Date: 28 Mar 2010 5:52 PM Title: Everything
Loved the reception. The songs were great for all the dances.
I can't believe this story is over. I have enjoyed reading it so much! I can't wait for the epilogue and the summer outtakes. This was a very well-written, well-planned story. It never seemed to get too over-the-top in the drama or fluff departments. It had a good balance throughout.
I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future. :)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:31 PM Title: Reaching Into the Darkness
This was intense........you've had me tearing up for a couple chapters now, but the DAD business is really getting to me. *snif snif*
The entire story is beautifully written I am enjoying your plot and characters thouroughly. Thank You!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:00 AM Title: For The First Time
that - hands down - was THE BEST lemon/smut I have EVER read.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
Love Bella's dress. So perfect for a beach wedding. The picture of your daughter is adorable!
I loved their vows, and that te judge announced their name change at the ceremony. It's all official now. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2010 6:10 PM Title: Disturbed
Yeah, it is going to take a while for Bella to be completely well. But I loved the idea of her going to the gym throw some punches to the Big Bag. I think it was a great way for her to free herself from all the anger.
Anyway, loved B & E moments, of course. They're too sweet and adorable. :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 5:35 PM Title: Connecting the 'Future' Dots
So happy they got their plot of land to build their dream house.
It is so true that you think you are so smart after you've been drinking. :) I was giggling as I read their conversation. Too funny!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 4:32 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
Aww, baby Emmalie. I love that name and the spelling for Emmett and Rosalie. :)
So glad the trial is over, and the hospital was cleared! I'm hoping the last paragraph is true that there are only good things to come in the future.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:56 PM Title: On The Hot Seat
Agh! This just makes me hate slimy lawyers even more. :) Yay for Bella for being able to tell her story, and explain why the lawsuits are ridiculous.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Gearing Up and Getting Off
I think I would have been more angry if I were Bella and my fiance comes barging through the door at night when I expected him to be gone one more night. That would have scared the shit out of me too. :)
Can't wait for the trial!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 2:26 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Great story, thanks for writing it!
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:43 AM Title: Pressure
Rose better not pop that baby out before Emmett gets home. :)
I don't understand why Charlie teaching Bella how to shoot will be an issue, but I"m sure you will explain it all. I should have known nothing is ever easy in this story.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 1:40 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
That is hilarious! It seems so obvious when you see it written out like that. :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:18 AM Title: Rock On
Great songs for all the groups. I loved the encore for Mama D.
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:16 AM Title: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers
Love the shirts that Alice made. Too funny!
PEN15 - hee hee
Author's Response:
LOL...you would not believe how many people didn't understand it...even after my A/N hint. LOL! My hubby's cousin's rents still haven't figured it out! LOL
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:12 AM Title: The Human Incubators
I like that you made Tanya a sympathetic character. So often she is portrayed as the villain, and I never saw her as that big of a threat to E&B. I liked being able to understand more about her background
LOVE the Human Incubators. Too cute. Uh oh, Tanya. As soon as you swear off men, a good one comes along. :)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 12:10 AM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
I knew it was going to be him! Finally, he is brought to justice!
I would have liked to see Rose ot Emmett go off of Royce, but I can't have it all. ;)
The mirrors. Don't think I need to say anything more than that.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:53 PM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
Ah, this is going to be quick, since I have an idea whose voice she heard, but I'm really curious.
I am so happy with their decisions for life after her residency - babies, free clinics, training facilities. It all seems to fit them so well.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:28 PM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
This was such a great chapter. Seeing how Bella and Emmett were when they were little and a little bit more into their lives with their parents.
I'm hoping more of the SWAT guys will follow Emmett's lead, only because it would be so odd if Jasper or Andy stayed while everyone else left. It wouldn't seem complete. :)
Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:24 AM Title: The World Spins Madly On
Definitely needed the tissues. :)
Very powerful chapter. I have Fan Fiction to thank for introducing me to The Weepies. I don't remember which story it was, but they used a different song o theirs that I loved, and downloaded several of their albums. Great music, and so fitting for this scene. Looking forward to the rest of the trip and hoping for some fun Emmett and Bella stories.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 3:05 AM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
I totally loved how you had this chapter take place in Springfield( which is my home town) and was interesting reading about the different places they went and hung out at that I go to a lot!
