Date: 28 Dec 2010 1:33 AM Title: Are you mine yet?
I just don't get it and it's very frustrating. Edward is right - Mike is never there. And I still can't figure out what she sees in him or even what she saw in Mike to begin with. I just wish she'd get her memory back. And even if she doesn't just get rid of Mike and make new memories with Edward. It's obvious that she has feelings for Edward and they are way more intense than what she's feeling for Mike.
Author's Response:
dont worry.....my next chapter is her talking to Mike....so dont worry...the ball is rolling for Edward and Bella
Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:29 PM Title: Are you mine yet?
god her life is fucked up!
Author's Response:
Yah i wouldnt wanna be in her shoes ...but edward makes it all better ...soon....
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:59 PM Title: My name is Bella
wow totally didn't expect that! WTF - Edward is Brad???
Author's Response:
yup...brad Edward....same guy lol
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:46 PM Title: No regrets
Just atarted and so far I am liking. You ae a good writer and I think the storyline has great possibilites. I will keep reading and reviewing.
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2010 1:24 PM Title: Are you mine yet?
SO good!
Author's Response:
thank you xxoxoox
[Report This]Date: 27 Dec 2010 7:26 AM Title: Are you mine yet?
Loved it so so much! I'm glad Bella will be single in the morning. She's doing the right thing in taking time to think & sort things out. She's getting glimpses of her forgotten past...just hope more will follow so she & Edward can finally be back together!
Fantastic!!
Author's Response:
yayyy...im excited now...Lol....Im glad u liked it xoxoxox
Date: 27 Dec 2010 2:16 AM Title: Are you mine yet?
Sweet!
Author's Response:
xoxoxo thanks
Date: 27 Dec 2010 1:57 AM Title: Are you mine yet?
great chapter, we relaly need to kick mike's ass out the door !!!!
Author's Response:
Im working on it.....xoxoxoox
Date: 16 Dec 2010 11:59 PM Title: Remember....Remember
God I hate Mike. And I love Alice for being so persistant in trying to get Bella to see the truth - that she is not with Mike, but with Edward. Hopefully, Bella will start to ask other people about what is or is not going on with Mike now and they will set her straight. That boy needs to hit the bricks.
And I'm really hoping this memory loss thing is temporary. Poor Edward has been through the ringer with this and he deserves a breakthru.
Author's Response:
I know my poor Edward....Dont worry..next chapter should have ur heartstrings pulled just a weeeeeeeeee bit
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:10 PM Title: Remember....Remember
I'm glad for this chapter. :-)
Author's Response:
xoxoxoxo yeah the story gets better now...I hope :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:07 PM Title: Remember....Remember
So happy Edward and Bella are talking again!
Author's Response:
Ohhhh u willl LOVE the next one then....xoxoxo
Date: 16 Dec 2010 9:04 AM Title: Remember....Remember
beautiful! But sad that king dipshit has a hold over Bella again. Just when she thought she was free of him!!!
I just found your story, and I have to say I love it!
Author's Response:
and I have to say I love you for finding it and loving it...xoxoxo hope u enjoy the rest
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:02 AM Title: Remember....Remember
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XOXO you blow me away my pet and that trailer was so hot thanks love .I just hope Evil Mike will stay away from her but I know that it isn't going to happen you evil vixen .Much Love MH
Author's Response:
LOVE YA BABY.....thanks for reviewing and leaving me some love....the next chapter OMG....LOVE IT...so does Bella Ami
Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:59 AM Title: Remember....Remember
so glad Alicw was able to put mike inhis palce, and shw Bella teh truth. now we just need Bella to remmeber
Author's Response:
hmmm Bella better remember.....thank you for the review xoxoox
Author's Response:
hmmm Bella better remember.....thank you for the review xoxoox
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 4:19 AM Title: Remember....Remember
Absolutely perfect! Mike is such an ass! Only the lowest of the low would take advantage of someones amnesia for their own gain!
I hope Bella does regain her memory but I have a feeling she may have to hit her head again to get it back. Hope it doesn't come to that; maybe something will trigger it....just don't know what!
