[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 10:42 PM Title: Home
awww i love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2010 9:19 PM Title: Sympathetic Solitude
I love it! I didn't comment on the other chapter because I read and comment them on fanfiction. I found that you posted them on here so I decided to join and read it. I love it!
Date: 12 Jul 2010 10:38 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
What a lovely story, it has taken me 3 1/2 days to reach the end and i have enjoyed each and every chapter. You are a wonderful writer and it is written so eloquentely. Only thing i would wish for was perhaps a little more...action? All the build up with the prologue for how Bella's boys would save her and it was over so quick. Granted there was more than just one type of saving going on, but that is my only wish for this story. Other than that...WONDERFUL, GREAT, Absolutely readable. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 12 Jul 2010 6:55 AM Title: Bonding and Plotting
I'm really enjoying this story so far & I love the plot! I just have to comment on Slutward's extra-curricular activites though. I mean holy crap- he's 27 years old & hasn't gone more than a week without sleeping with a different girl?! Up until this chapter I knew he was a man whore, but that's really just disturbing! I'm a HUGE Edward fan & usually he can do no wrong, but let me just say that Bella must really love him to be able to look past THAT MANY girls & I hope to goodness he gets tested before she sleeps with him! Ok- now that I'm done ranting about fictional characters, I can't wait to read more! Thanks! *mwah* :)
Date: 01 Jul 2010 4:25 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I loved this story and am so happy that I followed you over to twcs from fanfiction... can't wait to read more or your work :)
Date: 28 Jun 2010 2:01 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
wow....you are quickly becoming my favourite author!!! I love the way you write. this is a great first chapter, I can't beleive how addicted I'm getting already!! :)
Date: 27 Jun 2010 8:34 AM Title: Everything
Ack! I hate that the story is over! I loved this one and the writing was absolutely wonderful! I can't wait to read more of your stories. Thank you!! Now on to the epilogue!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 8:11 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
Le sigh... The wedding was gorgeous, everything about it was perfect! As always Edward is so romantic and sweet to his Bella. Too bad there aren't more real men out there like him. But I'll take him here any time! ;)
And your daughter is a beautiful little angel!!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 5:21 AM Title: On The Hot Seat
The trial chapter was great! You did a wonderful job writing it. The night before her appearance was friggin' hot, too!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2010 12:44 AM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
OH, no...was that Sellers she heard laughing at the restaurant?
Date: 26 Jun 2010 11:59 PM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
I grew up in Nawth Calina and graduated from Stephens College in Missouri so I can say I know all about cow tipping. I also did the speeding car down country roads, made wheelies, drank Boone's Farm, used a rope to swing out into the lake, tp'd the yards of our crushes in high school ("tp" is to get toilet paper and throw it up into trees and it's beautiful if done correctly looking like ladies adorned in whisps of fabric), and a myriad of other stunts. I was a "good girl" so I didn't do anything too bad nor did I get caught or arrested. But I had a wonderful time growing up!!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 11:26 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
Yes, you were correct...a few tissues later I must say that was a beautiful chapter and well written.
Date: 26 Jun 2010 10:45 PM Title: A Raft In The Flood
Love the lemons and that B&E are communicating extremely well. Even with the bad news they are both being optimistic about the future. I love the idea of Edward possibly opening a training facility as that is perfect for him (and his best buds). And I love the wedding plans!
This story is exceptional as is the writing! I'm so glad I found you on ffn and followed you to twcs!
Date: 26 Jun 2010 12:56 AM Title: For The Love of Esme
The chapter was short but it's perfect as it gave the background for Esme/Carlisle, Liz/Ed and Edward. I wouldn't have written anything more or less.
Date: 25 Jun 2010 11:41 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
Dang. Even though I knew Edward would be the one to get hurt I still cried!
Date: 25 Jun 2010 10:52 PM Title: Underneath It All
Well, chickies, the dreaded doomsday has finally arrived! The next chapter will be a good one because the writing is excellent!! I knew the feds didn't have the right guy. I still can't understand why this SWAT team of intelligent guys didn't see it coming. Love is blind...
Date: 25 Jun 2010 4:19 AM Title: For The First Time
"Man I was one damn lucky woman!" Uh, no shit! This was a beautifully loving chapter and one those two lovers needed.
Date: 24 Jun 2010 10:19 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
Even though this is about the last chapter I still can't get the slimey James out of my mind. It's going to be tense while the boys are away and leave James time to play. And I can't believe that Edward never realized that James was following him that day but then Edward had his head in the clouds so he was very distracted which is a bad, bad way to be in his line of work.
Now back to this chapter - it's going to be a good night for two of the couples. Maybe B&E can have a little citrus, too!
