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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 20

I'm still not sure about almost cheating edward but I loved the chapter. :)

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

awww good chappy and yes guys are so like that this chappy put a smile on my face today and that's alot considering that i spent all the sice sunshiny parts passed out with the flu and woke up feeling better just in time for the rain bahhh

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 20

great update.

 

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Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 20

loved it!!!!!

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 19

loved the chapter and thank you for not having Edward sleep with Tanya.

 

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Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 19

it was a good emotional chappy can't wait to see where it goes

Reviewer: Kornygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh what a tease you are!

 

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 19

OMG!!! I want that test result! I really hope they workout their issues, they love eachother sooo much!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 19

That chapter made me cry so hard.  Dam you!  hehe  Make it better. :)

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 19

Pins snd nrrdles chapter my friend!!!! I HOPE there is a HEA with this-I totally love this story:) Hope to see the next update soon!!!!!!

xxxxxxx,

Jo

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 18

I just finished reading & I completely LOVE this E&B! I can't believe you left us here like this!!! I'm dying! Please don't make me wait much longer. I don't think Edward would jeopardize what he an Bella have, but I love to hate cliffies! :)

Reviewer: rhochradel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 18

Please tell me he is not going to be a absolute idiot. Can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 18

Ugh......Hope Edward doesn't cheat....

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG!!! I hope he doesn't do something REALLY stupid!!!!! I can't wait until the next update;)

Reviewer: Breaking Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 18

Please update soon.  Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass quickly.  Great story!

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 18

Edward, you IDIOT!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 18

Heartbreakingly sad....

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 18

hmmmmmmmm how did she get the 24th when they flew home on the 22nd....  great chapter and you better fix this fast. please dear god don't let him sleep with her.

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Reviewer: galileo Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 17

Love the story! can't wait till next chapter :)

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 17

Thank you for the warning before hand .  Aweseom chapter and I look forward to the next.

 

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 16

Aaah, so sweet and romantic. I love nervous Edward. :)

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

that was beautiful and so sweet. Wish my first time was like that.

 

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Reviewer: gemma loves edward Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

Wow amazing

Reviewer: gemma loves edward Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow I am loving this story so far :D

Reviewer: meadowmate78 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

Ok in my opinion the last chapter was NOT to long!!!! I totally LOVE this story and quite frankly can't get eonugh of it!!! So on that note-see you next update!!!!!!!!!

Jo

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it keep it coming.

 

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 15

You are getting really good at being a cock tease.  hehe  :)

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2011 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 14

I loved this chapter, the length and the fact that you did not spiit it up and deliver it bits.

Well written, congrats

Reviewer: Chrissy80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

A very interestinmg start.

Well, I really wonder why both of them don't realize it before.

But somehow, I think Edwards reaction will be not the one we all hope.

Oh my, how bad must she have felt those nights, when she was lying in his arms after he fucked another girl?

And how awful will he fell, when he will find out some day?

How are his feelings for her? Why is he holding back? Well, she is 22, and still virgin. And he's the only man that ever touched her... shure, if she really wanted, she would have found someone in College? But no, she is living with her best friend.. and secretly in love.

Esme knew, all the family knew... and they knew for years...

You cought me... this story is on my favolist...

Reviewer: BLB Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 14

Love this story!! please keep on going !!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

YES YES YES YES!!!  I AM STILL LOVING THIS STORY AND TRULY HOPE YOU CONTINUE TO AT LEAST THE WEDDING AND HONEYMOON AND THEM MOVING BACK TO SEATTLE!!!! HAVE A GREAT REST OF THE WEEK....SHANNON

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

I loved it, it was perfect. keep it coming.

 

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Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

:)

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 13

YEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2011 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 13

She better say yes!!!!!!!!!!! awesome chappy but seriously don't hbe cruel and have her say no please 0.0 <-- cute sad puppy eyes....

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 13

awwwwwwwww

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 4

Fabulous birthday dinner & dance!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 3

He finally realizes that he loves her!!! So exciting!

Reviewer: KareBear1965 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 12

awesome chapter I can't wait for more.

 

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Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

I love edwards conditions! bella is so lycky!

Reviewer: kitkatr Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wish I had edward as a best friend! I hope bella's lasagna works magic on edward! great story!

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 12

I really hope they make it work because the love is def. there and since they were young and that's rare. I love how Edward treats Bella!

Reviewer: Catemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Hey!! they made love but not the same way!It was perfect

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

asking her to by his girlfriend!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 11

no way after all of this he would leave! he is gonna ask her to be his girlfriend!

Reviewer: Catemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 11

I don't believe that he's scared. Hey he told her that i loves her. No i'm sur ehe said that he was her's and that she was he's

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

they finally had the talk it wa almost a week late but they did it and now they can move on to the fun. time for them to figure out what the next ste is and how they will be moving forward. after their date of course and the sexy time.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

awesome date! i wonder if eddie really will have the talk with bella? or will he chicken out? these two really need to talk!

Reviewer: birdee18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 10

Am I crazy for getting all teary eyed when Edward and Bella finally admitted they loved each other?  I totally did!  It's about time, and I'm so excited!  I loved that despite everything that had happened during the week, Edward still took care of Bella.  Of course he did!  He loves her!  YAY!

Can't wait for their date!

Reviewer: Catemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 10

I hope you had fun! Great chapter

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hope your trip was wonderful and has inspired you for the next chapter of this cool story!!!

Reviewer: SeaShells421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 9

FINALLY! I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope that they finally tell each other!

Reviewer: hitc4manynewmoons Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh I am hoping they end with a good talk..come on Edward tell her how you feel over bacon and eggs and smily pancakes! Loved the chapter and quick update!

