Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:13 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Well I'm gonna be one of those backing Bella up. I'm beggining to think Edward would be best alone; he's so emtionally stunted he keeps making a worse mess of things everytime he opens his mouth. Bella doesn't deserve that. I just wish Trevor wasn't a bad guy so Bella cukd have a healthy relationship for once.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 5:15 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
Oh, for Christ sake! He was being such a dick and then lays the horrible truth on her like that ugh! I wouldn't care if Maggie had turned out to be fucking mother Theresa, what he did was so wrong, I can't even with him. I'm actually in love with this Bella and her reactions, just until this last bit; he totally deserved a lot more groveling. I hate love triangles but I actually found myself liking this Trevor guy. Oh well...
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:15 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
I think it's really sexist to think of Edward's fucking up, as some quirk he has that Bella just has to continue to forgive. Hell no! Like WTF? Either he grows up, mans up and stops pissing all over things or it is over. Bella does not deserve going after a loser like that. If the name of the character wasn't Edward, it would be much encorage for her to leave him behind. He really needs to step up his game already.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:19 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
I'm really digging the story but I kinda hate this Edward. I don't get what he's hoping to accomplish by "explaining" anything to Bella. If it were me I would be royally pissed off either way. So he thinks is not as bad cuz he was trying to date the dotard bimbo? That to me is an even worse betrayal; so he goes and kisses her and then thinks it's an excelent idea to try a serious relationship with another woman? What kind of f-up logic is that? If the roles were reverse this kind of situation would be unforgivable and I hope she makes him freaking crawl for redemption because otherwise I'm gonna lose respect for her.
Date: 17 Feb 2016 8:42 PM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
I'm glad Esme voiced the things to Elizabeth that Edward probably never would have said. That being said, although I stayed and raised my kids after my ex abandoned us, I was still selfish and used drugs to cope with my heartache, thereby alienating my kids forever. Although it has been many years and I am drug and alcohol free for 21 years now, and despite words to the contrary from them, my relationships with them are forever changed and I can't expect any better from them. This chapter brought all this to the forefront for me. Thanks for this lovely story. I am very much enjoying it and hope you still have contact with the fandom.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 7:44 PM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Thanks for the pics at the end of this chapter! Your words did a good job describing the outfits, but the pics are nice to have! I too have the feeling that Trager or his friends are not done with them yet....
Date: 13 Feb 2016 4:26 AM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
Last chapter for me for today. I love their playlists, and hearing which songs they picked, but the lyrics in the body of the chapter was tedious and I skipped over most of them, especially the ones I knew. Sorry, just my opinion. I'm glad they worked things out.
Date: 12 Feb 2016 10:32 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
What will happen to Tony? Who will man the front desk now? Can they get someone they trust on such short notice. I'm glad Bella and Edward worked it all out, but what will happen with their SWAT training now? Will they get in trouble for leaving? Too many questions....I'll just read.
Date: 12 Feb 2016 1:14 AM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
I know their relationship is new, but for Bella to think the worst immediately without giving him any chance to explain isn't right. I hope she doesn't get kidnapped or anything like that on her way back to Chicago!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 9:20 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
OH I don't like that the mob has a mole on Alice's security detail, both for now when they're guarding both of them while the guys are out of town, and for afterward when it's just Alice. I hope Jacob might play a major role in helping the girls when the bad guys try to take them.....j/s. and p.s. I really don't like when Alice fusses and tries to glam up Bella, telling her that Edward will love it and it will drive the other girls off. I think that plain Bella alone is enough to do that, and if she isn't then Edward isn't sincere. Alice needs to butt out! just my 2 cents!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 8:16 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
So, I am guessing that new doctor Trevor is the new boss! Oh ugh! Looks like Bella and Alice are in trouble....love the lovey dovey kissy face stuff!! Can't wait for the first real lemon between them, lemon hoor that I am....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 4:37 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
I'm noticing, the more of this story I read, that it just flows beautifully. The written words on the page slide easily into my head and heart. I love that Edward has finally admitted to himself that he is in love with Bella! Something makes me think it will take her a while to really believe this....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 3:04 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
I'm glad he finally got to tell her his POV of what happened with Maggie. I know they aren't done resolving this, but maybe their friendship, at least, has been repaired a little. I wonder if Trevor IS in fact a player. He seemed nice....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:10 AM Title: Puppet Master J
I get how he feels. I do. It's better to never let anyone get close enough to hurt you than it is to be heartbroken when it inevitabley happens at the end of a relationship. I can relate to that. I can attest to the fact that all that kind of life gets you is alone and lonely at age70.
Date: 07 Feb 2016 9:45 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Hi there! This story has been on my TBR list for a long time! Another of yours was rec'd to me but I thought since I've had my eye on this one longer, that I would read it first. I'm ecstatic to find it here in it's unedited form and will happily read it here. Slutward! I love that name....can't wait to read of his, and the other guys', adventures.....