Date: 24 Jun 2010 12:01 AM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I feel for them both! A day late and an emotion late...they can't seem to get on the same page at the same time. It's all about timing, peeps, of which they truly suck at horribly!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:40 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Eddie, Eddie, Eddie. Such an involuntary screw-up. But Dr. B needs this Femmes night out and hopefully it will make Slutward a very jealous little pup if it all times out correctly. This will be delicious!
Date: 23 Jun 2010 2:09 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
OH, the angst of it all...tsk tsk tsk...Slutward is always dicking around in life and his poor, feeble brain.
Date: 23 Jun 2010 12:54 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
I can tell this is going to be a good ride!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 6:46 PM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
Real life intervened and I never finished this, I had forgotten how good it is, I do love these characters.
Author's Response:
Well, i'm glad you're back to it. I hope you enjoy it!
Date: 15 Jun 2010 1:07 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
That was amazingly well done...just so you know.
Author's Response:
'Thank you for reading and for the review.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2010 2:37 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I must say I have throughly enjoyed this story. I have laughed, cried, and down right guffawed at times. You are an AMAZING writer. This story was an absolute joy to read!
Author's Response:
Awe...thank you so, so much! I really appreciate hearing things like that. I'm so glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 10:29 PM Title: On The Hot Seat
I don't normal write review for each chapter, but I had to this time. Today just happens to be Monday, June 14th! What a coincedence that is the date you choose for your story. By the way, I am LOVING this story so much! I'm sad that I can only read it from home. I miss reading it at work, but I can't get this web site at work. I ruch home everyday just to read until late in the night. You are an EXCELLENT writer!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 3:22 PM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
ok now I have to fan my face to get the tears off.
GO ESME!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2010 1:11 PM Title: Truth Revealed
awwwwwwwww i love me some happy endings :)
Date: 14 Jun 2010 5:46 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
Amazing story, the wedding (in my head) was beautiful!
Congratulations on the success of the story and completing the whole thing, you have quite the imagination!
I think you should change the names and twilight refrences and publish it as a novel because it is just so good.
Well done, thank you
Ngaio
ps, thank you so much for explaining all the things that people out side the US wouldn't understand, it made the story much better for me (all the way from New Zealand) oh and your daughter is adorable!
Date: 09 Jun 2010 5:09 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Wow. I don't normally read AH fictions because they don't always come off right in terms of the characters. Even if you changed a few things around (because I could never really see Edward as a player), I found that you kept the character basics true to the book. In general, this novel is one of the best things I've read, in fanfiction and in original fiction. I can't wait to read your other stories!
Author's Response:
Oh wow...thank you so much. You don't know how much it pleases me to hear that. I hope you enjoy my other stories. I think this was probably the best I've ever written. It certainly got the most response. Thanks again.
Date: 07 Jun 2010 4:57 AM Title: Declarations
I'm sure Edward didn't need to touch his trust considering he does own an appartment building that he gets monthly payments.
Date: 06 Jun 2010 11:12 AM Title: Outside The Bubble
I liked that chapter a lot, thanks for the story : )
Date: 04 Jun 2010 7:33 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
Huh, I'm assuming he's the one that sticks up the hospital to get to Bella & Alice?
Date: 03 Jun 2010 2:14 AM Title: Puppet Master J
I fucking love Andy, he's so blunt. :D
Date: 02 Jun 2010 9:25 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Wow, I can see why Bella wouldn't go for him if he sleeps around that much. Edward seems to indicate love there, not the way to get it returned lol
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:00 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Hi, I read the first part of your story on another website (reading rest here) and I think it amazing!
To be totally honest if you took the twilight out of it and got a little help editing and stuff this would be an awesome real story! (as in it is way to good to be fan fic!)
I just love the bond between Em and Bella,
I have always wanted a older brother just like Emmitt (or Jazz or Edward) in stead of being the oldest :P
Thank you so much for your story
Author's Response:
Thank you. I really appreciate your compliments. The hardest thing for me if I ever did change it to publish, would be removing all that music. With copyright laws, etc, there's no way I could publish with the lyrics and all of the songs, and I feel like that's a major part of the heart and soul of this story. You may not have gotten that far yet, but music plays a very key role in this story. I used it to convey a lot of feelings that the characters had difficulty relaying in their own words. What you said truly was the mother of all compliments though and I'm truly grateful. Later this month TWCS is doing an original story contest and I'm going to enter the story I've been working on. Winner gets offered a publishing contract with the group's new publishing house.