Great chapter....looking forward to the next one!!
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much for reviewing...xoxoxo. And yes, I know i have to get rid of Mike....but let me tell you..I think you might like the next chapter a bit more. :)
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:45 PM Title: Remember Me
It is good to see Edward and Charlie on the same side, and I hate that Mike is taking advantage of Bella's state of mind like that, he deserved to get an ass-kicking...I hope her memory comes back soon, don't keep us in suspense!!!
Author's Response:
xoxox thanks for reviewing...I hope to have the chap up this week...I got a lil behind cuz of RL but just a few tweeks and i should have it up....
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:13 PM Title: Remember Me
Loved how Victoria is a florist in this story.... hehehe :)
Also the way Edward spent the time finding the right flowers & spending a fortune on them...
Only to then drop them - crashing them to the floor...
Bella only remembers Mike - OH YUK!!!! NO WAY!!!!
I do hope she remembers REAL soon... I do agree with Edward...
What has he done to deserve this?
Can't wait for more... can't believe I have caught up...
Want more chapters NOW (please....)
T2M x
Author's Response:
YAY your allll caught up.....xoxoxoxo RL has taken over....stupid holiday season...Im just tweeking my next chapter....so it should be up this week
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:08 PM Title: OUTTAKE- APOV
Always wanted to know how JAz & ALi got together :)
That was a fantastic chapter - loved it!!!
Thank you
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:07 PM Title: Meant to be together
WTF - MIKE?????
NO WAY!!!!!
She can't remember??? Oh no...
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:06 PM Title: December
Glad Alice & Edward have spent some time together :)
Now just to make sure Bella is ok...?!?
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 1:05 PM Title: November
So happy Charlie let Edward in to see Bella :)
About time he realised what was going on...
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 12:52 PM Title: Bella was here
Poor Bella - Poor Edward :(
I do so hope all works out...
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 2:17 PM Title: Happy Fucking Birthday
WTF - NO WAY....
I am suppose to go to bed right now (after midnight here in Australia)
Thanks for this cliffie..... have to continue reading :)
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 1:28 PM Title: Saturday Night
NO NO NO ...
Jasper & Alice are meant to be together :(
I do hope it all works out for them...
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 12:54 PM Title: Ms. Cupid
Fantastic chapter - loved Bella meeting the Cullens...
Now - for Jasper & Alice :)
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 3:41 AM Title: Tender Kiss
I hope Renee was true in what she said about Edward!!
Can't wait to read about meeting the Cullens...
Next chapter for me...
T2M x
Author's Response:
<3 u and each of ur reviews
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 1:11 AM Title: My future
I do hope Edward doesn't get caught in Bella's bedroom?!!?
T2M x
Author's Response:
He might get spanked if he does....LOL...hope u enjoy the rest xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:35 PM Title: Dream
What a dream.... freaky!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:18 PM Title: Pictures
WOW - Renee certainly did things I would never of thought of....
Now I understand where she is coming from & why she wont leave!
All makes sense from Renee's POV.
Thank you for this background to Renee...
What will Bella do?
DO NOT LEAVE EDWARD!!!!! Especially to go back to Mike - YUK!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:35 AM Title: Good Morning
Another AWESOME chapter...
Oh how yummy... Edward for breakfast :)
What more could a girl want????
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 9:33 AM Title: Angel Eyes
AWESOME!!!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:00 PM Title: Welcome to Seattle
Oh please let is consist of those wonderful citrusy lemons you write so well :)
LOL
Sorry - have to get to the next chapter!!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:47 PM Title: The night part 2
Awww - they spent their first night together PARKED IN HIS CAR!!!!
What would Dearest old Daddy say to this?!?!?
Great chapter - can wait to hear what Alice & Emmett will say when they find out :)
Fireworks ahead?
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:30 PM Title: Then dont
Jumping for joy here!!! WOOHOO :)
They're finally together... get her some lovin' there Edward!!!
