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Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 30 A Moment of Clarity...

Yeah! You're back. I appreciate this so very much.

I'm guessing Tanya's still lurking about?

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 30 A Moment of Clarity...

Loved it

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 30 A Moment of Clarity...

so glad your back 

this is a fantastic story pleased your going to complete it

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Please update

 

Reviewer: SMBella Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2016 6:14 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Amassing story looking forward for further chapters 

Reviewer: kayjacut Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2015 6:55 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Please  please  please update  it's one of my favourites and it's been a long time 

Reviewer: sherry01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2015 12:03 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Freaking love it! I cannot wait to read more!

Reviewer: Myffieberry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

I'm absolutely loving this fic! Please update soon!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2015 2:32 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I'm in! ;)

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

I think the Mystery POV is Mack, I'm assuming he was invited to the party being Edward's resident assistant and Edward singing his praises.  I hope Bella tells him how Mack makes her feel.

The little snippet you left us with isn't a snippet at all, it's an epic tease.....is Bella using cuffs on Edward?  I'm going to be giddy with anticipation. :)

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

I'm not liking the fact that Edward has a resident assistant he didn't ask for and his name is Mack Jameson, this can only be trouble with a capital 'T' in a white coat with a pocket protector.  What even is a pocket protector anyway?  It sounds hideous, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

Oh, this is so good! I don't live this alternative lifestyle either, I love reading about. 

Reviewer: we wants the redhead Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Love it! Glad to see you're back!

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Well it was certainly hot. Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

love this story......i hope you got over your writer's block.....can't wait to see what happens with Marcus......and the mystery POV.....I think is Marcus.....

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

I look forward to the next chapter cum hell or high water. READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

I was enjoying re~reading from the beginning and came to a bunch of overlapping words. I can't read this chapter is there any way to correct this problem??? Maybe you can post this chapter in full on your blog?   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: bran Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter: 9 And So It Begins...

im loving this story your lilttle snarky remarks of the brain  is funny as hell

Reviewer: mjmcea Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Can't wait!

 

 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2015 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

So glad you are back. Love this story. 

Reviewer: Sabs Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Hi Krazi,

thank you for continuing this story. I was really happily surprised, when I got the email alerting me to the new chapter.
Now I am (not so patiently) waiting for the next chapter and if you need time, just take it  - I will wait. And probably start rereading again, to be up to date.

Thank you for sharing your fantasy with us.

Greetings from Germany
Sabine

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

I'm so glad to see this story back. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Thank you so much for the update. I can't wait for the next one. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Oh my goodness I was so excited to see your post it's been to long and the end was awesome.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

I am thinking that the mystery POV is Mack's. I think he is someone from Bella's past. Love the lemon .

Reviewer: Izzy54 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:19 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Can you tell us if you plan on finishing this story?  Will it be many months before the next chapter again?  I love your work but frustrated at the time between chapters.

Not complaining (maybe just a little, lol).  Again, love your work!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Hell must have froze over because I did not think you would be back but Hallelujah so glad you did

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Wellcome back.  Yummy chapter.   Evil Mystery POV.  While I want to think its Mack, not sure you are going to make it that easy.

Reviewer: kgunter34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Always worth the wait.  Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

:)

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 8:55 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Oh sweetie I've decided to re-read from the beginning.  I have missed you tremendously and I'm overjoyed that your back.  Ihave been with you since the beginning and unless god takes me first I intend to read this story to the end. I have one question if I may. .. Is it possible for you to add the missing chapters in ypur blog I much rather read this story there since " A PICTURE PAINTS A THOUSAND WORDS "  I think you know what I mean.  (lol)   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: joshuasmom131 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

I'm sorry you have had some issues but I'm glad your back I've missed this story.......thank you for finishing it.....can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

wow, c etait magnifique!

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

I cannot tell you how much I LOVE this fic, I'm going to reread it now that it's been updated again:)

 

I hope our mystery man doesn't cause too much of an issue.....

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

loved it!! Cant wait to read more......... Glad to see your back for now anyways. lol. Hope to see more soon......

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Welcome Back!
I do hope life has decided not to swallow you whole and allow you to have some fun now!
I've been missing me some Domward and subElla.
You have me curious as to whom Max really is and why he is after Dr. Cullen and Miss Swan.

