Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
The end:-) Im happy & sad. Thanks for writing this story, I really appreciate all your hard work.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 26
That's a great coincidence. So if Peter absorbs people's powers was doesn't he use Bella's since it's so awesome & all?
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, that was some hot sexin! Dang, does this mean vamp/human babies in the future?
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
So, no vege Bella. She's embracing the true vampire nature.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awe, Garrett's her bud/fam now.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awe, ILY's are always so sweet.
Date: 15 Aug 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
This was a great story, so different from all the rest! THank you : D
Date: 11 Jun 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
loved the ending !
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
i cant believe its over!! but it was a great chapter and a great way to end it.
though i hope bella would have ripped Rosalie's head off her shoulders. How dare she tell somebody they dont know what they want. ugh. whatever.
Date: 05 Jun 2012 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
Great story
Thank you for writing and sharing
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
Garrett: awww glad garrett got his mate. oooh yummy times together. lol for Em scoffing. Oh Rose wants a little barbie doll huh? Yea for bella putting her in her place. Hmmm still think Jazz is a bit of a wienie. Morgan is so sweet with Hannah. Dining room indeed.
Peter: Love Peter's faith in his mate. Hmm fridges and special bagged blood? Interesting twist. Morgan's got a cool gift. Cant blame Peter being mad at Jazz either. LOL for biting the cup. At this point I dont want Hannah near Rose either. Abusive, snotty biatch. Wow Aro apologized. Oh Aro... you made a mistake trying to mess with B. Go bad ass B!!!! Buh Bye Chelsea. War gonna break out over people who used to be under her control. LOL for Hannah not wanting to see Rose.
Bella: oooh a "nice" caius? oooh now I feel sorry for Jazz. I'd love to see Greece too. Yummy distraction. Now I realy feel sorry for Jazz. SOOOO glad Cheslea is gone. lol for her not liking Garret and Morgan's super sweetness. Poor Em stuck with Rose. Yippee for getting married!!!
Thank you for writing and sharing with us all. Happy dance for you.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
amazing ending.... I love that you had it end with their wedding and then jumping off a cliff! :) Thank you so much for such an amazing story! :)
-Kate
Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
great chapter!!! can't wait to see the next one!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
interesting turn of events. bella is superbella!! she always comes out smelling like a rose!! haa! thanks for the update!
Date: 07 Nov 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 32
wow. I wish you updated more often. Great story, I just forget certain details.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 32
loved her messing with jasper. Aww for garrett. interesting talk with marcus.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 32
loved this chapter looking forward to seeing what happens next
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 32
Ah great chapter! Who knew that Marcus was a cool cat?? Awesome!
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
Whoa! I knew you had revenge in mind, but I never expected you to kill off Edward, Esme, Alice and Carlisle!!! I was surprised that Aro did not even consider sparing Carlisle after all the years they spent together.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
Ugh! I hate the Volturri. They are never up to any good.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2011 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
So much information and so many more questions!!! Who would have thought that Esme was the evil doer?!? It makes sense that she would want someone perfect for Edward, but good grief. She is a few cards short of a deck. Gotta sleep, but will read and review more tomorrow.
Date: 28 Sep 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
so very awesome this here is
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 31
buh bye skanky cullens. Ooohh Bella is pissed at Jazzy.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
woo hoo a new chapter. I love bad ass bella.
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
Well death to the evil ones. I am glad that Bella was not harmed further. I am sad for Hannah, too young for that life.
Miss you and your story, this time I had to reread to get back into this. You write very well, just slowly.
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
ugh welcome to Hell is more like it.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter! wow! So all the evil ones are dead..... yay! LOL Can't wait to read the next one :)
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 31
Worth waiting for, can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 31
OH wow! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 31
I agree with Bella. It did seem like too easy of a death for them, almost anticlimactic. Is Jasper being kept against his will? Did he tell the kings about Peter, Garrett and Bella's powers? I hope not. I don't want to hate him. sigh...... I am worried about everyone getting away.
Date: 27 Sep 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 31
yeah the cullen's are dead.. strange to say that.... thanks for the update. now everyone can have a HEA you need to find garrett a girl!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2011 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 30
oh boy drama ahead. i love bella!! sorry about all your RL drama i hope everything is alright with your hubby. Kindergarten is a trip!!! i cried the first day for my oldest. It is worse when it is the baby!!! take care and thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 31
Excellent chapter. Goodbye, Edward, Carlisle, Alice and Esme. Its still shocking. lol
Date: 27 Sep 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 31
THANK GOD ALICE IS DEAD!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
wow!!! Loved this chapter.... Can't wait to see the next one :)
Date: 18 Aug 2011 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 29
oh boy more adventure!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!!!
Contingent... *falls over trying to breathe between guffaws*
They have no idea... this is gonna be great!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love the story. It's different from what I usually read, but I like it. It has a twist to it..
I like how you have Bella as a vampire and how you've portrayed her powers. Also how animalistic she is when she lets go of her control.
I hope you update soon.
Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 29
oh fuuuck!
Date: 17 Aug 2011 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 29
This will be priceless.. hurry up now.
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
Even though bella, peter and garrett seem to be in control I am scared shitless for them. I wish they could have sorted out the cullen bullshit before volturi bullshit started. I hope bella can protect peter and garrett. can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: 17 Aug 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 29
looking foward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 29
Oh I Sooooooo love bad ass Bella.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 28
Mmmm, shower sex...nice!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter!! Can't wait to see the next one :)
Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
We miss you when your gone!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 28
oh boy what to do with alice? who is the one that manipulates her or is she just crazy!? hum.. can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 28
OK, THATS their cabin?!?! HOly shit! Thats awesome!
