Date: 13 Sep 2016 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 3
Browsed your stories after reading Guarding Edward (a fav of mine) and I agree it's nice to read stories where they can just BE. Thank you for that gem of wisdom. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2016 12:36 AM Title: Side Shot...Alice
LOVED IT. Ty for writing and sharing
Date: 07 Sep 2016 12:27 AM Title: Side Shot...Lauren
Lauren has standards???? ROFLMFAO
Date: 07 Sep 2016 12:25 AM Title: Side Shot...Sandi, Debate Team Captain
lol for his first kiss
Date: 07 Sep 2016 12:25 AM Title: Epilogue
I freakin LOVE that FF. I have it on my tablet right now. Glad they were able to keep to their plan with everyones help. Nice that he can keep his parents somewhat in his life.
Yummy first lemon. Happy Dance
Date: 07 Sep 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
def a good plan Carlisle came up with
Date: 06 Sep 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
LOL for Rose threatening Em. I'd call that a limon..... :-)
Date: 06 Sep 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 4
ooh yummy lime time.
Date: 06 Sep 2016 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loving the twists and turns you are doing to the canon story. He is def taking things well.
Date: 06 Sep 2016 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
ROFL for her sneezing on the kid and putting off Neuton.
Date: 06 Sep 2016 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow This is a different twist to the typical twilight story. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:41 AM Title: Side Shot...Alice
It's a wonder the whole school didn't give that little trick a standing ovation! Served thos little bitches right.
Author's Response:
Thanks, again, Kathy, for reading all these bits!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:23 AM Title: Side Shot...Lauren
That's enough to give you the creeps! Those two girls are just pathetic
Author's Response:
KRIS did a great job creeping us out!!! LOL...
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:05 AM Title: Side Shot...Sandi, Debate Team Captain
A sweet and funny moment, handled just right!
Author's Response:
My good friend, LJ Summers, is such a great writer...she did wonders with this bit.
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:34 AM Title: Epilogue
What a stroke of good fortune that Edward got to keep his parents in the loop. It sounds like his vampire life fits him like a glove. Great story
Author's Response:
LOW angst...so his folks had to be kept in the loop!
Again, thanks for reading, Kathy!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Pretty good plan for the time being. Carlisle is a smart and practical man and his ideas sound like they will get Bella and Edward through the difficult time ahead. All the Cullens are doing what they can to ease the strain of the mating imperative.
Author's Response:
Well, MOST of the Cullens were helpful, I think that Emmett wanted to stir up trouble!!!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
You did a fabulous job, in my opinion. This is going to be a major problem and I'm hoping Carlisle can come up with a solution. There has to be some way for Edward and Bella to be close without having to disappear.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU, Kathy!
AH, you know that Carlisle is going to be of help...
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
Like you need me to tell you, that was really good ! Edward is amazing, the way he's just going with the flow. Bella is the most important thing in his universe now, and no doubt forever.
Author's Response:
LOL...I like to hear it!!!
Yes, forever...this is an ANGST free fic...lots of UST, but no angst!
Thanks for reading, sweetie, I do appreciate it!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know about fun, but it is a delight to read this version of Bella and Edward. I do see a recurring theme, though. In the Twilight stories, you ever notice how it's always the eager human that has no qualms about immortality? Wonder why that is? I really like how the mated pairs can share their gifts, that is too cool!
Author's Response:
That theme is out there!
Sharing gifts could be fun...sometimes...lol
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Of course it's something wonderful, it's each other! Evidently, Bella and Edward are perfect for each other, fancy that! This is a unique way for them to meet and recognize that something amazing is happening. You do write the best stories.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
There is some scientific basis in our noses leading us to our mates!
Kathie
Date: 03 Aug 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
So, Bella is the vampire and Edward is human, nice switch. The heavenly scent thing is good,too, and from the sound of it, Bella can read his mind. That should help immensely. I can hardly wait!
Author's Response:
There you are, Kathy!!! You've found me over here! This was also posted at the other site! So lovely to see you here!
You know me and VAMP Bella...lol...I like a strong woman...as I have 3 daughters...lol
Thanks for the support, sweetie!
Kathie
Date: 30 Jan 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
loving the beginning so far can't wait to continue reading
Author's Response:
Thanks for giving it a shot, kmk...hope you enjoy!
Kathie
Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 5
aww
Author's Response:
Sorry it took me so long to respond!
Thanks for reviewing!
