Date: 22 Jun 2015 11:41 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
Had Edward ever been tested after all his conquest's. I'm sure he would use a condom but you can catch things from oral. It's just you have never said.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 11:21 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
How can Edward mess things up.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 3:19 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
Poor Bella what a slutward.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 2:31 PM Title: The Day From Hell
I'm glad they kissed. I just hope Edward does something about it.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 1:55 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
Bella and Edward playing the denile game. Someone should mention denile is a river in Egypt :)
Date: 21 Jun 2015 1:21 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
I read this on FFN a couple of years ago, I loved it that much I though I would read it again.
I hate to think of Edward as a manwhore.
Date: 12 Jun 2015 4:52 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Oh dear, poor Tanya didn't get a happily ever after mention
[Report This]Date: 03 Feb 2015 10:59 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I laughed & cried till the very end, I was sad it is done. I look forward to the outtakes. Excellent story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2014 2:22 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
it was great to read this story again ;) thanks for posting on here ;D
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:50 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
I actually discovered Matt Nathanson with this fanfic... I just remembered it now!
It's been a long time since I read it, and now, when I need to study for my Med school exams, I just lose myself in the fantasy that I'll have my own Kevlar Knight one day :)
I like the SWAT chapters, but ER gets my heart to beat just a little bit faster :)
xo - Akira
Date: 10 Aug 2014 9:05 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
This was a great story. Love this side of Edward that you showed.
Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:16 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
A most memorable Christmas, what with Masen falling through the ice! I knew as soon as his mother told him not to, he would walk out on the ice. Good thing she shooed the guys out of the basement so they could rescue the boy! The years have been kind to the Cullens and the rest and blessed them all with a flock of children, the real treasures in life! You wrote a great story and I loved it!Now I can finish the outtakes!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 8:27 AM Title: Everything
Loved it, loved it, loved it! They had a great reception, complete with all the traditional trappings, so I'm happy, but not as happy as they are!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 7:46 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
Without a doubt, the most fabulous wedding I ever read about! Makes me wish I could have been there to see it! Esme and Edward did a wonderful job of producing this nuptial masterpiece. Bella had the right idea, simple, with family and friends, in the most meaningful place. Edward and his mother just embellished a bit! Their vows to each other took my breath away, they were so beautiful!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 6:45 AM Title: Connecting the 'Future' Dots
I must be older than I thought, because that drunken mess didn't sound like anything I would enjoy. Watching, of course, might be another matter. This chapter was pretty funny in spots. I was tickled they got their land to build on, and even better they foiled the greedy realtor! After all the grief and agony Bella and Edward have been through, they deserve this wonderful time!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 4:59 AM Title: The Eye of the Storm
Justice was truly done and the verdict was the proper one. I'm sure the whole crew is thrilled with the outcome, plus the fact it's over.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:31 AM Title: On The Hot Seat
I was so glad that Varner finally roared over that line the judge warned him about and he paid the price! Too bad he wasn't tossed in a cell for contempt, as I was pretty damn contemptuous of his sleazy tactics! Good, too, that Bella had the opportunity to refute most of the garbage anyway. It was pretty effective when she explained why she would never join in a lawsuit such as this!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 1:32 AM Title: Gearing Up and Getting Off
It's getting down to the wire for the trial and Bella's ordeal! I hope she gets through it without too trauma and upset.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 12:47 AM Title: Pressure
Please don't tell me that some slick lawyer will try to use Charlie's teaching Bella to shoot , into a weapon against her and the hospital! That would be gross and unfair. What am I saying, we are talking attorney after all!She shouldn't have much trouble passing her internship exam, but the trial will be more difficult, I'm sure.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 12:12 AM Title: Rock On
What can I say, but this was just perfect! From the costumes to the music to the outcome and the love between the Docs and the Knights!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:33 PM Title: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers
Thanks for the info onKKK, but I'm so old, I rememberwhen they were shown on television in the fifties! The Rock Band competition has been a lot of fun to read about, especially the tee shirt face-off! A+ for the shower sex and reunion scene, by the way! Great descriptions!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 10:50 PM Title: The Human Incubators