And that was an absolutely GREAT chapter :) I missed this story alot
*sniff*
OK, Im good! I cant wait for more :)
Date: 26 Jul 2011 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
i just love this story!!!! please update soon!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 28
excited to see what they have instore for the cullen family
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
I'm hating Alice! Grrrr! :) I love that Seth kicked her ass and that Bella figured out a way to coral her ass! Can't wait to see what happens next. :)
Date: 26 Jul 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 28
Nice chapter!!! Loved the lemon.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
Go seth. Kick the stupid little biatches arse. Hmmm yummy shower.
i absolutely LOVE that house.
Date: 20 Jul 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
wow... great chapter.... Bella got a bit graphic there.... but she is right I don't think that Victoria would have shown her any mercy had the roles been reversed.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jul 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 27
So, I've been reading this fic for two days now, and I must tell you, I LOVE IT!!!! I love everything about this story. (I especially love Big Red.)
I can't wait to see where this story is going! You have me wondering who is behind controlling Alice and how Edward will react to vampy Bella. I look forward to it!
--helluvabell
Date: 15 Jul 2011 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
all i have to say is HOT DAMN!!!!! about damn time! lol I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Jul 2011 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow, Bella is BadAss...... I wonder what she will do to Edward?
Date: 13 Jul 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 27
Victoria is over finally.
Now Alice, why did she do what she did?
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
wow! That was awesome!
Date: 13 Jul 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow Devil Incarnate indeed
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2011 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
Dam! Bella definitely deserves a break/vacation after that! :) I do hope that seth had to tear off a few alice limbs during the fight. hehe can't wait for the aftermath.
Date: 13 Jul 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 27
oh bella you are one tough mean vengeful bitch!!! i love it!!
Date: 12 Jul 2011 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 27
im glad victoria is gone and in the end i hope that the cullens dont find out about bella !
Date: 12 Jul 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 27
DUUUUUUUUUUDE! THIS WAS FUCKING AWWWWWWWESOME! Bella is bad as fuck. omg can you imagin what fear she would place in the hearts of the Volturi. They should of had Alice watching that, you know, a nice little warning lmao
I feel so giddy after reading this, this was just splendid!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2011 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 26
Love the fic, and I'm looking forward to reading much more :)
Date: 03 Jul 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter.... Loved it... and the coincidence with the location is hilarious!!! :) Can't wait to see the next one.
Date: 25 Jun 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter! I loved the moment of passion against the wall that was HOT! and I also loved Bella putting Alice in her place. That was so cool! Great job
Date: 25 Jun 2011 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella showing her gift to Jake made me laugh a bit. That'll teach him to doubt her lol
Date: 24 Jun 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
You know, I love this story. I hope you update soon.
Date: 24 Jun 2011 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 26
thanks for the update can't wait for the clash.. alice please just get rid of her... jasper what a f-ing pussy you are! the god of war... yeah should name you the pussy of war! ahahah!!! pete is hot! bella you are soo lucky i would take him in a mintue!!
Date: 24 Jun 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 26
well im glad taht she got to distroy alice for a little wihile and i cant wait till the next chapter
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
hope she kills malice at some point. bitch.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
OH my god, that is FREAKY!!! So awesome, dear. I love this story.
I cannot wait until Alice gets whats coming to her.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
Amazing chapter, I just love this story, such a refreshing change from some of the stories out there right now. I am a nervous wreck about whats next for our group, but can't wait! Take care until next time!
Date: 23 Jun 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
Bella should have kept alice apart dude! What was she thinking . Jasper man i feels orry for him seriously. His mate is a traitor.
Date: 18 Jun 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
great chapter... can't wait to see more!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
Your Highness rubicon queen,
I know, it´s about time to leave my first reply.
I really like your story. To find a new mate for Bella is a very cool idea and I have to say, your story makes sense to me. To leave Bella was cowardly and rash and I am not sure that you can really do something like this if you have found your real mate.
The one thing I don´t agree are their feeding habits: I am no fan of self-justice and also not of death penalty, so I cannot sympathize with their idea of "fair trade food".
Otherwise great story, thanks for sharing.
yours truly
icequeen ;.)
Date: 14 Jun 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
I recently found your story and have just caught up. I love it. A Bella with a backbone is great! I can't wait to see what Alice and Edward have been up to, and if not them who is behind it all.
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love the family reunion with the wolves. And I freakin adore Seth!!!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm glad the boy have arrived.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
Yay! The boys are back in town!! Awesome sauce!! :)
I love it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Can't wait for more. I agree with Peter. I'm not sure about alice either.
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
well in the end i hope that alice isnt up to no good!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
wow lots of boywolved to help
Date: 13 Jun 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
okay they got their back up plan. jas is still acting like a pussy... damn peter should be the f-ing major!! haha! thanks for the update!!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 22
Okay, looks like Jasper will get to redeem himself, Like it!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well....I was hoping Edward would have lied and told Jasper Bella was dead. Jasper is my favorite and has a big role in my story. But...I h=guess I can see it the way you wrote it. Hopefully Jasper will find a way to redeem himself in their eyes.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
OK, so when will they make the Jasper connection? Liking your story a lot!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
About time Peter!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Peter's gift...very creative.
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good opening. Off to read the next chapter.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
the pack is back! is jacob with? no god of war in your story what a puss ass!!! it is strange to have him written that way. i guess i am all caught up and ready for the next installment!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
always liked seth... i think it is carlisle or esme that are being evil i like to think it wasn't kind of the dipshits that did it.
Date: 04 Jun 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
well that was alittle disappointment... i wanted some action on alice!! oh well what she said just brought up more questions... what did she mean he wanted her perfect? she had to be beat down so he could build her up? hum i hope you answer all that!!!