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Reviewer: Miss-Beckie-Louise Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2010 9:33 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Awesome story. I loved it :)

It's been on my reading list for ages.

What happened with Tanya?? There was no mention of her in this chapter.

xo Beckie

Reviewer: Mahikawuf Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:04 PM Title: On The Hot Seat

Great Story!

I have enjoyed reading it immensely!

I just wanted to point out one thing as far as the trial scenes go. I believe that in the US Court system, witnesses aren't to actually be in the courtroom while other witnesses testify. It can skew their own testimony to hear what the other witnesses say.

Other than that, great writing!

I look forward to reading more of your stories!

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 3:16 AM Title: For The Love of Esme

Beautiful Esme, beautifully written.  

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 2:43 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss

I knew what was going to happen, but you are so vivid with descriptions it brought me to tears again!  (sob, sob) 

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 12:38 AM Title: For The First Time

Now I really remember why I wanted to reread this story.  Most romantic dinner-date and first time B&E ever! I'm just gushing with all the love and, phew, I'm going to have a smoke now.  Great chapter.  

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:50 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation

Sigh....I can relax my knuckles once again. 

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:28 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster

Silly Bella, got her panties in a wad for nothing.  

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 8:00 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum

I was so busy getting back into the story that I've been forgetting to review.  I can breathe now, she's sleeping on his Egyptian sheets!  Score!  

Reviewer: wannabeacullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:53 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

Glad you clarified that cuz I did a ton of eye rolls at what she did. I mean, come on....can she be that fucking oblivious about this??  What does he have to do?  I would have screwed him in that ally if I was her and feeling how she felt about him..I mean Jesus. he is fuckhot and just confessed his love for her. She is a total dumbass and I am a bit unhappy with her character right now. I appreciated her being not a typical Twilight Bella but feel her character is morphing into it slowly. I just want them to get together and move forward already.  sorry.

Reviewer: wannabeacullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 3:55 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment

I love this Edward...even though he is a Slutward.  Oh, and I totally dig this Bella. I get so sick of stories where she is known to be clueless and awkward, like she is in the Twilight series. It has always graded on my nerves. So seeing a smart Bella, though she still has her struggles, is refreshing. 

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 8:09 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment

Not the sharpest tool in the shed, is he?  

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 7:55 AM Title: The Day From Hell

I loved the imagery of little Bella, straddling Andy on a gurney, giving chest compressions as they cross the street from the bar to the ER.  Thumbs Up!   

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 6:21 AM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts

Your Bella is great!  Don't worry about the age thing.  I was one of those too, as is my daughter.  More and more kids are finishing high-school earlier and/or getting college credit at the same time.  Your story fleshes out just fine.  

Reviewer: Billiegirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 5:39 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

I had this story favored in fanfiction.net.  When I saw it here i wanted to re-read it and review.  Now that I've written one of my own.  I understand how important these reviews are.  I loved this story the first time, and I'm loving it all over again.  

Reviewer: VC Toliver Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2010 6:37 PM Title: For The First Time

I was born and raised in Chicago and I've traveled all over Illinois.  But, I have to tell you, Lake Forest is one of the most beautiful places I've ever been.

Reviewer: AmeliaCullen1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 3:10 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Just finished and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed your story.  I really enjoyed hearing about their lives and children later on.  Loved their kids!

I'll be going over to read the summer outtakes now.

Reviewer: peachyinoh Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2010 2:03 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

You have more than likely had this story out forever, but I just came across it.  I wanted to let you know it was AWESOM.  I teared up during several parts of the story and can't wait to read your other works!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I finished that right around New Year's Eve.  I"m so glad you enjoyed it!  Don't forget to check out the Summer outtakes.  Bella's Summer Knights.  Hope you enjoy anythign else of mine you read and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Beautyace Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2010 5:50 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

Hi :) I'm new to this story and I'm enjoying it thoroughly! you're an amazing authoress :D I noticed that at the beginning of this chapter you had a clarification of Bella being an intern at age 23. I know it's late and I know I'm skipping continents here :P But that is possible in South Africa...the medical degree is 5years before your intern year. You start immediately after senior year as we don't have a college system. So for students who matriculate at 17 or even 18 they'll be either turning 23 or 24 in their intern years. I know it doesn't fit in with the setting of the story :) but it's not an impossible occurance :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for that bit of info.  That makes me feel a little better :)

Reviewer: hmoore29091992 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 9:25 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting

OMG! IS THE NEW BOSS TREVOR?!?!?!?!?!

