Date: 10 Jul 2023 4:26 AM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
Loved it
Date: 10 Jul 2023 3:15 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2022 9:33 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
very good
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2022 11:50 AM Title: A Happy New Year
hot
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2021 12:53 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
great so far
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:44 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:43 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:42 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:41 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 03 Nov 2021 6:41 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Awesome story! Thank you very much.
Date: 29 Sep 2021 8:20 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
thank you
Date: 07 May 2021 4:21 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I loved this story!!!
Date: 15 Oct 2019 8:24 PM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
What a beautiful wedding! Loved the visuals!
Date: 14 Oct 2019 11:45 PM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
Glad Trevor is gone! What a horrible man!
Date: 14 Oct 2019 11:45 PM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
Glad Trevor is gone! What a horrible man!
Date: 14 Oct 2019 5:13 AM Title: Surfacing From the Deep
The proverbial shit is about to hit the fan for our lovable couple!
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:46 PM Title: Declarations
How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:46 PM Title: Declarations
How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:46 PM Title: Declarations
How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:45 PM Title: Declarations
How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!
Date: 13 Oct 2019 4:45 PM Title: Declarations
How exciting! They're engaged! So proud of Edward...he did a grest job. And, a Viper, too? WOW!
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2018 7:28 PM Title: The Unexpected
I read it at work. I couldn’t help it. Loved it
Date: 22 Apr 2018 5:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I've lost track of how many times I've read this, but I loved it just as much this time as the first! Excellent as always!
Date: 22 Apr 2018 5:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I've lost track of how many times I've read this, but I loved it just as much this time as the first! Excellent as always!
Date: 03 Mar 2018 1:16 AM Title: Bonding and Plotting
Wow the doc is a boss ... Didn't see that coming
Date: 02 Mar 2018 11:09 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Wait did edward leave the door to his room open when he laid down with Bella cuz if its soundproof how did em banging wake him....I want a soundproof room
Date: 02 Mar 2018 11:09 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Wait did edward leave the door to his room open when he laid down with Bella cuz if its soundproof how did em banging wake him....I want a soundproof room
Date: 02 Mar 2018 11:09 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Wait did edward leave the door to his room open when he laid down with Bella cuz if its soundproof how did em banging wake him....I want a soundproof room
Date: 02 Mar 2018 11:09 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Wait did edward leave the door to his room open when he laid down with Bella cuz if its soundproof how did em banging wake him....I want a soundproof room
Date: 01 Mar 2018 2:13 AM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Love it
Date: 08 Jan 2018 2:58 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Love it
Date: 08 Oct 2017 12:45 AM Title: The Inner Sanctum
And the plot thickens...
Date: 07 Oct 2017 11:53 PM Title: Perfection
Perfect first date. Thank god the boy finally got his head out of his ass
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:21 PM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
Aw! That was sweet.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:48 PM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
Finally things are looking up. Let's hope thta boy doesn't ruin it.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:13 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Well I'm gonna be one of those backing Bella up. I'm beggining to think Edward would be best alone; he's so emtionally stunted he keeps making a worse mess of things everytime he opens his mouth. Bella doesn't deserve that. I just wish Trevor wasn't a bad guy so Bella cukd have a healthy relationship for once.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:38 PM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Crap. Now I can't enjoy that Trevor situation seeing as he's a freaking sleaze. Bella sure knows how to pick the, huh?
Date: 05 Oct 2017 5:53 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
Damn it, why did Trevor had to turn out an @sshole? I SO wnated him to be a good guy. Finally Edward is getting his head out of his ass. About damn time too.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 5:15 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
Oh, for Christ sake! He was being such a dick and then lays the horrible truth on her like that ugh! I wouldn't care if Maggie had turned out to be fucking mother Theresa, what he did was so wrong, I can't even with him. I'm actually in love with this Bella and her reactions, just until this last bit; he totally deserved a lot more groveling. I hate love triangles but I actually found myself liking this Trevor guy. Oh well...
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:35 AM Title: Puppet Master J
He's in so much denial, it's not even funny. Man up, dude!
Date: 05 Oct 2017 4:15 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
I think it's really sexist to think of Edward's fucking up, as some quirk he has that Bella just has to continue to forgive. Hell no! Like WTF? Either he grows up, mans up and stops pissing all over things or it is over. Bella does not deserve going after a loser like that. If the name of the character wasn't Edward, it would be much encorage for her to leave him behind. He really needs to step up his game already.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:19 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
I'm really digging the story but I kinda hate this Edward. I don't get what he's hoping to accomplish by "explaining" anything to Bella. If it were me I would be royally pissed off either way. So he thinks is not as bad cuz he was trying to date the dotard bimbo? That to me is an even worse betrayal; so he goes and kisses her and then thinks it's an excelent idea to try a serious relationship with another woman? What kind of f-up logic is that? If the roles were reverse this kind of situation would be unforgivable and I hope she makes him freaking crawl for redemption because otherwise I'm gonna lose respect for her.
