Date: 29 May 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
renee and charlie well that's good not aro!!
Date: 29 May 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 11
let me guess it's aro!
Date: 29 May 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
poor bells aro the big creep!
Date: 29 May 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
oh bells you didn't kill them come on girl....
Date: 29 May 2011 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
bells you need help girlie please get some!
Date: 29 May 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
ed you are a good friend... poor bells!
Date: 29 May 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh boy the revenge of the bros and sister...
Date: 29 May 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh boy why do people want to mess with others that can hurt them bad... dumb girl!!
Date: 29 May 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
boxing with bella.... wow!!
Date: 29 May 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow she is one tough assed chick!
Date: 29 May 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
bella is tough!! motorcycle! wow
Date: 29 May 2011 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
interesting she is already a cullen he is a masen... em and jas are her bros? can't wait to read more
Date: 16 Apr 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 53
wow amazing story;0
Date: 14 Mar 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 53
OMG!!!!! you didnt even say who won!!!! i absolutely loved the story and i have read a ton of your stuff and you are awesome but like aggghhhh!!!! i will definitely be reading the sequel now!!!! you are really awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) The sequel should be ready soon:)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 53
seriously a bad place to leave it! i thought the sequel wouldbe about getting ready for ucla and dealing with a growing relationship, i didn't think we would have to wait on the judge's decision on eddie's final fight. so not cool sweetie!guess i gotta go read the sequel now....
thank you for sharing your story.
suzie :)
Author's Response:
Thank you again for all the reviews. The sequel should be up soon:)
Date: 13 Mar 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 52
only 1 fight each left to go.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 51
well that was awkward and so not the place for that kind of talk. but really is there a good place to sit both families down and ddiscuss having sex? heehee! bell and eddie are both 1 win down and 2 more to go.....
Date: 13 Mar 2011 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 50
i am glad that eddie stood up to carlisle. i hope that the talk with her parents goes well.....
Date: 13 Mar 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 49
heehee he doesn't really have any etries in his 'book' yet. that was sweet and just them.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 48
bella is doing good, really good but that last one was a tough cookie!
Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 47
i loved how the four of them clamed up as soon as everybody else wanted details on the way of the prank. heehee
Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 46
what?!?!?!?!?
Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 45
total mind fuck! well both esme and carlisle said to wait till marriage.....
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 44
heehee never mess with the brothers and sisters, they always know just how to get you back.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 43
it is nice to see bella growing more and opening up.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 42
i wonder if bella and eddie are gonna get down and dirty in the bedroom as well as in the ring out in vegas? and will her parents show up to watch her compete?
Date: 13 Mar 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 41
yay the judge made the right choice. hopefully now they will leave her alone.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 40
the judge has to choose bella's side. not sure about there but here in alberta canada, once a child hits 12 the judge takes their preference into consideration.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 39
things are gonna come to a head soon. i am waiting for ed or liz to go beat the crap outta bella's mom or dad.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 38
well she should be turning 18 soon right? at the beginning of the story you said she was only a few months shy of 18, and eddie has been there for at 3 months by now.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 37
a good chapter with a lot of steps towards growth for all of the characters. momma liz and poppa ed are staying! yay!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 36
it is hard to understand if you have never experienced true loss or true pain.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 35
herparents really are clueless! i am glad bella got that out of her system, both the words and the punches.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 34
well this is all going to hell in a hand basket! but at least they all made a stand together.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
ok so if this island is all super secret and shit how the fuck is aro on his way?!?!?!? and when will renee and the rest of that group realize what they did and how ,much they hurt bella and the boys?
Date: 12 Mar 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 32
the mommy in me wants to beat her mom and dad and sister. how could they think this was ok?
Date: 12 Mar 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 31
well they got in some sexy time and a little stress relief. they definately needed it. i liked thecomment about ' when em turns gay' too funny.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
well at least they all have eachother.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 29
well i was kinda right. now they just have to find away to get aro so they can all have their lives back. ipersonally do not think i would be able to forgive renee, charlie, nolan and corrine.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
holy shit is charlie, jake, nessie, and the gang from school like in the fbi or something? has all of this been like an undercover sting to take aro down? bella and the boys are gonna be so pissed that their parents are ok after everythingthey have been through since they 'died'
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
poor kids they should be telling the families but they are so scared of being separated. i wonder who in the family will find out first? and what will happen before then?
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 26
well bella's freak out was not too bad, and i feel so bad for her that she is just gonna miss her mom and dad more having ed and liz there.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
that all went really well. i can't wait for ma and pa to meet bella's family.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
oh what a way to meet the parents!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
yay bella got to throw down with lauren! and even though there were suspentionshanded out all is good on that front. the i love yous have been said. but mom and dad are coming i wonder what they will think of everything?
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
please tell me that eddie has learnt his lesson and will not hold bella back this time. please.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
i was thinking about them showing up atschool after the match, i'm thinking that no one knows either of them box, so this should be interesting.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
they are both doing so good! and now love is in the air. this celebration is gonna be awesome.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
well at least thebrothers see how importany eddie isto bella and are going to try to be ok withthis for now.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
oh dinner should be fun! eddie won all of his matches, that is awesome for his first time.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
well the big 'secret' is out and poor em and jas do not seem very happy about eddie and bella smootching and holding hands.brothers! another reason i am happy to be an only child. bella's fights went well, i wonder what aro is doing there?
