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Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 6

I still cant believe she cant put the 2 stories together. good chapter

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 5

I see that Bella caught the when she becomes one. lol  I cant believe he hasnt put together that he knows some of her vampires.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 4

LOL, it is funny that she didnt even flinch.  I think Peter has it bad.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 3

He said his brothers gift, that meant Jasper. I wonder how she is going to take that he knows the Cullens.

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

She figures Garrett is staying around but couldnt decide on Peter. he is the one that called her his mate. lol

Reviewer: debs2crazy Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

Does Peter not have Char as a mate in this story??

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 12

well im glad bella finally figured it out ! i cant wait tosee if jasper lets the cat out of the bag

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 12

Just amazing, love this story.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wow wonder what Bella and peters light show is about. I'm glad she realized she loves him though. It'll be really interesting to see Bella as a human drinker instead of a vegie vamp. I don't think I've ever read a fic like that. :0) I have a feeling that the Cullen's will find out about Bella. If Edward comes around he'll see it.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 12

OMG, what a great chapter!  And always noble Jazz.  Poor guy, but hey, its a Cullen thing.

I am SO EXCITED about what is going to happen next!  So many possibilities!

Yay!

I am looking forward to what comes next :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 12

Take me to bed or loose me forever.... too easy.  although its lose not loose.   lol

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 12

I LOVED IT!!!!From Bella realizing that she loves Peter to her sayind she wants to hunt with him...excellent freakin chapter!!!!!

Reviewer: Tiababy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 11

peters bellas mate, such a great story!

Reviewer: JennLD007 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

Fierce little kitty. I love your story, Japer and Peter have always been one of my favorites in the characters. But i don't really like Alice, so i wonder if Bella will ever accept her again seeing as its Peters 'brothers' mate. Please update and continue. Can't wait to find out what will happen to Victoria, maybe Maria and hopefully the Volturi. Wonderful job :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

LOL  I'm retired military.   We use FUBAR alll the time.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 11

ahhh I see I'm one of the dumb ones. I had no idea what FUBAR was. I knew it had to be abreviations for something but just didn't know what. ha ha Great chapter. Jasper knows her whole story now. I can't watit to see what happens next.

Reviewer: psychokittysatan Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

I don't know what FUBAR means, but that my be cause i'm British? It's not something that's used over here. I'm loving this story, and I totally agree with the whole Bella/venom/superpowers thing!

Kittyx



Author's Response:

FUBAR is actually military lingo- Fucked Up Beyond All Recognition. Really it just means a seriously messed up situation.

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome sauce!!

I love Garrett's POV!  Bells is protecting what is hers... Love it!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!  I am glad that Bella's history is now out for Peter and Garrett to understand.  Now...what to do with Jasper...

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

well finally the whole story came out! cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 10

No I don't want it to end there! ha ha I want to hear what Jasper has to say. I'm glad Bella told him what happened. The Cullen's need to know what they did when they left. Are the others going to be in this story? I'm really looking forward to reading more of this story.



Author's Response:

Can't say for sure who is going to appear... I don't like giving away the plot. You'll have to stick around to find out!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

I think I love that connection they have. I'm so glad it kept her from being able to leave him.  :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

Yay they are finally clearing the air. Now she knows about the whole mate thing. It shouldn't be too hard for her to grasp. She saw the whole imprinting with the wolves. I hope she accepts poor Peter. I can totally understant him not wanting to be compaired to her other vampire. I think he'll even dislike her calling Edward "my vampire" lol I can't wait for him to find out it was the Cullen's who left her. Great story!

Reviewer: Marybeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

cant wait to c what happens next

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 7

Aww I hope Garrett finds his mate in this story too.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

Enjoying this story :0)

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 5

I wondered if Bella had caught on to what Peter said. Now I know she did. I like seeing her getting to know Peter and Garette.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wonder what they'd do if they ever hear that Jasper was one of the vamps that left.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 3

Peter's got a pretty cool power.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

still looking forward to hearing Bella tell them her story and seeing whats going on between Peter and Bella.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Very interesting. Looking forward to seeing what happens at the meeting the next night and finding out what has happened to poor Bella in the years since the Cullen's left.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

hmmmm  so wonder what the pixie bitch has been pumping the family full of.

excellent chapter BTW



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! More questions will get answered in the next chapter!

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

I LOVE PROTECTIVE PETER



Author's Response:

(Me too!) Thanks!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh my word!  I fucking loved it!  I love how Peter totally didn't pause to protect Bella even against his own brother.  I can not wait to learn more of what Jasper has to say about what hapened with the Cullens after they left.  And what was Peter  talking about how Jasper should have known that Bella and Edward were not mates?  More details please????



Author's Response:

First of all, thank you so much! I'm am amazed at all the awesome reviews.

More between Bella/Jasper in the next chapter.

As far as Jasper knowing that E/B were not mates, Jasper is an empath. He senses feelings and emotions. He should have known that the feelings between E/B were not that of mates. More will be revealed down the road, I promise!

Reviewer: Jolinar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 10

Awesome chapter, Peter is bad ass ;-)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

Holy Horse Shit!!!

