Date: 16 May 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 16: Picnics & Promises
sweeyt first date. Not sure I recognized anything from MS though. Ah well been awhile since I read it.
Date: 16 May 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
Virginia, It totally sucks that you have so few reviews. Your writing of WDH is a certified slow building of the story of the love that Bella and Edward have. It is a pleasure that there is so much romance in this story. It wouldn't be about the two if it wasn't. Keep up the good work.
Date: 23 Apr 2011 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 13: My Only Exception
:)
Date: 23 Apr 2011 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
*happy shout* MORE PLEASE!?! :-D
Date: 23 Apr 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
hmmm a weekend at charlies......wonder what the wolves are gonna pull......cause you know they are.
Date: 23 Apr 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 8: Reunion
HOLY. FREAKIN'. MACKEREL!! Can you say 'Crazy'?! :-?
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 14: Sway
They are too cute together.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11: Deals Off
:)
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 13: My Only Exception
glad they are talking and getting to know each other.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 12: Stay
aww they are so cute together.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 11: Deals Off
Bella needs to be firm with those Q-Boys.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 10: Me & You
Well okay now we both know we love each other and we can not seem to find that feeling elsewhere, so now what is next? You can not live apart can not live together as she is now. She is changeable he is not. This is really not that hard to figure out. How long does it take them?
I swear if you love something that much, you want to be able to be together.
Date: 01 Jan 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car
WELL DONE BELLA...
Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 10: Me & You
Happy new year!
Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car
:)
Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 8: Reunion
You know it seems teadious to keep rehashing " I am not safe for you Bella". Either work up another relationship and damn well mean it or leave her alone. If another Vampire kills her then too bad she is NOT your problem. Edward drives me crazy with his crap.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chap 4- Eye to Eye
ok Woopie he is back and still not wanting to be with her because of the same thing. So he needs to leave her alone and not even let her see him. She is better off thinking he never came back. Don't hold out for someone that will not give up everything for you. sigh..
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 10: Me & You
I love it. The Pack is such a pain.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 7: Protector
:)
Date: 31 Dec 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 10: Me & You
aww very sweet dinner.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car
yup he did get off easy so far.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 8: Reunion
awww protective Em and a mad Carlisle
Date: 31 Dec 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 7: Protector
well that last has to be embry cause I dont think Seth would have phased yet but ya never know.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
guessing the "accident" bella spoke of was James and Laurant going after B?
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
hmmm interesting seeing her side of it. I'm usually not one for duplicate POVs on the same dialogue, but I think it was needed in this case
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:48 PM Title: Chap 4- Eye to Eye
hmmm some of the wolves still should have changed I think so she may know what they are... maybe?
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chap 3- Running, Climbing, Falling
theories... hmmm I have a few
1) Charlie is dead and one or more of the wolves lives with her, hence no vision for alice
2) Bella lives on the res for some reason, no vision
3) Bella lives in town near work and school with wolves, no visions
4) the kid is either renee and phil or is the child of one of the res families...maybe angela/ben too
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chap 2- Homecoming
awww poor baby... his car smells like his dream girl
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
hmmm wonder what rose's ultimatum exactly was.
Date: 31 Dec 2010 3:45 PM Title: Prologue: Bella
interesting twist. I think I'll like this one.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
:)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
she knows his a vampire.......! :)
Date: 08 Dec 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chap 3- Running, Climbing, Falling
:)
Date: 08 Dec 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
Great chapter!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
Oh wow. I am dying to know
Author's Response:
Thanks, I will upload again soon. :-) Nice to have you reading!!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
HOLY SHIT!!!! I didn't see that coming...at ALL!
Author's Response:
LOL! Glad I could surprise you. ;-) Thanks for the review too!!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 3:31 PM Title: Prologue: Bella
Well I went from dating a sailor to married to a Jacob and a mortgage payment....so yea wild child to soccer mom minus the kid...
Author's Response:
Ha.. I went from shy band geek to shockingly well-liked and out-going sorority girl. Believe me, I never expected that to happen. The five years post-grad changed me a lot more than that though. Now I'm the soccer mom with kids married to a sailor/firefighter. LOL!! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
I dont know what she knows but it would be to her advantage to find SOMEONE ELSE.
Edward needs to stay with MAMA.. 110 years more.
Author's Response:
I'm sorry, but I have to say this is the strangest review I've gotten yet. Team Jacob? Just curious.
Thank you for the review nevertheless. :-)
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
The pack and Bella hmmmm. :)
Author's Response:
Hmm, indeed. Thank you for reading!
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:02 PM Title: Chap 3- Running, Climbing, Falling
Poor guy - is she having a child with a wolf?
Author's Response:
Oh no, no, no! No wolf-pups in this story, LOL! Thanx for reviewing! :-)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
Hmmm, well - he will get his car and the essence of bella will be there, right? she's matured in 5 years (god, how much did I change in college - alot and that's why I appreciate that authors such as yourself give us fun sotiries like this).
Excited to see where this goes. Cannot imagine what edward has been doing the last 5 years. Glad that he has decided to come back to his family. Did I miss where they are? Seattle?
Liked your bio as well. and my eyes are really as blue as they are - not contacts either.
waiting patiently for more!!!
mic
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. Sorry for the late reply, I didn't have email alerts turned on. OOPS>
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:58 PM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
:)
Author's Response:
Thx :-)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:43 PM Title: Prologue: Bella
:)
Author's Response:
Thx! :-)
Date: 09 Nov 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
oh wow - more
Author's Response:
Thank you bunches. Sorry for the late reply, I had to turn on email alerts apparently. :-)