Author's Response:
That's cool. I went to UIS for two years...so I was sticking to what I know...LOL!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: A Raft In The Flood
Hee hee. I love that Bella called Edward out on what he was keeping from her. He should know that she would realize something was up.
Very cool about the SWAT training center. What a great way for Edward to stay connected, but safe, and he has the financial resources to do it.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:29 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Your description of his bedroom was awesome! I usually have a very hard time picturing a room that an author is describing because they leave out the part of WHERE the bed is actually at. By the window doesn't count if I can't SEE where the window IS. Or when some authors say that the bed is against the western wall - how the hell am I supposed to know where north south east west is? To the right of the door was P-E-R-F-E-C-T!! Thank you!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 12:50 AM Title: Surfacing From the Deep
The hits just keep on coming. I'm glad you did the chapter with Emmett and Carlisle's POVs, or else this would have seemed like a lot. Don't get me wrong, this is a lot to process, and it is so sad for Edward to be kicked off the SWAT team. Poor Carlisle, having to deal with all these ridiculous lawsuits, too. I'm keeping hope that things will work out in the end.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:31 PM Title: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares
That sounds like a perfect wedding for these two. Can't wait to see it all, and hear more about her dress.
And Bella is starting to face her ER fears - yay!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:18 PM Title: Perfection
Oh no.. the Red Wings would have SCHOOLED the Blackhawks - hands down! Osgood would have never let Kane take that shot! LOL..
I've been reading this story since yesterday and I have to say - I can not stop reading it!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 11:14 PM Title: Outside The Bubble
So sad that there were so many repercussions after that day. It makes sense, and each one seems very valid - but still sad. I'm not looking forward to all that coming to a head.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 10:59 PM Title: A Happy New Year
Cullen! I love it. I never saw that coming, but it is so perfect for them.
This was a hot chapter. I want whatever Mama D put in their drinks. :)
Author's Response:
Don't we all...LOL! Glad you enjoyed that. I thought I was being so obvious. I've been surprised how many people didn't guess it ahead of time.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 10:14 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
This whole story has been incredible! I hope you are doing more stories because you are a very good writer.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:58 PM Title: Reaching Into the Darkness
I'm so sad that Bella is going through that. It's normal after what she handled with the sick bastard that was Triger, though. I'm sure Edward's gonna help her in everything she needs. :)
That little moment in the end of the chapter between Edward and Carlisle was great. He certainly deserves to be called 'Dad'.
Awesome chapter!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:43 PM Title: Warmth In the Darkness
Yay! He woke up!! :)
Great chapter. And that nurse...what a fucking bitch!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:21 PM Title: For The Love of Esme
It was interesting, this POV. Now I understand her better. She's so caring, kind and just...GOOD. Not that I already didn't know that, but now it's even clearer.
I can't wait for Edward to wake up. I hope he remember what both Bella and Esme said to him during his coma.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:12 PM Title: The Name Game
Swamsen - love it!
I'm hoping I didn't miss whatever Edward is thinking about at the end of this chapter, but I'm intrigued.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:11 PM Title: Focus Fluctuations
Wow, this was sad but one of the best chapters. It is written with such deep, intense emotion. Seriously, I loved it.
I especially loved to read the flashback when Edward told Bella about his birthmark and the way his heart responded to what she was telling him.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 7:00 PM Title: Declarations
Great Christmas gifts for both B&E. Love the ornaments and rings. And the car! lol
I'm so happy they are engaged. It was fast but so right for them.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 6:04 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
Oh God... :( so sad.
Bella handled the situation so well...she's such a strong woman. And Edward...God, he can't die!!
This was a wonderful chapter, so amazingly written...thank you!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:24 PM Title: Underneath It All
Oh God, the prologue is next. A twin brother...wow, that was unexpected.
"Get a good night's sleep though...you are definitely going to need it!" - Carlisle couldn't be more right...
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:49 PM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
OMG...I can't believe the prologue is close. I'm scared of what's going to happen...