Its gettin deeper in here!

Awesome chapter!  I knew Jasper would be in it eventually :)

I cant wait to read more!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: froggydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

AWESOME chapter!  Can't wait to hear Jasper's story.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Next chapter will give some answers and show more confrontation between Bella/Jasper.

Reviewer: Werewolfgrlz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh my gosh. this is an amazing chapter. your an amazing writer. keep up the good work. you should post on fanfiction.net



Author's Response:

Thank you! This story is on fanfiction.net and I am working on getting it on twilighted.net as well. Thanks for the tip and the review! Keep letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 9

hmmm wait till he finds out it was the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Keep reading to find out! :)

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love my Nook. One of the best things I bought.

Good thing Peter went after her. They are perfect for each other. Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

(Isn't it the best?!)

Now that Bella has dealt with her issues, they can move on. Keep reading to see what happens!

I am doing good with my goal of updating once a week, so you can expect that as the norm for new chapters.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

Silly Bella.  You can't run from your soul mate; especially when he is a vampire! Excellent chapter.  I loved when Peter showed up and saved her from herself in her attempt to run away.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it! Now that Bella has dealt with her fears and abandonment issues, these two can finally get their shit together!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 9

AAAHHHHHH!  Sweet niblets!

C'mon Bells!  For Fricks swake, give into it, feel it.

Peter is the good guy here!!

Man I love this story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 8

:-)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 8

awww  hr luvs her

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

He said it!  Okay, one hurdle behind them.  Now, will she say it back?  And will we get to see a little human/vamp action going on?!?  I'd be lying if I said I wasn't hoping for that {grins wickedly}. LOL

Fantastic chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. These two will get their shit together soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 8

OMFG!!  Cliffie from Hades, thats what that is!!!

Oh my dear, I am beyond hooked, you didnt need to hang us in suspense that way...

*chuckles darkly*

I cannot wait to see what happens next. 

Yes, Bells will figure it out, she is smart, she will see what she needs...

That being Peter :)



Author's Response:

I know, I know. I really hated to do it, but I will post the next chap soon. I won't keep you waiting for too long!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

Ok, you addressed the Charlotte issue sometime back, but what about Kate?  Since things are not following SM's timeline, will Kate be the one for Garrett or do you have other plans for him (w/o giving too much away)?

It has only taken seven chapters for me to fall in love with Peter, please tell me it won't take much more for Bella to do the same. ;)



Author's Response:

I'm afraid I can't reveal anything about that yet, but I CAN promise a HEA for Garrett.

Bella already loves Peter deep down, I think. She is just a stubborn bitch sometimes and it takes her awhile to admit it to herself. It is coming, I promise. You'll just have to keep reading to see how she gets there.

Thanks for reviewing!

Keep reading and keep letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

I think it is kind of funny how accepting Bella is about their chosen food source.  If/when Peter does change her, I wonder if she will go standad or veggie? 

I heard more inferences to Jasper in here...are the Cullen's going to rear their abandoning heads into Bella's new life at all?  If so, I hope it is after Peter changes her.



Author's Response:

She's had a lot of time to think about the Cullen's (and their way of life) and she understands that they go completely against the grain in every aspect. Their hunting, their lifestyle, their interactions with humans, etc. So she kina hates everything about them. It gives her a lot to think about and compare towards P and G.

Good job catching the inferences of some of the Cullen brood. I can tell you that there will be some familiar faces in the future, but I'm not saying when. Don't wanna give too much away!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hmmm, I was wondering if she picked up on that.  I am surprised she didn't flip shit on him for assuming she still wanted to be a vampire since she had already alluded to the fact that she avoided it several times in the past.

I loved Bella's reaction to Peter when he told her about his powers.  She is drawn to him and it is kind of amazing that she allows herself to be that open to him after all she has been through.



Author's Response:

Yeah. He isn't being pushy about it and Bella has been living the past few years assuming that death is right around the corner. After being abandoned (twice) she doesn't put a whole lot of faith into promises that people make.

But, his constant reassurance is starting to get through to her. And on top of all that, they are mates. So she feels the deeper connection to him and can't really help herself. She still tries to protect her heart, but she is more open to him because of the pull.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 4

I love this story so much already.  I think Peter is awesome.  There is something very appealing about him and the way he is with Bella.  I am curious about how he is going to tell her that she is his mate.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

I already have the 'big reveal' written, and I promise it's coming soon. Hopefully I won't disappoint!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

Peter fumbling in the kitchen and then ordering out for her was very sweet.  I like the fact that none of his gifts work on Bella.  It puts them on a more level playing field.

Question, didn't Bella know that Jasper's last name was Whitlock?  Didn't she recognize the name when Peter introduced himself?



Author's Response:

First of all, thanks for reviewing!

You will find that Peter and Bella are very much alike in my story. Sarcastic, witty, stubborn, to name a few. I like having them on a fairly level playing field.

