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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 32- The Life I Belong To

A lovely ending to a lovely story! I really liked the tale Paul told his granddaughter. Every child should have a family background like that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 31- A JellyBean In The Jar

What a lovely way to to learn you are expanding your family circle! It's great that Emily and Ripley are going to be mothers at the same time.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 30- Ours

This story just keeps getting better and better! It was a pretty bad time that got better the longer it went. The house was just a perfect idea, and the bonding with Ripley's dad was great. I really like how the pack and the Cullens too, all work together.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 29- Fought and Won

This chapter kind of choked me up, big time! It's an amazing thing to see that kind of love and strength sharing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 28- Don't Give Up

Heartbreak time for Paul, for a bit. Until Edward reminded him of what Ripley needed, what was necessary. Just keep fighting, being there for her, and Paul  believed, because he knew Edward spoke from experience. Turned out so much better than it might have.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 27- Senses

I wonder how and when Edward got there, too! I seriously hope the pack found those bastards and dealt some justice! Hope Ripley is going to be okay, and Paul too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 26-Feel

That's not right, that nobody is reviewing on this site, shame on them! I may not be many, but I do review! The ending of this chapter horrified me! How the hell is Paul going to save her from a stabbing?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 25-Her Hand Moved To His And Found Home

I'm so impressed with how fearless Ripley, or rather how she never gives in to fear! That was pretty scary stuff, right up 'til Jake imprinted on Renesmee. The Cullens and the Quileutes draw closer all the time.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 24-The Beast Keeping The Beauty

I knew he had always loved this girl! To have remembered the rose was just the sweetest thing I ever heard! Now what is the problem at home?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 23-There's No Time Limit

Chuckled over the music thing, and went, awww, the last couple paragraphs. I love the way you write these two! I can see it all happening in my head, which I think means you're damn good at this!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 22- Grass Rings

Ripley isn't one for corny traditions, so they just went ahead and started making their own!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 21- Distractions

It's really nice that Amber and Embry are finally together, but Ripley had an even bigger surprise for graduation!  I'll bet Paul had no idea that was coming, nor that she would be the one to ask!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 20- What Comes Natural

Good for Ripley! She didn't roll over and let Paul get away with that crap! I loved that she just hit him , both physically and intellectually, until she got through to him.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 19- Sunny Day Turned Dark

What's up with Paul, has he been taking lessons from Edward Cullen? Paul didn't bother to talk things over with Ripley, he just decided for them both! Men, stubborn, blockheaded ones, anyway!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 18-Family

Bad as Paul hates hospitals, this time he gained a lot and didn't lose a thing! That had such a good outcome, and I'm so glad it did! I'll bet Amber never had a spring break like this one  before!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 17-Grateful

Ripley is awfully brave, not to mention, reckless! Well, she took a gamble and it paid off, thankGod! Like she said, it sure speeded up the process. That was a scary chapter, as it could have been so much worse.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 16-Panic

Things are definitely getting serious when Sam lets the Cullens on the reservation. Lord knows who has Sue and what they've done with her! Moreover, what crazy thing has Ripley done?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 15-Giggle Girls

The imprints and family members are a pack, just like the guys , and it's all interwoven. Pretty good way to have it work out, really. Amber had it right, Sue doesn't seem like any fourteen year old. Much more mature that girl!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 14- Equal And Opposite Reaction

Poor Sue! First sees her boyfriend turn into a huge wolf, and then he imprints, not on her, but some total stranger! The pack is growing, due to the Cullens living nearby, I suppose.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 13- A Romantic Guy

Paul's mom I like a lot! Kind of hate to read your words about dark times ahead!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 12- Ways

Paul's day started out real well, but certainly didn't end that way. Hopefully he won't phase right in front of Sue and Embry. The way Ripley calms him, maybe it will be okay.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 11- Soul Mates, Yep That's Us

I guess Ripley just had to process for a bit, kind of take it all in and digest a bit. The banter and dialogue between them is great!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 10- Ripley, Believe it or Not

Paul is no doubt hoping that's a good thing from Ripley's point of view, and so am I! She sure is taking the fact of werewolves and vampires in stride. Imprinting should be okay with her too.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 9- Nerves and Comfort

Kind of blew Paul's mind that Ripley already knew his secret. I hope it eased his mind, too. I wonder who the new wolf is? I love the ease and comfort they have together, by the way!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 8- Happy Dance

Told you that girl was smart! Her dad must have esp, too. Or maybe it's just a dad thing.The bond between daddys and their little girls is a unique thing. I've watched it with our daughter and my husband for forty-nine years! It's pretty neat!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 7- Ribs

This is going better than it might have. Ripley is too smart not to figure it out. Pretty soon, she'll know about wolves and imprints. Either she'll guess or Paul will be allowed to tell her. The old bond they had at seven will only grow stronger.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 6- Never Forget

Ten years and nobody better expect things to have stayed static. If Paul imprints on Ripley, it may blow his mind, and he'll worry that he could hurt her like Sam hurt Emily.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 5- Durable

How lucky to have Paul's mom in on the secret. Sure made it easier to get Emily taken care of . This episode has caused Paul to worry about his control, but what can he do, except the best he can?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 4- Right and Wrong

Dear Lord, poor Sam and poor Emily! What a horrible thing to have happen, and to your imprint, too! I hope they can work their way past this, otherwise, there's misery ahead!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 3- Believe

In an odd sort of way, it was a blessing that Sam was nearby when Paul phased the first time. It was also a big help that his mother knew what had happened to him. I find it significant that it was a picture of him and Ripley that calmed Paul down. It most likely won't dawn on him why that was, not for a while anyway. If he had been totally on his own when the change came, it could have been awful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 2- Frog and Toad

So what, if they were only seven years old? These two were meant to be together, probably from the very beginning. At least I know she will be back some day. Poor Paul, he sure didn't have that comfort!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 1- The First Time

Forget that I like all your stories, this one is shaping up to be another goodie! No surprise, huh?

Reviewer: teamrpattz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2011 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 24-The Beast Keeping The Beauty

Loved it!! dang cliff hangers!!

Cant wait for more!!

 

Reviewer: teamrpattz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 23-There's No Time Limit

So worth the long wait!! another fantastic chapter by a fantastic author!! Cant wait to read more.

U ROCK!!!!

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 3- Believe

Love the story. Ripley.... hope he will find her.

Reviewer: Alecandra Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 1- The First Time

Great. I love stories, too.

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