[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
i really like this story i very glad to see how sweet james is and takes good care of bella can't wait to read more and see what their new life will be like
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 3
hmm, i have a feeling that Bella & Edward are gonna get off on the wrong foot. should be fun! :)
Author's Response:
hmm a little suspense! Thanks for review
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
OH MY I cant wait this is exciting.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
It's nice to see that James is a decent person.
Hopefully all of the Cullens welcome Bella to the Ranch!
Best Part:
Bella and I would pretend that we were cowboys and we would try to rope our dog like we would cattle. Of course Ma didn’t like us torturing the dog like that but we never hurt him, we were just trying to catch him.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow! Great start!
Author's Response:
Thank you.. I am glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate the review :)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love this story so far. I like reading stories that are different like this! I think my favorite part so far is how you've written Bella's character to be. I get tired of reading about her being a shy naive girl. It's always nice to read stories where Bella is a feisty woman who's not afraid to speak her mind. Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
So glad you like it..Thank you for reviewing. I love when stories are different too..
Date: 10 Oct 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
I cant wait till they get there and meet everyone.
Author's Response:
dont worry that is coming in the next chapter. Thank you for the review
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
Its so exciting to see what will happen to them when they get to town.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
sound like it is going to be interesting cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
thank you for the review..my outline for this story has got me excited so I cant wait to see what you think
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'd like to see what you do w/ this. :D
Author's Response:
thank you for the review...will post tomorrow chap 2 and i am really moving along with plot line..hope you like where it goes.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
Off to a good start
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.. I am posting a chapter tomorrow and have outline done up to chapter 8
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start to you your story. I am looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. Next chapter up tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really liked this first chapter i have never read a story where james was her brother and i have to say thsat i liked it great job can't wait to see what wyoming has in store for them .
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review..thought I would try James as a nice guy. Next chapter up tomorrow