Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
Everyone is hurting poor Emmett thinks she is going to leave them for the other family. They all need to go into counseling. Dont mess with Bella loved it Mike on his knees lol.
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
I figured it out. You know, it would have taken me longer if you hadn't made the hints so big. I can slowly see this story being a favorite.
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Thanks:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
Go Bella. Put Mikey where he belongs. Always was a creep.
Poor eddie
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
i don't think bella is being a bitch at all. i think she is completely justified in what she's doing and saying..
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
great chapter
Date: 21 Nov 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love this tragic little story. I cannot wait to find out if Bella decides to connect with the Swans and if she does what will that mean to her family now?
Thanks for sharing this beautiful tale with us.
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Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
There's so much info in this chapter I don't even know where to begin. I just think that people should just back off and let her deal with the new info she just received. She's got so much coming at her right now of course she's going to break after a while, hell anyone would
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh My God... I just want to curl around those kids and protect them from everything!
Especially from the BBS Swans!
Love it BB!!!
See ya next time!! :)
*hugs*
*runs off to vote*
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 11
great chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
well i hope that in the end that she starts to get over this hostility ! keep the chatpers comming and i hope she kicks angelas ass !!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
keep writing more!
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Thank you:)
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
So confused I feel sorry for everyone involved. Bella needs to pay attention to what others around her are saying no one asked for this to happen.
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True but right now, she is too angry to see anything and they need to giver her time. Thank you:)
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
mr banner is an arsehole.
Author's Response:
Yes, he is:)
Date: 20 Nov 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'M tired just reading about it. I would want to pull a Rip Van Winkle and fall asleep for a few decades until it all blew over. Exhausting. But I loved Bella telling Angela off. Angela has such a chip on her shoulder, though I am thinking she probably spoke the exact opposite of what she actually was feeling deep down. That just seems like her at this point!
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Thank you:)
Date: 20 Nov 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am sure Renee and Charlie would hit re-do on how they handled this if they had foresight into what would happen. They acted rashly and now they will have that resentment to overcome as well as 14 yrs of bitterness. Regret weighs you down like a boulder, they just keep heaping more on themselves and I feel terribly sorry for them. At the same time, the Cullens have NOTHING to be treated this way so it is worse because they had no control over this situation. I wonder if the school would let them hold an assembly to clear it up! IT's better than letting these people speculate and ruin reputations needlessly.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
I think that since the teachers know what's going on they should have looked out for all kids involved better then what they seem to be doing. They are in school to learn not talk shit about stuff they know nothing about. Problem is most the times it's that adults talking more shit then the kids. Kate was wrong for what she said. No, she didn't say it to hurt Bella but there's a time and place. Her jumping right in when things are still fresh trying to plead her man's case was just tacky as hell.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
BB, I am glad Peter is here too. WW3 could have started because of my mouth if he wasnt here to tell me to tone it down. *snickers*
Peter cackles in the background
ANYWHOOO~ Ok, so B had to go back to school. Hmfph, school is overrated.
"Says the college graduate who promotes education after high school on a daily basis." Snorts Peter as he comes into the room.
"Zip it Sparkles!" I snap at him as he settles in the chair beside me.
Peter chuckles "Yes, I do, but you love the parts that sparkle, don't ya, sweet cheeks?"
I sigh dreamily "Aah, yes, I do love that disco stick Sweet Pete." I turn away trying to hide my laugh.
It doesn't work.
Peter lifts me up quicker than I can blink and runs us out past the trees behind our home. You can hear Charlotte's cackle all the way.
"No Peter, don't!" I scream out as I am flying through the air. My sound is only cut off as I submerge underwater in the lake located in our back field.
I can still hear Peter's belly laugh as I pout under water.
~E~
Anyhow, Peter and I are making a trip, you know, in AWK. Mike will be a missing persons case within days. *smirk*
We have quite a few hungry nomads, surprisingly enough. I guess there is some kind of "vamp" hype sweeping across the nation and they have to hide alot more these days. *quirks eyebrow*
Anywhooo, as for this chapter here. Same shit, different chapter. Charlie and Renee Swan blow boar balls.
Frequently.
'nuff said.
See ya next update BB!!!
*hugs*
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lol, thanks:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
This is hard for all Kate was right and Bella was right. Poor Jasper and Emmett if they let it they will be fighting all the time
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great Chapter....
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't think she's being a bitch at all. I think Kate is out of line. I think she handled Kate stuff reasonable calmly if you ask me.
Poor Jazz.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
People are so stupid. Bella probably had a happy childhood than Garrett and Angela. Carlisle and Esme are amazing parents. Charlie and Renee are not.
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Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't think Bella is being a bitch at all. I think she's handling it like any other teenage girl would handle something like this. Loving your story!
