Date: 12 Feb 2019 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
I would have asked when he realised sending the email was a mistake
To me that would factor in
Date: 11 Feb 2019 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is a bit weird
whyon earth is she letting him do this stuff
oh yes., fiction duh lol
Date: 11 Feb 2019 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
This is a bit weird
whyon earth is she letting him do this stuff
oh yes., fiction duh lol
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2018 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 37
wonderful story hope youwrote others
Date: 22 Feb 2018 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
It was a pretty amazing Fic.
Congratulations!
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2017 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
At first I thought her character was more independent and strong, fooled me.
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
I've been looking for this. Thanks to my FB groups, it was found.
Date: 10 Aug 2016 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 37
Just a well-written story! Thank you for sharing your thoughts so freely with us complete strangers :)
Date: 04 Apr 2016 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 31
They nevera usted protection and Emmet and bella is sooo wrong!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
I think is a woman! mad at bella cause of jasper
Date: 08 Aug 2015 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 37
Perfect ending!!!!!!!!! I have truly enjoyed reading this story. Thank you for sharing. I am sad to see it end.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 36
So glad they are moving forward together.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 35
I knew Edward had to be there. He would not have let Emmett come by himself.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
I have a feeling that Edward is on his way to New York maybe to see Bella. Hope they finally talk things out.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 33
Glad Edward and Jasper were able to put things behind them. Glad Edward decided it was time to grow up.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 32
Nnnnnooooo!!!!!!! I hate she found out about what Edward did like that. Edward still does not know that Jasper is Bella's brother. Hope they catch James. I knew it was him.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 31
Please tell me that is Jasper and not Jacob! !!!!!!!!!
The scene with Edward and Emmett with her was hot.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 30
I had a feeling it was Edward in her room. She has forgiven him once, will she do it again. Will she tell himthat Jasper is her brother mother finance.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
Edward is going to kill Emmett for not calling him and letting him know that Bella was with him. Is it Jacob or Edward? ?
Date: 07 Aug 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 28
Glad Emmett let him have it. I hope he finds her before her stalker does.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
Emmett is a big teddy bear. Live him. And yes, Edward does need his ass kicked. He asked her the question and he wanted the truth from her. I hope Emmett does let him have it. I am still not convenienced that it is not James. Can't wait to read Edward's POV.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is Edward pissed because she said she wanted to be fucked by him and Emmett? He just left her hanging there. OMGosh, I am so glad I do not have to wait for an update. I am so off to read the next chapter.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my!!!!!!!! That last paragraph wad HOT!!!!!!!!!
I LOVED the whole chapter. Perfect
Date: 06 Aug 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, he told her about Tanya. That meant alot to him to open up to her like that. Even though he did not tell her who the friend was. I am still would series getting what Jasper thought when he opened that email.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think Edward has finally admitted to himself how he really feels now he just needs to admit it to Bella.
Date: 06 Aug 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
She just needs to give in to her desires.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loving this story. I hope she finally embraces her submissive side.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
One minute she wants him bur then she is telling him no. Whiplash! !!!!!
Date: 05 Aug 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward has it bad. I am worried about Bella's reaction when she funds out that Edward sent pictures to Jasper.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
Edward is jealous. I am still thinking James is her stalker. He thinks she is his because of what he did to her.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't think that she had fully given in completely to Edward. That was hot.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am glad that she finally told him about what James did to her. Can't wait to see how much Bella enjoys what Edward does to her. I just hope she truly tries to enjoy it and gives it a chance.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella is giving me whiplash. One minute she is like mad becauseof what Edward does to her and they are just need to have a platonic relationship then she shows up in a bra and thong with a rob. What does she think is going to happen. Can't wait to see what happens when she finally let's go and just enjoys herself.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love Old J. He is a character. Lol. So Edward has been married before.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow, that was not what I expected to be behind that locked door. Can't wait to find out more of Edward's story now.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
WWhat in the world is Jasper going to think. I am so afraid that Bella is going to get hurt. Still wondering who her stalker is. I am thinking James.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
Finally he broke her resolve.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 10
OMGosh! !!!!!!!! I can not wait to go read the next chapter. So glad I do not have to wait for an update. This story is so hot.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is an arrogant bastard. But I sometimes catch myself smirking at what he is doing to Bella.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love the cat and mouse game they are playing.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is full of himself. Jerk. Lol. Is James our stalker? So Jasper and Edward were friends before Jasper bedded Edward's girlfriend. Can't wait to find out more.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 6
Again, OMGosh, I can't believe she has just meet him and is letting him do all of those things to her. Earlier how did he make her cum just by pinching her nipple?
