Date: 25 Mar 2011 7:58 PM Title: Time of Dying
that was creepy!! i almost didn't read it because i was so afraid of the violence and what i thought had to be a terrible ending. plus, i was thinking of bella as an unmarried person who would be raped or worse. after realizing she and edward were already married, my fear grew because that meant she had more to lose. after all that horror, i was glad to know she was waking up in a hospital. then there was just a moment of contentment before i realized victoria wasn't done yet. creeptastic!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2010 7:43 PM Title: Time of Dying
how can you leave me hanging like that... that was pure evil lmfao!!! great story and i hope you add more.. if not, it was still great
Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:25 PM Title: Time of Dying
this is really good!!! i love it!!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:41 PM Title: Time of Dying
That was really good do you plan to continue it after the contest
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:56 AM Title: Time of Dying
thanks good story or one shot
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:15 AM Title: Time of Dying
They're both crazy, James & Victoria. James blaming Edward for their daughters death when she had cancer, Victoria trying to free Bella, James shooting Victoria then the police shooting James and now Victoria blaming Bella? Nuts!
Great job on the o/s but can't wait for more Parchute ;)