I really enjoyed writing the bond between Em and Bella, probably mostly because I'm an only child. I had a few cousins who lived with us a while who felt like siblings, and one I was very, very close to, but that's about it. So I was sort of living vicariously in that respect. I really do hope you enjoy the rest of the story! Thanks for coming over to finish it and for the review.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 1:19 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
A cullen Wannabe
Just finished your amazing story!!!! And I can honestly say that it was worth the late nights up!!!!
Now I think I'll go find another one of your stories and dig in!!!!!
Fabulous story!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm so glad you like it and I hope you like the rest!
Date: 26 May 2010 11:52 PM Title: The Unexpected
i have that same ring! i wear my on my right hand heart inwards. this was a present from my kids on mothers day and i wear it like that because my heart will always belong to my kids before any man!
Date: 22 May 2010 3:01 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
wow that was awsome ive enjoy reading it
Date: 21 May 2010 9:58 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
thankyou for the epilogue. It tied everuthing up perfectly.
Loved all the kids
You are awesome - thankyou
Date: 21 May 2010 9:31 AM Title: Everything
thankyou so much for this story.
I have enjoyed every bit of it. Specially the crossover with Vampire Acadamy
Have your read Spriit Bound Yet - Just finished it Awesome - certainly not long enough though, Sucks having to wait for the last book now. But certainly very interesting.
Again loved this story - funny, sad, love the works. one of the best Ive read.
Thank you so much
Author's Response:
I just got it at 9 last night and finished it by 4 this afternoon. My poor kids got ignored big time. LOL. It wasn't my favorite of the series, but it was still really good :D Anyway, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the reviews!
Date: 19 May 2010 9:45 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
wow intense cant wait to finish it
Date: 18 May 2010 12:44 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
they won't let the read the rest of the story because they say im not old enough when i know i am and i can't seem to fix it. do you have any idea on how to fix it.
Date: 17 May 2010 11:29 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
nice :) i just read this part. but im starting to like it.
Date: 16 May 2010 8:54 PM Title: Sympathetic Solitude
I've been reading this around doing other things, which is why I haven't been able to review yet. i love the story. Love the characters very much. i thought the action was great during the hostage thing. I was very irritated with bella for running away when she saw the Tanya thing, but i'm a huge believer in communicating rather than jumping to conclusions. it's often something that Bella does in fan fiction, and it makes me crazy every time. grin. As for edward, having had to spend long times in hospitals with constant care and no privacy, in great pain, i actually sympathize with him and completely understand his behavior. I'm sort of surprised bella got all flipped out over it, being a doctor, she should have seen that kind of thing a lot. I can remember how thankful I was to get home to my own apartment and have some quiet, even though it was also scary being home alone immediately after major joint surgeries. Hospitals are places where you can't rest and relax, and where you don't ever have privacy. So, I never thought edward was being a jerk; I thought it was a natural way to feel. I'd have just blown him off and said, ok, whatever. Anywqay, the story is awesome, very real and absolutely well told.b
Date: 10 May 2010 7:33 PM Title: The Day From Hell
got this link over from fanfiction - loving the story so far.
cant wait to finish it.
thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks...Hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: 09 May 2010 1:28 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Such an amazing story. I laughed and cried the whole way. Fantastic job! Thanks so much for an entertaining and enthralling piece of work. This is one I will take the time to read again.
Date: 06 May 2010 2:23 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I just wanted to say how much I loved this story. I found it on FF.net and came here to read it and that's basically all I've been doing with my life for the past week. It's a good thing I have a BlackBerry b/c I don't know if any other phone would have handled my constant need to keep loading the new pages hahaha. Fantastic job! Thank you for writing this!!
-Nicole =]
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 12:20 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
Beautiful baby, love the dress!
Author's Response:
Thanks...she's my sweetie pie. I kept that dress and put it in her keepsake chest. I had to write it in! LOL
[Report This]Date: 05 May 2010 12:14 AM Title: Declarations
Beautiful Story!
Date: 04 May 2010 5:55 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
I was not expecting that. I felt Bella should have been more scared in the situation she was in, but UGH, WHY Edward? I thought Bella was going to get knocked around some.
Date: 04 May 2010 4:53 PM Title: Underneath It All
Here we go....
Date: 04 May 2010 3:37 PM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
I love the Edward called Esme mom!
Your writting is wonderful and I am sucked in further with each chapter!
Date: 04 May 2010 12:51 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
OMG That was AMAZING!!!!!!!! I loved it so much!!! you are and incredibly talented writer!
Date: 03 May 2010 9:01 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Thanks for the story. It was great)
Date: 03 May 2010 8:24 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
Bella should have confronted him! That seems like more of the type of person she is. She was ready to kick Lauren's ass, she should of gone in their to bitch Edward out....