Esme really is his mom and Edward knows that. I hate that he is sad, but I'm so glad he has Bella to comfort him. These two are too adorable and sweet. :)
Wonderful chapter!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:12 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I had just found this story and have been reading it for the past three day. One of the best I have read. Love it. cannot wait to read more of your stories. Great job.
Author's Response:
I"m so glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:42 PM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Great chapter. Loved Edward as James Dean..yummy!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 2:34 AM Title: For The First Time
The love-making was so, so, SO perfect! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:17 PM Title: Empowering and Contentment
They're so adorable together. What a love! I agree with Bella, I think it's a bit too soon for her to move in to Edward's apartment. I mean, I want them to live together, but I can't help but be a little afraid of how they're gonna take it. Hmm, I dunno.. but yeah...
Great chapter, btw! As always..
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:31 PM Title: Concerning Charlotte
I'm hoping to see more interaction with the rest of the group. It's been very B&E focused lately - as it should have been after the attack. I look forward to seeing Bella shopping with Alice before Christmas.
Poor little Charlotte. I understand Bella needs to learn to keep a distance with her patients, but the poor thing is only 6. So sad.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:13 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
Ahh! I love Nickelback-Far Away. That is the perfect song for Edward loving Bella!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:58 PM Title: Home
Finally out of the hospital and able to get some 'release' ;)
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:45 PM Title: Truth Revealed
Another wonderful chapter...
I loved it, it was so hot and sexy near the end.
About Elizabeth...yeah, I kind of understand her reasons but Edward shouldn't forgive her so soon. I think she has to prove him that she loves and cares for him.
Loved the little comment about children and how Edward seemed to love the idea. :) He really loved Bella...how sweet.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:15 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Date: 24 Mar 2010 5:46 PM Title: Sympathetic Solitude
Go Emmett! Edward deserved to be read the riot act with how rude he was acting to Bella.
Looks like Bella will find her way through peds with her new hero. :) Hopefully, she can help Charlotte smile some more.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 5:27 PM Title: The Unexpected
Aww! I love "madly in love edward"
The whole ring thing was the cutest and most romantic thing ever!
Now I'm just scared about what will happen now that the guys are gone for a week :/
Date: 24 Mar 2010 5:01 PM Title: Crankward
I really hope something starts turning around for Tanya. The poor thing just seems so beaten down.
I was so happy Bella was going to be able to ge back into her internship, but that was a rude awakening for her. What a jerk!
Speaking of jerks, your A/N says Edward has his reasons so I'm off to find out what those are. Poor Bella - what a crappy day all around.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 4:38 AM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
so as odd as it is my hubby lived in beardstown, went to elem schhol in lincoln (ZionY was on the swim team there and such. lol i went to wiu in macomb for a yr and a half so am very familiar w the area. i grew up in a small town in co and we did many of the same things. i actually learned how to swim in an irrigation ditch-- i dont recommend it!
Author's Response:
Wow...it really is such a small world! Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:06 AM Title: Getting Reacquainted
Beautiful :) I'm glad Tanya is not a bitch in this. I'm kinda tired that the poor girl is always a bad person in stories.
They're waiting 'til Friday..hmm...can't wait to see what the hell is Edward planning to do to make it perfect. :)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:02 AM Title: Equivalency
So glad to see things starting to look positive for our favorite couple. Obviously, there are still many chapters, and much more recovery of for both, but this was a nice break in the heartache for E&B.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:32 PM Title: Disturbed
Yay Bella. Slowly, slowly, she will get there. Love Emmett taking her to beat the crap out of the hanging bag. Sometimes you do just need to take out all your frustrations on something tangible.
Not sure what to make of the 3 cocky cops. I'm a little concerned about the guys' reaction to their reaction to meeting Bella.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:01 PM Title: Reaching Into the Darkness
Great moment with Carlisle and Edward at the end.
I keep thinking 'poor Bella' when Edward is the one who got shot. But I realize that although Edward may have been physically harmed, Bella's wounds go much deeper, and will take wuite some time to heal.
I'm kind of curious if we are ever going to get resolution with Trevor Sellers. I don't like that he got to slink away from all the drama.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:15 PM Title: Warmth In the Darkness
Edward is finally back and awake. I see a long road to recovery with him and Bella, but hopefully they will be able to help each other.
