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Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 10

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 8

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 6

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 4

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: Lady Ali Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 55

AMAZING!!! I love it.  Great ending to an fantastic but angsty story.  I loved reading this one.  Great job!!!!

Reviewer: yogis-girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 55

Thanks for a great story. It was a long hsrd journey for Bella to find peace and acceptance. I was glad that I came along for the ride.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2012 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 55

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 55

I am glad that they learned how to be a family.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 54

I am so happy that Bella finally figured it out.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 55

Amazing story. :)

Reviewer: ghartling Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 55

Amazing story!!! N

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 55

Wonderful story.  Thanks for writing

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 55

:) loved this story

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 55

im glad that she got her happy ending

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 55

Sweet end to a wonderful story.  

 

 Epilogue?????  If not.  Thank you for writing and sharing.

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Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 55

OMG I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER GOD YOURE GONNA MAKE ME CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOOOOOOVED IT BTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOPE FOR SOMETHIN NEW SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Nette91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2012 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 55

Really, really, nice.  I think you truly captured the pain and growth she went through.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 54

Great writing

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 54

That was Definately an emotional one!

a good emotional one!

those boys are hilarious!

i love her necklace!  It is an amazing heft they they all have!

edward is beyond sweet!

a pony!  I love it!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 54

Great birthday.   Sweet presents.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 54

looking forwardto more

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 54

:)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 53

looking forwarrd to more

Reviewer: Gidget922 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 53

Xcellent...............................

Reviewer: Gidget922 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 46

interesting about the Keeper it sounds like a story i read on ff.net called 

" Angel Eyes" great story but i'm sure your's is more detailed

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 53

:) loved this

Reviewer: Gidget922 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 35

this is an xcellent story you nailed every single emotion that fills each of us in different life experiences through our lives. I can relate ................

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 53

great chapter.  Glad she called Marcus instead of running or hiding.

Reviewer: nicky901n Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 53

Wow, like Em said that was deep! I'm so happy for her revelation. 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 53

Wow, that was emotional, I'm not surprised it was difficult to write. 

Well done.

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 53

I can only imagine how hard that was to write!  That was hard to read and not in a bad way!  That was amazing how her revelation came to reality!

Although I realize why she locked them out, it still hurt to see. 

Now Marcus!  He is truly a savior, along with Miranda! I love them!  I hope that they become closer!

Edward oh Edward! I do love that boy for her too!

its coming to a close, huh?

absolutely amazing chapter!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 52

That was the sweetest chapter!  And sooo healing!

it also shows that everyone deals with tragedy in their own way, yet very similar 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 52

:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 52

awww what wonderful family time.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 51

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 51

Great writing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 51

great chapter.  Glad they are all getting along better

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 51

great chatper!  looks like progess to me!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 51

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 50

:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 50

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 50

Great news, this is a wonderful story. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 50

wonderful chapter hun.  Glad she is making progress

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 50

so sweet!

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 49

Wonderful chapter. :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 49

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 49

God I love these kids!  This chapter was absolutely AWESOME BB!!

I cant wait to see Edwards reaction the her music  :)

 

*hugs*

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 49

:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 49

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 49

Crying now I love this story hate to think of it ending its been a great journey

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 49

Bella is doing so good. I hope Charlie and Renee don't mess it up with their attitudes. They need to realize that they only get whatever Bella wants to share with them. If they can't cooperate, they can get zero Bella. Their daughter is gone. Bella Cullen is alive and well. She is willing to give them a little of herself, but on her terms. They should consider themselves lucky because not that long ago they had nothing but memories. I hope they realize this and cherish it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 49

Great chapter. Glad everyone is trying

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 49

She's come a long way.

great chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 49

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 48

I am glad that Bella Cullen is coming back. That is who she is and the Swans will have to love her, if they want to be part of her life. She made a new great life with the Cullens. She might add a few Swan traditions as time goes by and she learns them, but she is a Cullen. The Swans threw a wrench in Bella's life when they tried to make her feel like she wasn't a Cullen. She almost lost a year of her life due their selfishness. It is time for her to get her life back.

