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Reviewer: alh1971 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story and would be thrilled if you decided to expand it. ; )

Author's Response:

When I finish cam & lomo I may come back to this and do something with it.

Reviewer: Milet Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just found this story and I love the idea of it.

I would be happy if you write a story out of it, now that TPW is finished.

Author's Response:

I do plan to turn this into a full story. I want to finish CAM first before tackling this one.

Reviewer: Kitikejt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2010 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

To opowiadane jest świetne :) Liczę, że zdecydujesz się kontynuować historię bo pomysł jest naprawdę dobry.

It is awesome - I hope more will come soon :)

Reviewer: Mick Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

LMAO! And on that safeword note I am definately crawling into bed! LMFAO - I have already stayed up reading and reviewing way more than I intended, what can I say? Your writing kinda sucks the reader into it. Thanks so much!

Author's Response:

Glad you liked! 

Reviewer: ERIKA SHOVAL Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1


Reviewer: jillangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 1

I really liked this, and I hope you turn it into a story!!!! 

Author's Response:

It will be a a few months before I do anything with this story. I have two stories going now plus real life. I think readers would shoot me if I started another right now.

Reviewer: ChloeWinchester Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2010 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

any idea when this is gonna get longer lol

Author's Response:

I am working on plans to turn this into a full story in a few months.

Reviewer: AnaCullen159 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2010 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1

do you think u will ever update this? i'd really like to know what would happen

Author's Response:

I'm actually going to turn this concept of J/B into a full story later this year.  I'm trying to wrap up a few things first before I take on another story.

Reviewer: T101 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can just imagine Jake as a dog - cool idea!

Author's Response:

I have plans to turn this into a full storyline later this summer or early fall.

Reviewer: SvassGudinna Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

What a great concept for a Jacob/Bella story.  HOT!!  But, it definately left me wanting more -- please, at least finish the birthday, fantasy night. 

Reviewer: Sunlily78621 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

This is a great story, and you have a great writing style keep up the good work!  Wish I could have read what happened next...  ;)

Reviewer: maijacob Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story.  I can't wait to read the full story of this.  I actually followed you from Fanfiction.net to see if you had written more.  Thanks for sharing your story and writing such a great story.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2010 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 1

Soooooooo--------When does the rest of the story begin ????!!!!!!  A very good start ;-)

Author's Response:

Actually this story just proved to me that I can't right smut without sounding stupid.  I have plans to use the concept of this story to write a full story starting this summer.  We'll see how brave I am at adding smut then.  LOL

Reviewer: fleur50 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2010 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

génial! Quel début prometteur!

Reviewer: fr_larsson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 1

loved this one-shot,

best wishes, Linda

Reviewer: twihard4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2010 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was both sexy and hilarious! Purina! I would love this made into a full story. There are definitely not enough Jacob and Bella stories out there, good ones anyway!

Reviewer: DaisyBlack Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

I pimp this story out left and right, and when I couldn't get a hold of you I kept asking TSO if you were going to continue it..LOL..Such a gem, and soooo looking forward to more of it :)

Reviewer: Beautiful-Liar13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was amazing. I loved it so much I cannot wait for this to update again

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'll be watching for the story!

Reviewer: Kougas Older Woman Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love her safe word!!! LMAO!

Author's Response:

That was actually the whole point of the o/s since I can't write smut to save my life.  I'm good at the drama/angst but sound like a fool when trying to write sexy. lol

I have plans to turn this concept of B/J into a full story when TPW is finished.  It won't be bdsm, but will be full of drama.

Reviewer: Sibel88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

will there ever be a part 2?

Author's Response:

No this story was supposed to be a oneshot for a contest last year for best safeword.  I'm no good at writing bdsm. I do have plans to turn this into a full storyline when I finish TPW though so watch for it.


Reviewer: firefly81 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2010 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really good story.

Reviewer: TwiMandy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

PLEASE continue this story! It's such a great idea and I'd love to hear more.

Author's Response:

I have plans to turn this concept into a full story after I finish TPW

Reviewer: arawrable Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Aw, damn about the one-shot part. I loved this. :) I can't wait for more installments.

Author's Response:

Later I have plans to turn this concept into a full story.  Not until TPW is finished though

Reviewer: Twilight2Midnight Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2010 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved this story on the other site but I just had to reread it & review it :)

Oh Jake is just SO HOT & YUMMY!!!

OMG who could reject a pet like that!!! LOL

Thanks for posting it here just so I could red it all over again - I do hope you do continue on with it AFTER TPW of course :)

Author's Response:

When TPW is finished I have plans to turn this concept into a full story.

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