Date: 19 Jun 2018 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 55
i loved this! if i had known it was going to end like this i would have waited to read it much later. the first anniversary of my own mothers death from lung cancer is coming up. sadly we didnt have the realtionship like they all did with esme. this was beautifully done!
Date: 20 Sep 2016 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 45
I know this is an older story and I never review but I just need to say you wrote the he'll outta this chapter! My heart is racing right now. I'm literally at work sitting on the edge of my seat. How will Emmy Bear react?!?!
Date: 14 Jul 2016 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Okay, this was just BS! No way in the world would they just jump right into sex again, TRUST ME! My best friend of 18 years and I never thought that we would cross the line besides just cuddeling in bed; kisses here and there as well as 'I love you's'. Well, guess what, we actually crossed the line. I stopped him EVERY single time, but that one time last year that I stopped him, after 4 trys I just gave in. I knew it was because I just lost the love of my life 6 months before but anyways, that line was crossed after I pushed him away 4 times. We ended up crossing that line and now we don't even talk. He still sees my 12 yr old daughter that he has treated like his since day one, but he refuses to let me see his 6 yr old son that I have raised since early on since his mom has always been in and out. Anyways, we haven't spoken and he refuses to talk to me. I understand that things in real life are different from a story but come on a little more reasonable.
They wouldn't of just had sex and then work through everything. It would have taken some time, taken awhile to work through it first. I have liked your story so far but, this was way to far fetched. And not because I have lived through it. Even if I haden't, I still would of believed that they would have had to give themselves time to work everything out. I'm not saying throw 20 years of freindship away like my bff did with our 18 years, but still; a little time to get thorugh everything. And just if you are wondering, I would do ANYTHING to go back and change that fucked up night, because you have NO idea what it feels like to lose the love of your life, your bff, and your son all in a 6 month period. Yes, it is HIS son and NOT mine biologically but he might as well been. I am the only constant he has ever had. He saw me at the store yesterday and ran up to me and jumped in my arms telling me he loved me and missed me and wished he could see me all the time like he use to. His dads gf; well now fiance (if you ask me they are jumping into this, they havenen't even been together long) was standing right there when he told me and she heard the whole thing. And it just broke my heart. But yes, I would give up EVERYTHING that I have to just have my baby and my bff back. Nothing hurts worse then feeling like you lost a child.
Holidays are very interesting now to tell you the least. He waits till I leave and birthday parties, they arranged them so that only one of us can attend while the other is working. They switch off with each kid. It sucks and none of them know what is going on except that we got into a HUGE fight and are no longer talking.
Well, I just spit out some fun facts about my life *snort*!
Don't worry, I will continue to read, I still love the story, but I had to say something. Glad, they are working though.
Date: 13 Jul 2016 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 13
I can't find Edwards POV with his conversation with Charlie. Can you help me out please? I love this story btw. Only been reading it for a few hours and can't put it down. I really need to get ready for work though. I will be reading on my break. If you can just please point me in the right direction for that conversation I would appreciate it. Thank you.
Date: 18 Oct 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really enjoy this story. I really enjoy that the characters are different from the originals and that you gave them a new identity and I love all the suspense! I'm eager to see how each coming chapter unfolds. Keep writing! I'm eagerly waiting for your next update! Please don't abandon this story!
Date: 23 Jul 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 34
"And that's when it finally occurred to me that we had spent so much time trying to fix everyone else's problems that we had completely ignored our own."
Really this is the line Bella is going to use to make sure that her little world, it was okay to accuse Edward of cheating. Really Bella pull your head out of your ass and smell the roses! My God this girl is either dense or stupid and Edward just sitting there and taking it like some happy schmuck, he deserves everything he is handed.
There is no way I would be so calm if I was accused of something I was never and would never do. She would have coped a mouthful.
Date: 23 Jul 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 33
It has taken me 3 days to read this story and I have enjoyed it till the last 3 or 4 chapter. I have to say that I am more than pissed, upset, irate and probably about 1 million more words that would take forever to write down, how these two are acting, really how many fucking times are they going to have to go though this she of not airing their problems.
I am so fucking over it, it is not funny. How hard is it really for Bella to grow some balls and ask Edward why he smells like cigarette smoke. It is getting to the point of ridiculous. It was like when she never told him about missing the pill and then proceeded to blame him for everything that happened... is it going to get to that point again where Bella cant and wont stand up for herself. Fuck she is good at screaming at him when she chooses to, but something as monumental as this she is as quite as a church mouse. Well she deserves all the shit she brings on herself.
As for Edward locate you balls mate, you feel angry with yourself for betraying Bella because you are smoking again, well guess what, grab a hold of your conscience with both hands and own up, she thinks your cheating on her...
These two need more than therapy, they need their own intervention! Someone to bash some common sense into their thick skulls. They were doing so well with their talking, it about time someone locked them into a room until the talk and not let them out until they do. Every time they avoid the topic they get a fucking electric shock. A friggin big one as well! I am sure when they have been shocked about 20 times they wont forget the meaning of communication.
Please for the love of GOD, make these two idiots talk soon!
