Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:14 PM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Maybe T is a douche. But, I also think they are making a big deal over an ass glance. They weren't on a date. They were in a bar where they were drinking and dancing.
Plus, I have to say I'm really surprised that Em would be ok w E persuing B. Especially since he knows how many girls he's been w!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 8:08 PM Title: Rock On
Wow! I have tears running down my face from the vision of E & B singing Bring Me to Life to each other. What a fantastic chapter. You threw a little of everything in, the lemony goodness was awesome, the hot suggestions great but the love was just beautiful to think about. Thank you. Your idea for this Battle of the Rock Band was terrific and you did it up well.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I think it was my favorite chapter to write :)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:14 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
That was sad. Bella and Emmett were so lucky to have each other. How sweet that Emmett is going to be a daddy to a little girl. :0) I'm really enjoying this story.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:40 PM Title: A Raft In The Flood
I have to say I'm glad that Bella took the news so well. I'm also glad to see that Edward isn't too down about losing his position and is finding something else he would like to do. :0)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:03 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
I love your concern over the believability of your story. Let's face it, we love these characters who are based on vamps and werewolves! I think we can let a yeaof school and some SWAT lingo go. Lol
Author's Response:
LOL...thanks. You wouldn't believe how many people complained about it and actually said that they just couldn't buy it and were going to stop reading it. People are funny sometimes about those things. I work hard to do the best I can, but sometimes you just can't fix things or get them just right. Thankfully the number of people who liked it outnumbered those who don't. I never dreamed I would have a story with such an amazing response. I'll probably never have another one to get the attention FDKK has, but it's definitely helped to increase my readership for the rest of my stories that I've posted since :)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:10 PM Title: Surfacing From the Deep
Noooo They can't take Edward of SWAT! That's not right. I could see finding a replacement till Edward was well, but not losing his spot permantely. What a bummer. Wonder what he'll choose to do?
Author's Response:
Thanks to your reviews, FDKK has made the top 10 most reviewed! Thanks!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:23 PM Title: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares
I wondered if it would take an emergency to get Bella to be able to enter the ER again. I'm glad she was able to over come her fear and was able to help Ethan. I also think Bella's plan for the wedding sounds perfect. :0)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:16 PM Title: Femmes Night Out
Don't care if he did it while she was exhausted and half asleep. I'm just glad he manned up and said what she needed to hear.
Author's Response:
Thanks to your reviews, FDKK has made the top 10 most reviewed! Thanks!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:41 PM Title: A Happy New Year
Really enjoyed this chapter. :0) I hope we get to see another Rock Band night.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:20 AM Title: The Name Game
Hope she takes his name :0)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:00 AM Title: Declarations
What a wonderful Christmas! They're engaged :0) I really enjoyed this chapter.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:39 AM Title: Concerning Charlotte
Hope Charlotte is ok. Glad doc Peters wasn't a huge jerk when it came to running those tests. Maybe he's coming around? Still loving the story. :0)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:14 AM Title: Home
Good to see Edward up and walking and back at home. :0)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 12:33 AM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
Of course slutward has a sweet sensitive side. Someone as smart as B wouldn't care about him otherwise.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 11:13 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
It may have been heart wrenching, but it was also heart warming. Edward remembering everything about Bella from their first meeting at her parents funeral was beautifully told. I love the way you describe his feelings for her.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 10:57 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
I always love a good slutward.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 10:07 PM Title: Sympathetic Solitude
glad there wasn't something really wrong with Edward and it was just that he was being grumpy. Also glad they made up. I like Carmen and I like seeing Bella like the job. Hope she does really well there. :0)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 7:55 AM Title: A Happy New Year
So Edward and the future Mrs. Cullen are exhibitionists now. Is it wrong that I find that extremely hot? Except for Bella's work that was an extremely fun chapter.
Date: 21 Feb 2010 6:14 AM Title: Crankward
Great Story! I'm wondering what Edwards deal was????
Date: 21 Feb 2010 4:29 AM Title: Equivalency
I'm so glad she gets to finish her intern year. :0)
Date: 21 Feb 2010 1:13 AM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
I don't think Bella was a B to Edward, he deserved it. And she is so sweet, sometimes I feel like he is the big bad wolf of the story xD
Date: 21 Feb 2010 12:18 AM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
I have never played rock band, that's not a popular game here O.O
Date: 21 Feb 2010 12:14 AM Title: Disturbed
Glad to see Bella working through this and not giving up. She's so lucky to have so many suportive people around her to help her. :0)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 10:32 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Edward is leaving for two weeks after this? Because THAT would be really bad timing.
