Date: 19 Jan 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 26
YELLLLLLLL! But I loved it as usual:-)
Author's Response:
Thanks for yelling...I felt bad but just couldnt get past the block. Glad I did and its better now. thanks for reviewing
Date: 19 Jan 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well I'm happy that Edward and Bella got past that little misunderstaning and are now happily engaged and now it looks like Jasper and Alice may be headed that way as well. :0) It was good to see this update. I'm glad you got over the writer's block. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you...it was rough finding the words, never had that happen but glad its over..working on next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
Pls continue soon!!! pls i hope u do continue because i think its a lovely story!!! So pls continue!!! BIG FAN!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awww. After all the misunderstanding and heartache, the proposal was perfect.
Wonderful chapter.
Happy 2011 to you.
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 25
They better make the wedding soon or those 2 might get into trouble. Love the location of the proposal.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, I knew when this lady reviewed in chapter 5 and told me of it I had to have the big question there! Have a happy new year
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
awww they're so cute together
Author's Response:
Thank you they are very sweet. Have a happy new year
Date: 29 Dec 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh silly bella.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
awww poor green little eddie talking to a horse
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
hmmm a quadruple wedding maybe. LOL Then the men could help each other remember their anniversary.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh girl.....that's not a good omen when you talk like that in the end.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
awwww so sweet
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
awww poor james....maybe Ang can nurse him back to health
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh eric you idiot.....makes you an accessory.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
awww ang and james....
ugh damn newton
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
woo hoo new baby and a promise of a future with eddie.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
ugh Hope he doesnt hurt B or Rosie.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
awww Rose and Em finally talk
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
Silly Edward..... Bella has a big bro she doesnt need a pa. Glad Jasper was there for him.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think Esme will be a great mother figure for both ladies.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
woo hoo. Eddie gets to court ms b and creepy mike gets his arse kicked.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
ugh Damn Newton
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
awww a cute little kittie bringing them togetehr
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
ugh dont think Mike will take the hint.....
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
yeah a woman who can read....whoda thunk eddie.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
oh Eddie. You are oblivious.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
awww poor bella scared by eddiekins.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 2
hmm hope James doesnt get into trouble for brining B
Date: 29 Dec 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 1
At least her big bro is looking out for her.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thank goodness they have people around them that love them and they cant be open with to help them to be open with each other. That was the perfect place to purposal. Have a great New Year hear from you then.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. i was happy when she reviewed and told me of that spot and that was during chapter 5 and I knew it was were I wanted to do proposal! Happy New Year
Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well we got there. Yes in those times women did not know very much about sex. It was a taboo discussion.
Okay now is the time to get "hitched"!
Author's Response:
Yes let the hitching and lovin commence...LOL Thank you and Happy New Year
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
Best Part:
He slipped the ring onto my finger telling me how it was his mother's. My heart swelled with love and pride. He wanted me to have something of his Mama's and the tears began to fall again.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked that line...I added it just before I updated. I forgot to mention the ring and that is what I came up with. Happy New Year
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 25
awww that was so sweet how he popped the question! so glad that they got everything talked out :) update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you! I thought it was cute..See you soon Happy New Year
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 25
It was perfect! I loved it, Happy New Year!
Author's Response:
Thank you...writing that proposal made me nervous..glad you liked it. Happy New Year
Date: 29 Dec 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so glad that they got that all straightened out. Now they just have to have the wedding. :0)
Author's Response:
Yes wedding and honeymoon!!!!! Happy New Year
Date: 29 Dec 2010 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
woah chapter amazing
merry christmas, and happy new year
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Happy New Year to you too!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella's going to kick herself for majorly over reacting. She should have stuck around and talked to Edward.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wonder which of the happy couples will get married first.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
awwww James and Angela. I'm really glad James is ok.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm so glad they got to Bella before anything bad happened to her. Now I'm hoping that James will be ok.
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Gotta keep reading..... :0)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
I was hoping that James would meet someone. Hope he get to talk to Angela again some time. I'm worried for Bella. I've got to keep reading so I can find out what happens.... :0)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!
Date: 27 Dec 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
I knew Mike wouldn't just go away. Looking forward to the pic nic. Rose and Em seem so cute and of course I always love to see Edward and Bella falling in love. :0)
Date: 27 Dec 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
That was fun :0)
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
OMG. Who would have thought that Bella could be so impetuous? What a silly girl. Poor Edward. LOL
Have a wonderful Christmas.
Date: 22 Dec 2010 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
So funny, a little hussy. Sweet girl.
Merry Christmas to you and your family, love your story.
Author's Response:
Thanks hun, I hope your family has a Merry Christmas and I will see you all soon after...hopefully with a proposal!
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
I think Bella is crazy for jumping to conclusions. lol Thats what happens when you easedrop on conversations.
