Date: 27 Aug 2017 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Loved the story and thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Was thinking Bella might be pregnant.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Mmmm glad they're on the same page.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
I wanted to say last chapter that Charlie was right and Jake should mind his own business.
Aro is an ass. I wonder if Sam changed the review at all or if Aro let it run as is.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Thought the review could have been better. It was nice but it didn't say everything offered. He said he was put in activities in the area and he didn't, plus he didn't mention how luxurious the suites were baths were, views, balconies.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
I hate that in stories. How can you take time when you don't even know the details? What is there to think over when you don't know both sides to a situation. It's his job and he's not suppose to tell people who he is. I think it would have made a difference if she let him tell her that he wasn't doing the article. I was hoping Edward was calling to quit but I guess he's going to do an article with raving reviews instead.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 13
What an ass. It seemed like Aro did that on purpose.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
I'm glad emette and Rosalie stayed, a little dispointed that she didn't talk to Bella. Meeting the parents went great. I was wondering if Rosalie is related to Jasper but I guess Edward would have met them at the wedding if she was.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 11
Rosalie was definitely a bitch. Not sure why Bella didn't enjoy dinner by the fire with Edward instead of eating alone and covering herself in flannel to punish Edward like it was his fault. The cat should have been in Bella's suite after the first meeting at check in. It was a little unprofessional for the help to be traipsing through the lodge the way they were. Not sure how one person can do all the work especially if the lodge was full of guest. If there is only one person then they would have to be on alert and available 24/7 which really doesn't seem logical
Date: 27 Aug 2017 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Uh oh..... good thing he already left a message opting out of the article. So jakes engaged but he doesn't seem to be acting like it. Why is he ignoring Edward and what's with the throat clearing and the pissing contest hand shake if he is taken?
Date: 27 Aug 2017 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Uh oh. ... and I'm wondering if he didn't answer on purpose because he was jealous of Jake being there.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
I hope Edward doesn't leave a bad review. He knew she really wasn't open for guest and she was being nice by letting him stay. She even told him she wasnt really open so how could he even judge correctly if they weren't officially open and he was the only guest.
Date: 27 Aug 2017 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hate that he's leaving
Date: 26 Aug 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
He's on vacation after he leaves the lodge so I don't see why he has to leave Friday.
Jake seems pretty friendly.
Date: 26 Aug 2017 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
I was right, he found her endearing and he was being an ass..... lol
Date: 26 Aug 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait to read Edward pov. Is he thinking jackpot like an ass or does he think Bella is endearing?
Date: 19 Jul 2016 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Just lovely! Thank you for your creative work and sharing it with us.
Date: 19 Jul 2016 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
Yeah book the flight because weeks of being angry and sorting your shit out without the full story from the man himself is stupid! She should have at least talked to him. Like my mom always said 'use your words.' But now a great review equals a conversation...oh Bella. Ridic!
Date: 19 Jul 2016 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am enjoying your story. Especially nice that 30 something E&B find each other. Oh and Jake can he be a footnote? Please! Hey I've known you for 0.03 seconds but please give me a nick name (Bells hate it). Oh and put on some pants you giant. JS
Date: 22 Feb 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
awesome little story ;) thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D
Date: 28 Apr 2011 3:27 AM Title: Prologue
For some reason it will not let me go to the next chapter..... :( Every time I try it tells me I have to 18 or older...Can you help me with this? Is this story on another site?
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Very fitting ending indeed. Lovely. Bravo!
Date: 20 Mar 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
This was a beautiful story and I enjoyed it very much! Thank you for sharing it with us!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
I loved this story, and you are quite amazing in your telling! This is my kind of story, one that you don't want to put down, and one that makes you sigh and cry at the end!! Thank you!!
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
cute and refreshing. Like how they both us to hot younger lovers and ended up with each other and hot as ever. would love sequel to see how daddyward is... i always love him
Date: 17 Mar 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
i knew it! i knew aro was the one going to spill the beans...
Date: 16 Mar 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Happy Eeeeend !
Just like I wanted it...
I really like(d) this Story.. too bad it is over now...
And thank you for the name max... not Anthony... this name is used mcuh too often !! :)
Date: 15 Mar 2011 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
very good story thank you for sharing it with us all!
Date: 15 Mar 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
So sad that it is over but what a great ending they go out in styel.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Really enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
It was a good story but why so short ?
Date: 14 Mar 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
So so so sweet... :) congratulations
Date: 14 Mar 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
So cute. What a great ending.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
What a perfect ending. I love that they have a little boy now and their lives are so happy! Great story...thanks so much!!!
Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Epilogue
Great story.. could have been longer but It was great.