T2M x
Author's Response:
I love ur dedication and enthusiasm....xoxox thank you for each review you leave....I do appreciate each one....This story has a bit more chap so it will keep you busy hahah....smw should be updated by tommorow i hope....<3
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:10 PM Title: The Night
Yep - didn't like Rose too much!
Hopefully she'll get better... well, nicer :)
Late night texting - always good fun (if your sober - don't do drunk text/calls)
Not a good look... haha
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:08 PM Title: For now
Slowly all fitting together!!!
Hmm - what is Edward to do?
Can't wait for more - hehehe... I have more chapters to go :)
Came here from your other story - Swing my Way...
So good - can't wait for those updates too!!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:05 PM Title: My name is Bella
Oh - Alice & Brad.. getting it on & she's 25!!! WOW :)
This is going to be interesting... Daddy darling thinks she's the good one!
HA yeah right!!!!
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:03 PM Title: No regrets
Great start...
Onto more :)
T2M x
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 12:27 AM Title: Meant to be together
No!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
sorrry.... :( please like me still : ) xoxox DLIR
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:57 PM Title: Remember Me
love the angry edward, heck i love all of edward. Could nto imagine any edward that isn't damn sexy !!!!!
Author's Response:
heheh I know....and how do u expect Bella to really not remember him,,, well I mean she might not but doesnt mean she can resist his charm the second time around...LOL <3 thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2010 10:24 PM Title: Remember Me
omg i really hope she remembers edward poor bella.n i love angry edward.update soon.
Author's Response:
Angry edward is sooo sexy...I enjoyed writing that...i hope u enjoyed APOV as well...a few readers missed the double update ...Thanks for reading and reviewing it means alot DLIR
Date: 25 Nov 2010 9:20 PM Title: Remember Me
well i hope she remembers! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
She will LOl....hope u enjoyed APOV as well...some readers didnt notice the double update....DLIR
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:43 AM Title: Meant to be together
I don't hate you or your chapter, I thought it was ironic she had already been in a bad crash previously, so I shouldn't be surprised at the outcome of the coma. That being said, I hope it isn't too drawn out, and she remembers her Edward soon enough.
Author's Response:
Thanks for not hating.....This actually happened to someone I know....so i took the idea and wrote it....the first accident wasnt as bad as the second.....but trust me...she may not remember edward....but doesnt mean she can fall for him all over again...mauahahahhah oxox thanks for the support....i should be posting APOV soon ....DLIR
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:11 PM Title: Meant to be together
crazyness! Looking forward to your next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for not hating....heheh.....EPOV is almost done soooo off to the beta it will go...xoxo DLIR
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:40 AM Title: Meant to be together
W T F !!!!!!!!! I just puked on my keyboard. Are you F........ kidding me. Please tell me this goes away next chapter. I'll give you one more chapter to make this right.
Author's Response:
omg....Im soooo sorry....xoxo but trust me...all in good time. (dont worry she wont be able to resist his charms for too long.....wink shhhhhhh) I hope you stick with me....xo DLIR
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: The Night
she is a way better sister than I would be
Author's Response:
yah,,,,,me too....Id probably do him right there in the car,,LOL....enjoy the rest and thank you soooooooooooooooooooo much for reviewing every chapter...xo DLIR
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:31 AM Title: For now
brad, edward, ummmm- alice is not going to like this neither is mike
Author's Response:
Nope she wont....hahah brad was actually a name one of my guys friends actually used.. SO that part of the story is real ....LOSERS i tell ya.. xo DLIR
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:21 AM Title: Meant to be together
YUCK MIKE
Author's Response:
*snort* I know....haahaha but we all have those ex's where we think WHY?? hahha.......ohhh le sigh an angsty Edward is soooo sexy..............xo DLIR
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:11 AM Title: No regrets
daddy has some strict rules for bella
Author's Response:
yup, you learn why.......xoxoxo DLIR
Date: 20 Nov 2010 2:04 AM Title: No regrets
Sounds interesting. Good start :)
Author's Response:
why thank you.....xoxo hope u enjoy the rest
Date: 19 Nov 2010 10:38 PM Title: December
ouch, my heart hurts with their pain. You made me feel it, and live it. Hope you can update soon !!!!!!! So she can wake up !!!