What a great smackdown between Bella and the bitchy nurse! :)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:10 PM Title: For The Love of Esme
I like this chapter with the background on Esme. To see how she has transitioned into the role as mom for Edward is both heartbreaking and yet so sweet.
I love Esme and Carlisle. They seem so solid.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:05 PM Title: Focus Fluctuations
Poor Bella. I have a feeling she is going to be on almost as long a road of recovery as Edward. I don't know if I could have continued reading if you had killed him off, so I am very pleased that it seems he'll be okay.
I love that his heart rate is affected by Bella being around him.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 12:01 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
So I had to come back and review this chapter since I had to read the next chapter to make sure everything turned out okay. :)
Great chapter! Great drama but the cliffhanger just about gutted me.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:19 AM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
This chapter was so perfect, the pranks, the memories... But now I know for sure my high school years were really boring xD.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:45 PM Title: Underneath It All
I was glad to see the extra information about Bella and her feelings regarding her parents' deaths. It was interesting to know more about her background.
Why couldn't she have just read the bottom half of the newspaper?!? :) Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
Go Esme! I am very happy that she stood up to Elizabeth. It seemed that Edward was too accepting of her excuses. She had a lot more to take responsibility for, and I am glad Esme forced her to do that.
I only feel worse for Tanya knowing she is now pregnant. I could sort of see where Bella was coming from, but she seemed to overreact a little in my mind. I like that everything is sorted out now, and it seems like E&B are okay with everything. I just never know in this story. :)
Can't wait for the Prologue chapter!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:20 AM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
So happy for Emmett and Rose. And it helped clear up all the confusion with the living situation and provide the perfect place for Tanya.
Rock Band was great! Thanks for the visuals of the costumes, they are awesome.
I'm definitely worries about Trager being MIA. it's too easy for people to get lazy.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:47 AM Title: For The First Time
Finally, THE Friday. You definitely did not disappoint. :)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 12:12 AM Title: Empowering and Contentment
Gotta love Bella being able to handle a gun like a pro. Annie Oakley, indeed.
Love that Bella is doing so much to get Tanya back to Chicago. It will be really interesting to see how the living situations all shake out.
I loved Edward's realization of what a real relationship is about - the contentment.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:34 PM Title: Truth Revealed
I really wasn't sure what to expect regarding Elizabeth when she was first introduced this chapter. I do think she had a good explanation, but I also feel Edward caved a little too easily. But, it makes sense since he was almost desperate to know why she left him.
Love KoL - and a great use of one of their awesome songs!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 2:46 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted
I am liking Tanya right now. I hope she is as honest as she seems, and comes back to Chicago somehow. I like that Bella sees how similar their situations are, and how she could easily have ended up just like Tanya is now.
Edward says he has a big plan for Friday to make everything perfect - can't wait for it.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:37 AM Title: Outside The Bubble
Carlisle is so sweet, I'm in love with that man.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 2:44 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
Great songs for those two! I am curious about the songs for when Edward screws up. :)
I like Melissa. I hope we get to see more of her later in the story. Not only for Jake's sake, but she seems like a strong woman to accept the risks she is taking being Bella's double.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:06 AM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
They aren't going to be able to trust anyone other than themselves, soon. I feel kind of bad for Tony, and he at least called up to Bella, but he's going to lose his son anyway from Trager's point of view.
Very happy that Bella has her ring back, and so glad that Emmett explained everything to Bella.
Date: 20 Mar 2010 12:00 AM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
Oh Bella. You have such crappy timing. I can understand her reactions though. When all of her previous relationships ended with infidelity, and then she sees Slutward appear, she has a right to be heartbroken. She was stupid leaving town alone, but she has a right to be hurt and angry.
I'm assuming Edward's mother will return and that story will be fleshed out eventually. I'm curious to see how that plays out.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 11:57 PM Title: The Unexpected
Love Alice's disdain over TGI Friday's. It's just so her.
