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Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 41

Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing it. 

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 40

Great chapter.

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 39

Looks like they are on to their HEA after all. 

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 38

Glad you didn't drag it out more, the suspense of wanting him to remember everythingwas killing me, lol.

Sherry  

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 37

And to think I thought the last chapter had an evil cliffy. The hurt and anguish Bella must be feeling. 

Sherry 

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Date: 21 Dec 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 36

What an evil cliffy. 

Sherry 

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 35

Life is good for them all.

Sherry 

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Date: 20 Dec 2015 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 34

YAY!!! A baby!!

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 33

Carlisle gave good advice, 'Never go to bed angry.'

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 32

What has come over Edward?

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 31

Very sweet.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 30

The first day of the rest of their lives together.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 29

Their fear of their wedding night kinda cracked me up.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 28

A double wedding. Wow, yet it makes sense. 

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 27

Ahh... the bliss.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 26

It seems their lives are coming together. 

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 25

The perfect proposal and location.

Sherry

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Date: 19 Dec 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 24

Boy, what a misunderstanding.

Sherry

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Date: 18 Dec 2015 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

Love is in the air, lol.

Sherry

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Date: 18 Dec 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 22

Life seems to be good for them all now.

Sherry

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Date: 17 Dec 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 21

Apparently love is in the air. Everyone is pairing off.

Sherry

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Date: 17 Dec 2015 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

Glad James made it.

Sherry

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Date: 17 Dec 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 19

What an adrenlin rush chapter.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 18

*shivers* Someone needs to rescue her from Mike's plans.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

The last part gave me chills. Things were going so well for eveyrone, then Mike shows up.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 16

Bella keeps surprising Edward with her talents.

Sherry



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your kind reviews. Glad you are enjoying the story.

 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 15

Good for Emmett.

Mike really creeps me out.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well played Bella.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Bella is gonna keep him on his toes.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

They are meshing together quite well.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 11

I had to smile at Mike Newton getting his ass handed to him. I was surprised James was so alert of Edward's interest in Bella, and vice versa.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

Just when they are making progress, damn Newton ruins it. I don't think this will end well, especially when James finds out. 

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Sweet chapter.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 8

Poor Edward. He can't be strong for everyone, he should've taken time to grieve. 

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

I don't think Mike is gonna take the hint to quickly. Alice, warning Bella about him speaks volumes for his character. Edward and Bella may be on a roller coaster for a while.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 6

Poor Edward, he's a ball of mess.

Sherry

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Date: 16 Dec 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

lol, Edward isn't gonna like Bella getting attention from the ranch workers.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Dec 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 4

He's gonna be fighting a losing battle. Isabella is already getting under his skin.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Dec 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yikes, Edward isn't gonna be as welcoming as his siblings.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Dec 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

I can't imgaine the strenght it would take mentally to decide to travel into the unknown.

Sherry

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Date: 15 Dec 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start. Looking forward to see where their adventure takes them.

Sherry

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 41

sweet story ;) i do have a queary though about how they have the name cullen because if their mum and esme were sisters they wouldn't have the same last name as carlisle? thanks for completing and posting this on here for us ;D 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 41

That was wonderful I love the family they have became Thanks so much for a great story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 41

sweet ending.  TY for writing and sharing with us

ty

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 40

I have really enjoyed reading this story. Looking forward to the Epi 

Reviewer: luvstwilight14 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2

Everytime I do a search I find so many interresting stories.  I am enjoying your story so far.  I was actually doing research myself for a story that involves Casper and ranch living.  I just hope I can do it as well.

Hugs, Stephanie

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 40

the baby! of course such a nice story

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 May 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 40

How can it be time for an epilogue. There is still so much to cover. Are you getting bored with the story and just want to finish it quickyly?



Author's Response:

No im not bored at all but they started their journey together and niw they have 

Both found their happy endings it just seemed a fitting place to end. There will be a large epi, possibly two

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 40

Lovely story. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 40

Sweet chapter.  Sad to see it end but its been a wonderful ride.

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 39

Yay! Happy reunion

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 39

woo hoo.  Glad they got to get back together.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 39

loved it!