Author's Response:
Welll thank you soo much for reviewing...Im happy you felt the pain. I hoped I wrote it well enough to convey it....I actually am hoping to post tonight...So BElla WILL wake up...xoxo DLIR
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:15 PM Title: December
OMG!!!! i do not like cliffy but so ready for Bella to wake up and cannot wait for the next update!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review....i hate cliffy's to...but they are soo fun to write...HEHE......my chap is with my beta...sooo anyday now oxoxo DLIR..I hope u like what i have planned
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:31 AM Title: December
Just got caugt up on this story. I knew the inevitable breakup would likely occur given the secret relationship, but I was not expecting the 3 month coma...nice alternative to new moon but I am happy she is waking up so their story can progress. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much...I was excited to write that part of the story,,,but this part coming up....EEK....Im scared. Ohhh Bella..Bella bellla.... xoxo xheheehe DLIR
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:19 AM Title: December
Yay she is waking up!
Author's Response:
Yes she is.....but dont be THAT excited :( (dont hate) xooxox DLIR
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:35 PM Title: November
Wow I love your story, hope Bella comes out of her coma soon. Glad that Charlie finally came around and let Edward see Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing....I will posting December right away.....and yes...she will come out of her coma soon...not december though hehe<3 DLIR
Date: 14 Nov 2010 8:01 PM Title: My future
I love that song. I'm sorry for her loss, Every chapter is better than one before, like opening up a package and every layer is bettter than before.
Author's Response:
That is one of the nicest reviews I have had. I write for fun. And to have people enjoy it, makes me smile. Thank you so much...DLIR
Date: 14 Nov 2010 7:39 PM Title: For now
Well...shit! Didn't see that coming! Edward's got himself in a whole lot of a mess! Can't wait to see him get out of it.
Author's Response:
ohhhh these two have A LOT ahead of them....thanks for reviewing..I love reading each of them...
Date: 14 Nov 2010 7:21 PM Title: My name is Bella
Um...yeah..not quite sure what's going on...But I'm sure you do. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
Author's Response:
LOL...yeah I know where Im going...I hope. xoxo thanks again DLIR
Date: 14 Nov 2010 7:07 PM Title: No regrets
Sounds good so far...I was curious as to why there were not many reviews and decided to check it out. I like that you write and post rather quickly. On to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Well...thank you for taking the time to read it....I hope you enjoy it. xox
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 6:15 PM Title: November
SO SO SO happy Edward is with her now!
Author's Response:
<3......enjoy it .........: )
Date: 14 Nov 2010 5:57 PM Title: My future
just found it and really like it so far although i haven't been able to read all of the chapters so far. really loved that edward is willing to provide her with everything she needs to follow her dream. =)
Author's Response:
Take your time and thank you soo much for reading and reviewing
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 3:17 PM Title: Bella was here
I love that Edward records messages for Bella, I love that Alice and Edward are becoming close. . . I love everything about this story!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
and I love u for loving it....xoxoxo... i just hope I can keep u loving it...DLIR
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 2:26 PM Title: Bella was here
This was gut wrenching... i nearly cried reading this... poor Edward... I knew when he walked to the door.. he was gonna wanna buy the house for her.... I love him for hanging in there ever though Charlie is a ginormous ¨Dickhead¨ he´s only going to loose Bella in the end... especially when she finds out Edward broke up with her because he threatened him...love it babe... you´ve got me on pins and needles..
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Gah....welll ur theory is GREAT but im not quite sure its gonna go that way....Hope you like what i have in store xoxoo DLIR
Date: 14 Nov 2010 2:04 PM Title: Bella was here
Cant wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks you soo much for reviewing......DLIR hope u enjoy the rest
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 2:21 AM Title: Happy Fucking Birthday
Ummmm.....WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! okay we started out good... Alice forgave Bella and hooked up with Jazz... all was right with the world.... until ya left me with this cliffie... hmmmmm... all I´m gonna say is... I´ve trusted you this long... I´m gonna keep trusting.... good chapter!!! I´m off to grab a shot of stoli!!! lol...
