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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 25

WOW!!! zombies give me nightmares but i'm glad i was able to finish reading this ;) thanks for posting it on here for us ;D

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

why don't they go to la push? or port angeles?

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

zombies are my worst fear of the supernatural but i thought i'd give this a go and from this 1st chapter i'm so glad i did ;)

Reviewer: Luereetwilitejunki Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2012 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

I just wanted to say that I usually don’t like to read the Si-Fi/Zombie Edward and Bella stories, but this one got my interest for some reason.


 


I really like this one. Thank you both for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: LadySkarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 2

I'm fascinated by your story! I was born and raised in Hayward, Ca. I lived there for 31 years.....Never thought I'd find a fic that even mentioned Hayward. I am anxious to see where you take this. Thanks for writing...your story is very unique.



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Reviewer: dwright Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great story. It's nice to read a story with a strong, confident Bella once in a while. Thanks for writing!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

i really enjoyed this story. thanx for writing

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: lorens Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 25

I like your ending to this story because it did not make the humans all work together and rebuild their lives, instead it showed that even through the zombie virus people still had their different views on how to live and it is just the way of Human kind. sorry if i'm just babbling but I really liked that you did not take the easy way and have a utopia or something. :~D can't wait for the new story~!

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 24/22

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 23/ 21

:)

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 23/ 21

man so many preganant. but hey really what else do they have to do. i am glad bella is happy being pregnant. too bad katie is taking it so well just a little jealous. i know she will grow out of it. kids are funny when they are jealous. i love the name faith. it fits for them and there miracle baby. well it has been what almost a year. they do not know what caused the virus and what keeps it living so called. but now it seems as if the zombies are dying off. maybe cause they have nothing more to feed off of. can't wait for the new chapter. loving it, thanx for writing



Author's Response:

No thank you for reading Sassy.

We always love the indepth reviews from readers. It tells us what they liked, loved and hated. Yeah they have been underground for almost a year now. The next chapter should be posted soon. Thanks again for reading.

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2011 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 23/ 21

Great chapter!  Looking forward to baby Charlie...well all of the babies in the near future.  Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thanks Sarahbella.

It was great hearing from you again. We are so glad that you liked this chapter. The next should be posted some time this weeksend or next week. As always thanks for reviewing.

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: linelia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 23/ 21

Excellent chapter



Author's Response:

linelia, thanks for the reviw and for reading. The next chapter should be posted soon.

IP28

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 20

i feel sorry for elizabeth. christian took advantage of her not having the money to see her kids. she was trying i am glad she got away with the 3rd child. looking forward to edward and car finding out. glad esme had a little girl. their family is complete. but now they are having issues with the zombies

i am having so much fun reading this story. i am on pins and needles as to what will happen next. will they keep fighting them or go under and bunker down. love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 19

i love the candy as dog poo that was great. i cringed i thought she was. thank god it was candy.

poor carlisle and hsi junk. but at least he knows the pain she is going through. hope the peas helped.  i can't believe the zombies are getting in. you would have thought be now they would be gone

love the story



Author's Response:

Thanks Sassy, the dog poo thing was something my oldest son said. It was kind of a rhyme or song. I thought it was funny so I added it. I am glad you liked it. The junk squishing and pea accident is something I whitnessed when my friend was in labor and waiting for the ambulance to arrive. I was the one who got the peas for his twig and giggle berries. Thanks again for reading.

Ip28 and Shawney

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

when i read zombies i wasn't so sure about it but then you start reading and it keeps you quite entertained. i must say she grew up in a rather unconvitional way but thank god cause she was ready and prepared.

love it



Author's Response:

Thank you Sassy.

We always love hearing from new readers.

IP28 & Shawney

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 22 OUTTAKE

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 21 OUTTAKE

:)



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;)

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 20

:)

Reviewer: Sarabella79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 20

Really enjoying this!  Action packed & keeps me on the edge of my seat!  Thanks for a great read so far.  Looking foward to the next chapter!

Sarah



Author's Response:

Thank you Sarahbella. We always love to hear from our readers. I am working on the next chapter right now and it should be posted by this weekend.