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
well in the long run i hope that she can have a relationship with her birth parents! keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
They are hurting but they need to give Bella time to wrap her head around the fact that they did not dump her.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great Chapter....
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Thanks:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
Renee is an idiot. I agree with Tanya and Seth. The way they went about it was just stupid.
Yea Eddie.
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Thanks:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
I know that the Swans are hurting too but when you have a child you put that child first. You put your wants and needs after your child's. I don't feel that the Swans did that. Yes it's as sad story and yes I know they love her but did they ever stop to think about her? The child they claim to love so much. What their actions would do to her life? And what if they were wrong in their accusations? They would have ruined a family's good name not to mention all the emotional shit they caused by the carelessness. So hurt or not, love or not. You think about what that child needs and not just about what you want. That's the difference between the adults and children. They're supposed to think about the long term affects and the consequences.
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Very well said!!
Date: 19 Nov 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
It seems that Bella is acting out of fear right now. Everything as she knows it has changed and she is afraid the family she has known for 14 yrs will disappear just like the Swans did when she was 3. I am really hoping some compassion will be found in her heart soon for the Swans. Angela seems to need as much help as Bella with the whole situation. She's self-destructive to begin with, this could send her over the edge.
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She is acting out of fear.You are right there:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 9
well i hope in the long run that she lets them in a little! keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
i have to say they are all in a tuff situation. i see where charlie and renee think he we had her she was taken it was our fault we want her back. but they took the word that she was dead. they where never given proof nor did the police have any. they just assumed and all stopped looking. the police didn't look any further really no justice was done. the guy who took her car doesn't seem as if they ever found him and made him paying for injuring renee and taking bella. i see where they are coming from they are assuming the police did there job but then again me being the parent of 3 hell yeah you better show me proof my child is dead or i will continue to look for her. so yeah they do need to take so blame for giving up the search for their daughter. bella has a right to be hurt. they looked for her parents for 2 years. they put the effort in finding bella's parents. i think renee and charlie have a tuff road ahead of them. it will be up to bella if she wants a relationship. love it
Author's Response:
Who said Charlie and Renee stopped looking for her? Did the police let them down? Yes, but that doesn't mean they stopped looking. Yes, they do have a tough road ahead:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
*gives you a stern look while pointing at face*
Do I look, *makes circle around face with pointing finger* like I give a flying DONKEY SHIT patty if Charlie and Renee are hurting?!?!
Peter pats me on the arm.
"Calm down now sweet cheeks, its not BB's fault the Swans dont know how to act."
I scoff at his words.
"Peter, I know its not BB's fault, she just writes it, she doesnt really know where the story is going. I am not blaming her for the idiotic Swan parents." I sigh, "I'm sorry to come off rude BB, they grate me the wrong way."
Peter takes my hand to lead me out the door. "Come on darlin', we have plans this evening."
All hostility instantly dissapates from my person at his touch.
Ok BB, I am really anxious to see how this plays out, I am afraid Bells is gonna be hurt and noone but E is gonna see it until its too late.
Poor Girl.
See ya next update BB!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
OMG, I am laughing my ass off right now. Thank God Peter calmed you done, sugar!
Date: 19 Nov 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
nice chapter...
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love it!! :)
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Thank you:) Next chapter should be up momentarily.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
i really like this story so far...keep going!!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 8
I agree. Bella does not have to have anything to do with them if she doesn't want to she is almost a legal adult. The can't expect her to leave the only family she knows for them. They are being selfish. At most they can be friends or maybe like an aunt or uncle with time. They are strangers to her. If they push it. They could loose her forever when she turns 18.
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Very true
Date: 18 Nov 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 8
Glad Edward was there for her. The judge might force visitation but that doesnt mean she has to talk or listen to them. I know at 17 I'd be a real bitch about it.
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Thank you:) I would, too!
Date: 18 Nov 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
so much is going down. i was hoping edward to explain he obivously knows what happened but he didn't. i can not wait to find out how bella got separated from her family and why the cops think she is dead. so they where i phoenix and somehow ended up in LA. now they are all in Forks where the rain doesn't stop and the sun don't shine. both families are hurting. they both want bella. they both feel they have a right to her. thank god she is almost 18 and can make her mind up for herself. man i can't wait to see what happens next.
love it
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
wow heartbraking. your pissed cause your hauled out of your house any noone will tell you why. then you wait in a police station and are fuming mad. then you find out they may have found your parents after 14 years. man you have been happy and now they are coming to tear apart your happy family. that sucks to high heaven. to have your life ripped apart in a matter of seconds or minutes is just, ughhhhhh. well edward you need to be there for bella. love it
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Date: 18 Nov 2010 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great Chapter....