Poor Tanya, what a crappy hand life has dealt her! Sad but true, most of us have to learn the hard way, and she certainly has! I hope something nice happens between her and Benjamin.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:46 AM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
I'm thrilled that Sellers is behind bars and Bella had a big part in putting him there! The rest of the night was even better, and the thing with the mirror was so hot! This weekend has been amazing from beginning to end!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:18 AM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
Very sweet dream Emmett had, even though it made him cry! The name for their baby is lovely. May I just say, Edward treats Bella like a queen and would do anything for her! Now I'm off to see who was laughing!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 8:38 AM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
Country or small town kids have always done stuff like that I guess. It must be harder or more dangerous for city kids to pull crazy stunts like that. This has been a very enlightening trip for us all. It offers a great insight into Bella and Emmett, sort of explaining what made them the people they are.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 8:02 AM Title: The World Spins Madly On
No apologies necessary, you did a beautiful job on this chapter and were right about the tissue warning. This had to touch anyone who has lost loved ones, especially parents.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:11 AM Title: A Raft In The Flood
Well, my idea was okay, but this one of Edward's is even better! It lets him do what he loves and is good at, and do it close to home.I think Bella will be cool with it , much more than having to testify in court.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:31 AM Title: Surfacing From the Deep
I had an epiphany when Edward got dropped from the team, and then ran into his dad and heard about the lawsuits! Why doesn't he take on and upgrade the hospital security? He's certainly got the skillset for the job and it woulf be wonderful if he and Bella worked sort of together! Just a weird idea! They both are going to have an adjustment to all the stuff that's coming down the pike, plus Sellers is sure to be skulking somewhere nearby!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 9:19 AM Title: Enjoying the Dreams and Facing the Nightmares
Two or three really good things in this chapter, Bella's return to the ER, planning the wedding and dress shopping. The shower sex was a sure sign that Edward is continuing to recover, too!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:58 AM Title: Outside The Bubble
Since we all have been focusing on Bella and Edward and their trauma, the repercussions from Trager haven't been on the radar, I guess. It's sad that it's so normal for lawsuits to result from something like this! I knew this was all too calm and trouble-free to last!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:26 AM Title: A Happy New Year
I vote for it just being the magic of New Years, gathering with best friends, and most of all being head over heels in love! Stir all that with sexy, suggestive music and there you have it! Like you, I wouldn't do it, but it's fun to read about!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:50 AM Title: The Name Game
I'm really looking forward to the great last name debate, or rather a decision. Edward might as well admit he wants Bella to bear his last name, as well as his babies! We are getting closer to Bella working the ER and I sure hope she handles that well!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:19 AM Title: Declarations
What a fabulous Christmas! The ring exchange had me misty-eyed, the cop ornaments were darling and the Viper was to die for! Life is so good for them right now, I sure hope you don't put them in danger again, at least not before Edward is fully recovered!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 5:40 AM Title: Concerning Charlotte
Amazing that Dr. Peters was actually human to Bella, after the crisis with Charlotte, poor little sickly girl! It's always so hard with sick children, you want to help them and can't always!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 5:13 AM Title: Home
I imagine Edward is probably as happy to be home as he was to finally get some relief from that raging erection Bella helped him with!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 1:07 AM Title: Sympathetic Solitude
Looks like Bella is going to have a good learning experience on her pediatric rotation, especially with Dr. Salazar. Things are sure better with Edward, too, which doesn't hurt a bit! Bella is such a good doctor and can only get better!
Date: 23 Apr 2014 12:29 AM Title: Crankward
I knew there had to be a reason for Edward's sudden about-face attitude, and I sure hope it's one that he and Bella can work out! She really didn't need that extra dose of bad karma after her first day on peds rotation! This is such a stressful time for them both, it will test their bond, for sure!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 11:40 PM Title: Equivalency
That was a winner for Bella, for sure! Dr. Kellison stood up for her, as did Carlisle. Dr. Vandice was kind of a smug ass, until Carlisle told him off. Educators truly need to come down from their ivory towers now and again, to reacclimate themselves. Bella is my hero, she's got buckets of courage, coupled with smarts and compassion! Is it any wonder Edward loves her?