IP28 & Shawney

Reviewer: EsmeCullen47 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 20

loving this story! it's had me on the edge of my seat since the start!

if you're still taking requests for outtakes I'd love some more Carlisle and Esme! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you Esme. Sure I can write an outtake about Esme and Carlisle. I am working on the next chapter and a few other outtakes right now. The next chapter should be posted soon. Thanks for your review and as always for reading.

IP28 & Shawney 

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter!  Can't wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Thank you leAnn. I am working on the next chapter as we speak. Thats for reading.

IP28 & Shawney

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

Can't wait to see what happens next and how they handle the break in :) maybe stupid Paul will get what he deserves, same goes for victor.



Author's Response:

Thank you Savage for your review. It is always nice to see new readers enjoy our story. Thanks for the review. The next chapter will be posted some time next week.

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 19

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you LeAnn for reading and Reviewing.

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 19

:)



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:)

Reviewer: TheSavage Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

FINALLY!! a zombie story with twilight. This story is fantastic, I love it :) can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 18

:)

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter.  I love that Edward calls Bella his wife.  Can't wait to read the chapter the includes their meeting.



Author's Response:

Thank you LeAnn.

It kind of seemed appropriate, they are together and are raising Katie together. The part where Bella refuses the wedding band made the most sense to me. It wouldn't be 'real' to just slip a ring on your finger without some kind of fanfare. Things are still new in regards to the group adjusting to a new way of thinking. I am working on the next chapter as i speak. We are so glad that you liked it. Thanks for reviewing.

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: DrHannibalLedford Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2011 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

This story just keeps getting better and better. And I thought you handled the topic of God and religion quite well. In fact, I think Edward's last statement, " I would rather believe in something and find out I was wrong then to believe in nothing and have my soul pay the price" summed it up rather nicely. :) Anyway, as always, you did a great job and I can't wait to see where this all leads.

Cheers!

~Dr. H.  



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for giving us your thoughts Dr.H. This was the one chapter that i have dreaded writing since this story idea came to me. Religion is always a touchy subject in a normal setting and Edward's belief system is honestly my own. I could have kept the bible and god out of this story, but I didn't believe that was right. I think that people would start questioning their faith if something like this were to happen. It is a normal human responce to question our beliefs when thrown into life or death situations. I am glad to hear that you thought that we handled it well. Shawney and I had talked about it a great deal before I posted this chapter. As always thanks for reviewing.

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

:)



Author's Response:

:) right back at ya Nelum.

 

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2011 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 12

i loved this. I would've been gathering everything i could too lol

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 16

:)



Author's Response:

:O)

Reviewer: twilightstuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 16

As usual, loved the story. thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

Hey twilightstuff

thanks again for reading and reviewing and a new chapter will be done this week.  We are very happy you loved the story.  Can't wait to hear from you soon

Thanks again

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome as always!! I don't think they should add anyone else to the group.



Author's Response:

Hey mentalmute,

Thanks as always for reading and reviewing.  We really love hearing from you guys.  New chapters coming soon

Thanks again

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

Great chapter.  I like how you let time lapse in this one.  Anxious to read more, as always.  :)



Author's Response:

Hello again leAnn

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.  We always love hearing from you.  New chapters coming asap talk to you soon have a good week.

Thanks,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: ratchet Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2011 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 16

love this story ,am allways waiting on an update .xxxx



Author's Response:

Hey ratchet,

We are so glad you like the story.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.  She will have an update next week.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 15

:))))))



Author's Response:

Hello Sunny,

Thanks for reading and reviewing we love it when you bring us smilies lol.. hope you had good holidays.  New chapters coming soon

Thanks, IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 15

:)



Author's Response:

Hey Nelum,

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  Hope you liked it.  She will have an update as soon as possible.

Thanks,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Nulem your reviews are always welcome.

Thanks again

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2010 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 14

LOVE IT!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey Sunny

Thanks for reading and reviewing updates are on the way... hope you love them too.

Thanks again,

IP 28 and Shawney

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)



Author's Response:

Hey Nelum thx for reading and reviewing. A new chapter will be up shortly.

Thanks,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh no!!!......love it!!!



Author's Response:

Hey sunny

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  There will be an update soon.

Thanks again,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter!  Can't wait to find out what happens next!!



Author's Response:

Hey leAnn,

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  A new chapter will be up asap.

Thanks again,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

Nice!!

