singer as the trial she would have to go through...good one :)
Author's Response:
Rose needed to meet her singer in order for her to empathize with others who've slipped. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
ed needs to drink more often rex is cool amanda is great!!
Author's Response:
Eddie doesn't hold his liquor too well, but he's fun! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
rex is hot.... damn the girls are lucky.. climax is going to be interesting!!!
Author's Response:
Rex is definitely a hottie. Here's my image of him:
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 49
I love the evolution of everyone. I especially love the irony of Alice becoming the biggest spendthrift there is haha :)
I really think that Maria's underestimation of Bella will be her downfall...what an idiot...
Author's Response:
This story is all about evolution. *wink* Our vamps are just rolling along with the changes.
Remember that Alice has a disorder that she can easily slip back into.
Ah...well...Maria...don't underestimate her either. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
that was deep and i think he is right bell and j aren't going to live with them hell i wouldn't either!
Author's Response:
No, B and J won't be living with the family--they need their privacy. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh jasper you dirty dog!!! bella is going to be mad at you hell the whole family wants to take you down!!
Author's Response:
Jasper is in tons of trouble. This will all come back to haunt him later, too. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 48
It is amazing how much more peaceful you feel when you quit fretting about things you just can't change :)
They may be vampires, but they are such guys! Hahaha!
I have a feeling the boys are about to get their booties handed to them...
Haha, I was so right! That paintball scene was hilarious!
Perhaps there is hope for Esme after all...I don't blame Bella and Rose a bit though...
Author's Response:
You're right about your assessment, but Jasper is still male--remember that.
The paintball scene proved that Bella is extremely resourceful.
As for Rose and Bella, you're right--they're well within their rights to cut Esme off.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
jasper i love you... bella man you have to go with it girl. again ed is just pissing me off and amanda stuck on peter's penis was classic!! for a minute when bella took her over to ed i thought she was going to tell her to do that to ed!! hahah!
Author's Response:
Jasper has tons of naughtiness up his sleeve. As for Amanda and her mouth, um... Riley will be having a chat with Eddie. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
f-ing sooo funny i had to stop drinking or it would come out my nose!!! amanda... i have no words. the bike thing in walmart reminded me when my friends and i got thrown out of toys r us for riding around on the kids scooters! such fun!!
Author's Response:
Amanda's first words made everyone proud. As for the bicycles in Walmart...Eleazar can be so naive. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 47
Very sneaky to not have Peter's soul reading here... haha :)
It was very eye opening. I hope Esme comes around. I still think she has a possibility for redemption.
I am scared for Bella too, but I can't wait until she delivers a smackdown to Maria!
Author's Response:
I'm not that sneaky, am I?
Are you sure Esme can be redeemed?
Don't worry about Bella, she's pretty resourceful. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 46
Wow...who would have thought that Esme would be the one I wanted to flic my bic for? Good grief...
I really hope Peter is not going to die...I love him too!
This story just gets better and better!
Author's Response:
Ah, Esme...the woman is placing the blame of the failure of her marriage on the wrong people.
Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
omg! i can't believe you did that to amanda ed is a wussy!! damn i can't stand him the more he speaks and acts the more i want to reach through and smack the crap out of him!!
Author's Response:
Yep, Edward's a boy that's mated to a puppy while Jasper's a man mated to a super vamp. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
oh boy you aren't going to change her like this are you... i wanted jas to do it!!!! damn! ed is in trouble i have a feeling
Author's Response:
Hmm...you'll have to wait until the next chapter for your answer... Hehehe! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh bella you faked it you faked it with jas!!! i never thought......
Author's Response:
...and that's because men are men whether they're human or vamp. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
oh ed you are starting to see the light but you are one f-ed up guy!! amanda needs a good spanking and not one for fun either!!!
Author's Response:
Edward truly needs to learn to think for himself. As for Amanda, she needs to go back and review the Ten Commandments. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 14
intersting turn... amanda never thougth you had it in you! alice oh alice... vicky you are kick ass!!! jas as always you are one hot mofo!!!