Date: 11 Mar 2011 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wonderful chapter
Date: 10 Mar 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am so happy about the baby and even more happy in the way he told her he was happy about the baby. I have enjoyed these two. Thanks
Date: 09 Mar 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Such a sweet romantic thoughtful Edward in this chapter....
Date: 09 Mar 2011 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
There having a baby! I love it. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Awww!! I'm surprised she didn't notice herself, lol. I wonder what Charlie will do when he finds out?!
So glad they're back together! =D
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Date: 02 Mar 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
There going to have a baby! there going to have a baby! one hell of a Christmas present. I am sad tho because it is almost over :( Has been a great story.
Date: 02 Mar 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is preggers!
Date: 02 Mar 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well she is PG... ha ha..
couple of more chapters huh?
Date: 02 Mar 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
Any doubt that she's pregnant? None at all.
Date: 27 Feb 2011 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm so glad they're back together. Now they just need to figure out what happens next.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
Was afraid it was going to be too late. Edward has no job, he will be great running the lodge with her.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Finally, that was a great chapter. :)
Date: 25 Feb 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
I love these two. I am glad they seem to be working things out. Their evening was perfect. I am glad they are going a little slow but not holding back their feelings. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was short but very sweet and sexy. I cant believe it is almost over.
Date: 13 Feb 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wonderful chapter!
Date: 11 Feb 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love this story. I am glad when the story exists out of Forks and large metropolitan areas.
Thanks,
Date: 11 Feb 2011 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
Had me worried there for a minute. Thought she was going to see him with Heidi.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 17
Thank you I loved it what do you mean the frosting was to sweet that was a great reason to come all the way LOL. Hands in his hair my wish lol. I am glad vaction was good for you I am loving it.
Date: 11 Feb 2011 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
Lol, I love how Bella played Edward at the end. That was funny. Great chapter!
Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am so glad they are together. I was afraid that Bella was going to see his with Heidi and that would mess things up again. I can't wait to see how things go from here. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 17
i loved Bella's line at the end. That was hot! hehe :)
Date: 09 Feb 2011 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hope when she gets to Chicago, he is not dining with a woman. Well, I hope not anyway.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love Edwards cheeky review, it is wonderful.
Cant wait for the update.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 16
It is about time she is going after her man! I love the article her wrote. It was perfect. I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to seeing Bella again. I just don't want them to miss each other. That won't happen will it???
Spending time with Charlie was the best. I am so glad their relationship is growing and getting even better then it was. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well he made his bed and he is defently living in it.
I really hope Bella does not make him wait to long... he just might move on.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
It is a pity that he did not get to her first.
Date: 09 Feb 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
You may want to change the author spelling for Puddle Jumping from 107yroldvirgin to 107yearoldvirgin. Awsome chapter!
Date: 09 Feb 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow he certainly got his feeling across with the review. This separation is painful.
Date: 08 Feb 2011 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella is going to go get her man yes love it. Have a great vacation
Date: 08 Feb 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was a great chapter. I'm glad that Bella is finally pulling her head out of her ass. I mean, come on he didn't cheat on her or murder someone. At least she could talk to him. The cliffy makes me salivate for the next update. :)
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 15
Trust after lies has to be earned. What can he do to get her back?
Author's Response:
I agree... :) thanks so much for reading - I hope to update soon - RL has been keeping me busy!!
Thanks so much for the support!
xo
Jaime
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 15
Dam! He's giving up way to quick. sigh..... Update soon. :)
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading - I hope to update soon - RL has been keeping me busy and away but I am going on vacation!!
Thanks so much for the support!
xo
Jaime
Date: 25 Jan 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
loved it I feel for her loss but this is a great new step for her .love this story
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
At least she talked to him. Please make her go to him. Are we going to read his article and is he going to tell Aro to sick the job up his ass????????????
Author's Response:
you might be on to something.. I will tell you that you will get to see the article and it might be sort of a middle finger to Aro... :)
thanks so much for reading - I hope to update soon - RL has been keeping me busy and away but I am going on vacation!!
Thanks so much for the support!
xo
Jaime
Date: 25 Jan 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 15
Even though it is his fault, I feel bad for Edward too, but I also feel bad for Bella. She has already been through so much and now she has to deal with this. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much for reading - I hope to update soon - I'll get some writing time this coming week while I'm on vacation!
Thanks so much for the support!
xo
Jaime
Date: 25 Jan 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well that was short. Okay I said most of this on the last review. My thoughts on Bella. I know she wants to get this going, she really needs help. She has to look at what he actually did from the beginning to the end. No he did not tell her, but the implication would be that was his only reason for being there. We all know that stopped early on. Now she has pushed him away and taken some time thinking and what he thinks is she will never want me again.
