Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 20-Epilogue-Treaty
This was kind of fun to read, too bad you never finished the rest of the books from Edard's POV!
Back at it. This time I hope to finish. I put the first chapter of Awakening up, that's Breaking Dawn my version. I hope you check it out.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 19-The Vote
I always smile when I read about Bella calling for a vote at the dining room table! It makes Edward so furious to have his family thwart him like that! He should just remember how stubborn his girl is!
I loved that scene too. Just a little note to let you know I've posted the rest of the Lunar Eclipse. I've also posted the first chapter of 'Awakening', my version of Breaking Dawn. If you're still around, I hope you enjoy.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 13-Misery
It's not like him to have no idea that Elizabeth had some powerful gift, one that made him do things he didn't want to. She was some sort of siren, I guess. Good thing he thought of Bella and broke away or he may have been raped!
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 14-Strategies
why bother Edward he is shaking up with Elizabeth.. Oh he forgot to tell you..
It has been forever, but I finally finished posting all the chapters for Lunar Eclipse. I've also posted the first chapter of 'Awakening', my version of Breaking Dawn. If your still around, enjoy. Thank you for all your comments they didn't go unnoticed, I enjoyed them all.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 13-Misery
See there he is jumping in with another woman. He does not love Bella. She is just some symbel to him not love the type where you can't leave that person you must be with them. He will next chapter be jumping into the sack with Elizabeth.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 12-Tracking
Well it is your story. I wonder in this one if you will have them kill Bella. Because you said it ends differently. I know he loves her but I don't think they are mates.. He just was too quick to cast her aside.
Date: 21 Mar 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 14-Strategies
dun dun dun!!!!!!!!! there is it is the big news.......loved Alice'sPOV!!!!!!!
Thank you for reading this story and thank you for all the wonderful reviews you have written. It's really nice to know what people think of my stories.
Date: 21 Mar 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 12-Tracking
ok so a really big review for all the chapters before this...... reading Jacob'sPOV was interesting and I reeally did enjoy seeing his transformation to wolf.... but since I have just finished listening to New Moon on audiobook everything was still very fresh.....I do believe that you were able to capture Jake and his feelings and that is good to see alot of authors like to make him a "bad guy" and truly he is not but it does work for their story!!!!!!!!!! *message to Edward* Damn Emoward lets just sit down and wallow in your pity right now, beat yourself up a little more and when you're ready I have got a great therapist for you so you can on these issues you have!!!!!!!! either that or a great big "emmett style" smack to the back of the head....yeah yeah yeah, "i am all hard as marble and your would hurt yourself".... don't care right now you need some since knocked into you!!!!!!!!!!!* end message* Thx for another great chappie!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Mar 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 7-Friends
Even though New Moon is not my favorite book in the series I do love hearing Jake'sPOV.... he is a great character and has a bigger part than anyone could have expected...... I am forever Team E/B but stll love Jake!!!!!!!!!!! thanks for his insight!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 20 Mar 2011 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 6-The Search
I was reading The Hostage also and for some reason that was not totally explained ebalways decided to take it down...I don't know if it had to due with the fact that she was getting Near You Always published or not, but I was very heartbroken to hear that this happened........ hope that helps..... so the fam is keeping things from Edward could it be Alice saw Laurent with Bella before everthing went blank because of the wolves.....there is something for Edward to think about he said he didn't want to know!!!!!!!!! Watch what you ask for!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2011 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 5-Seattle
*ok Emoward... that is one smack to the back of the head for EVEN THINKING that Bella could move on!!!!!!!!*
great chappie...... I will now be sending messages to Edward with ever chapter.....some might even make you giggle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I am giggling and thank you for leaving the messages. I'm glad you're enjoying the book.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 4-Seperation Anxiety
Loved this chapter a chance to see YOUR Edward...... I still like to have that little chuckle inside my head when I read how he thinks or feels about something..... my thoughts on the vision of Bella's wedding is that it is Her's and Edward's I don't believe that Alice's visions are subjective for everything!!!!!!!!!!!!! but that is just me!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 1- Birthday
I am really enjoying seeing NM from edward's POV loved the message he gave us before the chapter!!!!!!!!
Thanks for giving my book a chance. There will be a message from Edward before each book. What can I say the boy likes to have his say.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 16-Volturi
Always a disturbing ending.
THanks for reading and reviewing. I loved the Volturi the way Stephanie wrote them, not so much in the movies. I think they were a little to dark in the movies. I know they were suppose to be, but really I think it would have been better if they were less serious because we already knew how evil they could be. There is nothing better than someone appearing normal when you know they are not.
Date: 27 Feb 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 15-Italy
love this story
i always thought we should have had EPOV
so we get the whole story
I hope you write eclipse from edwards POW
Thank you for reading and reviewing. You are in luck because I have written Eclipse from EPOV already and it will be posted next.
Date: 27 Feb 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 15-Italy
Thanks for posting another wonderful chapter. I love Edward's perspective. His version of New Moon and the events are more intriguing and enjoyable. The retelling is awesome and is a great companion to the original works. Just kind of wondering how Aro talked to Carlisle and how Carlisle took the news regarding Edwar's plan. That couldn't have been a very easy conversation. Anyway you are still doing such an incredible job with this. Thanks for posting and making this so great. You are still a remarkable author. Can't wait for more stories.
thank you for the kind words and the review. The conversation between Aro and Carlisle was simply Carlisle trying to get Aro to make Edward stay until he could get there. Yes I believe he was planning on going to Italy to help Alice, but then she told him to wait.
Date: 07 Feb 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 13-Misery
You really had me nervous there for a minute. I thought he was going to stray. Glad he didn't. Hate his agony, but he brought it on himself. Stupid guy.
