Date: 06 Dec 2013 1:09 AM Title: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered
Absolutley stunning! I love this piece so much! My family has been to Salem several times and I have read the histories of that judicial travesty. Let me just say that you, in this work, have done the spirits and memory of those lost there proud! You present an almost overwhelming amount of supposed evidence - just as justices centuries ago received. You however go forth and prove the true wrongs done not only to the victims but the accused as well. If only they had seen so clearly centuries ago! Thank you for placing the past in the hands of the present and future generations so a long ago wrong might be remembered a nd the lessons learned then be brought forward. Kudos on a job well done! Thank you!
Date: 24 Feb 2012 8:38 PM Title: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered
Those were very different times, and I'm kind of glad we have got past those times. On the other hand, human nature hasn't changed all that much. People still aren't perfect, and greed and avarice are alive and well. But then so are love and caring, so maybe we're okay. It was fun reading about Edward and Bella in the 1600's, and thinking how their lives went in Virginia.
Date: 17 Oct 2010 12:01 AM Title: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered
AWWWWW!!!!That was so nice,well except for all the death.Anyway great story keep up the good work.:)
thank you so much...its hard sometimes to write something historically accurate, especially when it means killing my fave characters, but I'm glad that you enjoyed it!
Date: 07 Oct 2010 12:15 PM Title: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered
wow, awesome story! absolutely loved it. so sad and tragic what happened to Bella and the others, such a shame that people were like that, so judgmental and just plain old liars just to inflict some kind of revenge. but sad to say, it's still like that now, yeah we have freedom of religion and speech and all that, but you still see and hear people being persecuted or targeted because of it. thank you for this, truly enjoyable
I'm so gald you enjoyed it! Writing this, my primary goal was to make my bidder happy and write something other people would enjoy, so to get the response I have has been amaing! I worked hard to write about the time acurately and show how as much things change, unfortunately, they always stay the same. Andd thanks for finding me on twitter! I can't wait to chat with you more over there!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 8:08 PM Title: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered
Great o/s. Loved Puritanward, loved the history even though its a terrible point in the history of our country.
thanks so much, I've studied it and been there so for me its a personal thing, so to get free reign and go here with it was a great opportunity!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 2:56 PM Title: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered
Thank you! It is great to read your new work. What a great job researching and writing accurately for the time period (as far as I know!)! I love the originality and plot development crammed in the one shot.
Love your stories and cannot wait for the next one!
thank you so much, there was a lot of research needed to figure out the time period acurately, especially the puritan aspect, but luckil I was able to write a believable story. Thanks for taking the time to review and I can't wait until you see the next one!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:46 PM Title: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered
Magical!! I was totally into a different world while reading!!
Thank you so much...I worked very hard to create this time period and to hear that is amamzing! That's just...wow!
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:36 PM Title: Bewitched, Bothered & Bewildered
Is it to much to ask for the trial of Jake and the Denali sisters. I just want to hear him think or talk about how everything he built up crashed under him and how even his own life will be taken because of his arogance.
I did love it though.
thank you for the love. The judges ruled that all the claims of witchcraft were false so the Denali trial wasn't concluded, it was thrown out. As for Jake's trial, that is being left in the hands of the other magistrates as Bella & Edward ride off towards their future. They didn't need to see him hang to move on. It means a lot that you took the time to review.