[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2016 4:49 PM Title: Epilogue: On Time
I loved this story! Them having a boy & tanya being his mate, jacob & leah being together, he actually having to die were some of my favorite changes! No doubt top of the list getting to see e&b figuring out how to stay warm was AMAZING!!
Date: 12 Mar 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 3: SPK
It's as though you are an editor for the New Yorker slumming it in this wonderful way . . .
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2015 7:23 PM Title: Epilogue: On Time
thank you so much for sharing this on here ;) i think i've read it before but i still enjoyed it ;D
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2012 5:19 AM Title: Epilogue: On Time
I've been following this fic since you started posting. The ending is bittersweet, but so true to the rest of the tale. I've already started reading Scholarship Fund and love it too. Can't wait to see what you do next!
Date: 27 Apr 2012 6:19 AM Title: Epilogue: On Time
Thanks for writing and sharing hun.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 16: MPR
woo hoo for skiing!!! Uh oj for drama. Glad no Renesmee. Hate that wierd name. Carlie I can deal with.
Date: 27 Apr 2012 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 15: WRJ
Yummy lemony time. LOL for Lonnie and Tanya
Date: 02 Apr 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: GIG
Please update!! This is a great story!
Date: 24 Feb 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 14: URO
Wow that was fantastic. I was starting to miss our story a lot however the length and complication of the chapter made up for the time fabulousl. I think the other two vampires and what the cullens did during the war was a perfect idea and would fit their personalities. I am so excited for the next chapter thank you for an amazing story to read.
I like you disclaimer
Date: 23 Feb 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 14: URO
Devinchi is a vamp. ha ha
Ewwwww Skankya visiting
Date: 27 Jan 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 13: ORY
lol they broke the table
Date: 26 Jan 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 13: ORY
First off I want to start by saying I'm so happy that you put translations down at the bottom especially for not so smart people like me who don't know what Lusophone means. lol and I do have a question though: why not lotion? when she was massaging Bella why did Edward say no lotion? thanks again bye for now p.s. OF COURSE you did an excellent job once again. :D
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! As for your question: E doesn't want Mayra to put anything heavily scented on Bella, and he asks Bella not to use lotion on him because it would be, um, irritating to her considering what they were going to do later.
Date: 26 Jan 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 13: ORY
it is wonderful to see a new chapter I just ove the story. Hope to see more soon
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2011 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 12: FDR
I missed your chapters. I am still enjoying the walks and history of paris. I love this story. I want more I wish I could give you a helpful critque but all i have is I want ore and aybe some time with the rest of the family or ore talking about the rest of the family.
Date: 10 Jan 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: FDR
wow first off try not to use words I have to look up lol like that whole entire scene from them trying on lingerie. :D also I loved Bella and Edward's history lesson on the art work. thats too cool. I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 12: FDR
yummy. aww poor eddie had to eat
Date: 30 Dec 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 11: CDG
I don't speak French, but what a lesson!!! My dream vacation would include Edward, and Paris.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 11: CDG
DAMN!! gentleman Edward has a potty mouth in the thoroughs of passion doesn't he? lol keep up the good work and no more cockblocks. You know which one I'm talking about, "It was a very hot shower" totally not cool. You very much pulled a Stephenie Meyer there. (stern look) not again. lol No I'm kidding. you're doing an awesome job. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 11: CDG
It was wonderful to remember my trip through Pars with Bella and Edward however I wish I had some to give me Bella's french lesson. I love your story and can't wait to see a new chapter it is wonderfuland I always want there to be more. Goddluck with the next chapter I can't wait.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 2: SEA
Really loving this story. I like that you have Bella staying human longer. I think it's going to be an interesting "what if" story.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 11: CDG
yummy id go to paris anytime
Date: 23 Dec 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 10: KIN
This honeymoon could go on forever.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9: LEB
I was beginning to wonder if Bella has had a period. Seems like they have sex all the time they can. Lucky her.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 8: LNN
Esme would have much better taste than Clinton.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 7: YNY
Awww, Edward in a hot tub!
Date: 22 Dec 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 5: LGA
He shows a lot of restraint.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4: ORD
Really great job recounting history. Love Chicago, but to me Seattle is less intimitating.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 10: KIN
awww eddie the horndog.
lol Trying to get B high.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 2: SEA
Absolutely love this story. It extremely cute and follows how a newly wed couple would be.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 10: KIN
I'm so glad you put those links down at the bottom bc I was sort of lost reading this chapter and not knowing what they HECK they were talking about. lol About the period sex, I would have LOVED to read that. I can not find a good story at ALL that revolves around Edward doing that so thanks so much. keep up the great work and I can't wait for more. thanks again bye
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 9: LEB
Sooo what happened at the end? she started her period and didn't know it? or she did and just didn't tell him? confused a little bit. :D keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 9: LEB
great chapter. loved the hula hoops and the radiator
Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 8: LNN
lol Esme and Clinton. yummy lake and sauna action
Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 8: LNN
aww poor Edward. he has a freak attack ONE too many times during this chapter. I loved the sauna thing but Bella being jealous instead of Edward was cute. I really hope nothing is the matter after the ending you left us. Thanks for that by the way. :( lol but seriously I can't wait for more thanks again bye
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 7: YNY
Love they have their own place with a HOT TUB I want one.
Poor Bella has to hike.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 7: YNY
that girl at the diner was a bitch, like LEAH bitchy! poor Bella but those hot sex scenes in the tub and in the bedroom when she woke up definitely changed her mood. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 06 Dec 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 7: YNY
that was a wonderful chapter I cant wait for more. I think the hiking trip will be funny.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 6: NYP
I love this. I can't wait for more chapters.
Date: 01 Dec 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 6: NYP
love spin art. LOL
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 5: LGA
always want to go to new york
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 5: LGA
Great chapter! I´m really enjoying the story!!!
krazi
xoxo
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 5: LGA
I like art but I think you lost me at that last section where they were discussing artwork and artists. I do have a question though: what did Edward mean when he said "a Caravaggio that will confirm your suspicions about my sexual orientation"? I know he was talking about taking her in dark corners in front of paintings and having his way with her but that line just made me ask what he meant. Help? thanks again. I really love this story and is Jeff going to be a villian or just a guy passing by? I'm kind of sad we only got a dirty talking Edward and Bella pleasing him but no hot hot lemon. oh well. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Caravaggio painted a lot of half-naked young men, and the Doria Pamphilij painting is particularly beautiful: http://www.doriapamphilj.it/riposo2.asp and Edward had joked earlier about having the hots for Mike Newton, so....
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 4: ORD
Aww his childhood home.....sweet
Date: 24 Nov 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 4: ORD
lol I love joking Edward. he rocks. he's always so serious so for him to crack a joke or laugh is awesome. keep up the great work on this story. thanks again bye
Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 3: SPK
hmmm jasper in leather yummm
And the electric blankets are smart
Author's Response:
Thanks for your reviews! And yes, electric blankets, mmmm.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 3: SPK
ooh that was hot! keep up the great work. I loved the car ride and the second hotel room. too freaking cute and sexy as hell. :D thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's my favorite chapter, so it's nice to hear that.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 2: SEA
Very enjoyable chapter. Bella is one lucky girl.
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: GIG
I read this a few months ago on Twilighted. They are one of the sexiest, most in love and most enjoyable to read BxE couples ever. ANd this is coming form a true addict.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2: SEA
INSATIABLE those two are! lol I love this story. I think this might be my new favorite one because I'm a big ole perv! lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 2: SEA
renee is so goofy
Date: 19 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1: GIG
Welcome to the site hun.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: GIG
Loved it. It was all sweet and hot. Lovely.