Bella is digging her own hole.
Author's Response:
I promise I won't drag it out ... she just needs to get her thoughts in order and stop doubting the choices she made. Her main priority is the lodge right now and she thinks she might have compromised that and what her mother left her so she has a lot of things going on. Unfortunately he did lie by omission and if it truly wasn't a big deal, in theory he should have told her. That's how she's looking at it. In her mind there is some underlying reason why he didn't say anything because in all honesty it wouldn't have been a big deal, and we as readers know that he decided early on not to do it, but she doesn't.
She'll work it all out and maybe a step back is the perfect thing for them. :)
thanks so much for reading - I hope to update soon - Thanks so much for the support!
xo
Jaime
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Knowing it was coming did not make it any easier.
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
My heart is braking I knew she would be pissed and I knew she would send him away but it just kills me. How is he going to fix this??? Please dont make me wait for to long.
Date: 18 Jan 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Okay well I knew she would react like this. I expected her mad, but he did not write the review and that is #1. He left and came back still had not written the review #2. Think he would have already done that if that was his intentions. He has been working for free and obviously she needs help and love #3.
He deserves time out! He doesn't deserve to be banished.
OKAY NOW SWEETIE FIX IT.
Date: 18 Jan 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 14
I really understand why she is so mad, but I hope she will talk to him at some point. He made a mistake. We all make mistakes. She just has to think it through and he needs to give her some time. They have to find their way back to each other. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2011 2:05 PM Title: Prologue
well it was good it makes me want to continue - so here we go!!
Date: 12 Jan 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh shit!!!! BUSTED!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
o.m.g. im FREAKING OUT...i cant wait to see what happens next!! dont keep us waiting for longgg!!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh nooooooo....I didn't want her to find out this way, but I just knew she would. I can't believe Aro would say that knowing he called the White Swan Lodge. I really hope this doesn't tear them apart. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 10 Jan 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Never pays to keep secrets.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
Uh oh, this'll be interesting!
Date: 09 Jan 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
Shit is going to hit the fan I hope she lets him explain and not send him away. Aro is a creep he knows what he is doing and that is trying to cause shit.
Date: 09 Jan 2011 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Okay sweetie.. Leave us out here on the cliff. It is too cold for cliffs. Please update us soon.
Good story I am sure Edward will hang himself. He has been naughty and not opening up to her about his job.
Let's see how she takes it. HMM
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
I say he should move into the lodge. Perfect job for both of them. He could still write, just not travel as much. Say write something different perhaps books are articles for magazines other than the one he had been doing.
Sweet story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I truly appreciate it!
Update is coming soon promise! Edward is realizing the ways his life could really change here and it's all for the better!
xo
jaime
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
Very quick.
Author's Response:
I know it is quick.. but ... when you know you know. One of my BF's got engaged 2 wks after meeting her husband.
Hope you are enjoying! Update coming soon!
xo
jaime
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 12
I want him there with her. They could have such a great life there together. I just don't want her to be hurt because of why he showed up at the lodge. I can't wait to see what is next! I love this story. Great job...thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you again.. for reading and reviewing!! He's really seeing how things in his life could change! that's a good thing!
I truly appreciate the kind words you have!
Update coming soon!
xo
Jaime
Date: 29 Dec 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 11
Well, he has to be honest with her first and then I hope she still wants him to stay forever.
Rose was her sweet little self wasn't she??? Poor Emmet! Great job....thanks so much!!!
Author's Response:
Lots of honesty on the horizon... I think :)
thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I hope you enjoy the story!
Update coming soon!
xo
jaime
Date: 28 Dec 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the dock, it was awesome! He better be honest with her. I hope she understand and they can figure things out. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it!!
THank you for reading and reviewing! I hope to have an update posted soon!
xo
Jaime
Date: 28 Dec 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh noooo...that is how she starts to figure things out??? Great job...thanks!
Date: 28 Dec 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am sad that he left, but I have faith it will all work out. Alice will get to the bottom of this. Great job..thanks!
Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 12
Im so excited he is going to move into the lodge with her. He needs to be totaly honest with her about what he was doing there.
Author's Response:
lots of honesty coming up! :) promise!
some people are concerned it's too soon, but I know people who were engaged 2 weeks after meeting so .. it happens :) glad you enjoy the story!
Update coming soon!!
xo
jaime
Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
Pefect! I don't want to think about him leaving though. Great job...thanks!
Date: 28 Dec 2010 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
Lunch sounds great to me ;-) Great job...thanks so much!!!
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think him being impartial just flew out the window. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is gonna be good! Great job...thanks!