Date: 28 Oct 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 34
OOOHHHH!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!! Daddyward....GAH! What a turn on!
Date: 25 Oct 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 34
I am so glad that you posted. I hope we get another chapter soon. I can't wait to see how Edward deals with a pregnant Bella. He is so protective of her on a regular basis. He is going to go crazy with her pregnant.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 34
Finally! While I found it very sweet and romantic she told him the way she did and totally caught him off guard I thought she was never going to get it out. I love he was so excited about them having a baby, and I can't wait for the baby to get here!
Date: 24 Oct 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 34
sweet chapter. that was.a nice way to tell him.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 34
So good to hear from you. She did such a good suprise he is a happy man.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 34
nice chapter, thanks for it.
Date: 24 Oct 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 33
Pregnant and wanted to ask Carlisle about that.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 34
Yay! Love it!!! Thanks for the update
Date: 23 Oct 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 34
I missed this story! A baby!!!!! Yay!!!!
Date: 23 Oct 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 34
yay! Such a great chapter! Can't wait to see more! :)
Date: 23 Oct 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 34
yep a baby! so great!!!!update soon
Date: 23 Oct 2011 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 34
Awwww so sweet. U probably know if they are having one or two, and if its little edward or little bella in there. I cant wait to see whats going on. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 33
I knew they'd work it out :0) I'm guessing Bella asked Carlisle about missing her period and now she know's she's probably pregnant.
Date: 18 Aug 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 32
If this was the way women were treated in the time that this story takes place Bella shouldn't have been so surprised by Edwards reaction. :0) This wasn't too bad, I'm sure they'll work it out.
Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 33
Can't wait for more, I am loving this story. Maybe next chapter we can find out if she's pregnant or not.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 33
I think she talked with Carlisle about being pregers and he thinks she is to. It is a good thing Edward pulled his head out of his ass and Bella understood why he did what he did.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 33
hmmmn does she think she is pregnant already? poor Felix.
Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 33
i think she was possibly asking carlise the symptoms of pregnancy , you know just so she would know what to be on the lookout for, i think she would be to shy to just ask him outright , thats the reason she wanted to see esme so bad.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 33
Yay, there is going to be a little bambino! Great chapter!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 33
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to see more :)
Maybe she spoke to Carlisle about things... and he confirmed for her?
Date: 02 Aug 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 33
carlisle confirmed it that she is pregnant :D their first fight and make up all settled now. but it will not be the last not with her being pregnant lol update soon
Date: 02 Aug 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 33
ah ah ah , she's pregnant
chapter amazing
Date: 01 Aug 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
wow... great chapter... poor Bella... Can't believe Edward said that to her!
Excited to see the next one :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 32
wow, didn't see that one coming. I wonder what brought that about. great story really enjoy it !!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 32
The way he is acking know she is going to cut him off oh ya she is in another bedroom no head for him in the morning. I think he is right that she should not go by herself but he realy should of handled it differntly.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 32
oh edward you silly man. Yelling at a woman will never get you anywhere.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 32
Rut-roh! You would think she would have learned something from being kidnapped!
Author's Response:
You would think huh? But since Newton is gone she doesn't think about that. I think they both overreacted...we will see
Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
I loved this chapter
edward is just worried about her, the west is dangerous and should include
sorry if my english is not very good but i am french so i do what i can
More strangly
Author's Response:
your english is fine! He is worried and its dangerous. I think she is just a tad bit emotional at the moment
Date: 28 Jul 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter! I hope you can update again soon. I'm really anxious to see what happens next. Especially what happens when Edward realizes Bella isn't in their room.
Author's Response:
Whew, I hope he doesn't freak out too much LOL
Date: 28 Jul 2011 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 32
awww bella thats so sad. but that is how it was then sadly. I think she really is preggers!those emotions going all crazy update soon
Author's Response:
Damn pregnancy hormones, if thats the problem...we shall see
Date: 28 Jul 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 32
Ugh why didn't she just ask him if there was some reason he didn't want her going into town alone, or why didn't he tell her himself so it didn't turn into a fight. I hate angst and she is probably hormonal from the possibility of her being pregnant if I'm reading between the lines correctly. I will be looking forward to your next update. I hope you don't melt, I know exactly what you mean I live in the south with heat and air advisories being issued it is horrible.
Author's Response:
I promise no more angst worse than that..I don't do heavy angst :)
Date: 27 Jul 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 31
well their married now and soon everything will be well for everyone update soon
Date: 01 Jul 2011 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 31
That was a very simple wedding night. You are right. Modern times would probably be easier because we can be bolder.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 31
I think you did a great job. I agree modern day lemons are easier. lol
Date: 28 Jun 2011 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 31
I think your lemons were quite zesty lol. I am so happy for them to be one at last.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
woo hoo married!!!! and prospects for em and james too.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
Aww it was beautiful! Well done : )
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
very sweet and sensual.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 31
awesome chapter!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 31
That was so sweet, I can't wait to see what you have in store for these two now that they're married
Date: 27 Jun 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 31
great to wedding night, i loved
more strongly
xoxo
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 30
The moment with Bella and James brought tears to my eyes and of course I loved the wedding :0)
Date: 25 Jun 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
4 more days ... I knew they'd end up having a double wedding :0)
[Report This]Date: 23 Jun 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 30
It sounded perfect for them. I loved how Edward was calm and Jasper was nervous.