Date: 22 Apr 2014 9:14 AM Title: Disturbed
Of course it won't be fast or easy, but Bella is making a good start, and with Edward's help will overcome the trauma. Emmett had a really good idea having her beat the workout bag to a pulp!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 8:46 AM Title: Reaching Into the Darkness
Great chapter, even though Bella is starting to feel the full effects of the experience. Like Edward said, they will get each other through all this, especially since there is familyand friends to help them.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 8:20 AM Title: Warmth In the Darkness
Smart surgeon, to tell Bella she's what's doing Edward the m ost good. Too bad that bitch, Michelle, had to say those hateful things to Edward and screech at Bella! I'm tickled that Bella threw her out of the room by her ponytail!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 7:45 AM Title: For The Love of Esme
Nice little look into what Edward means to Esme and Carlisle, and vice versa.
Date: 22 Apr 2014 7:15 AM Title: Focus Fluctuations
Of course he can hear her, I've always been convinced of that! It's why you should be careful what you say around a comatose patient! I'm so glad Edward will recover, and I hope Bella can forgive herself for killing Trager. It's not her fault all this happened, after all!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 6:24 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss
Well, you finally did it, made this weepy old woman cry! When Edward told Bella all he was , was hers, I lost it! She was magnificent through this whole mess and then to have to see her heart's love shot like that was just horrible! The whole chapter was so tough to read, these are people I care about now!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 5:35 AM Title: Underneath It All
What a mess this is going to be! Who knew Trager had a twin? I'm so afraid this will be the crazy bastard and he's after Bella! Now Edward and the boys will have to rescue her! Help!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 4:16 AM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
WOW! That was pretty intense, and I hope it cleared up all the questions that have plagued Edward all these years! No surprise it took a sister to tell Elizabeth what was what! That was so sweet when Edward told Esme she was his real mom!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 2:45 AM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
I would love to have been at Dooley's for that night! How exciting that Emmett and Rose are getting married and having a baby! Makes me wonder if it will give Bella and Edward ideas?
Date: 22 Apr 2014 1:25 AM Title: For The First Time
Perfectly beautiful and damned amazing! Undoubtedly a most fabulous and wonderful lovemaking scene!
Date: 22 Apr 2014 12:04 AM Title: Empowering and Contentment
I'll bet Edward can just barely believe the difference in his life, now that he and Bella are together. It's looking good for Tanya and getting her settled back home in Chicago. Did I mention that Bella is a very nice woman? That it gave Edward the hope that it would mean Bella moves in with him was just the icing on the cake! Can't wait for the big deal on Friday!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 11:13 PM Title: Truth Revealed
That was a gut-wrenching experience for Edward and Elizabeth, I'm sure, and she wasn't very nice to Bella, either! It all worked out a whole lot better than it might have, and it was good for both mother and son to work it out, finally! Lucky the Volvo stayed on the road and rightside up!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 10:35 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted
I get it, Edward wants everything with Bella to be special and as perfect as he can make it! It was really sweet of Bella to ask Tanya to have dinner and drinks with her and Edward. Even nicer that they both want to help her get back to Chicago. They are both very nice, caring people. Oh yes, and very sexy, too!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 9:35 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
That's the thing about"what ifs", they will drive you crazy because there's nothing you can do about the past, only try to do better in the future! The swapping playlist thing was brilliant, you really nailed that one! I feel much better about their relationship, but still worry about the possible dangers ahead!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 8:37 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
Oh boy, that was great, all except for Edward getting beat up! I know just how Bella felt, going up and down that rollercoaster ride! That was damn scary, thinking Trager was going to try to take her! Poor Tony, now his son is probably going to die because his dad couldn't let a kidnapping happen! Thank God, Emmett told the truth and Edward has his Bella back! The bad part is, Trager is going to keep trying!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 8:14 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
Yes, it was kind of mean, but what really worries me is now she's on her own and people want to hurt her! Trust Emmett to charge in there like a bullmoose and half kill Edward before he knew the facts! I'm also a tiny bit disappointed with Bella's reaction, she didn't have much faith in their love it seems!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 7:03 PM Title: The Unexpected
The ring is lovely, and I'm tickled Edward gave it to Bella! I got goosebumps when she spotted that evil face outside Dooley's! One good thing came out of it, now Bella knows it isn't just imagination on the guys' part! At least they all had a good night before having to leave the girls , Amazing that Edward had the control to not just throw caution to the wind and make passionate love to Bella all night long! It was a close thing there before Andy pledged to guard her for him I just hope all the precautions are enough!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 4:52 AM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
Looking forward to this last night out, but cringing at the thought of the girls being kidnapped because the head of security owes the mob!
