Date: 14 Apr 2012 12:17 AM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
great story
Date: 07 Mar 2012 6:09 PM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
Ah, a trip to white folks mall, oops I mean White Oaks... ha ha
Date: 07 Mar 2012 5:54 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
Long, long ago, in the time before McDonalds my family use to stop at the Dixie truck stop to eat lunch as we were heading up 66 from Litchfield to Dixon to see my aunt and uncle.(what no Love's?) Of course it is now 55 and I wouldn't dream of stopping and eating someplace that takes so long, but you have brought back memories from long ago for me.
I have family spread out all through central Illinois. Springfield, Lincoln, Mason City and lived in Chi town my self for several years before heading out to where the wind comes sweeping down the plain... enjoying your story.
Date: 06 Mar 2012 10:20 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Danger Will Robinson! Danger!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 11:45 PM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
I want to be reincarnated as Bella. Nobody ever thinks I need to eat! In fact, it's quite the opposite ;)
Really love everthing about this story, xoxox
Date: 30 Jan 2012 3:56 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
i gotta say i love where youre taking this story!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 5:52 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Great story! thoroughly enjoyed it!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 12:03 PM Title: Rock On
good job on the competition! great song choices to represent the emotions of the night. love this story!
Date: 07 Dec 2011 8:11 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
"Doogie Howseresque" Thats the whole reason i've decided to read this story.
Date: 06 Nov 2011 10:16 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I have really enjoyed this story. It is well written & full of adventure, love & angst. Well done.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 8:36 PM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
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Date: 24 Oct 2011 7:11 PM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
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Date: 19 Oct 2011 6:07 PM Title: Empowering and Contentment
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Date: 16 Oct 2011 8:03 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted
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Date: 16 Oct 2011 7:42 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
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Date: 16 Oct 2011 7:10 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
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Date: 16 Oct 2011 4:32 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
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Date: 16 Oct 2011 2:24 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
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Date: 12 Oct 2011 1:46 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
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Date: 11 Oct 2011 10:09 AM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
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Date: 10 Oct 2011 8:15 PM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
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Date: 10 Oct 2011 10:56 AM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
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Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:49 AM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 8:48 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 12:49 PM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 12:17 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 11:17 AM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
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Date: 09 Oct 2011 10:42 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
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Date: 18 Sep 2011 4:29 AM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
this story is great I love it
Date: 17 Sep 2011 4:32 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Enjoyed this story very much. So glad you pushed past the difficult parts and made it through to a happy ending, and even did the wonderful outtakes! You are an amazing writer. I will follow your future works.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:58 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Loved that line: graded from Danger Magnet to Danger Gravitational Field. lol
Like their texting & sure would love to wear Edward's sweatshirt - snuggle in it & smell it ......hmmm heaven. No, more heaven would be snuggling in his arms...bliss. Lovely chapter - am starting to get nervous for Bella myself. How they gonna keep Bella safe? Cant wait to find out. Running on..
Date: 08 Sep 2011 7:02 PM Title: Perfection
Great chapter. loved it. Actually googled United Centre when he took her there for a look before i saw your pics lol. Sure would love to snog the face off Edward - lucky Bella. Love the jerseys. He's soo smitten its cute.
Date: 03 Sep 2011 1:11 PM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Lovely chapter - Glad Edward getting his act together atlast. Apologies for not having time to say more - gotta run
Date: 02 Sep 2011 10:37 PM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
Good chapter :) Looking forward to date night with Edward.
Date: 02 Sep 2011 7:10 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Great chapter, loved it! Wow so much going off. Edward sure is a silly billy; not spilling the beans earlier when he had Bella alone in the apartment. But that's Eddie - stunted emotionally. Love the line "made me want to pull a Linda Blair on the entire fucking room" - made me smile lots - especially seeing as prob the younger generation probably dont know what the ell you're talking about! lol Edward is so lucky he's got the guys to help him. Poor Bella - still so confused & getting it soo wrong!! But could Trevor also be falling for her & maybe not be a total looser - now that would complicate things no end!! Ok running on cause I need more. My friend warned I wouldnt be able to put this story down & she ws sooo right!
Date: 02 Sep 2011 4:34 PM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Lovely chapter - more intel I like it. So Bella's fairly innocent - am glad about that. Looking forward to her date with Trev - wouldnt be surprised if the guys didnt turn up at same place for a meal, lol.
Date: 02 Sep 2011 12:18 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
Great stuff! Really enjoyed it. Glad noone got hurt Phew. Nice tog et some background story to the baddies too - guessing they might get more involved in the story as it progresses. Poor Edward he's really got it bad, bless him. Cant wait to see what goes down once Bella wakes up. Can he hold it together & not fall back into assmode.
Date: 02 Sep 2011 11:05 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
Really enjoyable chapter! Loved it. Glad Bella got some girlie time & yes really like David Boreanaz - thanks for the image. That must have really done Ed's head in - looking forward to his pov - running on.