Date: 21 Jun 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
I love how emotional Edward gets. He is so sweet.
Date: 20 Jun 2011 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
I loved it there was so much happyness and love it almost gave me a tooth ack LOL. I cant wait to see what Edward think of Alices present to Bella ;)
Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 30
Such a sweet chapter. glad they are married now.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 30
This chapter was great I'm so glad they're finally married it was really sweet. I will be eagerly awaiting the next chapter
Date: 19 Jun 2011 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 30
I loved the chapter. Beautiful ceremony
Date: 19 Jun 2011 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
I am glad you are finishing this. It would be a shame to let them never marry.
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 30
really beautiful
strogly honeymoon
[Report This]Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. I vote for the grooms POV. Edward was too cute with his thoughts of running to the preacher. lol
Date: 14 Jun 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
Welcome back you have been missed.x
Author's Response:
Thank you and I have missed you all..
Date: 14 Jun 2011 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 29
I can't wait for the wedding. It will be so sweet. I don't know how Alice will get the dresses made so fast, but I know she will. I hope this will kick Emmett into high gear with Rosalie. Bella is going to be lonely without Alice on the Ranch.
Author's Response:
I cant wait to write it, it should be fun and don't worry its Alice, she's like the energizer bunny lol Thank you for your review
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 29
I think it would be very interesting from the grooms POV but I want to hear from Bella to so what ever makes you happy. I was so happy to read your update Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thank you..it should be an interesting chapter to write...thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 29
Now I can't wait for the wedding, I hope you are able to update soon
Author's Response:
THank you...writing chapter as we speak
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 29
Glad to have you back. Really cute chapter, thank you for updating! Looking forward to the wedding : )
Author's Response:
thank you for reviewing as always.. Its good to be back.
Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wedding POV from The guys POV I think. We always see the brides.
Author's Response:
I do like that Idea...thanks for reviewing
Date: 14 Jun 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 29
glad you are back. Yes we flounced, but came right back when we saw you.
Author's Response:
Thanks for coming back.. I am writing the next one as we speak. Thank you for reviewing
Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
this story is great, I'v made it to chapter 14 and love it.
Date: 14 Jun 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
Why not do both? I think it would only be fitting, and maybe do Alice's and Jaspers POV as out take? Just a thought.... I think it would be nice to have Edwards POV of the night and Bellas POV for the morning after
Author's Response:
it should be interesting to write and I am already starting it....
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
I had wondered if they'd do a double wedding :0)
Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good to hear from you love this story . So glad Edward caught on and they will be married to should be fun.
Date: 04 Apr 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
great chapter! :) Can't wait to see more!
Date: 04 Apr 2011 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 28
sweet chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 28
Best Parts:
As I look upon his beautiful face I felt melancholy for a moment. I just realized that Alice and Jasper will be married at the weeks end and Edward and I are not. That thought depressed me. I internally berated myself for thinking like that. Now is not the time to feel jealous or sad.
I looked at Edward again and his eyebrows are knitted in concern.
Shoot, my face betrayed my inner thoughts. I smiled warmly at him trying to show him that all was well.
He gave me a small smile and stood up.
I had to admit that even though I am ecstatic for Alice I am a bit upset that all of this talk about weddings has soured my mood, as jealousy over the fact that Jasper and Alice get to start their new life together in a few short days I will still be just Edwards fiancé and not his wife.
“I had the same thoughts this afternoon. Jasper was talking about their plans and dreams and the whole time I was thinking how I wished it was us instead.”
Bella’s eyes widened with surprise.
“Really?” she gasped.
“Yes, really. I was green with jealousy. I have dreamt of our lives together so many times since I have met you and all I could think about was how that should be us too. So please don’t fret about feeling like this.” I pulled her face towards mine, placing a gentle kiss on her lips.
“Let’s see if Alice and Jasper would like to have a double wedding.”
“Edward, let’s do it…let’s get married this weekend.”
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! I have missed your reviews..Thank you for leaving them for me
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
yeah!thats great their going to get married!!woo hoo update soon
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 28
A double wedding is a perfect idea. I dont know why they didnt think of it earlier.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 28
Beautiful Chapter!
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh how I have missed you and this sweet story. Thank you for the chapter. Good luck in your move! : )
Author's Response:
Thank you...this move is soooo much work! GAH I have missed all of you too! thank you for reviewing
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
I am so happy to hear from you I was afraid you had forgotten us, hope to read from you soon.....
Author's Response:
Thank you> I could never forget about you guys..RL is just very hectic these days..thank you for reviewing
Date: 03 Apr 2011 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well you are worth waiting for. yes double wedding exactly what I thought should happen. Brother & sister wedded on the same day. Back then hard to get everyone together traveling miles to come. So best to do 2 for the price of one. Perhaps the dresses will be less than what they want but the end product will be the same.
thank you,
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Sorry for the wait I really felt bad but just way too much on my plate. I cant wait to write this double wedding!