I know, I know.. you are going somewhere with this...
Date: 03 May 2010 5:20 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
I have been trying to leave reviews, but this think must hate my and keeps telling me to log in, although I already am.
I love this story. I am annoyed that Edward wanted to wait..UGH! I am excited for the lime next chapter though.
Oh and Edward as a white sox fan is just wrong.
Date: 03 May 2010 3:22 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
Wish Edward would get his head out of his ass!! In the mean time I hope bella has fun with Trevor :)
Date: 29 Apr 2010 10:06 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I guess I'm of the Backing Bella camp. Though I am sad that they couldn't figure it out in a better way. I can totally understand her reactions. We're not talking about a short period of time that she has watched the man she is in love with groping, accosting and whoring around with girl after girl and any time she has had anyone interested in her he has ran them off. Now, as an adult she wants him so badly she can taste it but he gives her totally mixed signals for how he feels. Then when she sees how he really feels but that he won't admit it, she realizes she needs to deal with the hurt and move on, no matter how devastated she is over it, a girl can only take so much heartache. Then for him to admit it that he's in love with her the way in which he did? Why would she not react in the way that she did? I think it's a totally normal and human response to what he has put her through over the last seven years. So yeah, though I'm totally team Edward, she reacted as she should have IMO.
Date: 29 Apr 2010 3:56 PM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Loved this chapter. Edward, Edward, Edward...bless his heart he really is messed up in the head right now. Yay, for Mama D and a girl's night out!!!
Date: 28 Apr 2010 9:13 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Hi, I followed this story over from FF.net. I have had it on my favorites there for some time but just now got a chance to read. When I saw you had moved most of the story here I came over to check it out and signed up with TWCS
I like it very much so far. Can't wait to read the rest and I'm glad to see that by the time I followed you over the story is completely moved over from FF.net.
Great start to the story!
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:59 PM Title: Outside The Bubble
Ahh! I absolutely adore Carlisle and Esme! Their relationship with Edward is utterly heart warming!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:19 AM Title: The Unexpected
so sweet i love the ring.. trager is creepy and makes me nervous..this is such a good story it sucked me in
Date: 24 Apr 2010 10:01 PM Title: Perfection
AWESOME i love it and the pictures are amazing!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:04 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Have spent pretty much all my spare time over the last few days reading this story, it is wonderful!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2010 9:31 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
AMAZING, i atarted readin this on FF then had to change to here...sooo glad i did and continued its a story i can read again and again and get gripped every time xx
Date: 19 Apr 2010 5:00 AM Title: Focus Fluctuations
very good! i love the way you are able to really connect with bella here at this point!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 1:27 PM Title: Perfection
GAH! So sweet! I loved it! More of that coming I hope!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:41 PM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
fingers are crossed for these two... time for Edward and Bella to get a few things right
Date: 17 Apr 2010 5:23 AM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I'm halfway with the people that think she's overreacting and the other halfway is thinking she's right. but there's also that tiny bit that hates/loves to watch them suffer!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:31 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
SWAT stuff was great! You write Edward really well. Just enough roughness to man up all of his sweetness.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:22 AM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
so... i joined this site cuz i was dying 2 read more after that little bit i read from fanfiction. i <3 ur story!!! can't wait 2 read more!!! just wondering tho... r chapters 1-16 here the same as chapters 1-17 on fanfiction? i <3 ur story, but i would rather spend my time reading some of ur other stories rather than pointlessly rereading earlier chapters if they r the same. i hope they r verbatim the same cuz im probably just gonna read on. <3 this story!!! please continue 2 write amazing stories & post them so that others can enjoy them!!! thnx!!! :)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:07 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
Hmmmm, trevor is a nice kink in the story. edward needs a healthy dose of competition. bu let me guess, is he an attending? It would fit so well.
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:17 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
I love the way you wrote Bella's reaction here... very well described. I could almost feel it.
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:02 AM Title: The Day From Hell
loving it so far!
Date: 14 Apr 2010 3:00 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
This is one of the best fanfiction stories I've read! The creativity you have is abounding and put to great use. Thank you for writing an amazing story with a super hot Edward!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2010 9:10 PM Title: The Unexpected
amazing! i started on fanfic but i love this story!!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2010 4:13 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
I just wanted to leave you a quick note to let you know that I'm rereading this story here. I'm so glad that you have reposted here because this is one of my favorite stories and I would have been so sad if there was no way of rereading it. I'm enjoying it just as much as I did the first time around!
Kat
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:58 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
Glad they sorted that out. Still sweet...