This was a fun chapter and then some added drama at the end. Love the ring. Thanks for the picture too. I have always loved the meanings behind the Claddaugh.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:07 AM Title: Empowering and Contentment
their night together is getting closer.
i can't believe how good bella can shoot. i love the first part when edwards tells her not to worry she will get better.favorite part. knew jacob would be having fun with melissa, way to go jake. so i am glad they are trying to help Tanya. i am glad that she is accepting the help. she deserves a break. i sure hope she doesn't get mixed up with the wrong people.
love it
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:38 AM Title: Truth Revealed
ahhh i never expected that story. gossebumps and the chills
elizabeth you did a good thing by keeping your son safe and turning him over to your sister. i know edward had alot of questions nad was really hurt by all her actions but it seems like he got alot of answers and they are in a better place. poor bella never did anything to elizabeth. i am glad she said sorry to bella. well maybe one day edward and bella will be in on the family mantle and their kids as well.
road head you go edward. OMG 300 hundred million or billion holy shit prenuptial thats fer sure. you know edward wont make her. love it
Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
ok started this on fanfiction and it was good i finished it here an it was goood i liked it going to see what eles you have to read
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:07 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Great story. I wish I was around when you were writing this chpt by chpt as it took me ages to read in one sitting but well worth it. I am going to let some of my friends know about this story , if they dont already. Thanks for sharing your talent
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:48 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
They are just so cute together. The chapter may not have had a ton of action, but just seeing E&B together was nice.
I'm hoping Jake won't be an issue. As much as I am not a fan of Jacob as a romantic interest for Bella, I really like him as the friend he is supposed to be.
So excited for next chap, and to learn more about the EAM playlist. :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:02 AM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
i think it is cute melissa and jake. seems he might have a bit of a crush on melissa. man to get a years worth of salary for a weeks worth of work. i know she is putting herself out there got to love it
i do not understand why the kids did not finish out there 2nd week. won't they get in trouble for leaving the way they did?
love it
Author's Response:
Well, actually it ended up being a break between the end of the first part and the beginning of the second half at a new location. They had down time, which is why the girls decided to make the trip. So, no trouble, they were just waiting for the rest to start the next week.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:41 AM Title: Disturbed
The guys had the right idea by taking Bella to the gym.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:11 AM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
well that was defenitely action packed. now I know why Tony was helping scum but. he was trying to protect his son. i am glad he warned bella but man he made it worse for himself and his son. now what
the guys got there in time. my heart broke when she throw the ring at edward. for once he wasn't being the player just wrong place wrong time. i don't think it will be the only time for that to happen as much of playboy that he was.
love it
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:45 AM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
wow, training has been a blast and alot of hard work they sure do bust there asses. i am so proud of my boys.
well the last person i expected to see at the bar is tanya and edwards mom. for some reason i thought she was died. my bad
poor bella i wish she would of waiting to see whta was going o like she did with lauren instead of making such a rash decision. then she leaves on a train to boot silly girl. love it
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:11 AM Title: The Unexpected
the ring is beautiful, love edward
i laughed so hard in this chapter. i so love all of them
i love this story
watch your backs girls
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:10 AM Title: Bonding and Plotting
Yay! They are defined as in a relationship! Always an important clarificaton to make. :)
I'm glad to see there is a plan for while the guys are in MN. I'm still a little worried something is going to happen, but I have faith in you.
Love how Slutward is turning into Sweetward. Hope he stays around for a while. Especially since Trevor "the new boss" seems even more dangerous than first imagined. Maybe I was onto something when I thought he was either a drug dealer or a doctor - perhaps he's both? Both would explain a page in the middle of the night.
The storyline is really starting to pick up. I hate that I have to signoff for the night, but here's hoping that work will be slow tomorrow and I'll be able to squeeze a couple chaps in.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:03 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Love the pictures of them in his frame. I think it is more realistic that he didn't see what was right in front of him. Most people don't. ;)
Ugh, that Trevor guy just gives me chills all the time - just like Bella. I'm thinking he has something to do with the prologue, but I'm really curious how it all ties together. Your last A/N said we had a while yet for that scene to play out, so hopefully I'll get to read more tomorrow. :)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:48 AM Title: Reaching Into the Darkness
No word on the status of Trevor Sellers yet? Bella is so young, why does she still feel the need to fast track? She could easily take some time off and resume her internship at a later date and still be ahead of most people her age.