Edward's so... brainless sometimes. Poor Bella xD
Date: 20 Feb 2010 4:41 PM Title: Reaching Into the Darkness
Poor Bella, I hope she accepts the help and works toward getting better. I don't want her to have to repeat her intern year she's worked so hard to get where she is now. I guess it could be a good sign that she opened up and actually told them what was wrong. I'm staying hopeful. :0)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 8:29 AM Title: Declarations
Beautiful sentiments for the hottest couple in fanfic. Could the engagement have been more perfect, I think not.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:22 AM Title: Warmth In the Darkness
Yay! Edwards awake. That's so nice that Bella gets to stay with him all the time. Wonder if she'll pass the phyce evaluation. I sure hope so. :0)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:19 AM Title: For The Love of Esme
Ya gotta love Esme! :0)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:18 AM Title: Focus Fluctuations
Ugh! Bella has got to quit blaiming herself for this situation. I sure hope that doesn't last long.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:15 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss
Wow that was exciting! I really liked this chapter. I liked seeing the guys in action a bit working to get Bella and the other hostages out of there. I also liked how Bella kept her cool and took care of everyone even standing up to Trager a few times. And then at the end how she took James out. Now I'm hoping that Edward is ok and I hope Bella will be ok too. Great job!
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:10 AM Title: Underneath It All
I had wondered what had happened that made Bella not follow singing to go pro. What a terrible thing to have happen. Surely she can see she wasn't the reason. She's a doctor and a pretty smart one at that. Oh wow! that was quite the twist with Trager. Now maybe we'll get to see "Bella's boy" in action. :0)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 6:06 AM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
Way to go Esme! It would have bothered me too to see Elizabeth step in and try to take credit for the man Edward turned out to be. It was so sweet when Edward hugged Esme and called her mom. :0)
Date: 20 Feb 2010 12:44 AM Title: Concerning Charlotte
Excellent chapter. All the drama and pain for poor Charlotte. God forbid any of us has to go through that trauma, don't we all wish for a Dr. Swan.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 10:17 PM Title: Sympathetic Solitude
Thank you for clearing that up so fast. I can't imagine how hard it must be for an active adult male to be so cooped up with no outlet and no way to speed things up. Great insite into both Edward and Bella, of course we know they always gravitate back to each other. Patience, love, understanding.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 7:06 PM Title: Equivalency
I also love both Psych and Bones (I think both shows are underappreciated). Very insiteful, moving chapter.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:42 PM Title: Disturbed
I really love how you having Bella deal with everything that has traumatized her. She shows such strength, but how much she needs Edward also. Great job.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 5:52 AM Title: Focus Fluctuations
Right now your writing is amazing me. I really feel like I am so inside the characters, all of them and it's because of your wriing. I am truly amazed.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:36 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss
Wow, what an incredible person you have made Bella (and to think there actually are people who are as selfless as that). Very intense, angst filled chapter. You wouldn't dare let anything happen to Edward or the story would be over, but the wait is still exruciating.
Date: 19 Feb 2010 3:45 AM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Loved the costumes and the fact that the girls rocked! Emmett's reaction cracked me up :0)
Date: 19 Feb 2010 1:58 AM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
I'm so glad Esme said the things Edward couldn't, it brought the closure he needed so badly. I think the love story between these two characters transcend any situation and make them so easy to love. You have captured that so beautifully.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 10:10 PM Title: For The First Time
Yes, I agree this was much better than in a cheap motel. Edward is a dream :0)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 8:29 PM Title: For The First Time
That was the most romantic (& hottest) night ever. Great job with both. This Edward may be the Studward of all time.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 7:10 PM Title: Empowering and Contentment
It's so nice of them to help Tanya out. Wonder how the living situations will work out? Sounds like Balla would really like to live with Edward. I'm sure Alice and Jasper would have ended up living together soon too. I liked seeing Bella be so good at shooting. It was funny how Edward and Emmett changed the subject when it was mentioned she join the force. :0)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:08 PM Title: Truth Revealed
The visit with Elizabeth went really well. Glad Edward got some aswers and is feeling better about things. Still loving the story..... :0)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:48 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted
Great chapter! :0)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 6:58 AM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
I liked the song game. :0) Wonder if the whole Bella decoy thing will work? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 5:22 AM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
Oh what a relief! I'm so glad that didn't last long and they made up. :0) Great job!
Date: 18 Feb 2010 3:45 AM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
When Edward asked to meet Tanya the next day I knew the whole Bella thing was going to happen. I'm curious to see how all this works out.