Yeah! I got that alot with this chapter, but never fear Edward would never do that on purpose. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 30 Jan 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 12-Tracking
you are doing such a great job staying true to the storyline-so interesting hearing a possible version of what Edward was doing. Well written!
Thank you for reading, it's always nice to know people are enjoying it. I love EPOV he was such a great character.
Date: 17 Jan 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 11-Misunderstandings
Absolutely love your story-it is always so interesting to hear the story through the eyes of others and you are so good at staying true to the story. Your descriptions and visualizations are fantaastic. It puts me there, just as the real books do. Keep up the great work, you have hooked another follower. I will be ansiously awaiting your next chapter!
Thanks for the encouragement, I loved writting these stories. I'm glad you are enjoying them. Hopefully they won't disappoint.
Date: 16 Jan 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 11-Misunderstandings
I thought that you where going to tell the story through edwards pov. I have been skipping the Jacob chapters as i'm not in his pov about the break up.
Apart from that I am loving ur story.
Thanks for reading and reviewing and you'll be happy to know that the next chapter we are back to Edward.
Date: 04 Jan 2011 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 1- Birthday
I'm totally disapointed I thought this was going to be New Moon from the CULLEN POV not Jake, again.
Sorry to disappoint, but never fear one more chapter and were back to EPOV. I hope you hang in there because the Italy scenes were my favorite to write in this story and I think they came out beautifully. Thanks for reading and reviewing your opinion is nice to have.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 10-The Meadow
These were the longest chapters in the book for me. Really don't like Jacob.
Author's Response: I'm with on that statement and you'll be glad to know there is only one more Jacob chapter then it's back to Edward. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 03 Jan 2011 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 10-The Meadow
Another really well written chapter!!! Soo good!!! I really like how you "filled the blanks" so to speak of the events! Oh God- and it won´t even take that long now until that faithful day including the infamous phone call!!!GAH!!!!! Suspense!!! I can´t wait to read more in EPOV though I really have to say that I like reading from the tribes side!!! ;D
Happy new year!!!!!
Thank you for reading and reviewing. It's always nice to hear what people think. Although the phone call was an important part of this story, my favorite part was Edward walking into the light. It was my favorite to part to write too.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 6-The Search
OMG- ´He is just sooo close to everything! He knows that Laurent is up to something and now that the wolves returned....grrrrr......
Good chapter! I´m sad to know that Edward will be mute for a while but JPOV could be interesting also ;D
When I was finishing Midnight Sun I really thought that when I wrote Dark Moon that I would leave Jacob completely out of it, but when I got to this point in the book I knew I couldn't do that. I knew I had to tell his story from his point of view, which by the way alot of the details came from SM's website. I wasn't a big fan of Jacob's until I was writing the fourth book which is the only one in the series that will not follow the original... at all.
Thanks for reading continous enjoyment.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 4-Seperation Anxiety
Again with the heartbreak...*sigh* I absolutely loved that you let him kept the photos of him and Bella that were ment for Renee and that you let him return to the meadow....ungh...he was sooooo close!! stupid stubborn aching vampire....
I always thought while reading New Moon that he would return to the meadow. This was his place after all and it was so far out of the way and Bella had only been there once, so I figured he would think that she wouldn't be able to find it on her own so it would be safe.
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 3-Ending
I don´t know what to say...I really thought that Bella´s POV from the break-up and and everything that followed her birthday was heartbreaking.....but this!!! Don´t get me wrong- though I always disliked the way and Edward and actually all of the Cullens let her- I absolutely love the Saga (obviously ^^) and my emotions were all over the place while reading it! But reading things from Edward´s POV .....that just takes everything to a whole new level!!! The pain and heartbreak...*sigh* everything is so much more intense! (I´m still desperately praying for SM to finish Midnight Sun and soon.... so that we can enjoy that from his POV as well^^)
Anyway, I think you did a really good job so far since my heart truly ached while reading these first chapters!!!! I´m curious to find out what there is to come!!!
I'm glad your enjoying Edward's version, I too felt it was heartbreaking. I also hope that SM finishes Midnight Sun, but my fustration was what made me write these books in the first place, so I suppose I should thank her for not finishing and allowing me the honor of doing so myself. Finishing Midnight Sun in my own way was very gratifying for me. Edward is such a wonderful character and I love writing his thoughts. This entire series that I have writen was such a wonderful learning experience that I wouldn't change for anything. So please continue to enjoy the rest of the series as I hope it lives up to your standards.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 5-Seattle
It is absolutely terrific. I believe your attention to detail really makes all the difference. It was nice to see the added chapter regarding the monies for Bella's college that came from the outtakes of the original book. Edward's POV seems a companion piece and fits extremely well with the saga. The essence of the story is there but it is so much better. Thank you for your continued posting of something so wonderful it really makes my day to enjoy it.
You pay me the most wonderful complements, so thank you once again. Reading them is wonderful and makes my day. Thank you for your continued support.
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 3-Ending
This just breaks my heart all over again. Great chapter!
Reading this review lets me know I did my job right, so thank you for taking the time. I hope you enjoy the rest of the book.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2-Stitches
Excellent rendition from Edward's point of view. This is definitely one of the best that I have read on all the fandoms. You have a great talent that makes turning the perspective easily and making it a better story. Being a Edward fan, I find these type of stories wonderful. Hopefully by focusing on Edward, you get a lot of family interaction with his decisions intertwined in the story not just the Bella/Edward love story. Will look forward to more chapters and the rest of the books from your unique style. It is truely an honor to be reading something this good.
Thank you for the wonderful review, they were very kind words and I hope the rest of the story and the other books will live up to your expectations. I believe they probably will because Edward is such a great character I found it easy for him to find his voice. You will definately see more of the family with all the decisions that have to be made. Thanks again for taking the time to read my stories.