Krazi
xoxoxo
Author's Response:
GAH.....I hope u stick with me......*hides in fear*
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:42 AM Title: Pictures
I love your writing, This is oh so hot... Poor Renae to be in a loveless marriage, to have a husband who always critcises. I feel so bad for alice for im sure you have some wonderful piece of man lined up for her. and omg Rosalie, love and love her, Emmett still waiting on his girl.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much..and i love this review.....
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:33 AM Title: Saturday Night
Wooooooooow!!!!! the vault sex was Da Bomb!!!!!! Awesome BB.. but I officially wanna kick Angela´s Assssssss... she´s such a hater!!! stupid slut didn´t even notice when Alice dissed her.... poor Jasper... Bella poor thing... I really hope she doesn´t give up on Edward because Alice is being stupid....great chapter!!!!
Krazi
xoxoxo
Author's Response:
yah DA BOMB......love that u enjoyed it that much xoxoxo
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:30 AM Title: Ms. Cupid
Cullen Family time was perfect... at first I thought Carlilse was gonna be trouble, but everything went perfect... I super excited that Esme was so sweet... Jasper is sweet as usual...let´s just hope he can handle Alice and she doesn´t bust a gasket... great chapter!!!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Loved the Cullen house too.....
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:28 AM Title: Tender Kiss
phew... I was nervous to meet Renee, but she was pretty darn sweet.... I love the necklace....great chapter.... I just love these two..
Kraxi
xoxo
Author's Response:
I really love these two together as well.....:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Happy Fucking Birthday
wow what a breathtaking chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you soo much...I will be updating soon.....
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:57 PM Title: My future
Awww...... that was wonderful.... I´m so glad she´s has a chance to get out... gee... her family is suffocating her... she´s an adult for God´s sake... the end was super sweet!! great chapter!!!!
krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
thanks xoxooxoxo
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:02 PM Title: Dream
UMMMM...YEAH...OOOOOOKAAY...
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
hahahaahah
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:48 PM Title: Pictures
OKAY AFTER THIS I KINDA UNDERSTAND WHY CHARLIE´S A JERK.. I SAID KINDA.... POOR RENEE... SHE SEEMS LIKE SHE FEELS OBLIGATED TO ME... PHIL WAS A DOUCHEBAG... GLAD THAT RENEE IS IN HER CORNER NOW!!!GREAT CHAPTER... CAN´T WAIT TO MEET THE CULLENS
KRAZI
XOXOXO
Author's Response:
Im so glad ur enjoying this story...xoxo DLIR
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:41 PM Title: Good Morning
LOVED IT... GLAD THEY FINALLY GOT SOME ALONE TIME AND ROSE HAS GOT HER BACK... I´M NOT SURE I LIKE THIS ALICE THOUGH...GREAT CHAPTER!!!
KRAZI
XOXO
Author's Response:
Hehe ohh poor Alice...I had to make her different from the nice bubbly pixie...DLIR
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:37 PM Title: My name is Bella
Wow I did not see that coming. . . Edward being Brad.
Author's Response:
Yup he is...LOl ..DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:54 PM Title: The night part 2
What was the song? Great story, btw
Author's Response:
the song is U2..with or without you...: ) DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 11:04 AM Title: The Night
These secrets that Bella is keeping will come back to bite her in the butt!
Author's Response:
Her lies.....yes they will.. xoxo DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:58 AM Title: For now
What a mess this is for 2 sisters to want the same man!
Author's Response:
Hahaha...I know...but hopefully it wont be for long....DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:53 AM Title: My name is Bella
Brad is Edward? Oh no!!!!