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Thnk you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
*marks calender for voting date*
This chapter... my GAWD, if Renee fucking Swan could see what her flighty, overbearing actions have done not only to the family, but especially to those children, maybe she could at least come out with a public apology. She has lived in this small town long enough to understand small town politics and logistics.. Admit you made a fucking mistake already. *Grrrr*
Anywhoo BB, I will see you next update :)
*hugs*
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Thanks, sugar:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter and great story.
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
well i would love to know their side of the story ! cant wait till next chatper
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Rose sounds a little insensitive, I mean they just had a lot of shit happen and she thinks she's owed the explanation? Nice, Edward handled things good I think by not trying to defend Garrett and his family even though that's his friend. I'm still wondering why they haven't called a lawyer yet? I mean yes Tanya works for social services or whatever but she isn't a lawyer. I think they are going to need more then Tanya right about now. Also she handled the case but she doesn't work in the state of Washington, so how much can she really do? Unless she moved there too and it wasn't mentioned yet. Anyhow I'm wondering how school's going to go come Monday morning. Did the Swan's ever stop to think how what they're doing is affecting Bella? They had to know this was going to be hard on her. Charlie had to know he's her teacher. He could see everyday how much of a happy child she was.
Author's Response:
Like I said, things are getting messy.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
They should Google the Swans to get their story on Isabella Swan. SOMEONE should be curious as to the other side of the story!
Author's Response:
They will find out more in the next chapter.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
love, love, LOVE it..
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
i love this story... great job
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
well i hope that they figure out waht happneed to her ! cant wait till the next chapter
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Thank you:)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow. My head is reeling with that mind fuckery right there.
I REALLY want to punch Renee Swan right in the fucking mouth.
They had the Cullens, essentially including their missing daughter, treated like common criminals.
WTF?!?!
Yeah, thats really the way to win a girl's heart. *grumbles* Asshats
Loved the update BB! Oh! Peter said to tell you that yes, you heard right. He does bight. But its the kind of bite that leaves you beggin' for more.
*waggles eyebrows* I know I do!
Charlotte does too. *grins like a cheshire cat*
See ya next update BB!!!
*hugs*
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I knew I loved Peter for a reason:)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
I hope they don't make her go back to Renee and Charlie
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Poor Bella. It sucks to have your world turned upside down like that.
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow you made me cry with that shit lol. Anyway, that was some messed up shit how things were handled. They did have to treat that family lie criminals. Hell they ever treated Bella like a damn criminal and she's the one that was supposedly kidnapped or whatever. That's some B/S. I hope the swans know that this gets them no brownie points with their daughter. Also just because I have some photos and some off the wall story doesn't prove shit. The cops shouldn't have treated one family like shit cuz they've know the other one longer. That messed up, the whole situation yes but most importantly how the shit was handled. They shouldn't have been able to talk to the kids without the parents there and if they were Tanya should have been called first. Also because of the matter at hand they should have been given some info beforehand so that a lawyer could be called if wanted. Cant wait to see what happens next also I really like how often you update. Please keep it up
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
I have tears in my eyes because their lives just changed permanently without any input from them.
Author's Response:
Yep, regardless of what the tests say the moment they were treated like that, they were changed:(
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 7
Renee is an idiot. Treating the kids like criminals is pathetic. Surprised that T got there so quick.
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Thanks:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
That is just all kinds of fucked up. I am a foster parent and have adopted 4 boy and we are about to adopt our little girl it is scarrie because shit like that can happen. I feel so sorry for the Swans but they must understand that the Cullens have been her parents since she was three they should not expect her to just move in and take away the only parents she has any memorie of. They will do good by all if they just try to have a relationship with all of them.
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is going to be hard on all members of both families. The Swans were robbed of 14 years with their daughter, but the Cullens are not at fault yet their family will be torn apart too. And don't think we hav forgotten those words Esme told Bella that first night! She'd hold her until they found her Mom and Dad. Seventeen is hard enough trying to figure out who you are without the added difficulty of belonging to 2 families but not knowing one of them at all.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Yes, it's hard enough being a teenager and it's going to be....difficult for everyone.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
well i am thinking bella could be the dead isabella. but why do they think she is dead. was she kidnapped when she was little
i can't wait to read on and see if she ahs a family still out there. will she get her answers. what will it do to the family she has had for 14 years. loving it
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
ahhh how heartbreaking
at least the boys are there and are a little buffer. kind of helps isabella fit in
can't wait to find out what happened to her parents
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Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
What a shock why do they think Bella was dead??? They think that the Cullens took her??? I cant wait to find out what is going on.