That bastard is going to hurt alice GRRRRR!!!!!!

Reviewer: christinamarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2010 3:09 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

i really enjoyed this story keep me informed when you post another story

 

 

 

 

 

i really enjoyed this story please keep me informed when you post a new story

 

 

 

Reviewer: commerou Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2010 7:14 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Great story! Good job writing it.

Reviewer: whyuh Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2010 1:47 PM Title: Gearing Up and Getting Off

You said something earlier in the story about it possibly being your hottest, or tangiest, lemon you'd written....

Let's just end all doubt here and now - The phone/SURPRISE, I'M HOME! bit o' citrus ya got in this chapter? Sweet mother of mercy!! ---------------THUD--------------

Well done! *stands to applaud*  Oh yeah, BRAVA! Very well done!



Author's Response:

LOL.  Curtsies with a smile.  Why thank you!  I appreciate the applause :)  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: twilightgurl49 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 8:05 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

omg i am so sry i did not review this story earlier.. but this has by far been the best that i have read.. u are a great writer.. keep up the  awesome writing .. i look forward to reading ur other stories., thanku so much for sharing them :)

Reviewer: SassySteff Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2010 2:27 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss

OMG!  That was one of the hardest things I've ever had to read. 

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 2:41 PM Title: Perfection

     Yes, he knows her well!  I can see taking it slow isn't going to work for very long.  Trevor still thinks she is going to show him the town this weekend? I don't think so.....  Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 5:03 AM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For

     That was a nice warm up date, good to get the nerves out a bit.  Thanks for the chapter! 

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 4:43 AM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps

     At last!  I hope Trevor doesn't get frustrated and try to pull her into a supply closet or something!  Wait, Bella will probably catch Trevor in a supply closet with Maggie!!  

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 3:16 AM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

     Okay, Iwill trust you to give me an E&B HEA!!  Also I hope you didn't let her do the deed with Trevor, she would feel terrible later if she did.  

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 2:05 AM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

With the "Team" working on the Operation Edward & Bella Together, I am confident they will eventually prevail.  Carlisle will NOT be happy if Trevor two times Bella either. That is probably why Trevor relocated to a bigger city - more anonymity and a bigger selection! Thanks for the chapter! 

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:48 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel

     Okay, I forgive Edward.  He better get this relationship started now though!  That Trevor dude is still on my suspect list.  His last name isn't James is it!  LOL 

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:06 AM Title: Femmes Night Out

     I like the ending.  I think that Trevor sounds like trouble.  He is probably a new hot shot attending physician - she should ask Carlisle.  Of course maybe Krista and Sabrina could find out from his friends.  I was surprised all of those guys except Edward were drinking on call!  Thanks for the chapter! 

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 10:27 PM Title: Puppet Master J

     I thought she was wearing a fancy black dress but maybe this was before she changed?  I can't wait for him to see her at Dooley's.  I think everyone in their circle knows (including Mama D) except Edward!  He deserves it!  Thanks for the chapter!

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 9:45 PM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice

LOL  I love Mama D!!  Her analogy of Edward being like a little puppy was priceless!!  (and pretty accurate!)  I am sensing jealousward may appear when the men start hitting on Bella!!  Thanks for the chapter! 

Reviewer: -0_0- JaVaJiVe -0_0- Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2010 8:36 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment

     Edward totally humiliated Bella at the hospital where she works!  To the nurses on that floor, it looked like he either dumped Bella for Maggie or was playing around behind Bella's back.  He should leave his playing for somewhere else.  Carlisle wouldn't appreciate that doctor's lounge stuff.  That would damage his reputation too if they were caught by someone other than Bella and it came out that Edward was Carlisle's nephew.  Slutward AND Disward.  But thanks for the story!  LOL

Reviewer: imabitch_101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2010 8:40 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

loved this story!! cant wait to read some of ur others

ducez:)

Reviewer: TigerBoo2U Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2010 9:50 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

I keep coming back to this story, it's one of my all time favs (the first completed fan fic I had the pleasure of devouring), I've just read it again for the 7th time (yes it's that addictive!)

