Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 34
Great chapter....
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Thank you:)
Date: 29 Oct 2010 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 34
hey..great story it dosen't loose its intrest like other stories....and is it sad that I get a smile whenever I see that you have updated this story???
I hope that Bella and co are okay =)
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I don't think that is sad:) Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2010 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 33
Uh...HOW would Aro know they were all there unless there's a mole on that island? Hmm....
btw...LOVED Emmett in this chapter, BB!
Author's Response:
I knew you would love this Emmett:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
Wow Aro is going to the island, looking forward to seeing what happens.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2010 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh crap! All hell is about to break loose.
At least one good thing happened in this chapter, you know, Renee getting her nose broke. *giggles*
I am looking forward to the next chpater, I want to see how this plays out so bad :)
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Thanks:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh dame!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 33
Love the roundhouse to RENEE'S nose. shit it must be Aro and a small army what are they going to do???????
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She so had it coming!!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 33
wel i hope for her sake that they can get some peace in this mess cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 33
omg i love this story! i swear it makes me laught and want to cry at the same time! you are the best! thank you for writing it!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Oct 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 33
Great chapter....
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Thank you:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 32
Great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 32
That was good they killed her soul what a better way to put it.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 32
Wow, one minute I'm laughing with Bella...then at the end of the chapter I'm speechless!
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Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 32
Wow. Leave it to E to deliver the blow to knock them all on their asses. They killed her soul. Now maybe they will get a fucking clue. Selfish bastards *grumbles curse words upder breath*
They keep interrupting her and she is going to become ill and not have the strength to fight it due to malnutrition. They need to get a grip on what they did wrong and stop trying to push her! *polished brass knuckles*
Loved it, looking forward to more :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 32
well i hope that they realize that they are the ones at fault for it all ! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 31
Man!! I always love some sexin' time, and its time they had some without having to worry about anyone or anything. Loved it!
BTW, the little people say 'heeeeeyyyyy'. In perfect unison as well.
Creepy little dudes! XD
*huggles*
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 31
well that was hott! im happy she has someone that she can lean on that wont leave so far! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 31
I wonder what they are thinking about trying to get back with there kids like nothing happened. Bella and Edward had a very good morning,
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 31
Great chapter! I actually like the idea of Bella never forgiving her parents for what they did and allowed her to go through. I much rather prefer her and her brothers to just consider Edward's parents their newly adopted family. I like everything you've done in this story so far, and I doubt that's gonna change. So whatever you have happen is gonna be great I'm sure. :)
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 31
So cute they explained to each other when they were hit by Cupid! And the hot lovin after, hee hee. ;) Surprised nobody heard them, but maybe all the rest of them were busy too. ;)
So what's the plan, BB? How long they gonna be on Temptation Island? And if Charlie and Sam want to catch Aro so bad, why don't Edward and Bella just agree to be a part of an undercover sting? Prob be too dangerous. Nevermind. LOL!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Oct 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
Great Chapter.....
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Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 30
:)
Great chapter, looking forward to finding out more.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 30
well i hope she knocks her parents out in the next chapter ! i could not imagin how it would feel if i spent a month in the crazy house and my parents were alive ! keep hte chapterrs comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 30
I cant wait to be unconfused because right now the only thing I would like to happen is that the run away parent be boiled in oil. is that to harsh lol
Author's Response:
No, that isn't harsh.
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hey, the confusion is the best part!! Suspenseful anticipation is what hooks readers in, and I love it!!
Love the update darlin'. I cant wait to see what happens next!!
:)
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Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 25 Oct 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
So the cat's out of the bag, LOL! :)
Author's Response:
lol, yep:)
Date: 25 Oct 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great Chapter.....
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 29
Wow, what a huge clusterfuck! Poor Bella!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 29
*closes eyes and takes a deep breath*
Ok... ok.
*opens eyes*
That was WOW and HOLY SHIT worthy. Very well done.
I did love the chapter very much... except for...
*takes another deep breath*
... except for Isabella putting her damn hand (or fist...whatever) on MY Peter. Did she not see his new tattoo on his forehead that reads 'Property of Siobhan Whitlock' in big bold letters? Maybe Isabella needs for me to spell it out for her loud and clear, 'cause I am one possessive bitch when it comes to MY Peter.
NO TOUCHY ISABELLA!!!!!!!
Ok, maybe she just needs to see that he is not a bad guy. Yeah! Thats it!!
She will see :) Just like I will see your next update! ;)
lol, See ya next time BB!! :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'll let her know. I don't think she will listen, though. She's kind of a bitch.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 29
I dont get how they could do that to there kids
Author's Response:
Me either but people do, everyday.
