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Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 32

Again with the tears...this tiem for Jessica and Lauren...

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Date: 29 Jan 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

Garett is flipping awesome. That is all.

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Date: 29 Jan 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 21

Yay for Mr. Newton!  People that insensitive to a child's needs should be nowhere near them...

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 20

I know they're huge steps backwards, but I would still like to beat the crap out of Mr. Varner.  What the heck is his problem?

This story has grabbed me, and I must read  now...even though I have work to do haah :)

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

I am going to jump into your story and beat the tar out of those little twitchy bitches...

I absolutely choked up when Carlisle was stitching her up...

The sad thing is, this kind of stuff happens, more often than we'd like to think...

Reviewer: AngelBones76 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am speechless.  I know this is a fic, but it actually reminded me that there are so many others that have it way worse than I even think about.  So, thank you for that, and I am looking forward to reading more!

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 12:55 PM Title: Epilogue

loved it!

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 49

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 48

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 47

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 46

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 45

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 44

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 43

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 42

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 41

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 40

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 39

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 38

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 37

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 36

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 35

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 34

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 33

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 32

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 31

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 30

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 25 Oct 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 24 Oct 2012 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: duffey2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 12:27 AM Title: Epilogue

That was one of the best stories i have ever read. I mean it i was in tears so many time reading it, you are very good at describing the emotions going on in the story. I just wanted to let you know my opinoin. Thank you for writing it, i hope you keep up the good work! ;)

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:23 AM Title: Epilogue

Wow really great story loved it know how things are been through it and u hit it right on the spot keep up the great writing

Reviewer: story addict Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 May 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 8

This is so intense.

I was wondering, how did Bella pass this test for going back to school, as she missed so much? I would guess she didn't get the opportunity to read or learn anything those 6 years...

Reviewer: Isabella Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2012 9:24 PM Title: Epilogue

It was fan - fucking - tastic. Really. 

Pls consider writing a sequel 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:23 AM Title: Epilogue

I am so glad that all of their attackers got life in prison. Love how strong Bella is. I want you to know that I have really enjoyed reading your story. You have done a great great job with it. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!!! I would have responded to more reviews, but I got them all at once, lol. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 49

LOVED LOVED LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 48

I love Bella spending time with Charlie. That was sooooo sweet. I loved it!!!! GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to see what Edward has planned.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 47

I am so proud of Bella. She stood up and talked to all those people and did a great job. She also stood up to Angela and told her what she thought and did it nicely.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 46

I hope everything works out ok for Bella at the assembly. I am glad that Bella talked to the Mallory's and the Stanley's.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 45

Glad to see Bella standing up to the students. I still don't understannd how she can be so nice to those girls. But what she says does make sense.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 44

Well, I am ready for some really good pancakes. I just laughed at all the pancake talking. lol. I am glad that they got to tell those men how they felt. I hope they all can start healing now. I can not believe that Will and Cat really moved Jasper and Rose's stuff out of their house.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 43

I am so glad that everyone is going iwth Bella and Garrett. I love that Edward and Bella were able to be together in every since of the word.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 42

What I am a little surprised at was that Cat called her own kids a STUPID BITCH AND THAT FUCKING BASTARD. How could she do that?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 41

Poor Bella. To know that other people have seen what she has gone through. That has got to be horrible. That was another emotional chpater to read. What are the parents going to say and do?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 40

Another emotional chapter. They all have issues to work on and work through.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 39

Tia has pissed Bella off, that is not a good thing. I was thinking about what Bella would do with her life and I had thought about her working with Garrett and helping others like her. I think that would be hard but I also think that it would help to.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 38

WOW, so much emotion in this chapter. They all have been through so much.

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Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 37

I am so glad that Bella got to yell at Alec. He is one sick puppy. I hope he rots in jail (hell). I am soooo hoping that Garrett and Bella can come back from all of this. Boy they have really been through alot. Alot more than anyone needs to.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

OMGosh!!!!!! I can not believe everything that has happened in this chapter. First Garrett gettin taken by his parents and them being raped again and again. Then Bella coming and getting him, to help him. Then she realizes that Garrett's father was one of the guys that raped her. REALLY!!! That is awful.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 35

Why did Carlisle say that Bella could not go to Chicago and Rose could not go to Brazil? I can understand why Charlie said Bella couldn't go because he did want her away from all of the familyl. How old is Garrett?