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMGosh! Whoever is stalking Bella made a very bold statement with the explosion and shooting at them. Glad Edward is going to protect her. Still can't wait to find out more about Jasper and Edward's past and more about Bella's stalker.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMGosh! So someone is after Bella. Edward is after Jasper. Why is he after Jasper? I am really loving this story.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Wow, Edward is very bold. What a way to meet someone for the 1st time.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok, now I really interested in Bella's past. Also, what is up with Jasper and their dad?
Date: 03 Aug 2015 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to find out more about Bella's past.
Date: 05 Jul 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is aftercare not a thing in his mind
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 37
Command yes, but she is giving her love freely.
That is more than he could have ever hoped for in his choice of lifestyle.
To bad Emmett couldn't have found his HEA as well.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
Introspection and acceptance were the two missing factors, sealed with forgiveness.
Here's to the start of a very long and healthy relationship.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 35
She can't deny him anything. Especially when she is still a bit intoxicated not only by alcohol but also by his presence.
Emmett is one smooth operator.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
Well, Jasper and Edward have made progress in their messed up friendships. I actually blame Tanya for pitting the two friends against each other as some sort of sick twisted game; where she was the prize. Glad she's gone! Edward lost not only his wife but also the chance at having a family. How very sad. Jasper on the other hand took his rejection to another level of deceit and that's just wrong. And look what revenge did for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 33
Is Bella's blood type rare enough that a universal type-O donor couldn't assist her?
Won't the media get ahold of this and dig up something about relatives donating blood?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
Did James hit an artery or was it a direct hit to the bones? Bella's in shock. Edward should know how to field dress a GSW.(gun shot wound)
Does Emmett take out James?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
How did Emmett or Edward not hear this man, whom I think is Jasper, enter the bedroom?
Will Bella scream when she sees the pistol pointed at Edwards head?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
Glad it was Edward and not her stalker.
Will Jasper appear just as Edward is attempting to explain who it was that took Tanya away from him?
Bella is forgiving but will she feel like a pawn in the game between these two ex best friends?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 29
I fear that Jacob has found his way into Jasper's apartment. He has been laying in wait for her.
Will Edward get there in time? Or did Emmett sense something was wrong and turn around as soon as he figured it out?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope Emmett watched her leave so he can keep a close eye on her.
She ran.........there is no self preservation in that action.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
Don't do anything stupid Bella. For example, running back to New York to try and figure out what's happening back home.
I'd like to do more than just slap Edward up alongside the head for his stupidity.
I'm a bit uneasy with Emmett's casual approach to taking care of Bella after her first submissive experience. He was a bit too worked up for his own good after observing both Edward and Bella in full Dom/sub action. He did show an amazing amount of restraint. That may have also been out of respect for Edward as a friend.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
As many times as a Emmett and Edward have shared a woman, I believe Edward cannot do that with Bella due to his feelings of love for her. It would remind him of Tanya's betrayal. Possibly making him feel as though he is not enough for the woman he loves.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
One obstacle out of their way, two to go.
Can't wait to read how well they play together in his red room!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 24
Where does Jasper fit into Edward's confessions? Will the idea of revenge ever crossed his lips when he eventually reveals Jasper as his ex-close friend to Bella?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward, where is your hope?
Is he so broken from what happened with Tanya that he himself can not understand the difficult decision Bella needs to make at this very moment? He is in need of a partner. One that can be everything she needs as well as allow him to be everything he needs to be. His emotions are clouding that judgment. He needs as much time to reevaluate himself as she does.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward must realize that his disappointment comes from his feelings for her. His next line of thinking should be that she is still protecting herself from the abuse she took from James.
Will their next talk break through these issues they are each struggling to understand?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Edward has admitted he is in love with Bella but, does he realize that he is acting as a lover and not a Dom when he is teaching her the aspects of this sexual predilection?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Lust, Love or Revenge.........Edward has found himself in a difficult place. His own thoughts cannot keep up with the desires of his heart, mind and body.
Once Bella allows Edward teach her the intensity of her own desires, will Edward ever share her with Emmett? I think not, but will Bella's desires leave him to think otherwise?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wondering if Bella will be angry about the revenge tactic against Jasper? Then again, when she finds out what Jasper did with Edward's wife Tonya, she may take a swing at her half brother.