Date: 24 Oct 2010 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 29
well that went well i hope that they get aro! keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 24 Oct 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 28
What!! Crazyness, can't wait for more.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 28
??WHOA??!!
Author's Response:
I know!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG, are you sneaky or what? Bravo!!!!!
Author's Response:
I am very sneaky!
Date: 23 Oct 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 28
what???????? didnt see that one comming!!
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2010 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh My GAWD!!!!!
Now that right there is some adrenalin pumpin' stuff right there!!
Pure Genius!! *tackleglomphugglesquishies you*
I cannot wait to see where this goes :) Im so excited!!
Author's Response:
Hehe, thanks:)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 28
What the fuck yes I am confused but I cant wait to see what you have done. Bella has lived in hell for what???
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Oct 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 28
Great Chapter.....
Date: 22 Oct 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter
Aro sure is creepy.
Author's Response:
Yes, he is:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 27
oh fuck!!
i feel like something bad is going to happend!!
loved itt!!! :D
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
Aro is a creepy fucker. I wish they would tell everyone
Author's Response:
Yes, he is!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 27
Well that will make a drunk made sober in a split second! Whoa...
Seriously intense.
I read alot of fan fiction, on 4 different sights, and I know I am reading fiction. Your stories, however, make me feel like they are real, like right there. Its amazing to come across such amazing work, and I am glad I came across you.
I seriously want to call the Italian Mafia and have them put the Cullens and the Masens under protection! I am for real afraid of Aro. My brain is trying to tell me its fiction, but the panic in my chest wont listen.
It takes a genius writer to do that. So thank you for being such an amazing author. *hugs*
See you next update!!
Author's Response:
Aw *wipes tears away* thank you:)
Date: 22 Oct 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
I loved how carlisle seemed a little nervous, Elizabeth was sweet about the whole thing.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
wow she opens her mouth and inserts her foot poor girl
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Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
Holy Swiss cheese! I cried through most of the chapter!
My goodness, sent into a panic attack from her own nerves. Poor Bells.
*wipes tears from chin*
I hope this doesnt effect the Masens' relationship with Bells. I bet her and Elizabeth could be extremely close.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:) FOr some reason I can't replay to your other review for Living Through the Pain so I will say that I hope you think about writing something, even if it is a one-shot
Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 26
aww poor bella
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great Chapter.....
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Thank you:)
Date: 21 Oct 2010 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
Someone needs to bitch slap Mrs Newton. how much more responsible can Esme be she is the principal of the school.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter, Edwards parents are great. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
WHEW!! Ma and Pop Masen aren't so bad, thank goodness!
Karen Newton needs a imperfect nose job now though, and Mike needs to have a run in with My Boys' Jasper's late night alien abducters!!
*falls to the floor laughing hysterically*
Author's Response:
LMAO, Oh, that was priceless!!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great Chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Oct 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
well at least they arent taking hmi from bella! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
*falls out of chair laughing*
Oh...*gasp*my... *snort*Gawd!!! Got caught by daddy dearest!!!!
PRICELESS!!! *begins laughing uncontrollably again*
This chapter was great, this IS a new Bells, and I like her... alot!
Lauren and Jessica are gonna come up missing soon *shifty eyes*
And I won't know anything about it... *uses the force to convince you*
I am looking forward to the interaction between E, B and E's parents.
Author's Response:
Did you just try to jedi mind trick me????
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter
Getting caught fooling around, maybe not a good way to meet Edwards dad.
Author's Response:
Maybe not:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
How red can Bella get shit what a way to meet the parents. They have some good friend
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
well what a great way to meet the parents! cant wati till the next chatper
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 24
Ha ha, BUSTED!! LOL!
I'm hooked on another of your stories, BB! xoxo
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Oct 2010 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 24
Cliffy! That was evil ^^ I liked this chapter... and oh no, his parents are there!
Author's Response:
Good thing I update often, huh:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 23
i winder bout how his parents are going to be like
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter :)
The brawl was pretty aweosme, looking forward to the Masen's arrival.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
I loved the brawl so much in fact I wish it had lasted a bit longer before being broken up. :-) Up next the parentals. Can't wait to see What they think of the drama. I hope they love Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Heehee, you had my lynch mob at 'headline'. *smirks*
So, yeah, I guess this Lauren and her herd of bitch-ass cows need to go down alot quicker than the others. *flips open cell*
The phone didn't even finish a full ring. "Well, well, darlin'. Looks like You need my NomadsRUs skills sooner." I swoon as he chuckles.
Well Sweet Pete, I am in need of one pronto."
I hear a quick intake of breath. "Darlin', I love it when you call me that." A purr resonates over the line, causing my girly bits to tingle.
"I have you taken care of already hun. They are waiting for the word go right on the outskirts of Hoquiam. All they need is a call."