I like how you've made Bella's character so strong, intelligent, and independent for the most part. Hope she doesn't get too bogged down in post traumatic stress syndrome. Particularly since she has a strong support system of friends and family.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:00 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
Edward's profession in this chapter was your best writing so far -- nicely done! Thank you for sharing this story, you have lots of good ideas.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:51 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss
Oh. My. God!!!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 9:55 AM Title: Underneath It All
Ahhh! I was going to go to bed after this chapter, now I can't. Must read on to see how it all plays out...
Re last chapter's review. If my comment on the a/n announcing the prologue doesn't make sense, it's because I read prologue but for some reason (sleep deprivation maybe) my mind was thinking epilogue!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:50 AM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
Wahoo! You go Esme... She knows how to put her sister in her place.
Now it's baby mama drama time with Tanya. If she's so beautiful, she won't have any problems finding herself a Doctor. Oh No! Dr Sellers? She's as big a danger magnet as Bella. The Mob Doc will worm his way into their lives one way or another won't he...
Prologue is really close? Still 34 more chapters to go, not quite half way yet. Like I said earlier, one of the advantages of being late to the party...
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:42 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Well bella heard for her self what type of guy trevor was and is. watch out ladies
so now a big red target what will we do. I am thinking why can't the girls stay together for safety or what about esme and carlisle. he does go to the hospital. got to keep her safe.
i love it all
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:49 AM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Very entertaining :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Perfection
i so loved there first date. he put so much thought into it. he knew what she would like and went for it and turned out to be awesome. I had so much fun on going on the date with them
thanx
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:23 AM Title: Perfection
I am really enjoying watching B&E's relationship unfold. It's comfortable, but still has a spark to it. What a great date for them at well. And all leading up to a first real kiss. By real I mean one that's not made in a time of stress/anger/emotional upheaval. Love it!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:52 AM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
well edward has come through in my book
i am so glad he went and waited for her at the hospital instead of getting pissy that he was stood up. they both have jobs that take alot from them time wise and emotionally. man edward you out did your self
love it
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I just finished reading your beautiful and wonderful story. I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Your writing was so very touching. I laughed and cryed. I want you to know that I read it continiously from beginning to end. You made this story of Edward and Bells so beautiful, just like their Twilight relationship. True love forever. THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME WRITING AND FOR MAKING MY LIFE JUST A LITTLE LESS STRESSFUL AS I WAS ABLE TO INVOLVED WITH THEIR LIVES. I am looking forward for the outakes. Thank you again. Sherri
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I just finished reading your beautiful and wonderful story. I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Your writing was so very touching. I laughed and cryed. I want you to know that I read it continiously from beginning to end. You made this story of Edward and Bells so beautiful, just like their Twilight relationship. True love forever. THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME WRITING AND FOR MAKING MY LIFE JUST A LITTLE LESS STRESSFUL AS I WAS ABLE TO INVOLVED WITH THEIR LIVES. I am looking forward for the outakes. Thank you again. Sherri
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I just finished reading your beautiful and wonderful story. I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading. Your writing was so very touching. I laughed and cryed. I want you to know that I read it continiously from beginning to end. You made this story of Edward and Bells so beautiful, just like their Twilight relationship. True love forever. THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME WRITING AND FOR MAKING MY LIFE JUST A LITTLE LESS STRESSFUL AS I WAS ABLE TO INVOLVED WITH THEIR LIVES. I am looking forward for the outakes. Thank you again. Sherri
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: For The First Time
Holy Hot Damn Batman!!!! All men should be required to learn how to gratify a woman by reading Twi Fan Fic. Lord knows how many men out there are benefitting from having their better halfs reading it...
BTW, excellent playlist, thank you!!!!
PNW Luna aka Bella Luna on Twilighted
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:40 AM Title: Underneath It All
WWWWOOOOOWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 8:12 PM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Aww, Edward has his dazzling smile back. :)
It was too bad the original date got scrapped, but it was great to see Edward at hospital waiting for her. Plus, they got a quasi-date out of it anyway.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 7:47 PM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
So happy for Rosalie and Emmett! And it creates the perfect opportunity for Alice to move in. She needed to be included a little more, and being someone who had to move in with mom & dad after college, I totally understand her desire to get out. It was the longest year of my life! :)
Edward is finally figuring it out - yay!
Rock Band tournaments - awesome!