Date: 19 Oct 2018 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 33: Heaven and Hell
I'm loving your version of Edward and Bellas story. I've not been able to put it down all week. Bella really needed that time and space from Mr Cullen to grow into this wonderful, independent, young woman and I'm loving her all the more for it. Really looking forward to the next instalment and finding out what's next for my favourite fictional couple. Please, please keep writing. Your stories are a such joy to read-thank you. ☺️
Date: 08 Oct 2018 8:20 PM Title: Prologue: Bella
Hey it wont let me continue after chapter 21 I want to finish the story but it keeps bringing back to the age consent and will go to the first chapter only to repeat the same step please help!
Hello. I think you'll have to reach out to the site moderators. I have no control over technical issues, login or age verification controls. I apologize. The story is posted up to chapter 34 on STARS.
Thank you for reading, and best of luck!!
Date: 12 Sep 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 32: Yes Part 2
Greetings. I'm new to your work and have really enjoyed catching up on this story. After reading all your A/N I hope you continue this story. It's too great to stop. But I'm also glad I haven't been waiting as long as your other readers. Lol. I'm patient but....
Anyway, thanks for sharing your awesome talent! I hope it continues.
Date: 09 Jul 2014 7:28 PM Title: Chap 4- Eye to Eye
I would love to read your stories, however the age consent keeps me form doing so . I am well over 18 and agreed that when I signed up for this site over 3 yrs ago. every time I agree for age consent it does not continue on with story.
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 31: Yes
WElcome back!!!! Glad Bella is going to let him spoil her a bit.
Thank you, Kelly!! Maybe I'll even finish before Austin, lol.
Hope to see you there again. And I appreciate you fixing all our update dates. You're tireless!
Date: 16 Aug 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
Despite the lack of the word, complete, in the summary, this seems to me to be the end of your story. The rating for this could be G, but it didn't take away from a thing. I loved reading this version of Edward and Bella together, as I do most versions. Matter of fact, I'm off to read your two outtakes right now! Thanks again!
Date: 16 Aug 2013 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 28: Wedding Bells
It wouldn't have been an occaision, without Bella hurting herself. No surprise there at all. Lucky Edward figured out a way to keep Bella in Jessica's wedding. He is hoping she wants a ceremony of their own one day, and now that they're together, she wants one too!
Date: 16 Aug 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 26: Victoria
Talk about a stroke of luck! Edward and Jacob working together, yet! That's almost funny, except for how awful it would have been if Victoria had been left to carry out her hideous plans! From what Edward heard in her mind, it was almost a kindness to do away with her! Now the pack and the Cullens can mop up the newborns and be done with it. Maybe the wolves will even appreciate all the help from their mortal enemies!
Date: 16 Aug 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 25: Fire & Icy Water
Thanks for the word about Leah Clearwater, taking her heartbreak somewhere sunny and warm makes a lot of sense. The plot to kill and drain a loaded ferry boat was horrifying! Victoria must be a crazy vampire! Hope to heaven the Cullens and the wolves can take care of her and her army!
Date: 16 Aug 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 23: The Cullens- Part 2
Amazing that Rosalie was as welcoming as she was, but then Bella's not seventeen any more and can stand up to intimidation a little better than she could then! I really think the visit went quite well, all things considered.
Date: 16 Aug 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 21: Anger, Denial, and A Dog
Inevitable, I suppose, that Jacob would show up to stake a claim, to which he has no righttrying to convince Bella to dump Edward! Thank heaven he didn't phase in her apartment, or make her afraid. Except for when she heard about the newborn army, of course! Jake is still too much of a thoughtless kid!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 20: In The Sun
I hope Alice smacks him around for what he's about to do to Bella! She is so much braver than he is it's just not funny. I also hope Bella tells him a few home truths! I realize Edward thinks he has good reasons for his ban on changing Bella, but he really needs to listen to her instead!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 19: Choosing Sides
Boy, they are really putting pressure on Bella to choose sides, and not liking at all which side she chose! As for the big reveal, Bella usually thinks Edward is beautiful in sunlight, so I'll guess that's her reaction this time, too!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 18: Decisions Part 2
What else but the usual prejudice the Quileute have against vampires? I can hear it now, Sue telling Bella to stay away from Edward because he's so dangerous! Wouldn't surprise me if Jake showed up to put in his two cents on the subject!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 17: Decisions Part 1
Sam is sure being a hard-head about the threat Victoria poses! He better listen to Carlisle before something awful happens to his pregnant Emily, and the rest of the tribe! Sweet that Bella called while on her way to Forks just to reassure her vampire. Not so sweet , the conversation with good old self-centered Rosalie! I still worry about Edward's adamant attitude concerning Bella's mortality.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 16: Picnics & Promises
A picnic at Gas Works Park was probably a better first date idea than some fancy dinner out, and a lot more to Edward's liking as well as Bella's. I can see a big argument coming soon when they get into it over her mortality, or lack thereof! I wonder what Victoria's plas are this time?