Date: 02 Sep 2011 9:43 AM Title: Puppet Master J
I meant to say earlier that I love the way we get insight not only into Bella's pov but also Edwards & Jaspers. So we get to find out why Eddie sithe way he is. I like that Jasper has met Alice & fallen for her. Didnt realise when Ma Dooley spoke to Bella that it was all part of the plan - nicely done!
Okay onto the part I've really been looking forward to. Are we about to see a green Edward! Cause guessing someone is bound to hit on Bella - poss more than one!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 11:29 PM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Yay, let the fun times begin - bring it on I say. Really liking this story - looking forward to reding more & yep ed is a defo Assward at times. Come on Bella, make him dead jealous!!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 10:34 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
He's such a silly lad! Poor Bella. Maybe she needs to hang out with a good looking nice guy - bring out Eddie's green monster.
Date: 01 Sep 2011 9:47 PM Title: The Day From Hell
Yay E & B kissed. Glad Andy's ok.
Date: 01 Sep 2011 9:03 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
Aaaahhh. Very perceptive of Jazz; he's no fool. I like that Eddie's a good cook - another string to his bow. He's so sweet when he wants to be.
Date: 01 Sep 2011 8:18 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Liking it already! Cant wait to get to know Bella, Edward & the guys better. Edward obviously has a soft spot for Bella but guessing since she's Emmett's baby sis - she's a no go area - for now.
Date: 24 Aug 2011 9:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
That was a beautifully written story. Kept me so very much interested in all the characters. Thank you for writing and sharing with us.
Author's Response:
Thanks hon...I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I Loved writing this story! Thanks for all of the reviews!
Date: 24 Aug 2011 9:01 PM Title: Everything
ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!
Author's Response:
Thanks hon. Don't forget to go check out Bella's Summer Knights when you're done. They are the summer outtakes wrapped up with a future shot :)
Date: 24 Aug 2011 8:35 PM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
I have to say that I do not think I have read a more moving and loving wedding scene before. The whole day was PERFECT! **your little lovilie is so beautiful in that dress**
Date: 23 Aug 2011 12:53 AM Title: The World Spins Madly On
That was a 2 tissue and a shot of something strong chapter.
Date: 22 Aug 2011 10:45 PM Title: Outside The Bubble
*sniffles & wipes the massive amounts of tears from my eyes* How I love Carlisle! That was just beautiful. Thank you for sharing the bad news with us by mixing in the wonderful story lines of Em & Dr. C
Date: 22 Aug 2011 3:34 PM Title: Home
Oh it's gonna be good to have Edward home while at the same time it's gonna get VERY TENSE! Or at least that is how it happened when my mom came home from a surgery and had limited mobility for 2 months at home.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 8:12 PM Title: For The First Time
Eighteen hours & 62 variations of f*uck later......That is some Mighty Mighty Mighty Fine work there Mr. Masen & Miss Swan!!!!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:10 AM Title: Bonding and Plotting
Trevor is a jerk and now a really bad man. I'm glad Bella never got too close to him, but of course I know it's not over.
I just HOPE beyond Hope that Edward doesn't slip up and turn to Slutward to dip his stick while waiting for Bella, love of his life, and screw (no pun intended) his & her life up way beyond repair. I am always worried about that, because face it, he screws things up a Lot!
Date: 21 Aug 2011 3:28 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum
This just gets better and better.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 2:38 AM Title: Perfection
I think I nearly had my own private Edward moment at that date he planned for Bella. Talk about Fantastic!!!!! doesn't hurt that hockey is one of my 2 fave sports to watch. College football being the other. Oh and you did good with the hockey game.
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:13 AM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I am one of the ones that totally back Bella and get it. While I'm happy as all get out that Edward finally Manned the Fruck Up and told her he loved her, his timing is all shit.
Date: 20 Aug 2011 10:39 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
So we had sadness, jealousy, flirting, excitement, danger & love all from Edward.... Now that's a good chapter!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:18 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
Man oh man, has Eddie shoveled himself DEEP into a big ole' stinking pile of it. He sure as shitake better be praying & hoping that she will at the very least let him talk to her.
Author's Response:
LOL...I love your descriptions! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Hope you like the rest!
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:02 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Ok, as much as I can't stand Slutward, I abso-freaking-lutely LOVE the thought of Edward as S.W.A.T. OMG talk about yumminess.
Poor Bella, I can understand her prediciment to be the sister figure to the guy of her desires. Been there & done that & it's nothing but heartache.
Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:47 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
i love this story. ive read it once before when it was only on FF. i got so busy with school and stuff that i didnt have time for myself to read until recently, that and i thought edward was being a real jackass (i was at the part where he is constantly PMSing and pushing her away in the hospital after the prologue event). ive been thinking about the story a lot lately so i just had to find it and read it again.