There has to be more to the story of Tanya and how easily Jasper went after her.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well, in Bella's own naive way, she's figured out that Edward already wants her to belong to him.
This fiancé situation needs a resolution quickly.
Emmett seems to really enjoy pushing Edwards buttons. Hahaha
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Edward is losing the battle to control his own needs. Bella has truly broken him down.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm a bit surprised that after Bella's revelation about the abuse she experienced at the hand of her ex husband James, Edward proceeded to push her issues of submission so quickly.
Let the heart begin to feel, let the mind begin to heal; for both parties involved.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
A test just to prove that she wouldn't touch herself while waiting for him or a test to prove that she truly did want him in the ways he believed she did?
More than likely both!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
So he was married..........to be discussed later, right?
I like the meddling housekeepers! Lol
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
Has Edward been married? Were they expecting a baby?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
This plan to humiliate Jasper is going to backfire!
Bella's going to be unbelievably angry with Edward.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
She may be hook on that feeling, but he is hooked on her. The total package!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 10
Who is trapping whom?
Bella is Edward's very own woodland Muse!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
When will we get the full backstory on Tanya?
Is Emmett a military buddy?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
Didn't she need to notify someone of her whereabouts or at least the fact that she is safe?
So Bella's the bastard child of a very influential senator. Did her mother ever marry?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward has just screwed himself. Somewhere he is himself the impression that he truly was in charge. At what point will he realize that he's actually given his heart over to Miss Isabella and his attempt at revenge against Jasper has been thwarted?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
Does Jasper know that Edward was Bella's next job detail? Was he made aware of this fact before he had to leave town?
How does Jacob factor into Isabella safety net?
Are Emmett and Rosalie and item yet?
Edward referenced dropping out of college or university as it were, and failing at his military career; what did he do or is that why Jasper is involved in the events that started this whole grudge match?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
So Edward believes that Bella is Jasper's fiancé?
Wow, every one of your characters is hiding something. That's just a wild concept for me.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
I had a feeling that the stocker would show his colors in front of Mr Cullen.
Edward now finds himself in a different predicament, his original intention was to take down Bella's brother but now he has another directive and that is to protect her from danger.
Will Edward find himself somehow working hand-in-hand with Jasper to keep Isabella safe even though he loathes him?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
Whoa, Mr. Cullen, Sir, is a force to be reckoned with; question is, can she keep up her end of the deal without getting in over her head?
Will she tell him about her current stalker?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm so intrigued by all the suspense, speculation and mystery.
We have yet to meet the private investigator that is holding a grudge.
Our heroine is in trouble as she is being stalked.
She has a failed relationship, or is that marriage?
Jasper is her brother but yet he holds a secret job. Their father is a high level politician.
Jacob is her business partner. She has a secret regarding her sexual preferences and desires.
Does Alice reside in New York where Bella used to?
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Perusing the Shelves had this as a rec'd story!
I'm very interested in where this will end.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 37
Thanks for sharing this story. a friend of mine rec'd it to me and I'm glad she did. Wow, that threesome was so hot. I was beginning to think I'd never get to read one in fanfics since mostly the Edwards are too possessive for that. Thanks for your great writing.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
So glad I'm getting to read this story. 2 chapters in, and I'm already hooked.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story. Been fan for a long time.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 37
Sinfully,delicously, lovely! Excellent storyline and very well written!
Date: 22 Feb 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 37
AWESOME story!!
Date: 21 Feb 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 28
WOW! My heart is breaking right now!!! Well written!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
woah! That was erotic and hot as hell!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
oooh... this has been in my 'To Read' list. Sooo glad I am now reading. So far, I'm loving the premise of this. Hard to imagine Jasper as her brother, but I like it. :) LOVE Edward's role in this
Date: 06 Feb 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 37
Wow. Great story as well as great writing. Thank you for sharing. Think I will go take a cold shower or maybe dig out my vibrator!! Lol.
PS. It's "taut". Not "taught".
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 37
Beautiful.... Perfect amount of action to balance out the angst. Their love was amazing. Great job!!!
Date: 13 Jul 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 37
That was one hell of a road! Wow! I figured it was James!
Im glad they are both able to be each others other half completely!
Absolutely loved it! Now onto the sequel! :)
Date: 07 Jun 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just finish to read your story and I loved it. The relationship between your Edward and Bella is beautiful. I like Emmett, he is funny
Just so you know, I knew it was James, instinct I suppose but the false clue about Jacob was a good idea, I almost thought I was wrong