[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter, totally worth the wait! ; )
Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
fabulous
deeply the continuation
Date: 31 Oct 2010 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 9
I really like this story. I like the plot too but what I dont like it the repeat of everyones different pov's of the same thing. Its kind of repetitive.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds like Edward got jealous and is insulting her at the same time. lol. Doesn't sound like she will stand for it.
Date: 31 Oct 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 3
WEll it was nice that Alice and Emmett found a job for Bella but it looks like Edward is not too happy with it. I cant wait to see what you do with this story.
Date: 27 Oct 2010 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
well i have to say it's kinda weird for their to be a nice james but you still threw in the jackass that is mike newton so it all works. lol
Date: 26 Oct 2010 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
I am so happy that Mike got the shit beat out of him. They all like to have a little fun teasing each other dont they. I am so excited two couples are corting at the same time.
Author's Response:
Me too and I was happy that James did it! I hope Em will get his chance at courting too ;)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 11
Why do I have the feeling we haven't heard the last of ole' Slimeball Newton? But yes! Can't wait for the 'courtin' to begin!
Author's Response:
Yes let the courting begin but first we have to meet the other cullens :) Newton will be close by so we will see when he reappears
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
POOR edward : ( but i am glad he got the approval. i am also james is good in this story for once... it's very refreshing!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am glad you are enjoying it. I like nice James too..
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh,,,, RanchWard... take it down a notch.. you know you wanna hook up with Bella..lol
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
ok ... so RanchWard was a bit scary in the beginning...lol..
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 26 Oct 2010 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
good chapter...loving the old west dialogue..it reminds me of Little House on the Praire....lol...
krazi
xoxo
Date: 25 Oct 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
so far so good... that was a good intro... now let´s go rustle uo some RanchWard!!!!!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! I was right, Mike's not too bright. I loved that Edward was Bella's first "real" kiss and that he asked to court her. Gotta love big brother James. It was nice hearing from him again. I'm glad he aproves of Edward. Have a feeling Mike's going to cause some trouble though...
Jasper finally asking to court Alice made me smile. Great job!
Author's Response:
Love all the courting...I am sure Newton wont be to far but you never know.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
awww another lovely chapter and they kissed yay. Now Edward and Bella will be courting as will Alice and Jasper. Happy days. I bet that snake in the grass Newton has not gone too far.
Author's Response:
You never know with Newton that jerk...I loved that he asked to kiss her like that it was sweet
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
i love it
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoting it!
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 11
Fun at poor Eddie's expense, too funny! Great chapter! : )
Author's Response:
Poor Eddie needs a little fun at his expense, nothing like making him work for it! :)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Best Parts:
I realize that I am trembling. That man makes me so uneasy. There is just something about the way he leers at me, I hope to never meet up with him alone. Edward turns and assesses me. He can see I'm visibly shaken.
"Miss Bella, I am so sorry if he frightened you. I know he makes you uncomfortable; I overheard you telling Alice the other day. I promise he won't ever harm you."
"Oh Edward he stares at me in such a way that I almost feel exposed. I am so afraid to be around him." I whimper.
Edward wraps his arms tenderly around me and whispers into my hair "Don’t worry Bella I'll keep you safe. Newton won't be around much longer, I’ll make sure of that."
Relief floods through me and I do feel protected in Edward's arms. I relax into his embrace not wanting him to let me go. I timidly look up; Edward has a worried expression on his face.
"Thank you Edward, I feel so much better now. I know I am safe when I'm with you." I breathily reply.
"I just… I wanted to ask you if you would allow me to talk to your brother tomorrow about properly courting you."
Edward moves closer and emphatically states. "Don't worry about Newton he will be gone by tomorrow. I promise to always make you feel safe and protected."
Today when Edward was with us in the stables I thought for sure he was going to expire the minute I mentioned leaving to start my own ranch. The horror is his eyes solidified what I knew all along. He cared for Bella and the thought of her leaving was torture for him to hear. I knew it was wrong but I goaded him a little with hopes he would get off his ass and just ask to court her already.
Edward was as stubborn as Bella and they both tended to over think things, theirs would be an interesting match.
Edward is now staring at Newton's crumpled form seething with anger. He kicks him sharply in the thigh. "Get up you son of a bitch. You are done, get the hell off our ranch and if you ever come back here I will kill you." Edward's eyes are blazing.
Edward grabs Newton by the throat and slams him into the wall. "If you come near Isabella or James I will end you. Don't push me…now get the fuck out of here while you still can." He lets go and Newton slips to the floor.