Author's Response:
Yea, she is still young and I think all the inexperience doesnt help...Have a great holiday
Date: 21 Dec 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
i like your writing style
Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
why do most problems start with people overhearing only part of a conversation...lol
Author's Response:
LOL thats because people are too curious for their own good...Happy Holidays!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
Poor Bella she must be ashamed of herself to think that he doesnt love her because she wanted to get closer to him than they should untill they are married. I hope he can make her see how much she is wrong. Happy holidays and please let love happen and get these to together lol
Author's Response:
Yea she can be young and naive but that was how it was back then. Women didnt know much..Happy holidays and see you soon
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 24
Poor foolish Bella, will she ever learn to have a little faith in her man? Totally looking forward to the proposal and them getting hitched already. I am so impatient ; ) Happy Holidays to you too!
Author's Response:
See is just a little naive and young but she has more issues with herself than Edward I think..Happy Holidays
Date: 21 Dec 2010 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh bella! now theres a reason as to why she shouldn't easedrop! hope edward makes this all better update soon
Author's Response:
thats right, never listen to others peoples conversations...lol Happy Holidays!
Date: 21 Dec 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
Poor silly Bella.....
Author's Response:
I know, she is young and a bit naive but we lover her anyway. Happy Holidays see you soon
Date: 21 Dec 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
AMAZING CHAPTER
Author's Response:
Thank you! Happy Holidays See you after Christmas
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wonderful chapter. James is such a sweetie with his Miss Angela. Poor Edward, he went through the wringer a bit didn't he. I cannot wait until he asks her. LOL.
Here's wishing you and yours a lovely Christmas.
Author's Response:
Aww thanks...I hope you are yours have a wonderful one too...you may not say that after you read the next chapter though...just saying. LOL Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
awwww thats so sweet update soon
Author's Response:
Promise I will before Christmas :) Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
Everyone seems to be moving forward in making the necessary arrangements to get hitched! They may want to start building though, LOL. Even when Alice leaves after marrying Jasper, there will still be two heads of the house between Edward and Emmett. And that would mean two women of the house.
Can't wait for all the good stuff coming up! Hopefully it won't be a long engagement.
Author's Response:
Finally!! There will have to be a lot of work done to keep up with the couples...Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser
Date: 19 Dec 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 23
sweet story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
It was funny to read how nervous Edward was.
Author's Response:
Loved the convo. with the horse. LOL Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Beautiful Chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser
Date: 18 Dec 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
James had Edward worried sham on him LOL. I cant wait for the purposal. James is lucky he said yes because if he didnt and Bella found out James would have to leave the contry lol
Author's Response:
Ohh James would have been in so much trouble..LOL Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser
Date: 18 Dec 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
thank you
chapter is amazing
deeply the continuation
Author's Response:
Merci Thank you for reading
Date: 18 Dec 2010 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 23
Way to go Edward!
Author's Response:
Yes...he finally found the nerve to do it! Thanks for reviewing go to fictionators.com Monday for a teaser
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Awww, firstly Jasper is getting closer to getting to marry his Alice. I really like the idea of Jasper as a Sheriff, yeah that would be very nice in deed.
As for poor Edward, he needs to get married before he dies of blue balls. LOL.
What do you have in store for James and Emmett?
I wonder what you have planned given Edward and Bella's feelings of impending doom?
So looking forward to finding out.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh no not more trouble. LOL. Lovely chapter, really sweet. I cannot wait for Edward to ask Bella to marry him. The sooner they are married the better, if you as me:-)
Date: 13 Dec 2010 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
Men that are turly in love a wonderful thing. Edward better get to marrying Bella or she is going to take advantage of him LOL.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2010 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 22
Bella often forgets about rules when Edward is around. Cant say I blame her, lol.
Date: 13 Dec 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
A sweet time for love. Trusting, guarded and waiting for that special moment. Not sex with anyone any where.
Date: 12 Dec 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great Chapter
Date: 12 Dec 2010 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love it
deeply the continuation
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 21
Good chapter. I was wondering what other trouble would them.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
Thats was wonderful that the Webbers went to offer help.
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor James. I hope he makes it.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 18
They better hurry, I dont think Bella has much time.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
O my Bella she can find trouble.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am so glad he said one day he would be proud to call her his wife. I bet she didnt see that coming.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
I knew we hadnt seen the last of Newton. He is going to be all kinds of trouble. Good for Em asking to court Rose.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 14
You gotta loved Bella, that was a perfect set up. lol
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
Now they both know how stubborn each other is.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
The aunt and uncle were to sweet.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Its good that Newton is gone, but he could still cause trouble. James had to mess with Edwsard a little, thats why any good brother would do. As for Jasper its about time.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
I agree Mike is annoying. Good chapter.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
How sweet. Good chapter. I didnt think Edward would get his ask so soon.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is way to hard on himself.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
Finally he is acting civil to her. I can see that Mike Newton is going to be a problem.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
How long is he going to be mean??
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
I dont think Edward likes the boys talking to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
He has it bad and hasnt even spoken to her.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
I think Bella and James are in for an adventure alright. Good chapter
Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter!
Date: 08 Dec 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
That was very sweet Bella loves her brother so much. So Bella has moved closer to Edward :) I cant wait to see what that last sentance means.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 21
love the story -please keep it going.
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
Cute chapter! Edward should have just had Pastor Webber marry them right then and there and then moved her into his bedroom instead. : )