Author's Response:
Amanda is extremely parochial in her views. As for Alice, she's hiding a lot more than she let on. Vicky is the female version of Jasper. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 16
nice how they are screwing with alice and amanda
Author's Response:
Oh, Rose and Bella are like the 'naughty' tag team. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Author's Response:
Oh, Rose and Bella are like the 'naughty' tag team. Thank you for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
i love jasper!!!!!! bella you are soooo lucky!!!!!! it's funny everyone hates al and ed they are going to do something really dumb aren't they?
Author's Response:
Bella is lucky, but so is Jasper. Al and Ed are delusional, can't even say they're dumb. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15
you are leaving me intrigued whats happening next
Author's Response:
Edward is finally getting his head screwed on tight. Remember that Bella and Edward had a shared love of literature when they were dating. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 12
they are soo funny they are so over the top with their questions.
Author's Response:
We're bringing those male vamps into the 21st century with the help of Riley and Laurent. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
i love that jasper thinks a rabbit is an animal
Author's Response:
Yes, Jasper can be a bit naive. We'll have to put him out of his misery soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
lol so awesome, you are an amazing writer
Author's Response:
Thank you for your uplifting compliment. I enjoyed writing chapter 7 immensely. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
hot hot hot!!!!!
Author's Response:
Oh, yes, Bella certainly did take advantage of Jasper. Wouldn't you? Thanks for reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
you keep me laughin, this is an awesome story
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're laughing along. Thank you for your review. XOXO
Edward's Screaming Orgasm 1-ounce Vodka 1.5-ounce Bailey's Irish Cream (that's the ingredient that makes it look like a spermal expulsion) .5-ounce Kahlua Shake, pour over ice, and enjoy!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 2
lol love it. awesome. I like how jasper is the one finding her attractive and the family hates the "new human"
Author's Response:
Well, she did put on a performance for Jasper. *giggles* XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
its a little different but I like it. I love jasper as a character, and they didnt give him enough credit at self preservance. It is very intriguing and going to read more. Sorry for the spelling errors, its early
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review and welcome to the story. Jasper is a very complex character as you'll find out while reading the story. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh boy not good~
Author's Response:
Gee, I hope Rex the Sex is okay, too.... Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
oh bells it's the major of course you want to F him into a coma i would!! i have to admitt your characters are BOLD!!!
Author's Response:
Oh, yes, they're bold for sure! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
ed and al are really f-ed up... they make me sick... thanks for no more 3-somes with jas and bell i am glad they don't like to share!!
Author's Response:
J and B are really not the sharing type. Char's insatiability will be addressed in the future.
Ed and Al are delusional. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
wtf!! wow!!
Author's Response:
Char has a tendency to take advantage of um...situations. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh how funny!!
Author's Response:
Ah, Emmett...couldn't think of his own excuse so he just latched on to Pete's bad one. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
what a story... interesting riley and vicki and to top it off he is her brother!!! jake you are a dog and killed charlie ass!!!
Author's Response:
Riley is going to be a major player in this story. Thanks for reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh yeah we get to see who it is!! can't wait
Author's Response:
I take it you're talking about the brother. Girl, are you going to be surprised! XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
okay that was f-ing HOT!!!! her brother hummmm you have us all hanging here!!
Author's Response:
Well, dang it, Jasper in a vette is just a requirement! Thanks for your review! XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
oh how funny!!! bells is cool!!
Author's Response:
Bells is pretty awesome. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Edward's Screaming Orgasm 1-ounce Vodka 1.5-ounce Bailey's Irish Cream (that's the ingredient that makes it look like a spermal expulsion) .5-ounce Kahlua Shake, pour over ice, and enjoy!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
okay i guessi was wrong.. but it would have been cool but a dick pop sucking bella is good too
Author's Response:
Yes, you were wrong. Bella is of the non-professional stripper variety female. That doesn't mean she won't strip, though. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 05 Jul 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh boy let me guess bella is going to be the stripper they are going to see!! hahahah! i can't wait
Author's Response:
Welcome to the story! No, Bella isn't going to be a stripper, but she will enjoy stripping. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2011 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
I think this is my favorite chapter so far! As soon as they asked how to stop them, I knew what was gonna happen and I laughed like a hyena!!!