This was one hell of a night. I was glad to watch that scum Newton finally getting his, he has been nothing but trouble since the day he came.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.. my fav is when Edward says he is going to end him thats so hot! LOL
Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
Lol, this chapter was great! Loved how the brothers took turns making the other sweat about courting their sisters. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I loved that too...Had to let James have some fun
Date: 25 Oct 2010 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Your story is well thought out, but you keep swapping narratives... IE, You go from speaking in first person narrative to third person omniscient narrative. Also, you need to break up your paragraphs where different speakers are concerned. It's hard on the reader to distinguish which character is speaking if you have them all mushed into the same paragraph. If you need a beta to weed out simple errors like this, I wouldn't mind helping you out if you like.
Anyway, I like what you have so far, just needs a bit of refining. Keep it up!
Author's Response:
Thank you..I have realized I have been switching narratives..it's tough not too revert back to third person.LOL I would appreciate your help I have asked a few people to beta but they are too busy. let me know and I will send you the next chap.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh poop why did you have to make edward so mad? I'll trust you have a reason. Meg
Author's Response:
Have faith...things will be better I promise :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh it is hard for me right now to wrap my head around James being a 'good guy'. I'm working in it. Lol can't wait to see mr. Cullens reaction to Bella. :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start. Looking forward to see what you have install for Bella. Meg
Author's Response:
Thank you..I hope you enjoy it
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm.....wouldn't it be a shame if Mike got picked in the head by one of the horses? Or gored by an angry bull moose? Or....(fill in the blank)...
Author's Response:
or Bella punches him in the junk LOL...thank you for reviewing
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 10
What's Mike doing??? Isn't Edward his boss? He must not care about keeping his job. :0) It's so nice seeing this more hopeful side of Edward. I guess Emmett has to talk to Rose now....
Author's Response:
Apparently he doesnt care who is boss is...he is an idiot Cant wait for Rose and EM
Date: 24 Oct 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
ugh! damn Mike Newton. I hope he gets his ass kicked. :)
Author's Response:
Now that would be fun...we will have to see if or who does that!
Date: 24 Oct 2010 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am really hating Mike Newton about right now!!!!
Great chapter and I am so glad that Edward is finally opening himself up to Bella. And she is doing the same.
As always, such a great story and I can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you! I think everyone is hating Mike right now..
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
Trust the dastardly Newton, to ruin a beautiful moment. Its really nice to see Edward get his head out of his bottom and start getting himself together. Edward and Bella make a lovely couple and that is what I hope they will be soon. A couple.
This is such a sweet story, I'm loving it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Things are progressing nicely with these two ;)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Genial
Deeply the continuation
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying the story
Date: 23 Oct 2010 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
Mike needs to find another job he is creepy.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! Loved the progress. Evil cliffy...
Author's Response:
I love evil cliffies..well except when I read them! ;) It's all in good fun! Thanks for reviewing
Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loving the story, can't wait till the next update!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! working on the next chap as we speak
Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
Why do they keep Mike around when no one can stand him?!
Best Part:
Tomorrow I am determined to talk with James and ask to court her properly. I'm not sure how we will do that living in the same house but I am sure we will find a way.
Author's Response:
Well there is always one jerk in the bunch lol thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Awwww this was so sweet. I am so glad you got Alice to shout some sense into Edward. LOL. I also love that your Bella is a tree climbing expert:-)
Author's Response:
gotta love Alice! thank you for the reviews
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
AWWWW they are going to go for a walk. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you. hopefully the walk is a good one
Date: 22 Oct 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love the story and totally loving the extra updates :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you. Maybe an update by Saturday?? Sunday the latest
Date: 21 Oct 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it! Yay Alice going in and giving Edward a good talking to. :0) Bella saving the kitten was fun and of course I love seeing thing between her and Edward starting to go so well. Thanks for all the updates. I'm really enjoying reading this story. Great job!
Author's Response:
thanks..a lot went on this chapter and there is soo much more in the next one ;)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
i love it
it's beautiful
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am so happy you love it.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
This is a sweet story. Really refreshing and not all drawn out. Good job!!
Author's Response: Well thank you that is very sweet. I am happy you like it
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
I loved it everything from Alice telling him to pull his head out of his ass and live again to him falling on his perfect ass lol.
Author's Response: thank you I loved that he fell too!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
I hope that James doesn't have a problem with Bella and Edward being together...
Best Part:
"Alice, I don't. I'm no good for her." He looks so sad.
"You know what Edward you’re right, the man sitting here now is not right for her." Placing my hand on his chest above his heart I continue, "But the kind, loving man you are in here is perfect for her. You have to try and find that man again Edward."
"Do you really think so? Can I be that man again?" he looks at me, eyes filled with hope.