Date: 15 Aug 2013 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
Some thing about Edward never seem to change. He still has theis cock-eyed idea that he can make decisions for Bella, about her life, without discussing it with her! It irritates me, and I would imagine it will make her furious when she realizes! This weekend to see her dad is apt to be somewhat miserable for them both!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 14: Sway
Embry and Bella are very good friends in your story and there seems to be a rift between her and Jake. That probably won't hurt Edward's feelings much. He missed a good opportunity to tell Bella about vampire mating, though he skated on the changing to an immortal situation. May I say, it was kind of funny when their first kiss ended up with Bella on her butt on the kitchen floor? Oh yes, Embry's description of the way Bella and Edward looked at each other was rather beautiful!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 13: My Only Exception
You are anevil woman, LOL! How sneaky to leave us all hanging and waiting for that magic moment! It was so sweet to read what Bella felt and what she wanted! Edward has to be thrilled, scared, but thrilled!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 12: Stay
The confrontation with the wolves could have been worse, despite Alice losing her visions around them. I hope now that Edward has experienced Bella's screaming nightmare, it doesn't mean something awful happened with Jake!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 11: Deals Off
Bella's wolfy friends got the wind up over her dinner with Edward. Guess they all overreacted a bit. Embry can hardly believe that he's seeing attraction between Edward and Bella. Little does he really know! Sam saying the treaty is null and void can't be good! As for Jake, I'm guessing he and Bella have a history of some sort and he stays away from her now because of it.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 9: Riding In My Car
Oh boy, I really enjoyed this chapter! They are just getting started with the revelations and explanations and so far it's been fun! She isn't about to take anything less than the truth from him, for sure!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 8: Reunion
SWeems Edward still has more surprises awaiting him. It shocked hell out of him to see Bella stand between him and Embry, as if to protect him. Just wait until he learns that she feels the pull as strongly as does he! Can't wait to hear this conversation!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chap 6- Visions & Vacillations
Number one question, why would Victoria need a newborn, or more than one even? Bella and she have never met, have they? Maybe it's mixed up with the wolves, somehow? Whatever the reason, it sure lit a fire under Edward!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chap 5- Ghosts of the Past
Pieces are starting to fall into place! The rescue from death by Embry and his friend Bella alluded to Jerry, must have had something to do with wolves, thus, her knowledge of the Cullens being vampires! Wait until she lays that bit of information on him! Can you shock and surprise a mindreading vampire? We shall see!
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chap 4- Eye to Eye
Bless Esme's romantic heart, this was just the push Edward needed to do what he desperately wanted to do anyway, see his Bella! I can hardly wait to see where they go from here, somewhere they will end up together, I hope.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chap 3- Running, Climbing, Falling
Poor Edward, he tries so hard to do the right thing, the honorable thing, even if it kills him, figuratively speaking. He doesn't yet know what I suspect, that part of the reason she works at a Volvo dealership is because of him! I may be all wet with that theory, but chances are I'm right.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 11:33 PM Title: Chap 1- The Prodigal
So, now I know who the car is delivered to and how this will impact them both is going to be the interesting part. I'm betting five years have made a difference for them both! Love to know what he's been up to for that length of time!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 11:20 PM Title: Prologue: Bella
There's my Bella, crazy over a shiny, silver Volvo! I'm loving that she is the senior service rep at a Volvo dealership, knows a lot about cars and is one of the boys, so to speak. Can't wait to see who this car is delivered to!
Date: 16 Nov 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
I have caught up with this story and I love it. I love the more mature Bella. I hope there is no heart break in this story. They already had their time apart and hated it. They know they love and need each other. They make each other so happy and that is what is important.
Date: 13 Nov 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 30: Unedited
Early in this chapter. I was going to say, I Hope I live long enough for them to be together in the sense of marriage/physical and her changing. He has to love her that much he puts away his feelings on that. It should be her choice after all. We do miss you when you don't update. I look for you on FF & twilighted.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 11: Deals Off
Aw, I loved how joking Jared was, and Embry's astute observations. What the hey is going on with Jacob's lack of presence in this story this far? I hope he's just been detained, not otherwise absent...
Date: 03 Sep 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 17: Decisions Part 1
I ran across your story while browsing one day. So far I've read through Ch. 17, Decisions Pt 1. Every chapter has been well thought out and well written. It baffles me the low number of reviews it has received. If I were a writer I would "pimp" your story to everybody but since I'm not I'll have to do some thinking to figure out how to make it more known so others can find it and enjoy as I am. Thank you for taking the time to create something that is so entertaining
Date: 18 May 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 26: Victoria
woo hoo the wicked witch is dead. Glad the wolves and the C's got along well enough to kill her.
Thank you for all the lovely reviews, my dear!! Yeah, ding dong the witch is dead...
See you next update!! -Ginnie
Date: 17 May 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 15: Happy
I just found this story and I love it so far. Maybe I missed this while I was reading or it was implied.......
Is Bella still a virgin at the age of 22, or did she have sex with Jake?
Is Edward sill a virgin?
Can't wait until I am caught up with all 25 chapters :)
LOL, these sorts of questions make me giggle, but I wonder the same thing when I read other people's stories. So, this topic will be brought up between B & E very soon. I kind of hate to spoil it, but my Bella & Edward are meant to be as close to canon as possible, so you might be able to guess the answer. ;-) If it's really bugging you not to know, PM me.
PS- Questions about B's relationship with Jake can be answered in one of the outtakes available on my profile! :-)
Date: 16 May 2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 20: In The Sun
ANOTHER update just popped into my inbox!! I'm feeling so spoiled I could kiss you!! M-WAH!! :-D
I'm trying hard to get this caught up to that OTHER fanfiction site. Fortunately, I had some time today.
Thanks for reading, and for all the wonderful reviews. :)