I love that Bella is much stronger and fiestier than the books, I always wanted to give her a kick, not that I'm saying original book Bella is a sap and too damn tame, but damn, she's a sap and too damn tame lolol

I love your Emmett, no really I love him(I'm lucky to have a brother just like him,(looks and personality) but I could never see him like I see Emmett because that would be oh so wrong lol), I want to take him home and lock him in my room for say a few years, only coming out to pay for pizza. Damn. We could play naked Rock Band, it would be awesome hehehe.

I loved the addition of the Summer Knights outtakes, they should the progression of Edward and Bella's growing feelings brilliantly.

How can you improve? I don't think you can, this story rocks my world, only thing that could drag me away would be an action packed sequel ;) *hint hint*

I'm not too proud to beg!

 



Author's Response:

Wow!  That is high praise.  Thank you so much!  I've considered a sequel, but I think the major drama in their life is over...although someone did suggest the intriguing idea of looking at Emma and Kellan's blossoming relationship with the family dropping in.  That was tempting.  Thanks for the awesome review.  It always makes me happy to hear I've written something that makes people want to read it again and again.  I think 7 times may be a record though1  LOL!  Thanks again!

 

Reviewer: beeMcVee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2010 7:03 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel

Holy crap this story is amazing.

Reviewer: jaishea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2010 7:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

I am SO SORRY I didn't post reviews throughout. I loved this story dearly. My good friend turned me on to it, and WoW - What a turn-on! LOL I actually headed out on vacation in the middle and printed about 100 pages worth of paper so I didn't have to go without. Then when I finished what I printed on day 3 of my vacation, I had to figure out a way to get wi-fi to finish it up... and here started my new 3am bedtime routine because I couldn't stop reading ... perhaps not the best idea for the marriage in general, but hey, your story has done wonders for my sex life. ;-) My husband owes you a thank-you and doesn't realize it!!  But I digress... thank you for writing a fantastic piece. LOVED IT and maybe I'll re-read it so I can drop more reviews. It was THAT much fun to read!! I will always love Edward, I was thrilled not to have to hate Jacob, and I didn't want to smack Bella (like I SO wanted to in Stephenie's books!!) Loved Andy, Jazz, Alice, Rose, and Emmett is just the best. Ooh, loved it loved it loved it. Best, J.



Author's Response:

Thanks Sweetie....did you notice I did like ten outtakes?  They are posted separately as Bella's Summer Knights.  They are the summers before and after the main story :)

Reviewer: Noreia-Charlotte Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2010 4:26 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

WOW,

with all respect that i know: I like this Story!!!!

Thank you so much for this!

 

*I hope you have read my mail here, with my question!*

TYVM for this FanFicton

Noreia

Reviewer: skytop21 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2010 10:25 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Hey-I just popped over from ffic to read this story. Great. I really loved the whole love story and how it developed over their years together. I also enjoyed the confident and independant Bella. (I really don't like mousy, trembling awkward Bella) Thanks for the great read. You always seem to give us a nice bit of detail in the careers and back stories of your characters without making it too much and too boring. Thanks again. Oh- just thought I'd let you know that I thought that the phone and shower lemons were by far the best:)!

Reviewer: Kat-n-cupcakes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2010 10:44 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Fucking AWESOME story!!! It's been 3 days, 2 rather sleepness nights, and several angry roomates since I begun to read this wonderful story, and I've only just finished it! It was seriously perfect, and I am so so so happy and grateful to you for sharing this amazing story with us and allowing me and others to read it. It seriously makes me wish, more than anything, that I was married to Edward Cullen! I've enjoyed this story every step of the way, from bella and edwards struggling relationship at the start, to their beautiful wedding and life together at the end. Your writing has made me laugh, cry, smile, gasp, and stay up until the wee hours of the morning with tired eyes, frantically reading chapters of this wonderful story from my laptop! It has been an honour, and privilege, and just a whole lotta damn good fun to read this story, and I congratulate you on your rad skills with words and *ahem* lemons...
Fantastic work! :)

Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it so much.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Kat-n-cupcakes Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2010 11:51 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On