"Yes I do. Take some time Edward, talk to Em and me if you need to. You need to realize that you are worthy of love and joy. You always were, I guess you just had to wait for the right person to enter your life and I think she has."
"God Alice I want to, I feel connected to her in some way. It sounds strange but it's like she was meant for me, I feel it."
Author's Response:
Humble, I love you reviews.. I like that you tell me your fav parts
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! Can't wait for their walk! : )
Author's Response:
thank.. me either!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm so glad someone finally said something to Edward. Anxious to read more this weekend! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you.. next chapter is a doozy! almost double in size LOL
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh, so heartbreaking! Great chapter!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh poor edward, i just want to hug him. amongst other things....mind in gutter.
Author's Response:
I totally agree with you..that's where my mind is most of the time concerning him..I will save that for another story LOL
Date: 21 Oct 2010 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
look forward to more of the story. really enjoying it so far.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
How can Edward think he's let the family down? He takes care of them and it sounds like they have a really nice sized ranch. I mean other than drinking his blues away at night and in this case the day what has he done wrong? I just hate seeing him so down on himself. Looking forward to the time when he realizes he's good enough. :0)
Author's Response:
You will see why in the next chapter...Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
every thing was going good and he is going to try as hard as he can to mess it up????
Author's Response:
poor man has some issues..he will see the light soon ;)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 8
This has become one of my favorite stories!
Author's Response:
Thank You Thank You! Reviews like this make me update faster! I am glad you like it
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
awww poor Edward! he's soo sad and broken over his parents deaths :(
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing..I know I feel bad for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awww, poor Edward!!!! Sorry you are still not feeling well. Thanks for the quick chapter! Hope you feel better soon!!!! : )
Author's Response:
Thank you..I am feeling better today..Stupid cold :( Next chapter up soon
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Edward...
Hopefully Bella can help him and he can help her...
Author's Response:
I hope so too! Thank you for your review!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
"Maybe things are starting to look up..." Well that can go either way now can't ? It could mean that things are really going to start looking up or poor Edward is going to do something to upset Miss Bella again. :0) Enjoying the story and love the setting.
Author's Response:
Thank you..it looks like its gonna be a roller coaster ride check out the teaser
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
awesome chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!! Glad you are enjoying it! Here is the teaser I promised
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Shock and suprise he was nice to her little does she know how nice he would like to be to her ;)
Author's Response:
oh yes he would..but will he???
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad to see Edward coming around....and Mike Newton is a real scumbag. Let's hope that he stays away from Bella, if not James or Edward might have to make him.
As always, great story and I can't wait to see where you take us.
Author's Response:
thank you..edward will have his struggles as you will soon see....
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
i really like this story and i will follow it till it's finished! great job
Author's Response:
Thank you so much that means a lot to me...enjoy the tease
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter! A part of me hopes that Edward heard Bella's opinion of Newton. Plus, I'm hoping we'll see some of the tomboy in Bella make an appearance. :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing..you never know when tomboy Bella will appear :) Tease time...
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter! Hope you feel better soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you..still sneezing but much better! Your promised tease...
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ooh they are talking, sort of. Wonderful chapter. Your Bella is so sweet.
Author's Response:
Thanks Roon Here is the promised teaser:
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Good chapter! I like that Bella and James are siblings. It's good to see him portrayed as a decent character!
Author's Response:
Thank you I like him too! Teaser for you
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Mike is so creepy....
Author's Response:
I totally agree! Thanks here is the teaser
Furious at what I have done, I throw the bottle against the wall and it smashes into a million pieces. There's glass covering the floor. I lay my head against the desk and I start to sob.
I haven’t really cried since my parents died and its like the dam has broken and I just can't stop. I feel a hand on my back and I freeze.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 17 Oct 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was laughing right along with Alice. :0) Looking forward to reading more of this story.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
SOON please.
Author's Response:
It will be I promise! Thank you for the review :)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Bella's going to be a big help to Jane. Edward didn't like Mike talking to Bella. :0) Really enjoying this story so far.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
I have a feeling Miss Bella is going to affect Edward a lot more than he thinks. :0)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to seeing what happens now that they're all at the ranch. :0) The story of Bella riding the horse was funny. haha
Author's Response:
Im glad you are enjoying..thanks for the review
Date: 17 Oct 2010 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it... Poor Edward he doesn't know what to do and his actions are causing her so much pain. Imagine being in a strange place and just having lost half of your family...her poor mental state. And to top it off the man that is making her so angry is the man that she is attracted to. It should be interesting when these two get together...can't wait!!!!!
