yes thanks for keeping James alive.

awwwe angela is so sweet i really like her character. 

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I love this story. Keep it going. RL comes on we all know just don't forget us.

Creepy! But it would be even more creepy if he took advantage of her while she was passed out!

Poop. Clifie again at least the boys are on the right path. Your newton especially vial. Can't wait for his hanging.

I wonder was that a better crime deturant than what we have now?

Meg

I'm happy the boys told them about newton. I loved the limited sex talk. Too funny. Go Bella taking charge. Was that the proposal before the proposal. Can't wait to see if Edward is freaking out. Meg

Loved it!

Great chapter!

Thank god they got Bella but please make James OK Please I have never beged for James before LOL

Please dont let James die!

oh mygod

it's so sad

deeply the continuation

OH MAN.. another cliffie.. killing us here!

 please up date soon

Disgusting Freak!

Every thing is going great and then MIKE get that mother fu#$@ before he hurts Bella.

Now how am I supposed to enjoy turkey when you leave us hanging with that evil cliffie???  LOL!  Thank God James was paying attention and hopefully is not that far behind them.

Great chapter!  Can't wait to see what happens next.

uh oh, looks like bella is in trouble. hurry edward hurry!   lol, i just love these kind of stories.

I hope they murder Mike!!  The disgusting pig!

Best Part:

"Well why didn’t you?" Jasper asked. "If it was me I would not be leaving Alice's side."

We all turned to look at him in wonder.

"You would do that? Men don’t go into the birthing room." Emmett looked sick.

"Yeah I would, if Alice wanted me in there. One day she'll be my wife and I plan to be there for her always, even through child birth." He stated.

Aww Baby Demetri is born and Edward announce his intention of marrying Bella. Nice one.

I did have to laugh a little at the "sex" talk Alice and Bella had.  I remember my mother telling me that she was such an innocent, that on her wedding night she fainted.  It was the first time she saw my father nude and passed out with the shock.  You cannot even imagine that now days can you?  :-)

Until the next time.

oh dear...edward doesn't seem too happy

i love this

Great Chapter!

okay, thank you for the update. Please keep them coming. Often is great. Some people wait a month then write 3,000 words. Well I have to go back and reread the previous chapter. If the story is good, I will do it but if it is slow. I just kill it and find something else to read.

Thank you again,

Great chapter, loved it!

Oh my the story has been great. Thank god Edward pulled his head out early. Newton makes me very worried! Love it. Meg

Funny how Bella finally got Rosalie and Emmett to talk to each other.

Great to see everyone has seen the change in Edward.

Awww... everything was going great until Mike showed up.

Well, it seems that both Emmett and Alice think alike. Hopefully Edward will get better.

At least Edward is trying to act a little better towards Bella.

Great to read about Edward's and his family's life before they moved to their ranch. Well, at least now we know why he gave Bella that stare.

I wonder what adventure they will be getting into?

Another really enjoyable chapter.

Aww Rosalie and Emmett, were so sweet and now they are courting.  

Bella and Edward are very sweet together as well.  How long before he does ask her to marry him.  In those days surely courting was the prelude to marriage.

The dastardly Newton, is going to try and spoil everything for Edward and Bella. Lets hope his horrid plans fail and he gets a good kicking. LOL

Until the next time.

James is one sick puppy.  Edward need to ask Bella soon I dont think they will be able to stop much longer :)

hmm. Well not suprising.  I am trying to remember the year this is supposed to be happening.  Back in the old days.. 1800's and earlier women were a scarcity on the plains.  They died in child birth, some didn't come with their husbands.

So I guess stealing them was more common amonst the men that had none and no scrupples.

Mike is disgusting.  I hope he gets a terrible illness from the saloon girls that make his dick turn green or cause it to fall off.....

Best Part:

"Please don’t worry Bella, I didn’t want to upset you but we felt its best if you and Alice know he's out there. You will both have to be conscious of what is going on around you and never go off by yourselves. I don’t care if you need to go to the hen house, you take someone with you." I lectured

Bella is lucky that Rose waited to find out who she was LOL Rose scares me

Awww, that was another really, really sweet chapter.  I just loved Rosalie's point of view, it was so funny.  Bella is quiet the little matchmaker, isn't she?  I wonder who is watching her?  Is it the dreaded Mike Newton?

Looking forward to the next update.

That was great.  Loved the way Bella played that.

Really cute chapter! 

Awww! Beautiful Chapter!

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Aww that was so sweet.  At least Edward will know not to jump to conclusions again. LOL. 

it's fabulous

deeply the continuation

What a sweet chapter.

This was a lovely chapter.  I really enjoyed it.

cant wait for the doozy!

I loved the introduction of Carlisle and Esme..they are too good.  The kind doctor and his lovely wife.  It is wonderful to hear how other people view the way that Edward and Bella interact and look at one another.  And for Esme to offer her guidance to Bella was a touching moment. 

Okay, so you have me intrigued...can't wait for next chapter!  I have a bad feeling that somewhere down the line we will be seeing Mr. Newton again.

Great Great Story.

Well it was a sweet chapter.  I am glad that Esme and Carlilse are there to make it more of a family.