Date: 18 Feb 2010 2:05 AM Title: The Unexpected
Rose is still planning on going out? Are the girls going to get themselves in trouble? :0) curious to see how the seperation goes. :0)
Date: 18 Feb 2010 1:20 AM Title: Truth Revealed
I loved the result of the visit with Elizabeth, very creative and not at all what I was expecting. Hot oral sex to Kings of Leon great! Oh the lemons I can just imagine.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 11:20 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
Just a quick review so I can just keep reading. Love this story! :0)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 9:35 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted
Lots of information in this chapter about E & B's past. His Mom, her being Annie Oakley and lots of lemony expectations. You're correct very well rounded.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:52 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
I don't mind the "kissy kissy face". lol You are right that is what a new relationship is like especially on as HOT as theirs. Just great! Bella's got bad guys working in the hospital with her. Love the story!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 6:34 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
Thank you for resolving that angst issue so quickly. Tanya is nothing but trouble (even if she doesn't mean to be). I don't understand how Edward's own mother didn't try and contact him, but I'm sure you'll resolve that also even though I don't know if I could forgive any excuses she comes up with.
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:52 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
so le t me see if i get this clear the new boss is the doctor?
Author's Response:
Bingo! Thanks for the review!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 3:44 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Guard duty :0) I like seeing the guys protective like that. Wow that Trevor really did end up being a real jerk didn't he??? :0) Reading on.....
Author's Response:
LOl..yes he did. I'm so glad you're enjoying and thanks for the reviews!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:51 AM Title: Perfection
Wow, what a perfect date. I'm so glad everything went so well and they both had a great time. Looking forward to seeing them grow closer :0)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 7:06 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum
this story is great and i lvoe all the concepts so far this story kick ass.....
Author's Response:
Thank you! I really hope you enjoy it!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 4:01 AM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Great chapter. I was dissapointed that their date got cancled but it all worked out. It was so sweet that he was there waiting for her. That was maybe even better than an actual date. :0)
Date: 17 Feb 2010 1:28 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum
I can't wait to find out how Trevor fits into all this. He must be important, because Mr. Clean wouldn't need to make money setting up girls for guys to pick up if he's that close to the mob. Hmmmmmmm......... What do you have up your sleeve, can't wait to find out.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're enjoying it! Thanks so much for the great reviews!
Date: 17 Feb 2010 12:50 AM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
Looks like maybe things are going to start being worked out between Edward and Bella? Hopefully? Yeah I'm a wimp when it comes to angsty relationship stuff. ha ha So Alice is moving in, that'll be nice for Bella. The rock band tournament sounds like it could be fun. :0) Really enjoying the story it's so hard to stop reading and do stuff that needs done like making dinner for the family. lol Great job!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 11:48 PM Title: Perfection
Great job! Everything Edward did was so thoughtful and so E & B. I loved how Edward didn't try to hide the bulge but was just honest about the way Bella affected him, very funny. Hopefully Edwards 2 weeks away for training won't be a problem between them (not that it should).
Date: 16 Feb 2010 9:41 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Not sure how I'm feeling about dear Bella's reaction here. He finally tells her and she freaks. How can she think he's lying does she really think Edward would just come out and say that if he didn't mean it??? I mean look at how long she's been waiting for him to do it and understanding about why. I know it's all to add drama but I really just can't wait for the misunderstandings to be over. haha Someone should lock them in a room together and not let them out until they've talked about everything and made sure there were no misunderstandings. :0) I'm off to read the next chapter. I'm loving the story. Great job!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 8:11 PM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
I'm sure things won't be smooth, but I'm so happy that Edward & Bella are going to try. Can't wait (I hope) for their first date.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:24 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I do think Bella was a bit over reactive, but she's loved Edward for so long and knows how he is that she just couldn't believe him even though she wanted to.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:22 PM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Can't wait to see what the guys do to keep Trevor away. Now that Edward has said he loves Bella. The thought of her going out with Trevor makes me feel ill. ha ha I'm going to keep on reading and see how this works out. :0) Great job!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:10 PM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Guess I was wrong about Trevor being linked with the Mafia, but sounds like he still might be an asshole. Hope Edward gets it together soon and that Bella is open enough to listen to him.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:02 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
Loved this chapter. It was fun seeing all the different sides of Edward and how the guys took care of "Mr.Clean". ha ha Edward finally realized and admitted he loves Bella. Now he just needs to let her know. I love how they ended up cuddled on the couch to sleep. Hope they are able to work things out. :0)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:54 PM Title: Femmes Night Out
Love the story! I hope when Bella wakes up she and Edward can really talk. I'm glad he got a chance to say what he did and I'm glad that she doesn't seem to be so mad at him at the moment. Going to go read more. :0)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:42 PM Title: Puppet Master J
So now Jasper gets involved. :0) I had wondered if he and Alice were going to get together and now it looks like they will. How long is Edward going to hide from Bella? What's she supposed to think when he doesn't even want to be in the same room with her?? :0) Great job!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:37 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
Fascinating, really good job. You made the whole chapter very exciting and brought the boys all home safely. I found all the SWAT stuff very exciting and of course Edward coming to his senses so early in the story made me happy. I have a feeling Trevor is going to be involved with the mob being he got called away just before the guys did.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:58 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
Always as you said making the wrong choices first, never fails. Kinda love Slutward though, he's just an idiot where love is concerned.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. We learn more and more about why as we go along. Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:32 AM Title: The Day From Hell
I really like how you gave a quick kickstart to Edward & Bella's feelings towards each other. Very exciting and fast paced story so far.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:43 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
This chapter made me want to look up some video's from Pink and listen to them. :0) Bella seems like a great doctor, taking all that time to put together that packet for Mrs.L. I really like Mama D. :0) Looking forward to the Femmes night out.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you're still enjoying it. I hope you like the rest!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:56 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
Well I don't hate Edward. Yes I wish he had made better choices, but he did try to do the right thing. It was just the wrong girl. Hopefully once Bella has calmed down a bit she'll give him a chance to talk. Guess I'll find out as I read on... Love the story. Great job!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 5:03 AM Title: The Day From Hell
Yay! They kissed! I had a funny feeling Andy was going to wake up or that someone was going to walk in. ha ha Great chapter. I really like the story so far. :0)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 4:02 AM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
Awww they like each other. I wonder what it will take for them both to realize it. :0) I really enjoyed this chapter. I love that I can just keep on reading and not have to wait for an update. :0)
Author's Response:
I"m glad I was able to get it all up. Thanks again for the review! Hope you keep enjoying.