Such a great story!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. He is just a mess..LOL
Date: 16 Oct 2010 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
James seems like a great big brother. Really looking forward to seeing what kind of an adeventure they find. :0)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
I really like stories that take place out West. I came across your story and am really looking forward to reading it. :0) I really like the idea of James being Bella's brother, now we don't have to worry about him being "the bad guy" :0)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
aawww, he's so lost!
This is a really great story, can't wait to see what's coming up next
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. He really has no idea what he is doing..
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am glad he was nice to her
Date: 16 Oct 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
Obviously, Edward has forgotten how to behave with woman. Bella has him not knowing if he is coming or going. He is in so much trouble. LOL.
I am really enjoying your story and look forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! He really is lost isnt he? Lets see if she can set him straight LOL
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter! : )
Date: 16 Oct 2010 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Best Parts:
I stopped suddenly when I heard the faint sounds of crying coming from behind Isabella’s door. Oh no please tell me I didn’t do that to her. Oh Bella I'm sorry. I inched towards her door and listened closer to the sounds. I heard whispering and sobbing and shushing noises. I realized that Alice was in there with her and was trying to comfort her. I felt like a total ass. I made this lovely creature cry and why? Why did I do that? I made her feel unwelcome when I should have been happy to have her here to help. I knew it was getting harder on Jane; the extra hands would be beneficial. My Ma would have taken me by the ear if she had seen the way I treated Bella. I am determined that tomorrow I would be nice and try my best to make her feel welcome. I go to hand her the book as a peace offering. "Please feel free to read this if you like." I utter apologetically. As she takes the book from my grasp our fingers lightly touch and my hand starts to tingle.
Date: 15 Oct 2010 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
I so can't wait until Bella gets a chance to put Edward in his place. It's gonna be funny. Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you.. I am sure there will be many times she does that! LOL
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
Really good so far. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you.. This is my first fic so I am trying..
Date: 15 Oct 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
That must have blown Edwards mind LOL. Poor Bella such a strong girl.
Author's Response:
She is very strong but she still has that vunerable side to her which I like.Thank you for the review
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ooooh a touch of jealously perhaps? Loved the chapter. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! yes just a touch..we will see what Edward thinks next time
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well things are definitely going to start getting heated! Great chapter! : )
Author's Response:
Yes they are slowly but surely...like a campfire you got let the embers get hot. LOL
Date: 14 Oct 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved It!! Fast becomming one of my favorite new stories.
Can't wait for more, great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am sooo happy you like it.
Date: 14 Oct 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
I feel bad for Bella. I feel like she feels out of place, and unwelcome because of Edwards look and quick get-away. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing.. I feel for her too but she is a tough cookie!
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
Really enjoying, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
thank you! I am glad you are enjoying it
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
Good chapter! : )
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
sounds good so far, looking forward to next chapter. cowboy edward......sighs...........lol
Author's Response:
thank you for the reivew.. I love cowboy edward too...well any kind of edward is good!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Edward so confused so lonely. I cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing..I feel bad for him too!
Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Just found your story today and read all 4 chapters. I really really enjoyed it and I think that this will be a fantastic story. Love the family dynamics that you have set up and that Edward is so attracted to Bella, but is still being an ass.....sounds like fun.
Great job.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I am glad you are enjoying it. I am enjoying writing it!
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter! I hope Bella manages to put Edward in his place. It'd be kinda funny since he thinks she's not able to do the work. Can't wait to read more! :)
Author's Response:
it should be fun watching these two..thank you for the review
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter leading to their move out West.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is a jerk. He could show some compassion for a fellow human being that has also recently become an orphan...
Author's Response:
he is sure acting like one. he does feel bad though he just doesnt want her to see it. thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
i really liked getting in his head for a bit oh but bella will drive him crazy that i can bet money on as well as he will drive her nuts too lol this was a great chapter can't wait to really get in to this a bit more .great job!
Author's Response:
its going to be fun watching them play this out...thanks for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved the chapter. Poor Edward is really conflicted and a bit of an ass. Hopefully he will pull his head out of his..... soon:=)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am enjoying your story so far and can't wait to see where it goes. Look forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I am glad you are enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh dear, Edward is going to be a pain isn't he? Why would he loath Bella and he doesn't even know her. Good job, Emmett and Alice are sweet. looking forward to your next update.
Author's Response:
thanks for the review.. you will find out next chap what Edwards problem is
Date: 11 Oct 2010 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh Great, Edward is going to be an ass....
Author's Response:
he has his reasons..all will be revealed in the next chap. Thanks for your review
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
can't wait to read edwards pov and see what mad him so mad loved it alice is the best
Author's Response:
thank you for the review..we shall see what is going on in Edwards mind next time :)