Date: 03 Apr 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
oh i'm so excited, they will get married
i can not wait to read more i bounced in my chair a bit like alice my husband will think i take drugs lol
kisses
Date: 13 Feb 2011 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
Everyone will be so suprised they are getting married so soon. I think E/B will be happy for Alice and Jasper. :0)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review..I am sure e/b will be happy too.
Date: 12 Feb 2011 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great Chapter
Date: 12 Feb 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 27
I think it needs to be a double wedding. Jasper is so cool.
Author's Response:
I love Jasper...thanks for the suggestion...
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2011 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 27
So sweet! You know in today's society, another bride to be wouldn't take to kindly to being upstaged, lucky for Alice it is Bella we are talking about and a party she didn't ask for. I have missed your updates!
Author's Response:
that is true..today the future bride would flip out!Im sure Bella wouldnt be like that at all..thanks for the kind words
Date: 11 Feb 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 27
awwww love it! their getting married quick,wow. update soon
Author's Response:
they are..they dont want to be seperated..i love that about them!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 27
What a sneaky one. LOL I love it. So it looks like the sweet, sweet Jasper & the lovely Alice are going to beat Edward and Bella down the aisle. I don't think they will mind at all. Your characters are all far too nice to begrudge anyone their happiness. Its one of the reasons I love your story so.
Now I can hardly wait for the next chapter. (Jumps up and down with excitment.)
Author's Response:
they are some of the nicest people i have ever read...sugary sweet. LOL Thanks for all the love and support xx
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 27
PLS CONTINUE SOON!!! I CANT WAIT FOR THE DOUBLE WEDDING!!!
SO PLS CONTINUE SOON!!!
BIG FAN!!!!
Author's Response:
Double wedding?? is that what your hoping for ;) we shall see what happens....hehe
Date: 11 Feb 2011 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 27
chaptre amazing
Author's Response:
merci.. update soon I hope :)
Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad that Alice and Jasper are going to get married and get settled w/a new home, but I was hoping to read more about Edward and Bella.
Author's Response:
I know I miss e/b too... but you will not be disappointed next time I promise ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
Jasper is so darn sweet. The party she was going to throw for Bella and Edward will be perfect for their wedding.
Author's Response:
well all the family will be there so why not? right thanks for your review
Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
Loved the chapter and missed the story. I think Edward and Bella will be happy for Alice and Jasper. I think in a family with such love and companionship they will not be sad to share their moment. Rather it be more memorable for all!
See you very soon, we hope.
Author's Response:
Thank you...I hope the time will be short between chapters too..
Date: 11 Feb 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 27
nice job. Glad to see you posting again
Author's Response:
Thank you..I have missed posting too...RL has been crazy!
Date: 11 Feb 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
i get that alice and jasper wanna get married asap but its really not fair to edward and bella to do it at their engagement party .. ed and bella wldnt complain but its just tacky .. how wld alice feel in reverse?????
Author's Response:
i promise it wont turn out tacky...you will have to wait and see :)
Date: 24 Jan 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
amazing story so far!!! wow! Can't wait to see more :)
Date: 21 Jan 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I appreciate your reviews :)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter. I'm glad you worked through your writer's block. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am glad too..it was seriously upsetting me :( The next one is coming along so hopefully by next weekend~
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
How sweet when is the wedding I dont think they can stay away from each other very much longer. Jasper is so cool and in love the little house sounds so cute and I cant wait to hear what Alice has to say about everything.
Author's Response:
Thanks! We will hear from Alice next chapter and I am sure she will have a lot to say LOL
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
woo hoo go jasper
Author's Response:
Yay Jasper...I love him, the sweetest man ever. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
DANG WE MISSED YOU!
Now we expect more! You can do it.
Author's Response:
I missed you all too...I feel so bad about the long wait but my brain shut down...i hated it. I am already working on next chapter so hopefully soon :)
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
Perfect plan that Jasper has for him and Alice. I am glad that Edward finally ask Bella to marry him.
Author's Response:
Thank you...I love how Jasper found their dream home :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
This was lovely. It was so cool that Edward and Bella are now engaged and so happy.
I love that Jasper is so full of hope and plans for the future.
I can hardly wait until their are wedding bells.
Who will be the first to get married?
I cannot wait to find out.
All the very best
Caroline.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing hon! I am serious contemplating who will be to the altar first, i asked on ff and it seems everyone has different ideas.lol
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
So happy for alice and jasper!!!!thats so great..oh and of course for edward and bella...now its only emmett and james left lol update soon
Author's Response:
Thank you...it will be a bit for James and Emmett I think but not too much longer I hope.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
So glad you are back, I missed you! Can't wait for more : )
Author's Response:
Thanks Missed you all too...glad the block is gone! working on next chapter so hopefully next weekend....
Date: 19 Jan 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 26
you miss me
chapter amazing
Author's Response:
I missed you too..merci