Reviewer: Catemom Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

yessss breakfast it is! loll

Reviewer: Little71099 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ohhhh.... please update soon.  This story is so sweet.  You don't find many truly simple romantic, stories than could realistically happen.  I like that there is a long, simple, history between them instead of one where they meet on Monday and pleadge their undying love by Wednesday.  Keep up the good work! I look forward to the breakfast conversation! :)

Heather

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 8

him showing her how to use the bullet and her fingers was hot! the date was so sweet and he was such a gentleman. she swooned!

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

yeah it was sappy but in a sweet way and from the sounds of it not too far off from how he normally acts so it's all good.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

both of them are so cute in their sitting on the fence, trying to deside when to jump off. their lives really are just so wrapped up in eachother.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

i get what alice was doing but still kinda mean to both bella and eddie. they are both so close to admitting everything i wonder who will crack first?

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 4

i'm surprised that jasper and em didn't make a bigger deal about the deal. a good night for all and still a few days left to enjoy the weekend....

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

they are both hurting so much and causing even more pain by trying to hold in what they feel in an atempt to save what they have instead of taking the leap into more.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 2

eddie has the same feelings for her and he is going to show herover their dates and when he finally makes her a woman.... his woman.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow that is one awesome yet totally messed up relationship they got goin' on! but it will make one hell of a story to tell the grandkids one day, minus all of the free friendly screwing around that has gone on for years! heehee

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Great chapter I am so loving this story and look forward to the updates! Have a great weekend....Shannon

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 8

I appreciate that you included the section from Edward's point of view. It was nice to get confirmation that Bella is not in this alone. I do think that confident Bella needs to come out a play a bit more.

Reviewer: simplydazzled Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 7

Too sappy? Not for me. It was sweet and lovely with just the right amount of sexual tension. These two are so good together. It's a rather unusual twist on the their relationship. The next chapter should be very interesting.

Reviewer: chagen501 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow. This was great! It will be MY birthday in about five minutes, so this was the perfect gift. Haha. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

wow I want a birthday like that!!!!

Reviewer: ldyidori Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 7

aqueee awesome chappy :)  it was just perfect :)

Reviewer: kiss234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2011 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

thanks you for this touching story, we can never have too much love and sappy caring in this world that can be harsh at times so thanks for this!!!!

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 6

For educated individuals, Bella and Edward are both very stupid.

I hope he is going to tell her the truth for her birthday.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 6

Well I am sure that she is going to be freaking out about that text message that Em sent until Edward tells her what he is keeping from her.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 5

hummm..... I really hope that Alice is wrong that that one of them spills their feelings because they  are both really stupid not to see it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

well I am really thinking that Edward needs to get a move on it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Feb 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 3

Well I guess that Edward needs to tell her how he feels about her because what he is doing isn't working for him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

It is really sad if Edward can't see that he is in love with Bella!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow I must applaud her because if I had been sleeping next to him for years I really don't think that I would still hold my V-Card.

Reviewer: carlie cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

good story thanks :)

Reviewer: Canadaci Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 5

I think you did an amazing job.  Of course there is love between the both of them and you just shook it up a bit.  You didn't go overboard with the Ry thing.  Just enough to give E a wake up call.  He woke up.  LOL

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love how seductive Edward was afterward, but what the hell is up with Bella promising no one else wiill ever touch her if she has nothing solid with him..... yet, hopefully! Girl he is too sure of what he has at home!

Reviewer: JenBon Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 5

Looking forward to reading more!!! Great story.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 5

 I really enjoyed the chapter.

Reviewer: amanda29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

I like the story I think Bella is a idiot though she is sorry for DANCING with a guy yet Edward would F**k other women and then sleep beside Bella yea there somthing wrong with that girl. And Edward should feel alot worse then he does doing that to Bella a girl he suppose to care about  cant wait for next chapter

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 5

awwww......Alice is a genius even if her plan didn't work completley..........

Reviewer: Amandyw Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2011 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

I just found this story and I am totally hooked. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Haley Alice18 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 4

The end was really sweet.... Can't wait for the next chapter, update soon, please!!!!!

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

WOW! I really liked this chapter, I think Bella should have gotten some attention from guy since she looked as beautiful as Edward said but I liked that chapter and can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: skittles22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 4

Loved it...can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: feline Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

love this story! more please soon hun!

Reviewer: msa121371 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2010 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

JUST READ YOUR FIRST THREE CHAPTERS...LOVED THEM!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXY UPDATE...GREAT STORY JUST WAITING FOR THESE TWO TO GET THEIR HEADS OUT OD THEIR ASSES!!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 3

god shes difficult and i cant wait till they finally talk and get everything out in the open ! cant wait till the next chatper 

Reviewer: simplydazzled Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

Cool! These 2 are so bizarre but I love them together. Looking forward to the next episode.

S.D.

Reviewer: twilightlover13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 3

whats going on with them? lol hurry back soon!

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 2

That little pleasure session was damn hot. I still can't figure out how Edward feels about Bella though. On one hand, he seems turned on by her and was totally concerned about giving her pleasure while not thinking of his own, but then he just does not seem driven to make her his own. He also looks very reluctant to take her virginity. I just hope Bella does not get hurt here.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

So am I, its great...

Reviewer: Poppy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 2

Edward was totally suprise dbella was still a virgin, I cant help but wonder has edward been with other women since he told her to wait?

i love your story cant wait for an update! 

hopefully soon:)

Reviewer: deecie72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 2

Excellent!  Please keep going.  really enjoying it.

Reviewer: Hermionerox89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

loving it!!!!!

Reviewer: mayi Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 2

OHHHHH wow I love this story too!!!!! I am glad you updated. Can they wait for 3 dates with all the sexual frustration they give eachother!!!

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