Reviewer: memyselfandI Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

I was surprised and very happy to see this chapter today. I enjoyed it very much can't wait for the next one.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: twilightstuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

As usual, I loved it.

So much fun with the Forks people.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

Great chapter!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading Nel.  New chapters coming soon.

 

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: twilightstuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 11

Thanks for the update.  Totally loving your story.



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing Twilightstuff.  New chapters coming soon and I for one can't wait but she wont budge on giving me secrets on whats coming next :( lol 

Thanks again

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: memyselfandI Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 11

good chapter can't wait until next update.



Author's Response:

Hey Memy thanks for reading and reviewing more chapters coming soon.

Thanks again

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love this story!! Please keep it up!! Thank you!!!!



Author's Response:

Hey sunny thanks for reading and reviewing you know we love that... Next chapter coming shortly.

 

Thanks agian

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 10

sad face i wish you'd update sooner



Author's Response:

Awe Thaigher she is updating as soon as she can.  Its hard with her family, Thanksgiving and Christmas coming.  sorry if your upset.  we do hope you keep reading and reviewing tho.

 

Thanks,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)



Author's Response:

Hey NelumOnelius thanks for reading update coming soon.

Thanks,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2010 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 10

Lovely chapter - zombies attach remember on the run to take credit cards - check.



Author's Response:

Hi Rhiannon thanks for reading and reviewing we do hope you like the chapters updates coming soon.

Thanks,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 9

Great chapter!!!

Reviewer: mentalmute Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 9

Aaarrggghhh!!  lol   You know we'll keep waiting!!

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

fist pumps more more more!!! lol

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 9

:)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 9

Another cliffy?? Oh well....I gotta say...I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!   Keep it up :)))



Author's Response:

TY for reading and reviewing sunny.   I promise more chapters soon and of course more cliffies lmao.

Ty again

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: memyselfandI Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

Great Chapter, looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Hey memy,

Thanks for reading and reviewing she will have more chapters soon so keep up with the reviewing we love 'em

Thanks again

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: ratchet Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 7

never been into zombie stories ,but am loving this,xxxxx



Author's Response: Thank you for reading. A few people have said the same and have seemed to enjoyed this story. I hope that is you as well. Always IP28 & Shawney

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

i'm mad there isn't another chapter after this lmao! i love this and i want more.



Author's Response:

Hey Thaigher

Thanks for reading and reviewing a new chapter will be up soon. 

Thanks

IP28 and SHAWNEY

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter!!!  If there were any mistakes, I didn't notice.  I was too busy enjoying the chapter.  :) 



Author's Response:

LOL! Ty leAnn for reading and reviewing pls keep em' comin.

TY

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

LOVE IT!!!! Please keep it up!



Author's Response:

Ty Sunny keep em' comin

Thanks,

IP28 and SHAWNEY

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

:)



Author's Response:

:) THANKS FOR READING

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

 

Reviewer: memyselfandI Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great Chapter looking forward to Fridays post, your story is one of the ones I look for all day.



Author's Response:

AWE Ty so much memy can't wait to hear from you. 

thanks

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: twilightstuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks for the update.  I enjoy the Edward and Bella you have going.

Good luck with the medical stuff.



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing twilight hope to hear from you in later chapters.

Thanks,

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

:0) TY FOR READING NelumOnelius keep reviewing

TY

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 7

this is bullshit, i want a update now lmao!!!!! great job sweets i love this



Author's Response:

lol I know what you mean Thaigher she keeps me waiting also it sucks...  Thanks for reading and reviewing keep them coming

THANKS

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

nothing you can do to make a story that is already good better. I love this.



Author's Response:

TY so muchThaigher looking forward to hearing from you in later chapters.  Feedback is always welcome

THANKS

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: Thaigher Lillie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2010 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 1

this is really good sweets.



Author's Response:

TY so much Thaigher more chapters to come soon

Thanks

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

Really like this storyline!!!! Keep up the great work!!!!



Author's Response:

TY for reading and reviewing sunny we are having a good time doing it might have to do it again sometime. lol

Next chapter is coming soon keep on reading

TY

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: twilightstuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thanks for the update.
Loved it.

Author's Response:

We love to hear from people that have read the story and review but we really love it when they love it..

Next chapter coming soon.