Date: 31 May 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
see i just said that to myself ...out of the frying pan into the damn fire and they were both at fault this time cause he knew she was off her pill still ....heat of the moment kind of thing ...so just stop tat the drug story on the way home fron the airport so you will be ready this time I think its kind of funny
Date: 30 May 2011 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 38
loved it and I soo look forward to the next chapter. Please please please check out my original that I have entered into the romance contest on this site.
Hey there! I just found you on Facebook! I am planning on checking out your original fiction this evening! Looking forward to it actually! Thanks for being a loyal reader!
Date: 19 May 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
awwe your poor brother mine was a cousin incident he decided to try and teach me to ride a tw wheeler when it looked like i got it i actually rode right into our neighbors mail box. I had that stupid scar from bewteen 10 yrs old (bella looks coordenated next to me edward would just give up) until i was 27 it finally faded.
Date: 17 May 2011 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 33
man this is a great story let me tell you it could work for em i hope it does... i'm going to share something eceedingly personal but i think it will help with the story. My Dad my he be resting in peace died 10 years ago May 8th. He was an alcaholic most of my life. I have done it all alanon,alateen,group therapy with kids of other alcaholic and drug addicts. The intervention he had with my mom,olderbrother and family dr was the only thing that got him to go to AA. it was not an easy path but I am proud to say that he was sober his last year before dying of cancer. I am also proud to say he was the best dad and friend i had that year too. I have faith in you doing a HEA.
Hey thanks for sharing that. I'm so glad your father was able to be helped... even if it was at the last minute, so to speak. I am sorry for loss. And it takes a brave soul to share something as moving as that. I can assure you that I will do my damnedest to make this story as great as it can be. Keep coming back for more!
Date: 17 May 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh - a heyvy one...
I really think she should call him out on the smoking - it's making her sad and the conclusions she draws are just horrible...he should know about them. But talking about any problems seems to be a problem for them :D So hopefully, while trying to help Em as a family will help them finding out, that talking over feelings and problems will help a lot and solve even more...
As for Em - I think he is just not used to failing or at least to feeling insecure and so he chose an "easy" way out. Drinking and hurting the ones who love him the most. I fear he thinks he is protecting her by driving Rose away from him. But as far as we know that family, they will be all helping!
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 16 May 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
That chapter was so sad. bella and edward's (hopefully) miscommunication is getting to the point of ridiculous by now. She needs to 'woman up' and confront him about the smoke smell and the 'suspected' cheating and tell him how she feels. I don't know what to think about drunk raging emmett. That is just too sad and disappointing. too many secrets all around....... sigh.........
Date: 26 Apr 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 27
What a disastrous Valentines Day! I can, partly, understand Bella and I was never a big fan of "invading" Alice. So hopefully, Jasper will step in - he should really see and sense, what is going on with Bella! She and Edward need time on their own, space on their own and maybe, you will change that in the next chapter, which I am looking forward to, after reading all the others just yesterday. ;-)
Thanks for sharing
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
Bella was bad ass sticking up for herself. The things that the doctor was telling her about her and Edwards relationship was kinda right. But he is also a pig. Why didnt Edward and Bella just lose there V card to each other I mean shit they did everything else with one another. Edward had his cake and eat it to he had women when he wanted he had a women that lived with him that took care of him he didnt have to answere to anyone. Shit he even climbed into bed with Bella after he got done with those women. Bella didnt really live her life she lived her life around Edward, but she doesnt see it like that.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
The way you wrote this, it does happen sometime in real life. I remember growing up in Seattle and a court case close to this happened, but in that case he raped her. I am glad that you had Bella do what she did. Keep it coming and I will keep reading.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
thank you for this precious family time for all of the Cullen's. Families do stick together through thick and thin, and no matter what this pregnancy will be a precious gift to all of them and just one more thing to tie them together!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
And so there we were doomed to wait for our fate. Hadn't I been through enough today? Hadn't I paid my dues without having to venture into this shitty water too. But I guess not because there we were sailing a steady course for a bunch of jagged rocks
that says it all ....... i sure Edward and Bella will get right this time .
wonderfull..... well writting chapter.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward wasnt exactly honest with his answere didnt Bella ask him to take her V card 4 years ago from her birthday and he told her to wait for 4 years. I think that was a stupid mistake on her part for waiting. i understand she wanted it to be special with someone she loved, but he was an ass for asking her to wait while he was out sleeping with other women.
Date: 19 Apr 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 24
I love that Bella and Edward are talking now, well mostly. How come Bella hasn't shared how the Dr. makes her feel all squicky? How come Edward hasn't shared how he hates the Dr. all leering at Bella? They really are still keeping things from each other and that is not good.
Date: 16 Apr 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
I am currently reading all three of your stories and I absolutely love them, we all make spelling and grammar errors and it is not the end of the world. The person that states you are not taking your time with this story need to get over themselves. I hope you continue to write and I am look forward to all of your stories in the future.
Date: 12 Apr 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad you gave us another chapter so quickly, and I'm even happier you didn't break up the chapters with her giving the ring back!!! They still have a long road of forgiveness ahead of them, but its good that Bella's giving him another chance, and really that he's giving her one, too.looking forward to more!