Well, you were right in warning us about tears in this chapter; I'm blubbering right now! No kidding! Super story, that I've been reading obsessively for the past 2 days after stumbling across it on fanfiction.net - then came over here and made a new account on twcs just to read this story. NO SHIT. hahaha well hopefully this message will reach you, wherever you may be, and however long ago you posted this story,I just wanted you to know that I think it is utterly fantastic and I'm sire you'll receive many more reviews from me as I make my way through this wonderful journey that Edward and Bella are sharing... :) fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Thank You.  I finished this around Christmas and moved it here in March, I believe.  I've written quite a few stories since then, but none have gotten quite as huge of a response as FDKK.  I'm so glad you are enjoying it and I get a real kick out of getting reviews anytime.  I love to read people's reactions as they go along.  Thanks for sharing and once again, I'm tickled you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 10:56 PM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle

OMG, Cow tipping !!  Im iss living in the country so much.  I have also participated in donuts in the cul de sac, racing down courty roads, and jumping out of hay lofts.  Im seriously surprised I never wrecked or broke anything.  Haha, we also sent people out snipe hunting too !   Now that is some funny shit !!

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 4:03 AM Title: The Name Game

I have an idea what he is thinking about with the names !  It was my first thought when the name thing came up !

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:47 AM Title: Declarations

I love getting those blue Tiffany boxes !   

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:28 PM Title: Disturbed

Hmmm, Dirty cops ??  

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:55 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss

OMG ! Where the hell are the tissues when you need them ???   Its 3am and I have to be up in 4 hrs but I cant.step.away !!! 

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:59 AM Title: Underneath It All

All I can say is Ho-LY SHIT !!!

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:27 AM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears

Way to go Esme !!!

Reviewer: fanofbones Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:31 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

I just finished this.  I had a fantastic week reading this every night.

It was totally wonderful, sweet, romantic and HEA for sure.

I adored all the kids each couple had....we don't usually get that at the ends of HEA....what a lovely idea...

This was absolutely the sweetest story.

fab/vicki

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:53 AM Title: Empowering and Contentment

Driving a manual in heels sucks ! 

*sigh* Sometimes Bella is too damned stubborn for her own good.

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:10 AM Title: Truth Revealed

Now I will forever think of Bella giving road head every time I hear that song ! lol  LOVE KOL and that just made my fav song even better !

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:22 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames

I can just see Jasper spread out along fancy furniture like a fat house cat ! lol

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:15 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting

Oooo, this just keeps getting better and better !!  This story is sooo owning me.

Reviewer: Schemering Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 6:54 AM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

Wow. Awesome story. I was led here from Fanfiction and i can honestly say i haven't been this excited for a fic in quite a while.

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 5:06 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum

HA I knew it ! Trevor is up to no good !  I love that you made James a bald sleeze !

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:13 AM Title: Perfection

Can Edward have a talk with my husband about dates ? lol  LOVE the first date. So sweet and fun.

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 10:53 PM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps

aww, edward is finally getting it ! lol  

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Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:24 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

Ugh Really Bella ???  Edward is right she is  blind and only sees what she wants to !   While Yes, Edward was wrong he can atleast see it and admit to it. Bella.... right now I think she needs a good slap from Alice.

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 7:59 PM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy

So Trevor is an Attending. Def not was ai was expecting, but I still dont like him. 

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 4:06 AM Title: Femmes Night Out

Jasper is just fuckawesome !!  And Trevor... Hmmm... Its odd that he got called out to work and then The Boys all got paged shortly after. Either Trevor is a Cop or part of the reason that they guys were called out !

Im totally digging the Angel image of Trevor, but I have a gut feeling he is up to no good !

Reviewer: HavntGotAClue Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2010 3:11 AM Title: Puppet Master J

Jasper and Andy are awesome !!!

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Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:51 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment

Can we say Douchward !?!?

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Date: 24 Jul 2010 12:44 AM Title: The Day From Hell

This is such an amazing story. Slutward is owning me and I love your Bella !

Reviewer: MyGoldenEyes Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2010 4:41 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

I have to say that I have already read this story on fanfiction, but I LOVE LOVE LOVE it, you did an amazing job with it, I sadly haven't read any of your others so once I read this one again I will need to read them!!

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:47 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Wow! What a great story! Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us ;-)

Reviewer: fanofbones Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 2:04 AM Title: Decoys and Deprecation

The last 10 chapters were fantastic. I'm loving all the mob stuff, very cool and has a great bad-guy appeal.

It took awhile to get through Ch 20. Of course I had to listen to all their songs as I read. What a fantastic idea to play in the car. Clever of you.

fab/vicki

Reviewer: carebear785 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:56 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

Fantastic story.  One of my favs.  I loved all of your characters, and think you did a great job writing this.  I really liked where you ended it, and I love the epilogue. 