As for Bella not knowing about Peter via the last name, she does not know Jasper's back story. My fic picks up from Edward taking Bella into the forest to dump her and goes from there. I've taken a lot of libirties. So- just for future refernece, Bella has no idea about Peter's connection and Peter has no idea that Bella was with the Cullen's. Hopefully the next few chapters will clear that up. Sorry if I confused you!

Anyway, thanks again for reviewing!

Keep letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

I seriously love this Bella.  She doesn't pull any punches.  And what is up with Peter?  Is Bella really his mate?  I can't wait to read more and find out.



Author's Response:

Thank you! Glad you like it so far. You'll just have to keep reading to see what happens!

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 7

Oh I hope Bells blows a mating gasket soon!  Like someone hitting on Peter at the bar.

 

I see the word MINE floating through her conscience in the near future hopefully :)



Author's Response:

Things will come to head, but not nessecarily in a way that everyone will expect...

Reviewer: Catemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2011 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 7

a great change i love your story

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

 I love Garret! Hope you can find him a mate.  Will there be an appearance of the Cullens in the future?



Author's Response:

I promise you will see some familiar faces in the future. Not giving anything away yet! But I can promise you that Garrett gets a HEA.

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter!

Thanks fir updating and Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: InsaneGrizzlies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

So I found your fic tonight - I was just browsing a bit not expecting to find anything new and interesting before I went to bed, but your summary intrigued me (and I've recently become a sucker for Peter/Bella fics if they're done right) and wala! You now have yourself a new, devoted, slightly obsessive and insane reader! ;D

 

Trust me on that... I got two honorable mentions in the people awards and one was for inappropriate love (which I insist isn't really... yeah, okay, even I can't lie about that one being true, lolol!)

 

Anyhow! I ADORE this fic. I love how you've written Peter, and Garrett (I've always loved Garrett, lol), and you're Bella is definitely likable. Her kickassness and sarcasm make my sarcastic mind happy.

 

I can't wait for an update and I just have to say again that I love love love love Looooooove your story!!! ;)

 

Thanks for writing something so awesome!

~IG



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am blown away by how many people are responding to my story and the response is amazing. I really appriciate all the positive feedback. You guys seriously keep me motivated to continue writing.

Feel free to show all the inappropriate love you want. I'm not scared! :)

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 7

Garrett is so smart ... if only Bella & Peter could just do it!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 6

I cannot wait to see if bella picks immortality! Love the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

I love their attraction to each other!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 4

Just wondering if Bella is aware of peter's last name (whitlock) & connecting it to jasper? Awesome story.... loving it!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Peter's gifts don't work on Bella .... that makes things interesting!



Author's Response:

I will go more in depth on that later! It'll be good, I promise.

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

Peter sounds so hot! Love their first meeting!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loving the story! I love that Bella is a tough bad-ass! Looking forward to more with Garrett & Peter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2010 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

great chapter.  Garrett's POV was cool



Author's Response:

Thank you! Garrett is a great POV to write from. I promise more from him in the future. This is a B/P story at heart, but Garrett is a big part of it and I think he deserves more recognition!

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2010 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thank you for the great update! Merry Christmas.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: froggydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

Love this story - thanks for the update!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 6

great chapter.   her freinds are hilarious.   I;ve always wanted a mustang



Author's Response:

Love the stang. My hubby got me addicted. He's driven a few over the years and now (even while he drives his CHEVY truck) he is rebuilding a '68 fastback. It will be amazing when its finished...

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it. I am really looking forward to the next chapter. 

Thank you!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 5

hmmm    wonder if she's made the relation between emotion and jazz yet.   guess not.

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4

Lol love it

Reviewer: tlmorris Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loving this story

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 4

loved it

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved it

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 4

put him in his place girl.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

awwww   flumoxing Peter is cute.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 2

Still enjoying the story, waiting for more.

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I say so far so good.

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2010 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

Great so far. I can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: sifi1977 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 2

please continue...i really like this!

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

Interested in reading more!!!

Reviewer: straighttohell-o Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

thank you

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 2

hmmm go bella

Reviewer: erh713 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

nice. i like the mystrie of her background

 

Reviewer: Jolinar Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

interesting first chapter, and since I'm a Peter-Fan I will definitely continue reading!

Reviewer: lynne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

freaking loved it!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: honeybun37876 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 1

I like it so far and cant wait for the meeting with peter and bella. wonder what peter going to think about her story and how they going ti keep victorry away.

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

ok, you've got my attention and i'm more than sure you will keep it... hope the next chapter is up soon...

Reviewer: straighttohell-o Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

Looking forward to more. Thank you!

Reviewer: fall up Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it. Flowed nicley and I would love to read more so I hope you continue to write.

Reviewer: nickeyd26 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!  That is quite the intrieging start.  I like the way you are writing Bella.  I hate a weak Bella.  This one has balls, but still has a heart as well.  I can wait to hear her story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm I like this one so far.   Bella and peter....yum

Reviewer: Juniper42 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

This has all sorts of promise.  I love Peter and Bella stories and I like what I've read here so far.  I'm sensing a slightly different Peter than is ordinarily found in the Twiverse.  I am really looking forward to the next chapter.

Cheers.

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