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Reviewer: rtpobsessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 16 Jan 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
GOOD LORD!! I wish you would've continued this, this captures everything in a dark story!
Reviewer: nilo24 Signed 
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Date: 12 Apr 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
i like this chapter, it has everything . it seems you want to write more becuase he have unfinished buisness with her. good chapter , thanx for writting this chapter
Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderfully naughty and erotic! Ah, the power of the mind - in the right hands - like yours! Marvelous!
Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 31 Oct 2010 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yes, very dirty, but very hot! Loved it! Perhaps you may want to make it a whole story?
Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh my god that was so good please tell me that you are going to continue this i really liked it so good and so hot really great
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