Date: 24 Nov 2015 2:13 AM Title: The Eye of the Storm
You brought tears to my eyes how you wrote about how proud Emmett, Bella and Edward were of baby Emma. and then I totally LAUGHED OUT LOUD when Bella asked Edward "exactly when did you become the girl in this relationship?" Your writing is amazing, riveting and keeps me on the edge of my seat with interest. I hope you, someday, see this and let me know if you have published anything. TYVM! 11/23/15
Date: 23 Nov 2015 3:33 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
OMGoodLord, heaven help them all...your writing is amazing, powerful, gripping. I could go on, but what would be the point? I think this has to be the most any written word has ever held me captive...like Bella and her hostages. Not only the hostages in the ER waiting room, but those of her very dear, loved ones, Edward, Emmett and the SWAT brothers as they fight to help/save her. This made me gasp for my breath. Stephenie Meyer cannot hold a candle to your talent. I certainly hope you see this and continue your ability in writing. TYVM! 11/21/15
Date: 23 Nov 2015 2:01 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
I LOVED how you wrote that Edward knew the moment when he fell in love with Bella............he knew he did not deserve her and "he could not have her, but needed to be saved from her" (song on the soundtrack of Breaking Dawn Part 2).............just goes to show you that what is meant to be, will be! I love, love, love your writing and I hope you see these comments. I would love to know if you are writing or if you have had something publised in Real Life............thank you! 11/23/15
Date: 01 Nov 2015 8:58 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
im really not fimiliar with this website but i really needed to write a review.
so i had originally fell apon this story a few years back i believe, i got to around chapter 20? before my laptops history was erased and i totally forgot the link to this story.. now just a few days ago my laptop sort of actually started working and showing my book marks AND i happened to find this story again.
and holy cow i fell in love with this story all over again! im not even a twilight fan im not even a bella/edward fan i mainly just liked twilight for the wolf shifters. i also am not even a fan of one person perspective HOWEVER! despite all of this i was pulled into this incrediblly written story that some how popped out of hiding for me.. i have been reading nonstop for the last 3-4 days and im in love, this story is so thought out and amazingly put together.
i cant express enough how much i enjoyed this story! i could totally see myself in bella as this girl next door tom-boy feminist and it made me like it so much more! the way you wrote edwards and bellas relationship had me craving me own and the bond between emmett and bella was so amazing and inspired me to protect my own brother. this whole story had me sinking into this world of doctor bella where i could fully imagine the scenes playing out in my head.
It was so cool to find this story after a few years and i just really needed to express how much you have inspired me to write my own fanfictions while trying out 1 person perspective and trying new things too. im not sure if your still on this site but thank u for writing such an amazing story .
Date: 23 Aug 2014 11:50 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
I actually discovered Matt Nathanson with this fanfic... I just remembered it now!
It's been a long time since I read it, and now, when I need to study for my Med school exams, I just lose myself in the fantasy that I'll have my own Kevlar Knight one day :)
I like the SWAT chapters, but ER gets my heart to beat just a little bit faster :)
xo - Akira
Date: 26 Apr 2014 9:16 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
A most memorable Christmas, what with Masen falling through the ice! I knew as soon as his mother told him not to, he would walk out on the ice. Good thing she shooed the guys out of the basement so they could rescue the boy! The years have been kind to the Cullens and the rest and blessed them all with a flock of children, the real treasures in life! You wrote a great story and I loved it!Now I can finish the outtakes!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 7:46 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
Without a doubt, the most fabulous wedding I ever read about! Makes me wish I could have been there to see it! Esme and Edward did a wonderful job of producing this nuptial masterpiece. Bella had the right idea, simple, with family and friends, in the most meaningful place. Edward and his mother just embellished a bit! Their vows to each other took my breath away, they were so beautiful!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 6:45 AM Title: Connecting the 'Future' Dots
I must be older than I thought, because that drunken mess didn't sound like anything I would enjoy. Watching, of course, might be another matter. This chapter was pretty funny in spots. I was tickled they got their land to build on, and even better they foiled the greedy realtor! After all the grief and agony Bella and Edward have been through, they deserve this wonderful time!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 3:31 AM Title: On The Hot Seat
I was so glad that Varner finally roared over that line the judge warned him about and he paid the price! Too bad he wasn't tossed in a cell for contempt, as I was pretty damn contemptuous of his sleazy tactics! Good, too, that Bella had the opportunity to refute most of the garbage anyway. It was pretty effective when she explained why she would never join in a lawsuit such as this!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 12:47 AM Title: Pressure
Please don't tell me that some slick lawyer will try to use Charlie's teaching Bella to shoot , into a weapon against her and the hospital! That would be gross and unfair. What am I saying, we are talking attorney after all!She shouldn't have much trouble passing her internship exam, but the trial will be more difficult, I'm sure.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 11:33 PM Title: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers
Thanks for the info onKKK, but I'm so old, I rememberwhen they were shown on television in the fifties! The Rock Band competition has been a lot of fun to read about, especially the tee shirt face-off! A+ for the shower sex and reunion scene, by the way! Great descriptions!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 9:46 AM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
I'm thrilled that Sellers is behind bars and Bella had a big part in putting him there! The rest of the night was even better, and the thing with the mirror was so hot! This weekend has been amazing from beginning to end!
Date: 24 Apr 2014 8:38 AM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
Country or small town kids have always done stuff like that I guess. It must be harder or more dangerous for city kids to pull crazy stunts like that. This has been a very enlightening trip for us all. It offers a great insight into Bella and Emmett, sort of explaining what made them the people they are.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 7:11 AM Title: A Raft In The Flood
Well, my idea was okay, but this one of Edward's is even better! It lets him do what he loves and is good at, and do it close to home.I think Bella will be cool with it , much more than having to testify in court.
Date: 24 Apr 2014 4:31 AM Title: Surfacing From the Deep
I had an epiphany when Edward got dropped from the team, and then ran into his dad and heard about the lawsuits! Why doesn't he take on and upgrade the hospital security? He's certainly got the skillset for the job and it woulf be wonderful if he and Bella worked sort of together! Just a weird idea! They both are going to have an adjustment to all the stuff that's coming down the pike, plus Sellers is sure to be skulking somewhere nearby!