Reviewer: MaluTara Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

Glad to have you back! I'm sorry life got so complicated :(

great chap! Can't wait for next one! :)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

welcome back Krazi :)

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 29: Practice Makes Perfect...

sooo glad your back

love this story hope your feeling better about things soon

looking forward to more

Reviewer: nightfal29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Hope you decide to finish this some day.  I am really enjoying it.

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Please update

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

i dont trust this mack jameson i hope he doesnt cause trouble for edward and bella i await the next chapter

Reviewer: pinay_samurai Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

OMG!!!! I just found this story...and I must say, I absolutely love it! 😍 This is smoking hot, and I cannot wait for more. 🔥

Reviewer: dancemom33 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

I love this stotY .I hope you are cotinueing to write this wonderful  story.

 

 

Reviewer: bran Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Damn this was getting good too waiting for more

Reviewer: Sailor girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2014 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

Would love to see you work on this series a little more.  You left us hanging with the final chapter.   I check daily for an update.  I hope you can find a way to give us more.  

 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

I don't think Mac is who he says he is.

Reviewer: MsTorres Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

wow this was definitely well worth the wait!

is mack jameson.....someone familiar maybe?

Ms Torres
x

Reviewer: Hijinks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

I love this story, you are an amazing writer. I noticed that you haven't updated in a while,please update soon!!

Reviewer: Soccermom101113 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 11:04 AM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

Great story!!  Will I be notified when you update?  Can't wait for more;)

Reviewer: azzato Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

When are you going to finish the story  -   have been waiting for quite a while for an update.

Reviewer: WannaBeBella89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

This is a story from Hell... and heaven at the same time ;-)

I'm an addict to your words, honestly - and would be happy to find the next chapter soon!
So far, Bella dna Edward have made the hell of a story, not to forget Alice and her skills :-P
But it seems like the devil is ready to unleash his fury on them, since "Mack" has entered Edwards life now... I just hope that Edward soon gets a feelong of what this guy is like and what his plans are... Edward has a good intuition and he should listen to it! It will prevent him and Bella from serious harm, I can feel that...

I keep m,y fingery crossed that you will soon bless us with an update! I can't wait to see how James wants to track Bella down and lands on his ugly arse :-D

All the best,
Bella89

Reviewer: Payton79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

I read your story over the last days, and I can't tell you how much I love it. Edward's so sweet and sexy but also strict and oh so hot. And Bella's just perfect.
When I started reading it I hoped that it was a completed story, since I noticed from the beginning that the last update was three months ago. Unfortunately, many stories that haven't been updated for that long are dead. The more I read the more I was sure that it wasn't complete, in fact, I think and hope there's a lot more to come. After reading your A/N's, though, I'm quite confident that you haven't given up on the story but that RL just got in the way again. I really hope I'm right. Please? Can't wait to read more about those two.

Reviewer: MoodySammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

How I wish you would updat please :)

Reviewer: Sailor girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2014 12:55 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

I keep checking to see if you have written another chapter.  I hope you'll continue.  

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

And the oscar goes to....*insert drumroll here*....James McGowan!!!! Now.....what is that slimy fucker planning..... and where is Tanya lurking?!?!? MORE SOON PLEASE!!!! LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: cheysma2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Dec 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...

This has been so good so far. I can hardly wait for more updates.

Reviewer: Sbmayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Very excited to read on. I am enjoying your story very much.  Curious as to how long this story will be. I'm also hoping for a hEA .  Keep up the good work and I hope R L doesn't get in your way. Happy writing!  SBM

Reviewer: Sbmayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

L O V E   I have enjoyed this story although it's not my usual type. I think it is well written and flows really well.  Thank you for an enjoyable read and please keep telling your stories. Thanks for sharing. Steffi

Reviewer: cheysma2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 6: Propositions, Female Dommes, & Cell Phones...

I can hardly wait for them to meet.

Reviewer: cheysma2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5: Revelations... What´s Done In the Dark...

Great chapter. I am not sure why I am having a problem posting reviews. If 1 doesn't show, I did try.

Reviewer: cheysma2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 3: REVENGE IS A DISH... BEST SERVED COLD...