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Thanks:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
so they think that they took her! cant wait to see what happen next
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Thank you:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yeah shit is about to hit the fan because no matter what the situation I don't think Carlisle and Esme are going to just hand their child over. Also I'm pretty sure that child doesn't want to be handed over. She loves her family, I'm sure at some point she might want to get to know her biological family but she'll want to stay where she's at and she should. That's all she's known and at 17 why uproot her now?
Author's Response:
Exactly:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
*steam rolls out of ears*
Angela is gonna get an ASS whoopin' here in about two shakes...
ITS NOT BELLA'S FAULT!!! Little shit needs to learn some manners.
I never really disliked Angela... till now *growls*
See ya next chappie BB!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow Renee, let's overreact a bit.... torturing her???? puhlease.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is but she's scared.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
I really hope she doesnt have to leave the Cullens. That wouldn't be right. I understand getting to know your real family and whatever, but she's seventeen and would essentially be moving in to a house of strangers.
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Thank you:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
that was a really good chapter!! hope you can update soon!!! are you planning on writing a pov from garrett when he sees the picture and what happens when he runs off with it? i would love to read that!
Author's Response:
Thanks:) Update should be sometime in the next couple of hours and yes, GPOV will be when he sees the picture and after.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 5
He had to of recognized that Bella was his sister or looked just like her. I was expecting the Swan's to be there when Bella got home this is going to freak her out.
Author's Response:
Thanks:) Yes, it is going to freak her out.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
hmmm Gonna be Garrett and Angela's long lost sis I bet. Hmmm Was she stolen from the hospital maybe and the theif parents dumped her? She looks like Angela did way back when maybe?
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Thank you:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think this is story is interesting and i like the idea of it.
I have a comment for you though.
I think you need to reconsider Edward's alleriges. If he is really allergic to corn he most certainly would not be eating popcorn. Popcorn is made from dried corn that has been heated until it 'pops'.
Keep up the writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
great story and i hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
*tries to pry eyelids open*
jeesh, I am exhausted! *shakes head*
I loved this chapter. What is up with Garrett though? Hmmm....
I have a feeling Emmett and Jasper are going to cause a problem in the future.
See ya next chapter :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
I heard this rumor on the street that when you are tired, you should go to bed... I think it's crazy talk but I thought I would share it with you :) Love you, Honey!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
so it seams that garrett noticed from the picture! cant wait to see how this unfolds!
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THank you:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
More please! :)
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 4
*thinks*
Maybe someone kidnapped her, then thought about it, and then dropped her off so they didnt have to be seen? Just a thought ;)
Anyhow, loved the update. Whats up with Angela??
See ya next update BB!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Interesting theory:) I guess we'll have to see, huh?
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
love the story!! i have a theory on how Bella came to be outside the hospital: She was kidnapped by a couple that couldn't have kids, raised as their own (explaining why she didn't have any records) then when she was three she simply got lost and ended up outside a hospital.
~cora-c-1901 =))
Author's Response:
Oh, I like that theory:) Thank you:)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward and Bella got it bad. I think Bella was taken and the people who took her could not handle her or decieded it was the wrong thing.
Author's Response:
Aren't they cute, though? Interesting theory:)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
well im liking this budding relationship type thing that bella and edward are doing
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm me things renee was prego and ran and hid it from charlie
Author's Response:
Interesting theory...THanks!
Date: 14 Nov 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Esme has her work cut out for her.
Author's Response:
Yes, she does.
Date: 13 Nov 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
wow....cant wait to read more :D
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think I have a new favorite story! I can't wait until the next chapeter(s) are up! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
Carlisle is just too funny.
Author's Response:
I love Carlisle!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
So tell Bella is a Swan???? Edward is every girls dream
Author's Response:
I don't know, is she???? Yes, he is!
Date: 13 Nov 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love this one :)
Annoying older brothers... poor Bells. lol
But at least she has a family.
See ya next update BB!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you, hon:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
i love their siblingness they have with eachother keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmmm no eddie yet huh
Author's Response:
Next chapter, I promise:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
awww poor thing. At least they had the decency to leave her at a hospital.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
this is good update soon please i want to know if she ever finds out who her parents are.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
funny Garret and Angela Swan ok were is Edward????
Author's Response:
Edward is coming:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am a foster parent and we have adopted 4 boys and are working on our little girl the adoption is almost complete. I know how broken these little ones are when they come into care it is heart breaking. I am looking forward to reading more
Author's Response:
Thank you:) And can I just say that I admire you for doing that. So many kids out there need good homes:)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lisa:
It is a great writer that can give the reader a
kaleidoscopic range of emotions, and you did this in
the first chapter in less than 1700 words.
Looking forward to the rest of your story,
Michelle L.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Michelle:)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
aww seems like a cute, though a bit sad story
u should keep it
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Date: 11 Nov 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
how sad and sweet at the same time
Author's Response:
Thanks:)