Kathie
Date: 12 Aug 2010 4:49 PM Title: Epilogue
I just read Immersion and really enjoyed it. Thanks! Are there any differences in the main story between this version and the one on FF? What about your other stories? Are the the same on both sites? I like your stories and will put you on author alert.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Coleen! Glad you enjoyed it...
Nope...my stories are all the same here, ffn and at twilighted...
Thanks for putting me on aa~
Kathie
Date: 13 Jun 2010 10:07 AM Title: Side Shot...Alice
another funny chapter those girls deserved it and they were planning to do that to bella anyhow 'what goes around comes around' they would do well to remember that, and bella has made sworn ememies she does not care, enjoyed this and the other extras thanks tracy i'll leave this on alert in case you add more
Author's Response:
Thank you! Yuri really came through with this sideshot...I laughed, a LOT when I read it too...
Kathie
Date: 13 Jun 2010 9:40 AM Title: Side Shot...Lauren
funny chapter, what a sad pair of deluded girls i had to laugh at lauren's ramblings stupid girl, not even her own mother liked her very much, she is so far off the mark with her comments about edward, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thanks, Tracy! They really were nuts...and I think that Kris did a great job with them!
Kathie
Date: 12 Jun 2010 9:16 PM Title: Side Shot...Sandi, Debate Team Captain
cool chapter, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
LJ did a really good job, didn't she?
My RL BFF is Andrea...and she loved the story too...
Kathie
Date: 12 Jun 2010 8:37 PM Title: Epilogue
well i have to say i loved this, it was super fun and easy to read, a proper love story, love the flashback scenes depicting how they coped with the mating and what plans were in place, even though it was easy to read it was still full of depth and plot and lots of extra's to do with the vampire world, i look forward to reading the extra chapters thanks for a great story from tracy
Author's Response:
Oh, thank you, Tracy! Your reviews have been so lovely...
Kathie
Date: 12 Jun 2010 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
cool chapter, it seems they thought of everything nice bedtime they got going on, thank tracy
Author's Response:
Ah...I'd like that bedtime too!!!
Wait...my hubby thinks we already have that...LOL
Kathie
Date: 12 Jun 2010 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter, let's see what the plan is, cause i dont think they can cope with seperation, thank tracy
Author's Response:
Yes, they don't cope well with being APART...
Kathie
Date: 12 Jun 2010 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 4
great chapter, it's so compelling this need to be touching, now it's time to meet the rest of the family, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Yep, time to meet the FAMILY...lol
kathie
Date: 11 Jun 2010 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh joy, a lovely happy story, no angst just two people.... well sort of!! falling in love and enjoying it how refreshing, great chapter, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Sometimes you just need HAPPY...LOL...and this story is the place for that...
Kathie
Date: 11 Jun 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh the scent is just too alluring for both of them, so what now? how will bella take to mating with a human although it seems alice knew all along and can see no problem with it, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
That really is the question...isn't it? How will Bella react?
Thanks, again, for reading!
Kathie
Date: 11 Jun 2010 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh great first chapter, love the idea that bella is a vamp not edward and that they connect through scent, i think i'm really going to enjoy reading this, i got this story after reading encore (leelan oleander rec it) from the southern fan fic review, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Ah, Tracygoodey1...your reviews have really made my day!
Oh! I do love Leelan! and ENCORE!
I was so tickled to be rec'd by SFF too!
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:36 AM Title: Epilogue
:)
and here you said that you didn't like writing lemons! That was a fantastic one! :)
Great story!
Shay
Author's Response:
Shay, you make me smile and laugh!
Thanks, so much, for re-reading!~
And all those lovelly coffee cups...
And wonderful words!
Got to see...you must be on here somewhere too!
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
I seriously love that bike! :) And the banner w/ E & B on the bike! Yeah bb!
Alice is brilliant...and so are you, Kat!
Shay
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
Kat!
Thanks for the shoutout there! LOL!
i love how you kept trying to end this story, but we wouldn't let you! That still cracks me up! :)
Another hawt chapter! :)
shay
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
Inlaws??!?
Yep! They might as well get used to it, huh?
Hawt chapter, girl, Hawt!
shay
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
:) I do love this chapter! I just had to read it again! LOL!
Great job...great job!
Shay
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Methinks, Bella's unrockable world just got rocked! Big time!
:)
Great job, Kat! Great job! :)
Shay
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Oh, yes! "IT'S YOU!!"
Indeed it is young ones, indeed it is!