I bet it was Edward who safe worded and I love that Alice knows how to "help" Bella1

Reviewer: cheysma2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Yuck, Tanya. I hope Edward didn't get cooties from her. LOL

Reviewer: cheysma2000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1: DREAMS... WHAT DO THEY MEAN?

I am still loving this. I can't wait for Bella to get back at Jacob. :)

Reviewer: cheysma2000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 9:56 PM Title: PROLOGUE: BLIND DATING

This is definately starting out good. I like it already!

Reviewer: Sbmayet Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

Enjoying your writing  very much.  I thank you for being such an unselfish author.

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

It seems like Bella is welcomed open armed by the group of Ladies, whereas Tanya was left outside. Bella with her gentle personality probably fits better than a social ladder climbing person.

I wouldn't be surprised, if James is causing some trouble for Edward and Bella in the near future. maybe even in combination with Tanya...

Anyway, until the next chapter.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 27: A Lesson in Learning...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

love it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 25: Training Day...

She's busted!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 23: I Am Woman... Hear Me Roar...

great chapter!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 22: Ghosts of the Past… Present… and Future…

amazing chapter!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 21: Cat´s Out of the Bag... Time to Face the Music...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 20: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.2

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 19: Real Life... Outside of the Bubble... pt.1

uh-oh! what is Tanya up to?

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 18: Truth... Lies... and Black Eyes...

loved it! Uh-oh Edward is in trouble!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

great chapter!

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2013 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

I get the feeling Mack is James and somebody's abouto fall in the rabbit hole !!! Can't wait!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

:) Love the atmosphere you create in your writing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

ooooh Yummy chapter.   Owie for Mr E's toushie.   hmmm Mack huh?  Is that ominous of something?

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Wonderful to see the update to this amazing story. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

In a way I was sad that Edward thought he needed punishment also. I understand, but it was hard to see Edward in a submissive mode. It was a great chapter. Thanks

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 17: What´s Done in Forks... Stays in Forks...

loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: jylway Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

So surprised but impressed by his choice of punishment... and I think I was paying attention... I guess we'll see! Great chapter as always

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 16: Bestfriends... Girlie Cars... and Roadside Service...

loved it!

Reviewer: mom2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 26: Mishaps... Misunderstandings... & Make-Ups...

I am soooo glad you are back I love thus story and will Waite as long as it takes as long as I know your still writing

Reviewer: Maxlover Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 2: PAGING DR. CULLEN

Hey, So far i find your story to be really confusing reason being is why is Bella starting highschool at 10 and then graduating both highschool and college at 18?....Like i'm not tryna make you feel bad or atleast get you upset but i atleast want to read an story with accurate infomation and not something that doesn't make sense what so ever. Please get it together that's all i'm saying.

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

I loved it. Although it did seem somewhat like a repeat of last chapter. At the end I think we finally met the "bad" guy. Wonder what drama/terror he'll cause.

Reviewer: twidictedbyrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Ok, I gotta see that teser LOL. Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Hot damn... That was awesome!!!

It's been awhile but I remember something to the effect of a stalker or someone dangerous... Which, my guess would be this Mack guy. No bueno, no bueno at all!!! Refresh my memory... Am I on the right track?

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Mwah!  Great update. Worth the wait. 

Reviewer: mom2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 24: Settling In...

Good I love this story

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

The phrase of the day for this chapter seems to be 'balancing work,play and life'. Bella now has several role models in Charlotte, Sulpicia and Didyme. Edward has his mentor Peter.
From your description this new resident, Mack Jameson' is James. Bad feelings surround this meeting. Why wouldn't Edward know of a resident being placed under his tutelage?

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

nice to have you back

fantastic chapter as always luv this story

well done

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

Love reading Edward's POV of this. I am soooo loving your story and Bella and Edward together. Love their relationship. I am a little worried about Edward's resident. Why would Edward NOT know that he was getting one. I am thinking that Mack is up to something. Can't wait for your next update. 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 15: A Work in Progress... Finding a Balance...

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 14: The Start of Something Beautiful... Confessions, Forgiveness, and Love...ions of Lov, Forgiveness, and

loved it!

Reviewer: jeanineandjaida Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Punishment Well Deserved...

this is the same chapter from two weeks ago....love it anyway....more pls.....god will they get married shit I would like to see some progression....

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