Date: 12 Mar 2011 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
poor girl can't even go kick some ass without someone raining on her parade.
i liked the back and forth with eddie and carlisle - do you like my sister? yup, do you like my sister? yup.... too cute.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
and they thought they were being so sneeky and ninja about their smootching! heehee i wonder if everyone knows?
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
and eddie makes the big decision again. now they are boyfriend-girlfriend. too funny how they both have family reasons for keeping it quiet.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
i think bella liked ddie standing up for her. and he finally got that kiss.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
kinda surprised that in her tight knit family there is a sister that doesn't belong. they danced and almost kissed!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 11
gotta be the shrink. or maybe one of the cops?
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
well not as bad as it could be, i mean she didn't pull a gunon mom and dad, but still horrible. to have to hear all of that happening? *shivers* way fucked up!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
ok i'm gonna guess she didn't like actually kill them probably just feels it wa her fault.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 8
i love how everyone is shocked that they are friends. is it really so hard to believe? oh wait yeah i guess it is.... heehee
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
bonding over a breakdown. looks like bella just found a sleeping buddy and her brothers won't be able to argue if she sleeps through the nigh....
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 6
a little understanding between these two? but now to deal with the standin parentals.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh i think a cheerleader needs a smack!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
are you sure you know what you're getting into eddie?
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 3
ahhhh some common ground, very nice. and eddie told the skank pack to take a hike. all in all a good day so far.
Date: 12 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
i like this bella. i seem to like them more when they have abackbone and a smart mouth, i guess i just relate better. heehee.
Author's Response:
Thank you, Sweets:) I love a bitchy Bella, too!
Date: 12 Mar 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
poor eddie first day isn't even over and he is already being stalked by jessica.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 53
Really really good, BB! I like the way you ended it. Perfect set-up for the sequel! Great story, hun.
Bravo!!
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
I don't believe that.
Date: 22 Feb 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
aaaahahaha! teenagers' worst nightmares...uncool clothes and riding with adults!
Date: 16 Feb 2011 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 53
Winning the fight doesn't matter as much as all of the other things they have gained.
Date: 14 Feb 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 53
cant wait till the next story
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 53
Wonderful chapter, I love these two and I'm so glad that you are doing a sequel.
Thanks for the great story. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 53
I wasn't expecting it to end their, but it was a good place to end it. With Bella and Edward accepting their relationship and family for who and what they are, and their family accepting them as adults and a couple. I can't wait to see what the future holds for these two, and of Edward won his fight.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 53
good chapter
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 52
good chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 53
Wow! Ok, so this is it for this story? So now I just need to keep an eye out for the sequel? I can do that :)
Definitely!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Yep, that's it:) Thank, Sweetie:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 52
*waves frantically*
OMG Hi!!!!!
Its been a bit, eh? :)
I brag about your stories *cue blush*
I have you ranked at the top, along with lolashoes and idreamofeddy.
SO I twittered your update squealing like a little girl :)
Love this chapter, got me scared shitless with these finals!
I cant wait to see how it goes :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Seriously??? That is fucking awesome!! Thank you so much!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 52
Woot woot! Go Edward! Go Bella!
;)
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 52
Good luck Bella and Edward, sounds like they might need it. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 13 Feb 2011 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 51
Sorry I haven't been able to read this chapter before now. But it's a great one, nice to see Bella starting to come to terms, or at least start to understand her parents a bit better. More important the nature of Bella and Edwards relationship is out in the open, and everyone is still breathing, I was a bit worried blood would be spilt for a while there. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 51
I've really enjoyed yet another wonderful story by you, BB! Even though all I really know about boxing is from the Rocky movies, I couldn't help but like this story.
I'm sad there's only one chapter left!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 20
YAY NOW EDWARD KNOWS THE POWER OF LOVE!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2011 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
YAY THE POWER OF LOVE!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2011 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 15
LMAO!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 13
HOLY SHIT!!!!! THE MOMENT I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR!!!!!! THEY. KISSED.
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 27 Jan 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 51
Wonderful chapter, I love this story :)
I'm looking forward to the last chapter and the sequel.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Jan 2011 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 51
Ok I agre it is their own business if and when they have sex. But what is Bella's problem. If she wants it private, don't yell out your business in the middle of the tournament. How dumb can she be. She just showed her imaturity.
Author's Response:
Of course, she did. She's full of all these crasy feelings and eventually, they are going to overflow and she is going to lose it. But she did not announce that she and Edward had sex, she just wanted him to let her made her own choices. Thank you:)
Date: 26 Jan 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 51
good Chapter......
Author's Response: Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 51
OMG are you serious?!?! One more chapter?? *cries hysterically*
OMG I need a hug!
Love it BB!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Calm down, Honeybunny, there will be a sequel:)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 51
wow this chapter was great! it a little bit of everything! so yea i loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Jan 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 51
well i hope that they stick together ! cant wait to see how everything works out!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 26 Jan 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 51
*happy shout* MORE PLEASE?! :-)
Author's Response:
lol,thanks:)
Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 50
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Jan 2011 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 29
i thought this story was good before - it just got even better :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: 19 Jan 2011 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 28
HOLY SHIT!!!! THT IS NOT HOW I SAW THAT CHAPTER GOING!!
Author's Response:
Hehe, always keep them guessing:)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
glad to hear what happened to her - poor thing they found them a couple of days later :(
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 8
it makes me tear up when you can feel how desperate bella is to not go back i am assuming to a mental hospital :)
Author's Response:
It was hard to write, pouring so much of myself in there.
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
i love this story so much - it is freaking awesome :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 18 Jan 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh no you guys are in big trouble
Author's Response:
:)