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2012 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 39

aww such a great scene :) update soon

Reviewer: pierard85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 39

Thanks for the chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 24

aww poor bella she only heard half the conversation.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 23

fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 22

aww bless em.fab chapter.i think james will say yes to edward.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 21

aww glad james has found someone to love.fab chapter.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 13

aww that was so romantic.fab chapter

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

fab chapter.n good riddance mike.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

fab chapter n i agree damn mike!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 9

awww that was so sweet coming to her rescue.fab chapter

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 38

Thank goodness. Bella could not handle much more stress of Edward not knowing her. Edward will probably always carry the guilt of this week in his heart. He loves her so much. He will not forgive himself for not remembering her even if he did have a head trauma.

Reviewer: BELLWARDC Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 38

That was an awesome chapter!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 38

Thank you so so much for not dragging out the memory loss. I was worried Edward would miss out on the pregnancy you know feeling first kicks and all that. Plus Bella just needs him. 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2012 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 38

so gladu didnt drag it out. i would've understood but happy that u didn't thanks.  take care!

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 38

awww he remembers now they can be happy together!update soon

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 38

Awesome!!! The ending totally made me swoon :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 38

awww  thought you'd drag it out at least one more chapter.   Sweet end there

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2012 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 38

yay for his memory coming back!!! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 38

whew, glad that was over realtively quickly, wonder how Edward feels about  no-one saying hey dumbass you married Bella

 

Reviewer: pierard85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 38

thank you for the chapter

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 37

OMG he feels bad for not remembering Alice and Jasper's wedding... how is he gonna feel when they tell him he is married and expecting a child... poor Bella :( ...... Can't wait to read the next one!

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 37

omg poor bella he doesn't remember them being together!update soon

Reviewer: mmsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 37

Cool chapter. I hope you have time to update soon.

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 37

Thanks for updating. Hope you feel better soon!

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 37

Oh poor Bella, she's gotta be heart broken. I'm glad Edward woke up and I hope he gets his memory back. I wonder what it'll take for him to remember? 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 37

ACK  Amnesia.   Poor Bella, as if she doesnt have enough stress.    Awww eddie

Reviewer: pierard85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 37

oh no it's horrible

thanks for the chapter

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 36

OMG!! you just left it there??!! lol Can't wait to read the next one.... and Edward is so funny, I love how people love to think that pregnant women can't do anything... lol :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 36

Edward's mind was not on his work. I hope he just past out due to his arm pain and he doesn't have head trauma.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 36

Ohhh crap... thanks for the cliffy!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2011 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 36

 first time parents are funny.  Oh edward hope he'll be ok

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 36

Well I guess we have our answer of Bella's feeling of dread, hopefully Edward just knocked himself silly for a few minutes but will be ok.  I can't imagine him waking up and having amnesia or something that would be awful, can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 7:20 AM Title: Chapter 36

OMG this is what Bella was afraid was going to happen please dont let it be to bad that he cant come back from.  When are they going to tell the family about the baby??

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 36

awk...

Reviewer: tuggerpie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 36

:) looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 36

omg bella is going to freak out! really hope he is going to be ok update soon

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

oh no !!!!!!!  Bella had that feeling... :(

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 35

great chapter!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2011 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 35

I am so happy for James things are coming together for him.  I cant wait til they all find out obout Bella and the baby.

Reviewer: flower123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 35

awww! so sweet james is getting his happy ending now update soon

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 35

Wow, they are knocking down like flies with the proposals and I have to say it was another beautiful one.  I wonder where Emmett is going to live, actuall where does he live? I know it is not the main house and I cant rmrmber if it is the bunkhouse?

Wonderful chapter as always.

Fiorella

Reviewer: oopsadaysey Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 35

AAAAWWWW

The nicest James in ff history Melikee

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 35

James is so sweet.   Great ideas too.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 35

Yeah! Everyone is happy. James needs to get that house built before Winter. Bella needs a female friend at the ranch. Edward means well. Bella needs to be patient and let him be sweet to her.

Reviewer: FlSunshine Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 35

awwww great update

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 34

Wow, I have been putting off reading this story, so it would flow, and I have to say I loved it from beginning to where you are at now.

Keep up the beautiful writing.

Firella



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am very happy that you have enjoyed the story so far. Im in process of writing next chapter..hope to have it out by weekend

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 34

That was so sweet! It brought tears to my eyes when Edward started talking to the baby inside Bella's stomach. I agree with Bella he's going to be a great Daddy



Author's Response:

I love tummy talking daddyward...thanks for reviewing

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