TY IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

Great chapter!  I'm glad Edward took Paul down a notch.  :)



Author's Response:

TY for reading and reviewing again leAnn I loved it too I can't stand Paul lmao.  Next chapter coming soon so keep on reading,

 

TY

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: bluecast Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

thanks for posting ive been missen en wanten for more



Author's Response:

TY for reading and reviewin blue missed hearin from you too lol new chapter coming soon.

TY

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: bluecast Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 6

still loven it



Author's Response:

TY for reading bluecast.  IP28 and I love to hear from you.  We like to know that you like what you are reading so keep the reviews coming.

 

TY

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

I'm not liking Paul.  Cocky little fart.  Loved the chapter though!  Can't wait to read EPOV next.  :)



Author's Response:

Ty for reviewing LeAnn.   I wasn't to thrilled with Paul either. But, I never liked the regular one in the book either lol.. I hope you keep reviewing EPOV should be coming shortly.

THX agan.

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: memyselfandI Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

I really enjoy this story I keep looking for up dates every couple of hours. I am hooked and can't seam to get enough. Thank you for the enjoyment of the story.



Author's Response:

Ty memyselfandi we always love to read your reviews and there will be an update very soon.

Ty for reading,

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) Really like it! It's very interesting, can't wait to see where you guys go with it!



Author's Response:

TY sunnyheaven we love it when you read and review the stories.  An update should be up very soon

TY for reading

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

Really like it!



Author's Response:

TY sunny we hope you keep reading.  More new and exciting chapters to come.

THANKS

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

nice!!



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing sunny more chapters coming soon.

THANKS

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3

Very interesting!!



Author's Response:

TY for reading sunny more chapters coming soon

Thanks

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

:)



Author's Response:

TY for reading and reviewing Nelum love hearing from you.  An update should be up soon

Thx

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: Rhiannon5 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 6

This story is starting to take shape, I love eccentric families.

Author's Response:

TY for reading and reviewing Rhiannon I'm excited about where this story is going also.  There will be an update very soon

TY again for reading and reviewing

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: twilightstuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks for the update.

Totally looking forward to your story.



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing twilightstuff.  An update is going to be posted very soon

TY again

IP28 and Shawney

Reviewer: bluecast Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

great job can't wait for more i think it is now my fav



Author's Response:

Ty Bluecast we hope you enjoy the future chapter.

Reviewer: laylieb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 5

Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Ty Laylieb we will have the next chapter asap.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 5

:)



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing NelumOnelius :)

Reviewer: twilightstuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 5

I am loving your story.

Please keep writing.

 



Author's Response:

Ty Twilightstuff IP and I are working hard to get the next chapter out for you.

Reviewer: twilightstuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

I am really liking this story and looking forward to your updates.

 



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing our story. Can't wait to hear from you in coming chapters.

TY

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

Great chapter!  I'm glad Bella stood her ground and showed everyone up front that she's not gonna take their crap.  :)  Happy Halloween.



Author's Response:

IP and I say Ty LeAnn.  I myself love a good kick @ss Bella story lol.   New chapters coming soon.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 4

More now please..... :)



Author's Response:

I will post another chapter today, but only because it is Halloween. I am glad you like it.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 4

Great chapter!  I know this was a EPOV chapter, but my favorite part of the whole chapter was the stuff at the end with Bella kicking ass.  She's my hero!  Lol, as always, anxious to read more.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, The next chapter will be more detailed. I will post one more chapter today because it is Halloween.

Reviewer: leAnn0388 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 3

Great chapter.  Glad to finally know what's goin on with Edward.  Anxious to read the next chapter since it's gonna be EPOV.



Author's Response:

TY for reading and giving feedback more chapters coming soon

THANKS

IP28 AND SHAWNEY

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 3

:)



Author's Response:

:0)

Reviewer: halloweenlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

iam so glad that bella is going to get edward and his baby i can't wait to read edwards pov love this story i hope you update soon



Author's Response:

Ty for reading and reviewing halloweenlover. Can't wait to hear from you in the coming chapters.

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IP28 AND SHAWNEY

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Date: 29 Oct 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

iam hooked can't wait to read more great job



Author's Response:

Ty for reading halloweenlover. more exciting chapters coming soon.  thanks for the feedback

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IP28 AND SHAWNEY

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