Author's Response:
Hey! Thanks for comign back and reading the rest. I hope you like it. You'd probably hate the newest plot bunny I've been working on. I'm stepping away from canon and having Edward be a really big jerkoff. I'm guessing it won't get nearly as many readers, but I wanted to give it a go. It's going to end up a Jasper/Bella fic in the end. :) Anyway, hope you enjoy the rest of FDKK and I also did a set of outtakes called Bella's Summer Knights. It chronicles all of the summers from when Bella first moved to Chicago and met E up until a future take fifteen years later ;)
Date: 10 Jul 2011 3:07 AM Title: Warmth In the Darkness
I'm just about halfway through this story and I can't stop reading. I've been reading for about a week now with allowing only for a little bit of sleep. Even after working 12+ hr night shifts almost every day.
I just absolutely love this story. All I want to do is to take a sneak peak at the ending, but I'm holding myself firm. I have been reading as fast as I can, but it never seems fast enough. I'm glad that I'm reading a completed story, because I'm not sure how I would survive the multiple cliff hangers. It's bad enough when I have to log off before going to bed or to work. Or to take my daughter to work.
Your story is amazing. I am in the medical field, and while you are taking liberty with some of your story, it does not detract from it. If anything, it brings everything together even more and adds a realness and a vulnerability to your characters.
Thank you again for such a wonderful story. Your portrayal of characters are beautiful and so full of love and life. I also love your playlist and can't deny how perfect they are for each chapter. Thanks again. Looking forward to reading more and many more sleepless days and nights.
TTFN(ta-ta-for-now),
StarryEyedGlimmer
Date: 02 Jun 2011 1:32 PM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
Aw! they have a date! :D i'm really liking it so far :)
Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:45 AM Title: The Day From Hell
AWE! they kissed :)
Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:18 AM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
That omelet sounds really good, im gonna have to try it :)
Date: 01 Jun 2011 11:53 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Looks like its going to be good so far.
I like the way you write :)
Date: 28 May 2011 7:49 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Wow! this fic has had me hooked from the word go - thank you so much for sharing it with us XX
Date: 28 May 2011 7:21 PM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
I'm crying, such a sweet, moving ceremony. Utterly fabulous!
BTW your daughter is just adorable!!!
Date: 27 May 2011 8:40 PM Title: A Happy New Year
LOL Bella is a riot - I love her so much
Date: 27 May 2011 3:35 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
Argh!!!!!!! what a place to leave it
Date: 26 May 2011 6:47 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
05/25/11
Date: 09 May 2011 2:45 AM Title: Declarations
yay, they are gonna get married!!!
Date: 09 May 2011 1:23 AM Title: Crankward
yup...not so impressed with crankward...why would he do that to bella?
Date: 09 May 2011 12:50 AM Title: Disturbed
i think having bella go at the punching bag is the cleverest thing any emmett ever did in any story...
Date: 05 May 2011 4:43 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
ok, so i know i have read at least this far...actually i think i remember reading up until where he confronts his mom, and then his mom tries to say that bella and emmett are using him for his money and then bella finds out how much edward is actually worth...
Date: 02 May 2011 6:58 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
WOW THAT WA SGREAT I READ THIS STORY SINCE THE BEGGINING AND I LOVED IT!!!!! GREAT STORY!!! ITS SAD TO SEE IT END BUT HAPPY TO KNOW THAT THE GANGS HAS A GREAT FAMILY WITH THEM!!! I LOVED THIS STORY!!!
WILL THERE BE A SEQUEL?? I HOPE SO !!!!!
BIGGEST FAN EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT JOB!!! LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Apr 2011 1:12 AM Title: Home
There is no better feeling in the world than being back in your own home after being in the hospital for a long time...!
Date: 01 Apr 2011 12:49 AM Title: Sympathetic Solitude
I don't think it was that mysterious...he was being a MAN! LOL!
Date: 30 Mar 2011 6:29 PM Title: Warmth In the Darkness
There is no way a hospital would let an ICU patient share a bed....just saying. There are usually too many tubes and wires and visiting hours are extremely restricted and limited to two people every 2 hours for 15 min...
Date: 30 Mar 2011 3:18 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss
O...M....G!!! I need more tissues!!!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 8:23 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
I love love this story! i read it on Twilighted several months ago but when I saw it here I am reading it again!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 8:15 PM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
hA! good for Esme!
Date: 29 Mar 2011 4:12 PM Title: For The First Time
Finally!!! LOL! I hope there's more!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 7:24 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted
ugh!! this better be good... the wait is killing me! lol!
Date: 28 Mar 2011 6:00 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
SWAT boys don't cry!!! LMAO! (j/k!)
Date: 28 Mar 2011 2:42 AM Title: The Unexpected
awww! E is such a romantic! Love the ring! I am dying to find out what is on that EAM playlist!
Date: 27 Mar 2011 3:48 AM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
right now I'm thinking she's totally over reacting, but maybe I need to read more...
Date: 26 Mar 2011 12:30 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
Awww! she really does care! and how cute...she invited him on the couch!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 2:49 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Haha! Pink is awesome, and Edward hiding around the corner with wood cracks me up!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 2:27 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
dum dum!
Date: 25 Mar 2011 1:47 AM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
This is really good!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 11:19 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
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