Date: 04 Jun 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
oh yeah the hyper chihuahua is on her way can't wait for this! must be while they were playing around she lifted her shield and alice saw them
Date: 04 Jun 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
wow bells that was pretty feral!!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
okay riley huh stupid as ever!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
wowo vampire sex... always have to dominate hey peter. hope bella gets to put the bite down on you too!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
interesting turn of events... a tame bella i would have loved to see peter and garrett in submissive poses! haha
Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 16
well at least she got changed too bad it wasn't during a big old orgasm from peter!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
okay knew it something would delay it.... damn!!! you are driving me crazy!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
okay you are dragging this out... i am worried!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 13
yeah!! damn pete is HOT!!! now what?
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
okay but i am sure you are going to have something happen to delay right? i hate that!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh boy where does it go from here?
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 10
well i got my answer jasper did show... wow he is a huge pussy!! i can't believe that peter could take him out like that... wow!! no god of war here!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
okay you guys need to get down to it!! you are both killing me!!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh boy the L word... downhill downhill.....
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
poor garrett i hope you find someone for him.. someone good!!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
okay must she doesn't know jasper's story because she didn't put 1 and 1 together....
Date: 03 Jun 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
okay she does feel the pull towards him you answered that... pete is HOT! Hey is jasper going to show?
Date: 03 Jun 2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh no i think you are making a mistake pete... you are going to need backup i am afraid!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh boy! pete you are screwed
Date: 03 Jun 2011 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh boy so she doesn't know she is peter's mate she doesn't feel the pull towards him? can't wait for more
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
wow one tough bella interesting can't wait to hear her story
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awww poor wittle jasper got his booty kicked.
Date: 02 Jun 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
you know it's esme behind all of this!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
great chapter! Love that she knocked Jasper down a few!!! LOL Can't wait to see the next one and which wolves showed up! :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
OMG OMG OMG!!! I cant wait to see their reaction!!!
I am really looking forward to this reunion!! :)
Great chapter!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love this story, wish you would update more often.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
Awww!! Can't wait to read about that reunion!!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh please update soon! this story is so great and i always am anxious for your next update!!!!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
Jasper sure didn't know what he was getting into when he decided to "train" Bella did he? lol Looking forward to seeing what happens now that the pack has arrived.
Date: 01 Jun 2011 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMG I LOVE HOW THINGS ARE TURNING ABOUT.
I WONDER WHAT THE LAPUSH [MEN] ARE GOING TO THINK OF BELLA. SHE IS HOT ON THE BANNER LMAO. who is that girl by the way??
ALICE NEEDS TO STOP BEING STUCK UP,AND JASPER GOT HIS A-S-S HANDED TO HIM. LMAO THE MAJOR ISNT AN SHOULDNT BE MOST FEARED VAMP AFTER ALL HEHEHEHE
Date: 01 Jun 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
well im excited for the next hcapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 24
I like that Bella is being cautious around Alice and Jasper, esp. after Jasper's immature cheat/fighting stunt and Alice's inconsistencies with her story. I also appreciate Bella being short and to the point with them. They deserve nothing else right now. Can't wait to see how the wolves change/don't change the dynamic of things. I hope they don't freak out about Bella's diet of criminals. hehehe :)
Date: 31 May 2011 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
Please tell me Alice's craziness is not all Carlisle's doing??? Ugh, it kills me to hate him. But if it is him, I think Bella should unleash a little of her 'gift' on his ass.
I love Seth. I hope we get to see more of him. He is so much fun and such as sweet character.
Date: 31 May 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
Alice has seriously confused me! Edward wanted to break her down??? If that is true, I sooooo hope Bella gets the chance to kick his ass.
Date: 22 May 2011 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter!! wow... can't believe she was being manipulated the whole time ... poor alice :(
So excited to see more! :)
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am glad that Jasper and Alice were not in the plan to get a mate for Edward. I wonder if it is Carlisle?? I knew the wolves would help.
Date: 18 May 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awe nice chapter. What's this about Alice being manipulated? Was it Edward's doing? update soon!
Date: 18 May 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 23
well i cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 18 May 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well so ALice & Edward were manipulated, must be Carlisle. War with Victoria!
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2011 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
Oh man!! I loved this chapter!
I think Carlisle has mind control. Or maybe its the most obvious and Eddie has it.
Whatever, they cannot even fathom what they got themselves into with fucking with Bells!
And Seth!!! OMG, that was awesome :) I look forward to the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
woo hoo Glad Seth was there to answer the call. Sounds more like carlisle or esme behind the "deception"
Date: 18 May 2011 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
I have beeen waiting for your reply forever! lol *well it seems like forever* please please please update soon i love this story and i cant wait to see where you will go witht his!!!!!!!
Date: 18 May 2011 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
this chapter was fuuuck awesome!
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2011 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
That was a really good chapter. The Alice part of the chapter was a big surprise. I'm curious as to who was doing the controlling of her. can't wait to find that out. I'm also looking forward to Jasper's pov or help in bella's training. I also hope that garrett isn't alone much longer. :)
Date: 01 May 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
awwwwwww this is fuuuucking great!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 22
hope jazz puts her in her place. Too bad B or P didnt get to hit her.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 22
lol, love it! That was hilarious :)
Date: 30 Apr 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
So good. You are doing such a good job. Okay Alice, well what can I say? They wanted Bella to completely give up so they could MOLD her. I think if I was Bella that the earth would be too small for those people and me to be on it. I would not invite her back ever. Jasper that is quite another story.
I just can't wait for broodward to start hurting! I know I am bad...S.Meyer did not hurt him enough in 3 books for what he did in the beginning of New Moon.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 22
WOW!! I just adore this story but it's sooo not what I'm use to. To be honest, I'm surprised I'm even reading it b/c I am such a "Edward girl".