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 34

What were those boys thinking? Did they think they would really get away with what  they were doing to Bella? I am so glad that Bella kicked the asses. lol. Veru proud of her and all she has been through.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 33

LOVED this whole chapter. I am really hoping that Bella can get by what Lauren and Jessica. I would have a really hard time doing that. I don't think I could ever forgive them for not telling who had me.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 32

I can not believe that those girls did that. I also can not believe that Bella forgave them like that.

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Date: 21 Jan 2012 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 31

I am loving Bella putting Garrett in his place on and off mat. lol.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh no, I hope this is not another set back. I was so hoping that her first day back this time would go off with any thing happiening.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 29

Glad that she finally told them everything. She needed to get that off her chest. I can not believe that she is going back to school so soon. Gladl that Garrett and Kate will be there. I can not believe that that teacher is still there. Lauren and Jessica being back does not surprise me.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 28

LOVED all of this chapter. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!!

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Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 27

Glad she is finally getting closure. Glad to see Edward there with her. at the end it says that they talkedk about the resort and everything that she did there, did she tell Edward what he would do on the anniversary of taking her???

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 26

I am glad that she is starting to heal. At least know she is on the road to recovery. I can not believe that Phil used her friends like that against her. He was so captured by her that he followed her home and watched her for weeks, why would he hurt her like he did. He was truly a sick sick man.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 25

Poor Garrett. This has got to be really hard on him. To come from abuse also. I can not believe that he did not know when she was taken. He was upset that Charlie and them did not tell him but did he think to ask!!!!!!! OMGosh, you shocked me with it being Phil. But I should have guessed it because she could not watch baseball. I guess I was just assuming that it was James. James is always the villan in most stories.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 24

OMGosh!!!!! The anniversary of when she was taken. This is a very emtional story.

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Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

WOW!!! They all have been through sooooo much. That was alot of stuff for people to go through. I am glad that Garrett and Kate are there to help all of these girls.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 22

It is about time Bella gets mad. I hate that she has to be away from her family but she has got to get help. I know that was sooooo hard on all her family and firends. Garrett is one tuff cookie. Yelling at Bella like he did. Boy, I am surprised that she did not back down from him and have a panic attack at how treating he was towards her.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 21

OMGosh!!!!!!! Bella is going to blow her lid. She is going to be sooooo mad. I am so glad that they fired that teacher. He was just crazy. I hope Garrett can truly help Bella. I was not expecting Brazil

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 20

I can not believe a teacher would do that. What was his problem????? I hope Bella is ok. I am soooo off to read the next chapter. I am so glad that I do not have to wait for an update. :)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 19

WOW!!!!!! I can't believe that she spoke out like that. That was very brave. I can not believe that all those "adults" were acting like that. Crazy!!!!1

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 18

I noticed that Jasper and Rose's parents did not say any thing in this chapter. What are they going to say to their kids. Jasper and Rose are not going to leave Bella. I don't know how they think they are going to get Jasper and Rose away from Bella. That is going to be interesting.

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

What is wrong with Will and Cat????? How can they be like that? What are they thinking????? What is Carlisle talking about? Who is he going to bring back???????

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

WHAT IN THE WORLD????? WHY would Lauren and Jessica do that??? What is wrong with those girls???? They have lost their mind??

That had to be so hard on Carlisle and Renee to see Bella's back. I loved that story that the principle told Bella. I hope things can start getting better.

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

I can not believe that Mike would just up and touch Bella. All these kids have to have a clue as to what has happened to Bella. I feel so sorry for her. I like how Jasper and Rose refer to her as their sister.

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

I knew that going back to school would be hard for Bella. At least the staff is working with her. I am glad that she has someone she can trust in all her classes.

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 13

I am glad she had a peaceful night sleep. She is slowly opening up to her parents. I am really worried about her going to school. Teenagers can be sooooo cruel. I hope she has one of gang in all her classess.

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

I was wondering if Edward was going to start staying with Bella at night. At the end it says that they fell into a peaceful sleep. I am assuming that Bella did not have any more night mares. I hope Edward can keep them away.

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Date: 20 Jan 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

Whose eyes did she see??? I hope it is Edward's. I hope he can start helping her get rid of the nightmares. I am soooo glad that she told Edward. That had to be really hard for him to hear and not get angry.

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