Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love vamp stories. Loved read this one. Thank you.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 21
Sweet. Not saying anything about Jerkob. He's such a little prick
Date: 17 Aug 2016 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 19
I like how you've twisted BD into this storyline as well as all the associated characters.
Date: 17 Aug 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 17 Aug 2016 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
This really has turned into a compelling read. Thanks
Date: 17 Aug 2016 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Enjoyable read. Thanks
Date: 17 Aug 2016 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oops. Looks like he caught her afterall. 🤓
Date: 17 Aug 2016 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
Gees. She can't catch a break at the moment. Good chapter. Thanks
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 9
Lol. You know I'm so hypocritical. If canon Jerkob came out and said 'she's mine' that would be so repulsive and icky. But when Eddie says that well let's just say there is a lot of swooning happening around here. LOL
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh. Didn't expect Eleazar. Edward is so sweet. Confused but sweet. Thanks
Date: 17 Aug 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Good backstory and Edward is always Hawt
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
This is really interesting. Thanks
Date: 17 Aug 2016 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice mystery developing. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2016 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
Diferent I like it
Date: 21 May 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
Nice..Edward..
Date: 21 May 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow..I really love...this vampire.. Bella..awesome..
[Report This]Date: 17 Jan 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 23
awesome story ;) i loved her powers ;) how come they had silver rings? wouldn't platinum be stronger? also their father wasn't a minister? ;D
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 23
This was areally good story, regardless of it being your first vampire tale! All the elements of a good story were there and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
Quite a lovely way to say goodbye, even though it took three hundred years to achieve!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 21
Such a soul-satisfying ending to that battle! The wolves are pretty happy Bella didn't end the world, too. I think she's rather glad about that herself!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 20
It's with a sense of gratitude that read the scene where Bella dealt with that nasty little bitch, Jane! Aro was a ower hungry deluded fool!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 19
Hope there's enough help for Bella to defeat Aro and his army!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think it was the perfect time for them to totally complete their bond this way! I'm betting it will make them even stronger now they are truly one.
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
Whew, that was close! I didn't think Edward was going to be able to talk sense to Bella for a minute!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 16
Bella seems to have tapped into Alice's powers, and witnessed what could happen when the Volturi come for her. What I don't understand is why them coming causes Bella to kill her family? It makes no sense!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
I really like the rapport between Bella and Rose. This isn't the usual dynamic for those two, and it's a nice change. I'm thinking Rose is on the right track, also. Bella may have all that power and ability, but it doesn't mean she has to end the world!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
This is such a poor time for Carlisle to stick his nose into Bella's love life! Oh wait, maybe it's Jasper?
Date: 09 Jan 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
Okay, now I have to hear what this prophecy is all about!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 12
It must be a real burden, to have that much guilt weighing down your soul. Maybe acknowledging Edward's love for her, and her's for him, will help ease that burden.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
Appears that Edward is a calming influence on Bella's enormous powers. It's progress that she's finally admitted to at least thinking she's in love with Edward.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Now what do the wolves want with the vampires? It's good that Carlisle and Bella discussed Edward and it's good that she and Eleazar cleared the air a bit.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
Now we know why the brothers want Bella. Hope to heaven they never find a way to get her!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
Eleazar knows how to understand powers, so he must be telling the truth about Bella! That was a kind of devestating story, alright. Don't blame Bella for the guilt she bears.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well, obviously no love lost between Bella and Eleazar. Now UI'm curious to know what went down in Africa! It seems to mean an awful lot to Bella.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Maybe now they will figure it out! Hearing how Bella destroyed a large newborn army, I'm beginning to see why even the Volturi don't mess with her!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh goody, now we get to hear the history pf Jasper and Bella! Can't Bella or Edward figure out what's gouing on between them? I never thought vampires were that clueless!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Just had a suspicion that shapeshifters might be involved with that uneasy feeling Bella had! She kind of seems to enjoy school more than she thought she would.
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
I wonder if it has something to do with Edward?
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
I thought this history would be compelling, and I was right! Off to be compelled some more!
Date: 08 Jan 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
I already like that you made Bella and Carlisle siblings! Their's must be a really interesting backstory, especially if it's been three hundred years since they have seen each other! I know I'm going to want to know why and how Jasper and Bella are together, too!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
I'm not a big Edward/Bella fan but I really did injoy this story. I really liked the different layout of the background of the story and how you switched it up BIG time. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
Date: 11 May 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
YIPPIE. Houston we have ignition!
Date: 11 May 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
Finally Rose and Bella! Friends, sisters not in battle even.
Date: 11 May 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
okay here we go. This is their problem. They are attracted to each other and are fighting it.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
Excellent loved it.
Date: 29 Jul 2011 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
:-) cute even if she scares him !
Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 1
sister this is good.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 23
that was an amazingly original story with one of the most beautiful endings!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
I like it. I think you have potential. :)
Date: 17 Jan 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
This is the first story of yours I've read, and I really liked it! I chose a vampire one as they are usually my favorite, and I was glad to read you plan on writing more. However, I enjoyed your writing so much, and you have so many other stories already written that sound great- I can't wait to start reading another! Thanks so much for the great writing! :)
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Dec 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
What a fantastic story. You created such an interesting and unique story. I love the friendship between Jasper and Bella and making Bella and Carlisle siblings was very creative. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
absolutly loved it! started it late last night... finished it this morning! great read
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
very good story!!!
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Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
wootwoot!!!! Finally :)
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[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh my god that was an AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
crap crap crap I have to go to work......ugh!!! I wanna read on!!!!
Author's Response:
Didn't I tell you that I was taking this down in like five minutes???? Ok, I''m kidding:) We'll be here when you come back:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
so far so good :]
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Thanks:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awww Thanks for taking the time to write.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I put up three new stories yesterday that I am working on, if you want to take a look at them:)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 23
What a wonderful story! I read it all in one day! Great plot!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
*whistle* Bravo! Bravo! *whistle*
Loved it, and I can't wait for the next one!! Woot Woot!
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Thank you, hon:)
Date: 11 Nov 2010 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
That was a great story thank you. This is the first Bella Carlisle story that has actually made snes and i greatly enjoyed it thank you. ANd any story that kills Aro get a plus.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
OMG *blinks rapidly to clear tears*
I loveyou so much BB. This story is pure perfection. Out of all of your stories I have read (which is all but 2 now) this is my favorite.
So beautiful. There isnt a dry eye reading this story, I guarantee it.
Love it, love you BB!!!!
*tackleglomphugglesquishies you*
Author's Response:
Thank you:) It was certainly different and it was a challenge but I enjoyed it alot!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well done! I lovedthe entire story and that was a perfect ending.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
I really loved it it had it all .i can't wait to see what you will write next as always it will be worth it and i can't wait .
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Thank you:)
Date: 10 Nov 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
awww liked the "family reunion" there at the end
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
OMG, beautiful BB!!! They really needed that. She and Carlisle can let go of the past and concentrate on the future. Wonderfully written dear.
I missed you yesterday!! *hugs*
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[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, touch and go for a minute. She is so powerful. At least the Volturi are gone
*sighs with relief*
Awesome! Loved it!
*hugs*
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
Ah-mazing!! Ah-some chapter! Best one yet! The fight, the lemon... the end of the chapter...
LOVED IT!!!
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Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
good chapter
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[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 21
*sobbing with joy*
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Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
sweet!!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 08 Nov 2010 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
woo hoo e1 is good
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[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 20
HOLY COW SHIT THAT WAS AWESUUUUUUM!!!!! please write more PLEASE write more!!!!! make it quick cuz im dying over here!!!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wow! I cant believe that!! Aro was so stupid.
He should have known better.
Im trembling slightly BB, I really cant wait til theres more :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
Please don't kill anyone of our faves. Nice chap BTW
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Thank you:)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
yikes..hope they're okay!
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[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
GOD DAYUUUUM.....thats all i can say.
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[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
yes i can say awkward and a few other things like " HOLY SHIT "
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
She sure is powerful. She has expoloded with power before and it did not hurt anyone before only cracked things lets that is the case again. Maybe it was a shield explosion again...........
Bella is kickass
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Thanks:)
Date: 07 Nov 2010 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 20
YIKES!!!!!!!
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Date: 07 Nov 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
hopefully everyone is just knocked out.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
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[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
O.S.M evil cliffy,lol, please don't leave us hanging for too long,excellent ch. .c.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
WOW, OMG the battle is on!
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[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2010 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
*dabs eyes to clear tears*
*tries to catch breath*
BB... I cannot express how much this chapter meant to me.
*starts to cry happy tears again*
Peter... and I...
im the same chapter...
Thank you BB, thank you so much!!! *clears throat and gets down to business*
Oh my goodness, I hope she can do this without killing everyone!!!
Poor Bella. She finally gets laid then BAM!
Aro get jealous and wants some.
Creepy old fart!
Author's Response:
Just don't let Charlotte catch you. I hear she is a real bitch ;)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
yikes!!!!!
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Thanks:)
Date: 06 Nov 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
of course she will. If she kills chelsea first, maybe everyone else will come to their senses
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:) Thanks!
Date: 05 Nov 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
awwww for meadow sex
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Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
I have to say, this chapter turned out quite nicely :)
You Rock, dear BB!!!!
Sweet ass lemonade as well, if I must say so... and I must, I absolutely must *giggles*
See ya nexy update BB!!
*hugs*
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 18
Very nice chappie. :)
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Yeah, they finally made love. I think it was very romantic and fuckhot. I am curious to see who shows up on the Cullen's side of the fight with Aro.
Thank you for the update. How long do you intend on the story being?
Author's Response:
I have through Chapter 21 done and there will be three more. SO not long.
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2010 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
:-) you did good.
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Thanks:)