Date: 16 Dec 2016 5:47 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Loved this story. The characters were well developed, the story was entertaining and suspensful at times.
Date: 20 Feb 2016 2:14 AM Title: Declarations
I googled the Dodge Viper. The pics I found are much uglier than the above pic you posted. I like the older one much better!
Date: 18 Feb 2016 9:51 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
what a harrowing chapter. Bella is the hero and Edward is the one that gets shot....
Date: 17 Feb 2016 9:38 PM Title: Underneath It All
Fucking Feds is right!
Date: 17 Feb 2016 8:42 PM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
I'm glad Esme voiced the things to Elizabeth that Edward probably never would have said. That being said, although I stayed and raised my kids after my ex abandoned us, I was still selfish and used drugs to cope with my heartache, thereby alienating my kids forever. Although it has been many years and I am drug and alcohol free for 21 years now, and despite words to the contrary from them, my relationships with them are forever changed and I can't expect any better from them. This chapter brought all this to the forefront for me. Thanks for this lovely story. I am very much enjoying it and hope you still have contact with the fandom.
Date: 15 Feb 2016 7:44 PM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Thanks for the pics at the end of this chapter! Your words did a good job describing the outfits, but the pics are nice to have! I too have the feeling that Trager or his friends are not done with them yet....
Date: 14 Feb 2016 10:10 PM Title: For The First Time
At last! In this chapter, I read the song lyrics carefully. The songs you used here were perfect to describe them and their union. I loved it!
Date: 14 Feb 2016 12:38 AM Title: Empowering and Contentment
I hope they don't regret helping Tanya. I'm still skeptical of her motives, but that may be my hangup. This is an immensely enjoyable story!
Date: 13 Feb 2016 11:35 PM Title: Truth Revealed
I hope Elizabeth isn't conning Edward. That would be too much! I still distrust her. Her explanation seems almost too easy....love the song, "Sex On Fire".
Date: 13 Feb 2016 11:01 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted
Delicious. This will hold me over until the actual full on making love occurs. I'm glad Tanya seems to be a good guy in your story.
Date: 13 Feb 2016 4:26 AM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
Last chapter for me for today. I love their playlists, and hearing which songs they picked, but the lyrics in the body of the chapter was tedious and I skipped over most of them, especially the ones I knew. Sorry, just my opinion. I'm glad they worked things out.
Date: 12 Feb 2016 10:32 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
What will happen to Tony? Who will man the front desk now? Can they get someone they trust on such short notice. I'm glad Bella and Edward worked it all out, but what will happen with their SWAT training now? Will they get in trouble for leaving? Too many questions....I'll just read.
Date: 12 Feb 2016 1:14 AM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
I know their relationship is new, but for Bella to think the worst immediately without giving him any chance to explain isn't right. I hope she doesn't get kidnapped or anything like that on her way back to Chicago!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 10:13 PM Title: The Unexpected
Love that he gave her his grandmother's ring. Love that it can be worn 4 different ways, depending on the level of commitment. Nice taste of lime!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 9:20 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
OH I don't like that the mob has a mole on Alice's security detail, both for now when they're guarding both of them while the guys are out of town, and for afterward when it's just Alice. I hope Jacob might play a major role in helping the girls when the bad guys try to take them.....j/s. and p.s. I really don't like when Alice fusses and tries to glam up Bella, telling her that Edward will love it and it will drive the other girls off. I think that plain Bella alone is enough to do that, and if she isn't then Edward isn't sincere. Alice needs to butt out! just my 2 cents!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 8:16 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
So, I am guessing that new doctor Trevor is the new boss! Oh ugh! Looks like Bella and Alice are in trouble....love the lovey dovey kissy face stuff!! Can't wait for the first real lemon between them, lemon hoor that I am....
Date: 11 Feb 2016 7:38 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
I had just seen the opening gif show for this story before starting to read today. You said there would be mob involvement and here it is! Edward's apartment sounds really yummy!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 3:40 AM Title: Perfection
That sure was a doozy of a first date! Nicely written!!
Date: 11 Feb 2016 2:20 AM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
That was nice! Yes, they are slowly getting there, I see. Thanks for you A/N telling us of your plans for the story. Do you ever still read reviews?
Date: 11 Feb 2016 2:02 AM Title: Roommates and Baby Steps
I'm glad things are getting a bit better between E and B....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 10:35 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
heartbreaking chapter! Emmett was spot on about Bella's reaction. I'm enjoying the angst and the slow burn here....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 9:20 PM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
Poor Bella. She can't win. I hope she believes her friends when they tell her about Trevor.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 4:37 AM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
I'm noticing, the more of this story I read, that it just flows beautifully. The written words on the page slide easily into my head and heart. I love that Edward has finally admitted to himself that he is in love with Bella! Something makes me think it will take her a while to really believe this....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 3:04 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
I'm glad he finally got to tell her his POV of what happened with Maggie. I know they aren't done resolving this, but maybe their friendship, at least, has been repaired a little. I wonder if Trevor IS in fact a player. He seemed nice....