Reviewer: LittleMoCUllen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Cute and funny :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 48

So much misery.

Reviewer: snoopyvet Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 48

wow just wow I am so glad you got this out with all you have going on. I love this story and will be here waiting when you  have time. Great job 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 48

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 48

great chapter.  glad the siblings got to talk.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 48

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: twilightlover127 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 48

BAH YES YOU UPDATED YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 48

:)

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 48

Wow!!  Great update!  I will always love this story  :)

Bella is getting better, and we can see it!  I love it!  I hope that Garrett makes a great choice too!

 

Love it, BB!!  *hugs*

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 47

I think it is good for Bella to see some one who has had it worse than her. She can see that her life is pretty good and get over this pitty party that she has thrown for herself. It is time to get on with her life and live.

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 47

Baby steps! And she's taking them!

Yeah!  

Thats so sad what happened to merianda'

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 47

Great chapter.
:)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 47

Think the werehouse will be good for her

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 47

looking forward to more

Reviewer: ahommel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 27

I've gotta take a break from reading this morning and get some things done, but I really wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your story. Now I know it's fiction, BUT I'm a mom who gave my daughter up for adoption when I was 18 - the circumstances were VERY different than what happened in this story, BUT it's really given me another perspective to consider. My daughter just turned 15 and I'm still in her life as an "aunt", and ever since she found out she was adopted, I've been waiting for them to tell her who I am, but reading this story (again I know it's fiction) I realize that the reactions that the Cullens are all having are all very well the reactions her different family members could have. I later married and have two wonderful children, and I worry about their reactions as I read about Garrett and Angela, and so this story has really had an emotional impact on me. Anyways, thank you again and I cannot wait to keep reading a little later. :))

Reviewer: parash Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love the Twilight reference, too funny!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 46

I hope Bella will get some answers that will make her happy. She doesn't seem to like any of the answers she has received so far. She doesn't seem to be able to accept the fact that she has 2 families that love her. She really is blessed, but she has decided to spend all her energy on the negative.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 46

glad B went back to Marcus

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 46

Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 45

's O.K. RL crap can often interfere with this stuff. T.Y for the update.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 46

thanks good chapter

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 46

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: Mart Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 46

So glad you are back but where are they going?

Reviewer: penfold Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoying this, can't wait for next chapter

Reviewer: jomik1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 45

So glad to see the update. I sure hope the sun stars to sun in all aspects of their lives. They've all ad so much rain!

Reviewer: smlpate Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 45

idk who im more sad about?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 45

They all need a big counseling session.

Reviewer: Teeam_Emeett_4_Lifee Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 45

this is awsome story....its kinda sad to ut good...Hope you update soon!!!

Reviewer: CarrollFamily02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 45

Great update.  I just want to hug Bella. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 45

Thanks so much for posting the update over here. I joined the Fanfiction boycott and it is great to get to read some of my favs anyway. Guess I'll catch up on my kindle reading. Lol. Great chapter. I'm not sure I understand what's going on with Garrett and Emmett. 

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 45

Thanks good chapter as always

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 45

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 45

I am so glad that you are posting this over here. I am reading and postin gmyselff on this site until all of the madness dies down...

Great chapter, thanks for the update. I am glad that the characters started talking again..

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 45

Good Chapter......

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 45

Great chapter! Emmett needs to get a grip.. He is being an ass.. can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2012 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 44

Bella made more out of the assignment than was needed and once again hurt Emmett. He feels that she is rejecting the Cullens when she does this. All Bella had to do is write about the Cullen part of her family. She has lived most of her life with them. This is her true family, just like any other adopted child. At the bottom she could have stated that she will write a part two once she finds out about the Swan part of her family. The Swans are her biologicial family. She is being a such a drama queen about this whole situation. Yes, the Swans did not purposly put her up for adoption, but that part is water over the bridge. It can't be changed. She is a Cullen. They raised her. She was a Swan by bloodline. She is loved by both. She is a lucky girl to be loved by so many.

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 44

Wonderful chapter. :)

Reviewer: amandaolsson Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 44

Good Chapter.....

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