Date: 21 Apr 2014 1:40 AM Title: Bonding and Plotting
Not nice to put Bella and Alice in danger from the bad guys like that! God only knows what could happen while the team is out of town training! Now that Edward finally knows what he has in Bella, it's terribly unkind to snatch her away from him, shame on you!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 11:36 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Edward sure had Trevor pegged it seemjs! What a sleaze, putting on a show like that to suck in naive women! I'm so thrilled Bella overheard them and told him off! I'm not however happy she's in danger and the guys have to be gone for two weeks!Just when she and Edward are getting closer, this has to get in the way!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 6:26 AM Title: Perfection
I'm with Bella, they built things prettier 125 years ago! Thanks for the shot of the conservatory, it's beautiful! You're right this was a great first date and I enjoyed it almost as much as they did!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 5:38 AM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Carlisle and Esme gave Edward the best advice, especially when telling him to be himself and be respectful. I'm sure he made points when he waited for Bella to get out of the E.R. and fed her pizza!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 9:25 AM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
Sleep comes a whole lot easier when you have peace of mind! They may not have it all figured out, but it seems they have at least seen the blueprints! Hopefully Alice will be a good roommate and not drive Bella crazy.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 8:52 AM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I totally understand both of them, and it's so sad that they can't get on the same page with each other! Hope they get smarter and soon, because it looks like maybe Trevor may be changing his ways. It would be ironic if he had a change of heart and still lost the girl. Not that it wouldn't be karma, which I hear is a bitch! Look what it's doing to Edward!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 8:04 AM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Between the Femmes, and the guys, maybe Bella will get through this dating Trevor thing without too many bruises! Edward better play his cards just right, or he will lose any chance with her!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 6:44 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
You did just fine with the swat mission, since they all came back in one piece, plus it sounded like you knew what was what. Edward lucked out getting to hold Bella and dream about warm, sandy beaches and holding her. Now if he can just have the balls to tell her he loves her!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 6:08 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
It will be Edwad's luck that Trevor is a player as he suspected. Not only that but he will most likely be a doctor, so he'll be around Bella at the hospital. As long as doesn't treat her badly, Trevor might be competition for Edward.
Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:39 AM Title: Puppet Master J
I just knew this was a set-up, and Mama D was in on it! Look out Edward, they are after you now!
[Report This]Date: 19 Apr 2014 5:16 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Absolutely awesome! Curious though, why wasn't Tanya in the epilogue?
Date: 19 Apr 2014 12:35 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Why do I suspect Mama D of sneaky tactics, suggesting Bella have her friends join her in a girls' night out? She is going to stir the Bella/Edward pot a bit, I'm thinking!
Date: 19 Apr 2014 12:04 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
Since he doesn't feel worthy of her , how can anyone expect Edward to make the right choice to be with Bella? The two of them love each other, they just haven't quite figured that out yet!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 11:28 PM Title: The Day From Hell
In stressful situations such as this, sometimes the truth will out! Edward needs to listen to what Andy said, it's nothing but the truth!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 10:51 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
If Jasper can see it, I wonder why neither Edward or Emmett can?Of course, Bella and Edward both have the wrong slant on the other's feelings!
Date: 18 Apr 2014 10:17 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
A real grabber of an opening! Hope Bella is right about the swat team coming to the rescue! Her missing Edward the next morning should clue her in to the fact that she has serious feelings for him. It's undoubtedly the reason she hates Slutward and misses the sweet, caring side of him!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:23 PM Title: Sympathetic Solitude
I wonder what would of happened if Bella never went back to see Edward at lunch. Would of he of tried to see her to make things right. I love Edward but he seem to get away with treating Bella badly.
