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Reviewer: orangepeel Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

Thanks for the tip. I did buy your other 2 Pets stories but didn't realize the amazon Bebe might be even better than this one, which was wicked good.

Reviewer: The-Violet-Hour Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 2

Question, if I wish to read this story is it only avaliable now on Amazon.com?

Author's Response:

It's also available in hardcopy on Lulu.com

Reviewer: marizumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2011 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

nice writing

Reviewer: debbiedeeeee Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2011 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 2

Do you have to own a kindle to read digitized version from Amazon. I've never read any of these but saw a continuation by another author. Could I get a sample to see if it is something I'd like - chapter or two?

Author's Response:

You do not have to own a kindle.  Amazon offers a program that allows you to download onto any text reader, including your PC.  I believe Kindle offers a first chapter preview of all their books, but I'm not sure.  If not, contact me privately.

Reviewer: lonely_angie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2011 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'd like to read your story! under what title and author is in amazon?? thanks :D  

Author's Response:

It's under Darla Phelps, and it's the Pets series.  Pets: Bach's Story, Pets 2: Pani's Story and Pets 3: Bebe.  Thanks!

Reviewer: anas_little_angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

Hey just wondering if you were also the author of the fanfic "Across the Universe"? It had the same idea so I was curious because that one is no longer here either. Thanks for writing. Looking forward to you next story. 

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

I enjoyed the story immensely when it was posted here, and went on to check it out on Amazon. I ended up buying Pets:Bach, as I was very interested to see how Bach and Pani's story started. It was a bit darker than Bebe but you didn't disappoint, I ended up readind it overnight and I will delay buying Pani's book till I have some free time, as I won't be able to put it down once I have it, I'm sure LOL.

I only wish there was a reunion scene at the end, I would sooo like to see that.. Does Pani's story progress more into the future, the wedding, for instance? Or can we interest you to write us a one-shot about that time for us? (bats eyelashes)

Can't wait to get a glimpse of the next story.. Thank you for writing!

Author's Response:

I have had a lot of people request that.  My response has always been no.  However, there comes a time when an author must pay attention to what the readers want.  I have 7 obligations in front of this, but I will put a Pani and Bach one-shot story in line as number 8 on the writer's board.  Eventually, I will post it here, but it's going to be a while.

Reviewer: Jilli90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

I was half way through this story and now Iam very disapointed that to finish, I will have to PAY for the pubished work. I have bought work i read on FF sites, both electronically and splurged for the traditional paper books and might have bought yours, but now I most likly will not. Very disapointed.

Author's Response:

Sorry your disappointed, but I left plenty of notice and plenty of time.  I don't begrude you the way you make your living.  Please don't begrudge me the way I make mine.

Reviewer: RSM Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 2

will this be on barnes and noble and are you the author of the other stuff by maren smith out there


Author's Response:

Yes, I am Maren Smith and the same author.  I write under a variety of names.  I do not have a publishing contract with Barnes and Noble at this time.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 2

So excited to read the bebe story again! VERY VERY Excited about your next story!

Reviewer: TheSpoiltOne Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 2

you should post the link :)

Reviewer: kalare Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

I looked for it on amazon and couldn't find it...

Author's Response:

Sorry about that!  Here you go:



Reviewer: miclew Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 2


I was wondering how you could do a 1 shot in 100 words...

now, I know...lol

best wishes,



Reviewer: VampirObsesser Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 2

Well, I wish I could tell you how good this was except for the fact that the story isn't there. :(

Author's Response:

Sorry.  I thought I'd given ample warning.

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

Cannot wait to read more from you! Will yoru Bebe story be for sale in the future, as your others are?

Author's Response:

Yes, Bebe's Story will be offered for sale when I'm done with the proofing.  I'm sure nobody noticed (lol) but there were a few errors in the NaNoWriMo version.  Also, the Pets Series has been published under Darla Phelps, so I had to change a few things to make it a Darla Phelps novel.  An extra 25k words have been added, and many of the suggestions offered in the reviews have been taken into account during the re-write.  While I'm editing this, however, I'm also re-working the rough draft of Incubus Moon.  For those who thought Bebe was too short, I doubt that'll be an issue with the new book.  It's just under 30 chapters right now and there's more that needs to be added.  So yes, I will be posting more.  I just need to get it done first.

Reviewer: rmcrms5 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Do you know when this story will be available to purchase?  I'm looking forward to your next story.

Author's Response:

I don't know yet.  I'm hoping before the end of the month.  Thank you for the compliment!  I hope to start posting the next one before the end of the month.

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