Date: 16 Feb 2010 2:50 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
I had this story favorited over on ff waiting for it to be complete and just hadn't gotten around to reading it yet. Glad I found it here. Really liked this first chapter. Now I'm moving on to the next one. :0)
Author's Response:
I really hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review!
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:39 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Great beginning, has my interest and can't wait to see where you're taking it.
Author's Response:
I hope you enjoy it. It's all here now save for the summer outtakes :)
Date: 16 Feb 2010 1:33 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
I was going to hold onto her for as long as God would allow. I wished for forever, but I'd settle for another five minutes.
That was so sweet of him *.*
Date: 15 Feb 2010 11:05 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
just found this story and I like it so far :)
Author's Response:
Thanks...I hope you like the rest...It's a long one, but I love to do a lot of twists and turns :)
Date: 15 Feb 2010 9:50 PM Title: Femmes Night Out
Trevor is a doctor, I'm 99% sure.
Author's Response:
Hee,hee,hee.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2010 9:41 PM Title: Warmth In the Darkness
I just wanted to say that I read you on FF and loved it. I'm glad that you brought it here where it will be safe.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm sad that I'll probably be forced to remove it soon, but I'm happy to have this safe and easy place to bring it. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 2:28 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
i loving this site all my favourite stories keep popping up, i leave this note to any readers like me who skim reviews to get a idea if a story is being enjoyed or not, my advise is READ THIS STORY IT IS AN AMAZING TALE i wont give away any plot but you wont be dissapointed it is fabulously well written and keeps you on the edge of your seat,
to a cullen wannabe i read this on twilighted, reviewed there, and loved it thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support here tracy!!! I remember your reviews and was very grateful for them on Twilighted and for leaving this for twcs readers!!!
Date: 15 Feb 2010 4:45 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Bella needs a boyfriend.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 11:19 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
I really want to wait for you tu update here, but I'm not exactly a patient person, specially when I know the story is already completed on FF. But I'll come back to leave you reviews :D
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:47 PM Title: The Day From Hell
Andy is very wise, I was afraid he was going to die.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:15 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
Slutward, hahaha, that's a good nickname. Edward should have been more intelligent, did he tought Bella was going to live in the dark forever and not notice he was sleeping around? Nah, silly Bella is not so silly.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it...that was an inspiration if I ever had one! LOL! :)
Date: 14 Feb 2010 8:27 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
My English is not perfect, I had problems undestanding this phrase :as well as League vets Joey, Andy, Jasper, and Edward ogle the never-ending procession of two bit, dime a dozen hussies tripping in and out of the front door in their six inch stilettos taking bets on which one they would end up bedding tonight xD.
I liked the summary and this first chapter was very good, the banner also helped xD
I hope you don't have to delete your stories from FF.
Author's Response:
Sorry. Basically she's saying that the boys are constantly staring at and trying to hit on all the women. The women are fake and pretty much alike in how they look and act wearing tight clothes and high heels so high that they're practically tripping as they walk through the door coming into the bar or going out. Sorry, that was a lot of American Slang crammed into one sentence. Hope you're enjoying the rest of the story!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 6:54 PM Title: The Day From Hell
Brilliant plot bunny! :)
Author's Response:
Glad you've enjoyed it!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 6:48 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
I love that she calle him Slutward!
I think Shmuckward works well
too! Glad my fovorite authors
have moved to TWCS! :)
Author's Response:
LOl...glad you like that :) Yep...I'm here. Not getting many reviews, but that's to be expected with such a new site :)