Author's Response:

Thanks...and don't forget I did a whole series of summer outtakes called Bella's Summer Knights!  I"m so glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review!

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2010 12:48 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There

I've done a horrid job at reviewing but please know this story is amazing. It's real and yet enough fantasy to be a fabulous escape from our real lives. You've done a magnificent job creating this wonderful world. Congrats!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I am so glad you enjoyed it!!!!

Reviewer: fanofbones Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 5:15 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing

Well snap. He finally admits his feelings to her and totally at the wrong time.

I can't really fault her reaction but she shouldn't have kissed him back though and then slapped him. She should have taken him against the wall and then slapped him. jk ;)

I love this. I can't wait for more Op action. Sexy as hell.

fab/vicki

 

Reviewer: fanofbones Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 2:15 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores

Great first chapter....this was rec'd a while ago, thought I'd check it out.

I love the way she says...'My boys'...cute

fab/vicki

Reviewer: annah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 1:56 AM Title: Crankward

OK, I thought Mr. B was a mystery man. Guess that's just a reference for our former governor (who I actually campaigned for once upon a time, before he went nuts!)

Reviewer: annah Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2010 12:08 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss

Wow! Awesome chapter! You go, girl!

(I think I have an idea about who Mr. B could be. Can't wait to see if I'm right!)

Reviewer: annah Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 5:07 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames

Wow, I am SOOOO envious of how Edward and Bella can have real discussions about the important things! Does that really happen in real life? Things I've missed out on. (insert sad sigh)



Author's Response:

Yeah....Know what you mean.  I think it's called wishful thinking on my part.  LOL

Reviewer: annah Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 3:52 PM Title: Perfection

Just found this story, and am trying to read it in one sitting, but I have to say I really enjoyed this chapter. I am from Chicago, and this makes the story so much more alive to me. (I have never been in Washington, let alone Forks!) I'm looking forward to spending the rest of my day finishing this whole thing. Fortunately, I'm off today!

Reviewer: ECfan4life Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2010 4:33 AM Title: For The First Time

Where can I get a man like that????

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 2:26 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later

aw what a happy ending! i noticed that alice and jasper's kids name all start with a B. I love it best series ever!

Reviewer: throughmyeyes19 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 2:04 AM Title: Everything

awww i love it!!

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Date: 17 Jul 2010 1:30 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There

The wedding sounded so beautiful. Thats how I want my wedding. On the beach.....I love it!!!

Reviewer: confettirainfall Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2010 12:25 AM Title: Concerning Charlotte

I don't recall if I've left you a review before and if not I've been very neglectful so I apologize, but I've been so intrigued by this story that I've kept reading and reading nonstop. I could gush on and on but want to get back to your fab story!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 11:32 PM Title: Connecting the 'Future' Dots

lol i love it!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 10:33 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm

yay~!!!!!!!!!!! i love it!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 10:16 PM Title: On The Hot Seat

whoa go bella!!! i love it!!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 9:16 PM Title: Gearing Up and Getting Off

i love it!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 8:41 PM Title: Pressure

omg i wonder whats wrong

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 8:20 PM Title: Rock On

i love it amazing songs in this chapter! i love fighter the best! amazing phenomenal chapter! brovo!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 7:30 PM Title: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers

I LOVE IT!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:57 PM Title: The Human Incubators

awesome!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:47 PM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed

whoa!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 6:16 PM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE

awwwwww

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:18 PM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle

i love it this chapter was bittersweet. I cannot tell u how much it was amazing.

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:01 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On

that was so sad! i started to get tears in my eyes! amazing brillient phenomenal!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:37 PM Title: A Raft In The Flood

amazing chapter. all ur chapers are amazing i love it! i need to find new words to compliment this

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:40 PM Title: Surfacing From the Deep

omg i love it!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:18 AM Title: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares

whoa i love it omg!!!!!amazing as always!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 5:03 AM Title: Outside The Bubble

i love it!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 4:53 AM Title: A Happy New Year

whoa omg i love it!!!!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:19 AM Title: The Name Game

I love it!! I like the sound of Bella Masen..I love it!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 3:07 AM Title: Declarations

omg! i love it!!!!!

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Date: 16 Jul 2010 2:13 AM Title: Concerning Charlotte

omg poor charlotte! i lov eit!!!

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