Date: 13 Nov 2013 6:44 AM Title: Equivalency
I really like how you have made bellas recovery realistic. In other ff where e is hurt... bella quickly is fine. But going through any loss would hv effects. Especially bella in tjis story! I looooove this fic! One of my gaves going in my list of all time faves!
Date: 06 Nov 2013 2:35 PM Title: The Unexpected
This chapter was so different from what was posted on Fan fiction. Glad I read both.
Date: 11 Oct 2013 9:31 PM Title: The Unexpected
sniff... the ring was so sweet I think I cried
Date: 11 Oct 2013 8:48 PM Title: Perfection
Thanks for the visuals. Loving the story
Date: 09 Sep 2013 4:14 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
I think your story is great but unfortunately I am calling it quits. I made it all the way to the Friday night chapter but damn this site is so annoying with constantly having to affirm my age, I'm just over it.
Congrats on a great story, (what I read).
xoxo,
B
Date: 31 Jul 2013 10:50 PM Title: Truth Revealed
very unrealistic chapter, skimped thro most of it. just hard to imagine something with all those years of tortured memories to get over that easy.
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2013 4:00 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I looooooved this Fic!! Was so well written and I loved the twists and turns!! And the HEA especially!! ;) I'm gonna miss these two!! The while gang as well!! Brilliant Amazing Story!! :)
Date: 31 May 2013 3:17 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
Just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying the story - I usually don't review until the end, but I really had to say how hooked I am. You have been rec'd repeatedly by various people on the FB page for 'Sarge's Girls' and I couldn't hold off any longer. (The poor to-be-read list got a shake up, I'm afraid.) ;)
Don't know how you feel about this, but in case you don't mind and would like to know I used Flagfic to get a copy of the story so I could read on my Kindle when I can't access the computer. Everything was fine, I thought, until one day when I came back to the laptop and realized I was not getting the chapter end notes. Evidently, Flagfic is not picking those up as part of the 'story' or chapters. Some people complain bitterly about author's notes and would probably be thrilled - I'm not. I like the A/N's and was disturbed to realize I wasn't getting them. Thought about going through Fanfiction.net, but your notes there say it's been edited. We can't have that! :) Anyhoo, I'll drop a line to someone who works here (an admin I think) and I know is a fan of Flagfic, but I thought you might like to know as well.
Loving the story and I know you'll hear from me again. Thanks for all the hard work and putting it out for me to enjoy,
Ging
Date: 10 Apr 2013 11:10 PM Title: Home
if i wanted super informative medical knowledge i would read a medical journal. its fan fiction people, you read because of the stoty not the jargon about cystic fibrosis for fucks sake! some people are wierd, enjoy the story, stop sweating the small stuff people...
Date: 10 Apr 2013 12:33 AM Title: Disturbed
i love that this story is long. short chapters piss me off, and when a story is so good you dont want it to end...
Date: 07 Apr 2013 10:11 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
god this story is so good, they are so sweet together, love that she is ballsy. emmet is adorable too
Date: 07 Apr 2013 3:44 AM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
loving your characters, but its 5am, i have to stop!
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2013 10:48 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
Great chapter :-)
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2013 7:12 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Nice chapter
Date: 24 Feb 2013 7:57 AM Title: A Raft In The Flood
Great idea!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 5:05 AM Title: Perfection
Awe he's so smitten, very sexy. What a great date, good idea:-)
Date: 10 Feb 2013 8:05 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
I hope he's starting to ask himself questions so he can get a clue because his idea of explaining what was going on with the Bimbo surely won't make Bella feel better about him or how she feels.
Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:49 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
This is the second time I have read this awesome story you have an amazing ability to write such amazing stories thanks.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 5:37 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
Good
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 3:17 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
Ok
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 7:25 AM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
Moving along....
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:26 AM Title: Bonding and Plotting
Moving along
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2012 6:24 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Hummmmm...
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2012 12:25 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Why do ff writers have such disrespect for nurses?!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 7:14 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
wonderful end and follow up to the wonderful families. Only thing missing was a Tanya update.
Thank you for writing and sharing.
