Date: 30 Aug 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
One of the most "near perfect" stories I've read. The plot holds up. The characters are true to themselves. All gifts are believable withing the story. The love is strong and the lemons are juicy. Can't think of anything left out.
Date: 22 Apr 2016 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
I absolutely loved this story. It's action packed, drama filled, and keeps the readers on edge. It's quite a different love story and I love that. I love how you turned the characters from their origional stand point and made it your own. Bella has became a very strong and independent woman and she's brave. I love seeing her with Peter and with Garrett, seeing her with someone other than Edward is great. I do hope you continue your great work of writing.
Date: 10 Dec 2015 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 26
I just want to let you know that I have really been enjoying your story,"A Crimson Change". It has kept me captavated
with every chapter,and I really do enjoy Peter and Bella storys.I don't think there is enough of them so ,thanks!!
Date: 26 Aug 2014 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
I liked the way you describe both Bella and Peter's scents! I like that Bella is reasinable and seems to trust her instincts -- even if she doesn't quite get why she is having such reactions/feelings. I liked their convesation and her maturity.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story was recommended on ADF and I just loved it and have since read your other three stories here which we're also great. Do you still write? Could you tell me if you post your stories elsewhere? I looked for you on FF but although you are there none of your stories are. I would love to read more of your work and hope you have not given up. I am unable to send you a message using the Contact button, it says the function has be disabled so that is why I am sending you this in a review.
Date: 15 Feb 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 33,34,&35
An amazing, unique story. I've never read a fanfic like this one, and that's saying something: I've been reading fanfictions for years. It's nearly the same story every time, but the different pairing alongside the distinct plotline within your story kept me reading. I'm glad to have found a story that I can return to - it'll definitely be on my list of favorites. I'm additionally pleased at having to have found your story upon its completion - I usually go nuts waiting for stories to get finished. I actually read the entirety of the story within two days; I was just that addicted to it.
Honestly and truly, this is a phenomenal piece and you should be proud of it. You have a special writing story and a gift for prose, as well as humor. I found myself loving these characters and unable to keep myself from reading about their lives.
I have nothing critical to say about this entire piece - highly unusual for a person like me. I hope your talents are not wasted and that you perhaps look into a career into writing novels of your own. I know I would definitely buy them.
Thanks for reading the long review, but I know authors (like me) enjoy them every once in a while, especially when they praise the work - always enjoyable istn't it? Haha, well I'll leave you to your work as I must return to mine.
I hope you continue to write as I hope to read more of your works in the future.
Best wishes and constant congragulations,