Date: 09 Feb 2016 2:10 AM Title: Puppet Master J
I get how he feels. I do. It's better to never let anyone get close enough to hurt you than it is to be heartbroken when it inevitabley happens at the end of a relationship. I can relate to that. I can attest to the fact that all that kind of life gets you is alone and lonely at age70.
Date: 09 Feb 2016 1:50 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
I love Mama D's description of Edward. It seems to take men longer to grow up than women, doesn't it? We let them get away with it! I hope girls' night out is fun her Bella and her friends....
Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:56 PM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
Oh poor Edward? I hope his slip into Slutward again was just temporary! Do men really get fooled by being led around by their dicks?? Oh silly me! Of course they do!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:37 PM Title: The Day From Hell
I'm so glad you're writing a Bella that is smart, capable, and a bad ass doctor. I love that! I'm also glad Andy woke up!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 10:20 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
If Jasper can spot their attraction for each other, it must be real! Are we going to have a slow burn on this one? Good!
Date: 07 Feb 2016 9:45 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
Hi there! This story has been on my TBR list for a long time! Another of yours was rec'd to me but I thought since I've had my eye on this one longer, that I would read it first. I'm ecstatic to find it here in it's unedited form and will happily read it here. Slutward! I love that name....can't wait to read of his, and the other guys', adventures.....
Date: 25 Nov 2015 5:23 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
Okay, I finally made it to the prologue chapter/"The Chapter" and it was a really good read! I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to read the next chapter.
Date: 24 Nov 2015 4:31 PM Title: Empowering and Contentment
I really like how you added the photos at the end of some of the chapters. I'm enjoying reading your story - thank you.
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2015 2:32 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I LOVE this story and I hate having it end. Blessings to you, CullenWannabe, you ROCK! 11/14/15
Date: 24 Nov 2015 4:58 AM Title: Everything
If I am being honest (SMILE), I do not want this story to end! BRAVO to A Cullen Wannabe! 11/23/15
Date: 24 Nov 2015 2:13 AM Title: The Eye of the Storm
You brought tears to my eyes how you wrote about how proud Emmett, Bella and Edward were of baby Emma. and then I totally LAUGHED OUT LOUD when Bella asked Edward "exactly when did you become the girl in this relationship?" Your writing is amazing, riveting and keeps me on the edge of my seat with interest. I hope you, someday, see this and let me know if you have published anything. TYVM! 11/23/15
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2015 3:33 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
OMGoodLord, heaven help them all...your writing is amazing, powerful, gripping. I could go on, but what would be the point? I think this has to be the most any written word has ever held me captive...like Bella and her hostages. Not only the hostages in the ER waiting room, but those of her very dear, loved ones, Edward, Emmett and the SWAT brothers as they fight to help/save her. This made me gasp for my breath. Stephenie Meyer cannot hold a candle to your talent. I certainly hope you see this and continue your ability in writing. TYVM! 11/21/15
Date: 23 Nov 2015 2:01 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
I LOVED how you wrote that Edward knew the moment when he fell in love with Bella............he knew he did not deserve her and "he could not have her, but needed to be saved from her" (song on the soundtrack of Breaking Dawn Part 2).............just goes to show you that what is meant to be, will be! I love, love, love your writing and I hope you see these comments. I would love to know if you are writing or if you have had something publised in Real Life............thank you! 11/23/15
Date: 21 Nov 2015 1:46 PM Title: Underneath It All
OMGosh, Edward banging on the roof of the cab with the badge...............horrors! THis is gripping, love your writing!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2015 8:58 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
hi
im really not fimiliar with this website but i really needed to write a review.
so i had originally fell apon this story a few years back i believe, i got to around chapter 20? before my laptops history was erased and i totally forgot the link to this story.. now just a few days ago my laptop sort of actually started working and showing my book marks AND i happened to find this story again.
and holy cow i fell in love with this story all over again! im not even a twilight fan im not even a bella/edward fan i mainly just liked twilight for the wolf shifters. i also am not even a fan of one person perspective HOWEVER! despite all of this i was pulled into this incrediblly written story that some how popped out of hiding for me.. i have been reading nonstop for the last 3-4 days and im in love, this story is so thought out and amazingly put together.
i cant express enough how much i enjoyed this story! i could totally see myself in bella as this girl next door tom-boy feminist and it made me like it so much more! the way you wrote edwards and bellas relationship had me craving me own and the bond between emmett and bella was so amazing and inspired me to protect my own brother. this whole story had me sinking into this world of doctor bella where i could fully imagine the scenes playing out in my head.
It was so cool to find this story after a few years and i just really needed to express how much you have inspired me to write my own fanfictions while trying out 1 person perspective and trying new things too. im not sure if your still on this site but thank u for writing such an amazing story .
Date: 23 Aug 2015 3:07 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Very good story.
Date: 13 Aug 2015 7:08 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I still love this story.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jun 2015 7:37 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Just read this for the second time...still loved it!
Thank you for sharing