Love this Kathie, as you well know! :)
Shay
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 1:56 AM Title: Epilogue
EXCELLENT!!! I wish that it was longer, but that doesn'talways mean it will be better, I am gald your going to wrtie a few outtakes, I will really like to know about the acceptance of Bella by Edwards family.
Anyway BRAVO to a very talented writer.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, bwen...I've enjoyed opening my emails today!
I hope you like the side-shots my friends wrote too...they made me laugh...
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think I have run out of things to say, so I'll just say HOT and BRILLIANT!
Author's Response:
Why, thank you! I'll take that!
Thanks for the review, bwen...and the coffee cups too!
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
You have me totally captivate by this story and yes it is fun!
I love the dialogue and how open and honest it is between Edward and Bella.
BRAVO for stepping out and taking these characters on a journey of your own creation and not just rehashing old themes, what you hav created is truly beautiful!
Author's Response:
Makes me happy when you have found it to be fun too!
I appreciate your kinds words...and the coffee cups too!
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 2
So glad you did both POV one thing I missed with SM everything coming basically from Bella's POV.
Very well done!
Author's Response:
I don't always do scenes from differing POV, but did think this one called for it...
Thanks, again, for reading, bwen!
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
BRILLIANT!!! Loved the transposition of Bella and Edward the imprinting idea via smell is an interesting twist.
You opening chpater is intriguing and inspired, looking forward to the rest!
Author's Response:
Thanks, bwen, lovely review and steaming coffee cups!
Hope you enjoy the rest of IMMERSION...
Kathie
Date: 08 Mar 2010 10:39 AM Title: Epilogue
Wonderfully constructed story, nice twist.
Author's Response:
Thank you artri...so glad you enjoyed it.
Kathie
Date: 19 Feb 2010 4:35 PM Title: Epilogue
enjoyed the story!!!
Author's Response:
Thank, glad to hear it!
Kathie
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:56 PM Title: Side Shot...Alice
loved it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, so much, Raven Jadewolf...I've loved your reviews...and I'm glad you enjoyed IMMERSION!
Kathie
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:43 PM Title: Epilogue
that was amazing!!!!!!! I loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you, Raven!
Kathie
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
I would explode if I had to wait eight months!
Author's Response:
I know! And look how LONG they waited...but they did have that help...that BOOK...
Kathie
Date: 16 Feb 2010 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
woo-hoo!! Just change him and get on with it Bella! lol
Author's Response:
She really THOUGHT about *just* changing him! Right that second...LOL
Kathie
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
Way to break it to them gently Alice! rofl
Author's Response:
In-Laws? Uh oh...
I can just see their faces...things are moving pretty quickly...LOL
Kathie
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
As a firm believer in and willing victim to the love at first sight phenomenon, I applaud them both!
Author's Response:
They didn't stand a chance...when they BOTH smelled so good too!
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Raven!
Kathie
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like this Bella
Author's Response:
Thank you! Be prepared...she's NOT really angsty... ;D
Kathie
Date: 16 Feb 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
I always love a geeky Edward
Author's Response:
Glad you like him! Hope you enjoy the rest of IMMERSION, Raven Jadewolfe.
Kathie
Date: 15 Feb 2010 10:20 PM Title: Epilogue
:)
Author's Response:
Nice to know that you are still enjoying it!
Kathie
Date: 15 Feb 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response:
;D
Thanks!
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Such a lovely, sexy story. So tender.
Author's Response:
Vampyre, what a lovely set of emails to wake up to! Thank you!
I'm so happy that you enjoyed this angst free happy fest!
I appreciate your support and all those lovely little coffee cups...and Happy Valentine's Day!
Kathie
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm really enjoying the role reversal between E&B. Great story!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my God, so much more than fun. And thank you for that yummy visual of Edward on a motorcycle. Oh I lnow about Harper's Bazaar, but until I read that it happened to Edward Masen or Cullen, it just ain't so.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Gregorian chants in Japanese - too funny~!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh, nicely done. Nice twist w/ Bella.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2010 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hello Kathie! I'm so excited to be the first reviewer! I've read your stories and I see you frequently beta - you do good work. OK, I am actually writing this review before I've even read chapter. Why? Because I love the concept of the story, I love all the little pictures you have before each chapter and I love TWCS - cool concept and it seems to have the "good" qualities of Twilighted.net (shhh, was I supposed say that?) Shhh, I'll go read your story quietly now . . .
Wait! this isn't a library! I'll just get a nice cuppa joe and start reading. Talk to you soon!
w
shh, I'll go read
Author's Response:
You made me laugh! Shhh...must be quiet in the library!
Kathie