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:00 AM Title: Rock On
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:54 AM Title: The Human Incubators
That was really nice to hear from Tanya. She is usually the bad guy...gal...in most of the stories. It's good to see a nice one here
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:43 AM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
I was wondering when that trash was going to be picked up. That was a lemon oasis!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:07 AM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
OMG! it's been such a long time since you had a cliffie...I DIDN'T SEE IT COMING! Really liking how you have progressed Edward & Bella's relationship. I am also loving all the other POV's other than there's. It does get outside their Swamsen Bubble...lol
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:45 AM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
I loved this inside look into the past of Emmett & Bella. To share in the shenanigans had when I was a teen, one can only remember this...it's the summer before my junior year of high school. My friends and I decide to raid the liquor cabinet at a friend's house. We got so wasted. My baby sister calls me and says that I better get home because she can't cover for me anymore. Mind you, it's already 2am and I am plastered...1)How the hell was I going to walk home? and 2)how in the hell was i going to sneak in. So my 14 year old sister, takes mom's car, comes pick me up and takes 3 of my friends home. Then manages to sneak my big ass back in the house. God bless her!
Author's Response:
LOl...great story. Thanks for sharing. Good little sister....good thing she knew how to drive :)
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:30 AM Title: The World Spins Madly On
Yeah I was all tears....blowing my nose and everything. Next thing I know I have my son and husband hugging me. That funeral scene so reminded me of my mother's funeral 2 years ago. So the hubby has banned me from emotional fanfiction....lol....of course I laughed in face. Thanks for keeping it real
Author's Response:
Awe...I'm sorry it made you that sad, but at the same time I'm glad I wrote it sincerely enough to touch you like that. Thanks for the reviews!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2010 12:56 AM Title: A Raft In The Flood
First and foremost, sorry that I haven't reviewed sooner. I havehad major computer problems! But alas, I am here sing your praises. THIS IS BY FAR ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS I HAVE EVER READ! And I have read a lot my dear. I used to hate all human stories, but you have certainly cermented my faith in AH tales.
Now about this chapter, the shit really hits the fan for them doesn't it. I still appreciate the fact that you don't have it all pineapples and rainbows. Edward's idea top open his own facility is such a great idea!!! I hope that everything stays okay with Bella's job at the hospital.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:31 PM Title: Perfection
Love the pics at the end of the chapter! Great story.
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:52 AM Title: Getting Reacquainted
yeah defanitly should heed your warnings not to read these chapters at work. the front desk of the hotel never a good place to read smutt. lol
love this storie
love ya
gina
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2010 10:54 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
Really good story love it
Date: 05 Apr 2010 7:14 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
oh my poor beautifull edwards face. god his poor beautiful face. damn emmett and reacting to fast... damn bella for thinking he would cheat... augh killing me this story is killing me.
Date: 04 Apr 2010 5:38 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
Love jealousward!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 8:07 AM Title: The World Spins Madly On
UGH! This was a very difficult chapter for me to get through. The 7th. year anniversary of my husband's death is this Easter Sunday, and while it still feels like it was yesterday, this brought to the forefront.
Excellantly written. Thank you.
Author's Response:
Oh I'm so sorry for your loss. I do hope that the day passes as smoothly as possible for you, but I know it must not be easy. Thank you for your reviews.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 6:15 AM Title: Outside The Bubble
Tears, tears & more tears. SIGH!
Date: 30 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
Yeah heart wrenching is an appropriate description of this chapter. I wept through the whole thing. I did love seeing that Edward was always involved in this ritual to support both siblings.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I read this story from begining to end and feel in love with every chapter and was sad to see it end. I love Bella's strength in the face of danger and her ability to let her weekness show when she can't hold it in anylonger. I love how Edward screws up alot in the begining to finally get the girl. I am also over joyed that they got to be happy together for most of the story. It kills me at times when I fall in love with the characters just to watch them strugle through sadness. Great story. thanks so much.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 1:58 AM Title: Concerning Charlotte
ohhh the drama ;)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 11:43 PM Title: Equivalency
Another fantastic chapter! I love your writing style. The plot line is amazing with the twists and turns (waiting to to Sellers again ;)) These characters are rich and deep and interesting and funny and charming and endearing... Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2010 7:18 PM Title: Disturbed
Wow. Your intense. I totally love this. I'm weeping like a sap here and lovin every minute. Thank you for sharing your talent.
I think this could stand alone away from fanfic as a novel... ya know change the names to protect the innocent... food for thought...
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:14 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Thanks for the breakdown of each family at the end. That's a lot of kids to keep straight. :)
Great ending for this story. I missed Carlisle and Esme in the epilogue, but this was a great way to wrap everything together and bring it to a close.
Awesome story!