I love Amanda's first words hahahahahahaha :)
Author's Response:
Oh, yeah, those naive vamps on bicycles and Amanda's precious first words. Ahhh....she made me proud too! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love how you have changed Riley, Vicky, Laurent and Irina into good guys. Nice twist in the characters :)
Author's Response:
All four characters were more victims of circumstance than anything else. I always believed that they would have been good had events transpired differently. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
Good grief, I would guess that the line of people waiting to slap Edward is about a mile long...
Bella is awesome and I can't wait to see more!
Author's Response:
Edward will definitely get a beat down!
Edward's Screaming Orgasm 1-ounce Vodka 1.5-ounce Bailey's Irish Cream (that's the ingredient that makes it look like a spermal expulsion) .5-ounce Kahlua Shake, pour over ice, and enjoy! Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am so glad I found this story! It cracks me right the heck up and it is an absolute scream!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you're enjoying it. Edward does have an issue with...ahem, control, doesn't he? Thank you for your review. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was intrigued by the summary and laughed out loud when Jasper waved bye to Alice with a wave of his middle finger haha!
I am favoriting this because I can tell it is going to be good! Also, I am hoping Bella tells Edward off at some point :)
Author's Response:
Welcome to my crazy story! I'm so happy you've joined me.
Alice deserved the salute with her middle finger. Bella and Edward will definitely be interacting. Thank you for reviewing. XOXO
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 56
OMG! I hate cliffies...this was a good chapter, it really moved things along. I'm going to be sitting here wondering what happened when I should be focusing on my finals...lol. Ok, well I seriously hope that you can update again soon...even just a teaser that will squash the uncertainty of what Peter was talking about..or rather screaming about. Oh, I'd also like to thank you for the awesome response, I've never had an author take the time to respond to a review in such detail, I appreciate it!
Take care and hope to read from you again soon!
Corina
Author's Response:
Hi Corina,
Date: 29 Jun 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 56
Great chapter!!!! wow!!! Can't wait for the next one.... :)
Author's Response:
Aww...glad you enjoyed it. More coming soon. We'll start with Rex's POV. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 56
BPOV: Oh Violet.....lying to Vicky and the Major is just stupid girlie. LOL for Vicky as Bellatrix and Chelsea as Voldy. Animals huh. they may not be killing humans but they are probably killing of the entire animal populations. hmmm Guess raston had some sort of gift to get over on vicky that way. go bella. Sigh for jealous Jazzy.
JPOV: Wow Vicky scared. Poor thing. Jut drove to Lexington huh....lol. Yummy hotel times. ROFL for tokens. Stable sounds like a great idea. Wow Bella let him buy her a gift. aww poor Rex. Yeah for claude. Vacations sound great. I wanna do Hawaii too. Glad B is getting along better with Allistair and Esme. Wow Bella is calculating and so smart sometimes.
Hmm me things thier six month window just got shut down.
Author's Response:
Violetta is not very smart, but at least she had a loose tongue. Vicky as Bellatrix and Chelsea as Voldy--it fits, I think and now we know that Mikey likes HP.
As for Ratson, she's just a powerful fighter.
Jazzy's jealous, but I think Bella explained it well by comparing her friendship with Rex to his with Vicky.
Lexington sounds great, I wish I could visit. It's a pretty city from what I hear. Bella's come a long way by letting Jasper buy her a gift.
Bella's probably the most intelligent of the bunch.
As for Hawaii, lots of good deals from Vegas. *wink* XOXO
Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 56
well im excited to see them fight ! cant wiat till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Hmm...will there be a fight next chapter? We don't know yet. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 55
Good chapter those ladies are fun but vicious .Major Jasper is HOT!
Author's Response:
Oh, those ladies are nutty--and I include Claude in the mix. Thanks for reading and reviewing. XOXO
Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
a lot of bonding and forging new family relations. these vamps are all a lot sex crazed! i love char! heehee
Author's Response:
Oh, they're nuts and yes, there's a lot of bonding throughout the story. XOXO
Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
the family is growing! wonder how long until e and a figure everything out?
Author's Response:
Oh, they'll find out soon, but we'll let our vamps get to know each other first. XOXO