I squeal internally "Oh honey, you know what I need always."
He snorts "Did you ever doubt it? They will be taken out at the word of your BB, then I will see you soon. See you in your dreams sweet cheeks."
We gave our quick goodbyes and hang up. I swoon a little.
*gigglesnorts*
Just say the word BB, and the Plastic Pack will be no more :)
Author's Response:
This was so funny that I made my hubby come read it. Thanks for the giggles:) Tell Sweet Pete that I said, hey.
Date: 18 Oct 2010 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved the lunch time ass kicking I loved what happened after to. So Edward's and Esme;s mom and dad are coming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 22
well its a small town it was bound to come out now how did she find out cant wiat till the next chapter
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my Gawd...... If Bella doesnt kick her ass, Im gonna!
*cracks knuckles*
I enjoyed this chapter very much. E and B have similar humors lol.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
loved itt!!! :D
i would be AWSOME if Edward got overprotective of Bella and says a couple of things to the bitches!! I WOULD BE TOOOTAALLLYYY AWSOMEE!! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
I knew it was going to be interesting but wow. Please let her beat the fuck out of Lauren and Jess just for the hell of it LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter, yeah I think its about time Lauren got her as beat.
Author's Response:
Me too, hon:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 21
School should be interesting I cant wait to see what the rumors are and what they say about them being together.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Oct 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
cant wait to hear
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter :)
I'm glad the won their matches, school should be interesting.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Oct 2010 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 21
well cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming bella will love edward back eventually
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She already does:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2010 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh shoot! I didnt even think about that! Its easy to forget they are still dealing with high school when we are having so much fun reading about the tournament or their boxing in general.
I really enjoyed this chapter, I am gonna miss the boxing.
I may have graduated 15 years ago, but I STILL loathe high school! *snickers*
Author's Response:
Me too!!
Date: 16 Oct 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 21
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter, I hope they both win thier champioinship matches. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 15 Oct 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 20
great chapter....
Date: 15 Oct 2010 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
Yes they will win PLEASE. I love it he watches her beat the shit out of another girl and that is when he knew he was in love with her LOL.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 20
I really enjoyed this chapter!!! *feels pulse quicken with excitement*
They are champion boxers, I am pulling for them! Bells and Eddie FTW!!
*makes fake roaring crowd sound* heehee
I think they will win their championship matches, they are superb fighters :)
*giggles and tackleglomphugglesquishies you* XD
Author's Response:
You always make my laugh and smile when I read your reviews. THank you for that!
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
great chapter....
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
I enjoyed this chapter alot! Ren is showing a softer side (thank goodness) and what a shocker with Charlie, right?! That was a totally awesome HOLY SHITE moment :)
See you next chapter!! *hugglesquishies you*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Oct 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thank goodness it was not a hard fight with Jasper and Emmett to get them to except Bella and Edward relationship the one that suprised me it Renee .
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Oct 2010 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 18
LOL!!!!! I love it!! THe matches were awesome :) I was scared for a minute with that last guy.
I cant wait for the interrogation, this is gonna be hilarious! B and E are very smart, thus smart asses. Em and Jazz are gonna blow their stacks! lol
I enjoyed this chapter immensely!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter, Edward is doing good for his first tournament.
Can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 18
I know Edward kick some ass he is just that kind of guy LOL
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter, looking forward to see Edwards fights.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Oh man!!! That was awesome BB!!!!!! I am definitely gonna be on the edge of my seat waiting for more matches, you wrote those full of excitement!!! :)
What is up with 180Renee? *snickers at nickname* Is she Ice Queen, or lovey sister? Ugh... *rolls eyes at Renee* Why is Charlie so bored all the time?? He reminds me of Marcus *cackles*
See you next update!! *waves frantically then turns and trips on shoe laces*
THUNK!
*lifts up hand shakilly* Im Ok!!
Author's Response:
lmao, thanks:) hope you didn't hurt yourself.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is a kick ass kind of girl. I am glad that they all know about them now. I hope Esme just wants to tell her to be careful. Were did the freak go (Aro).???
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 17
well wonder what esme wants to talk about cant wati till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
awww poor girl
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't understand why Emmett and Jasper are being difficult about the idea of Bella and Edward.
Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Because Bella is their little sister and she has been through hell.
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2010 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 16
HOLY CRAP!!!!! Thats a heck of a cliffie there!
*hugglesquishies you* Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh no Aro is there, hopefully Bella will be alright.
Author's Response:
THank you:)
Date: 11 Oct 2010 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Every thing was going so good and then the creep has to show up. What does Aro want from Bella???
Author's Response:
Thank you:) He wants what she can give him.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter.....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)