But, I am soo intrigued with this story. It's truly awesome!!
Although, I do still feel bad for Edward. Sorry. He's my boy.
Can't wait for more! Have a great weekend!
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
well i wish that she could of got one punch in! cant wiat to see what happens next
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great story. I am still waiting for the Cullens and broodward to see Bella in her glory, mated and hopefully by then married to Peter.
Bad ol me..
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
what is wrong with alice?
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think that Alice has some explaining to do. Jasper didnt seem to happy with her.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
Alice saw Bella when Bella moved her shield, and thats when Peters gifts went haywire too.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 11
I have seen FUBAR before mentioned and never knew what it meant. Thank you.
Great story, by the way.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
please tell me that jasper leaves alices ass and joins peters coven because she really isnt jaspers mate she just used her visions to keep him i cant wait to find out if i am right so please update soon
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
I can't believe that Alice is such a bitch! Dam! I feel sorry for Jasper as well now. sigh....
Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter!!! So excited to see more :)
Date: 29 Apr 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
please update soon. i love how this story is progressing!!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
damn that alice!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh Fuck is correct! Looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2011 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter!! Uh, oh......Alice has no idea what she's heading into. Should be interesting! Can't wait!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter! Loved all her training.... Can't wait to see the next one :)
Date: 19 Apr 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
awesome chapter!! thanks for updating!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
uh,oh What will Alice have to say and what will Bella think? Great chaper!
Date: 19 Apr 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
ah so the pixie cunt is coming. cant wait till bella puts her in her place. Great job Bella with her cool training.
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh damn, you can't leave me hanging like that lmfao!!! great job
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 21
Fuck is right! Bella is not going to be too happy to see the pixie I suspect.
I loved the fight training. It was just like I would have pictured it. and the lovin' was a nice break from all the heavy.
Date: 18 Apr 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 21
I wondered if and when she'd show up. ha ha
[Report This]Date: 18 Apr 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Shit, I wish Peter could have predicted the Alice shit...
well, damn.
*mischevious grin*
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
well its about time that the cullens start to visit! keep the updates comming
Date: 11 Apr 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Lyssa the greek goddess of rage?
THATS FUCKING AWESOME!
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
Of course she needs to train to fight. Trouble just seems to follow her no matter what she does.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love how tender Peter is with her but also lets her "release the animal " side of her but is there for comfort when she needs it. :0)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
WOW!!!! Even though that was a little hard to read, Bella has every right to get the revenge she soo deserves.
GREAT chapter!!
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter!!! Can't wait to see more.... it is almost like she has her own "Major" type personality kinda like Jasper does in some stories.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 20
vikky is insane alright
Date: 08 Apr 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
Is it wrong that I kind of like this darker vamp Bella? I enjoy this story and get really happy when I see it has been updated. I am a fan of non-cannon parings and love Peter in just about everything I have read with him as a main or even secondary character. Just wanted you to know I like this story.
--lightspell
Date: 08 Apr 2011 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
Whoa! Bella might need some anger management classes. She is viscious.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
i think they need to warn jasper too cant wait to see what happens next
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
Wow, Bella really let them have it.......
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh man, I would love to see Bella's beast through Pete's eyes... can we? aAn outtake or something? That would be so AWESOME! :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm glad peter was there for bella and supported her inner rage without sugar coating things. I hope that others will help them fight andd destroy icky vicky. :)
Date: 04 Apr 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
cant wait to see what happens next..So keep writing.. I'll be waiting for the next chapter... :)
Date: 03 Apr 2011 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
this story is NOT abandoned! I read it religiously. So keep the chapters coming!!
Date: 02 Apr 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
This is fucking bad ass!
Date: 02 Apr 2011 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yeah, I've read that story and I love it. I hope michellephants does finish that story. Great chapter, I can't wait to find out what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
OMG, I was there when she started writing that fic! The Vampire in the Basement is a cool awesome fic for sure!!! Everyone should read it :) I caught the reference right off lol :)
I cant wait to see what happens to these two goons GO PETER! :)
I cant wait till your next chapter, this story is so awesome!
Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
well first she should burn his body pieces one by one before his head
Date: 01 Apr 2011 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh my please udpdate soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bad as bella....lol
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yes, I've read that story and no I didn't catch the reference, dammit!! It is a shame it has been abandoned. My BFF and I both have read it and discussed it.
I personally hate it when authors do that shit. I know it's their story and all but they have people who are supporting them and their story and to just abandon it w/o letting people know what their plans are or that the story is on hiatus, is unprofessional, in my opinion. Not that this is a "professional" situation but hopefully you understand what I'm saying.
This was, once again, a great chapter!! Good job!! Have a great weekend! Gotta to get my kidos up for school.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
Just keep liking this story,it's a good one. Wasn't sure about Peter/Bella but I love them together. I wish Jasper had a better part in it though.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
for a little moment I felt sorry for your fingers!!!
Bella was so bad here I´m crazy to see what she will do with Riley lol
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! I can not wait to see what Riley's thought revealed to Peter.
Damn, Bella has some serious kick ass power. I hope P&G unleash her on Vickie. That would be awesome!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter... and loved the refrence to The Vampire in the Basement... loved that story but it has been over a year since she updated :(
Can't wait to see more!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
I love that peter and garrett are in awe of and respect bella so much. can't wait for riley's ass to be kicked. :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is going to be such bad*ss vamp. They better watch out.
Date: 21 Mar 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hi!!! I´ll never see Peter the same again!!! it is so good and i like so much hope you can update soon.
xoxo
Date: 20 Mar 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh shit...bella's one ferocious bitch! love it!! :)