Author's Response:
Its funny...this part of the story is true. Me and my sister met these guys and this is what happened. We both didnt like him...but i used the BRAD name. Were all still friends now.. but what losers. xoxoxo DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 10:48 AM Title: No regrets
Interesting story with Alice as Bella's sister!
Author's Response:
Thanks....hope u enjoy the rest of it...xoxo DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:06 AM Title: For now
poor sad bella, alice and edward
Author's Response:
I know.....hope u enjoy the rest DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:03 AM Title: My name is Bella
NOOOOOOO
Author's Response:
Yessssssssssssssss...I know.... : ( keep reading :) xoxoox DLIR
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:00 AM Title: No regrets
i'm on this like warm butter on buns
Author's Response:
He HE get coozy....xoxox DLIR
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:35 AM Title: The night part 2
Awww.... that was a really sweet night they spent together... Can´t wait til Charlie finds out... and when we meet the rest of the Cullen .clan..great chapter!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing each chapter...I love each review. Its keeps me wanting to write...xo
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:01 AM Title: Then dont
phew...is right... I was getting nervous... glad he threw Tania out with yesterdays trash where she belonged.. no suprise there...lol...great chapter BB!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Pshhh on Tania...lol.....
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:14 AM Title: The Night
haha... you got that right... Poor Bella is enduring hell cause everyone wants her man... can somebody please FedEx Jasper Whitlock to Forks Wa.... I´m just saying...lol...great chapter.. I´m enjoying this.. when I should be sleeping...lol..
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
I love that......paging Jasper ....lol....xoxox DLIR
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 3:36 AM Title: For now
haha... can Jasper show up and make this allll better... I don´t wanna hurt Alice either.. but I am so Team Bellward... lol... great chapter!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
me too me too...BELLWARD...keep reading chicky....hehe
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 3:14 AM Title: My name is Bella
whoa...didn´t see that one coming... now what are we gonna do.... Somebody´s gonna be upset... but who.... great chapter..
krazi
xoxox
Author's Response:
heheh thanks ...DLIR
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 2:45 AM Title: No regrets
I love the start so far... glad we broke up with Mike early on...lol.... can´t wait to see where this goes...great chapter!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
thank you sooo much.....enjoy the rest...xoxoxo DLIR
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 2:16 AM Title: Then dont
I loved EPOV thank you !!! More PLEASE!
Author's Response:
thanks soooo much......Im gonna post on here again...and catch up...but the rest of my chapters are on FF......if u want to read it there...if not i will hurry to post on here xoxoxo DLIR
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 1:36 AM Title: The Night
Wow! Bella needs new friends.... What a great chapter I totally felt Bella's pain nothing like having the hots for the same man your sister does and then have to watch....
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing....yes it is hard. and this part of the story actually happened to my sister and her friend xoxoxo DLIR
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 12:58 AM Title: For now
Okay you have my attention... Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response:
Well I hope I keep your attention for a bit longer :) xoxo DLIR
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 10:56 PM Title: For now
Ok he is still a dog even if he never thoght he was going to see her again he should have just stayed away from alice. but he was honest with bella so i guess i have to cut him a break .... for now . i loved it can't wait to read more and see if he goes after bella and i hope he breaks it off with alice she needs her jasper lol great story i am hooked
Author's Response:
Thanks babe....I plan to post three more...later...I have the story on FF...I think I have 19 chap so far. I just need to post them here. Ari told me about it.. so im new to this place but I like it already
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 10:50 PM Title: My name is Bella
Ok i so didn't expect that wow .I loved it but boo edward for being a player .but i hope he has a twin lol
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 9:59 PM Title: No regrets
I loved it .I know Bella's decision to break up with Mike was hard for her but it was the right one if you don't feel it anymore you can't talk yourself into staying so many ppl settle for second best.I really felt like i was with bella feeling her anguish and pain over letting him go . I love the way you write i fb you the other day under my name michelle i hope to see you on there bye
Author's Response:
awwww hi michelle...and yes I remember. Thank you so much for reading this story too. I hope you enjoy the rest :) and yes see u on FB