Date: 25 Jun 2018 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 34
What about all the other men who raped Bella, and the so called doctor who performed the operation, has the police tried to find them?
Date: 25 Jun 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
So the judge wasn't all that irresponsible, good that someone keeps a level head.
Date: 25 Jun 2018 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
As I said earlier, she's in no shape or form to attend school, not to mention the fact she is 6 years behind everyone else. What school would accept a severely traumatized 17 year old with the educational level of a 12 year old?
Date: 25 Jun 2018 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
If she was taken at the age of 12 there's no chance she could score high enough to take senior year, who would have taught her - the kidnapper? Don't think so. Further the judge was irresponsible releasing her without a court order to have psychiatric assessment and care before returning to school.
Date: 16 Jul 2017 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella!
Date: 16 Jul 2017 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 16 Jul 2017 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor girl!
Date: 08 Feb 2016 4:52 AM Title: Epilogue
Really a great story! Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 04 Feb 2016 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 48
That was a delightful escape from the angst and a great reconnecting for Bella and Charlie.
Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 47
Bella is definitely wise beyond her years.
Date: 23 Jan 2016 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 46
That was a great chapter.
Date: 19 Jan 2016 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 45
It was good of Bella to stand up for Lauren and Jessica.
Date: 14 Jan 2016 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 43
Another great chapter.
Date: 09 Jan 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 42
So, they finally showed their true colors. What hateful people!
Date: 05 Jan 2016 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 41
I'm glad she gets to confront those horrible men!
Date: 02 Jan 2016 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 40
Wow, the parents really did a number on these poor kids.
Date: 25 Dec 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 39
That was a couple of eventful chapters.
Date: 18 Dec 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 36
Soooooo, the plot thickens.
Date: 15 Dec 2015 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 35
Wow, didn't want to stop there. Glad I don't have to wait for an update.
Date: 11 Dec 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
Love that she was able to stand up to Mike and his cronies.
Date: 30 Nov 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow, wasn't expecting that they were involved with her abduction and for them to not tell anyone is all kinds of sick.
Date: 24 Nov 2015 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
I thought Garrett had already told Bella that Peter was watching her for him.
Date: 24 Nov 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm really glad I don't have to wait for updates.
Date: 20 Nov 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 28
That had to help both of them.
Date: 20 Nov 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 27
So glad they called Edward to come be with her when she goes into the room!
Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
How horrible that she can't even play piano anymore.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
How very observant Garrett is.
Date: 11 Nov 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 24
Such a great job giving us the details of Bella's horrible trial.
Date: 11 Nov 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow, they have all been terribly abused.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
She didn't handle that very well, but if anyone has the right to be angry, it would be Bella.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
I don't think Bella is going to understand.
Date: 04 Nov 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
What a horrible thing for that teacher to do to her.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 19
Its stupid, wrong and irresponsible to let a really hurt girl go to school It doesn't make sense I'm going to stop reading
Author's Response:
Probably a good idea to stop reading. I do appreciate you taking the time to at least attempt my story.
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 19
What happened to Jasper and Rose's parents not wanting their children around Bella?
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
These kids are remarkable. It's great that they are so supportive of Bella.
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
I'm guessing that Rose and Jasper aren't going to react well to their parents determination to keep them away from Bella.
Date: 24 Oct 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
How horrible for Bella to have to endure that after everything else she has been through. I'm so sad u had to remove ur stories from FanFiction, but am so very grateful that they are still available on TWCS.
Date: 20 Oct 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm glad Bella had the idea. Can't wait to see how Emmett does in the kitchen. LOL
Date: 20 Oct 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was a touch chapter to read. Poor kid.
Date: 16 Oct 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
It was great to hear from Edward.
Date: 16 Oct 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
I was reading this on Fanfiction.net, but it disappeared between chapters. Anyway, I'm glad it is over here so I can finish this wonderful story. What a horrible thing to happen to Bella, especially the hysterectomy. I hope they're able to find some of the other men involved in violating her.
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 35
Excellent!
Date: 19 Aug 2015 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
She's amazing
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Bella
Date: 19 Aug 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Uh-oh! Poor Bella!
Date: 19 Aug 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
They are amazing
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Fantabulous
Date: 19 Aug 2015 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
She is such a strong person
Date: 19 Aug 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
Emmett is an amazing brother!
Date: 19 Aug 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 19 Aug 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2015 10:07 PM Title: Epilogue
very emotional story ;) thanks so much for sharing it on here with us ;D
Date: 23 May 2014 3:00 PM Title: Epilogue
WOW!!!!!!!! That waa a very powerful story!!!! Thank you for writing and sharing with us.... I cried, I launghed and It really made me think about thing that happen in the real world. I am so glad that Bella has the people in her life that she did.... I really have no words... This was a hard story to get through because it was so sad and I cried so much but this is one of new favorite stories! Thank you
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:17 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for an emotional, inspiring and touching story!! I don't know how you wrote this with such detail, but u did a fantastic job!!! Thx!
:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 36
Wow! Wasn't expecting that!!! :o I'm glad Bella will finally have a chance to see someone pay for all the suffering she endured!!! :)
Thx!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wow! I don't know how you are writing all this! You are so descriptive. I truly hope it isn't bc you have lived this. No one should have to endure this and I'm glad that worthless piece of shit scum died!!! Of course him getting beaten and raped and then stabbed to death in prison would have been somewhat of a pay back. :)
You really know how to evoke so many emotions!!!
Thx!
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2013 9:02 AM Title: Epilogue
Just completed reading this story, and I have to say I'm a hard person to make shed a tear, but this story had my heart wrenched. Even though it's a tragic story, it's written perfectly.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 11:50 PM Title: Epilogue
Wow! That was a really gut wrenching story. I'm glad they allude it through in the end.
Date: 11 Feb 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 44
OMG. I almost peed myself reading about the 'pancakes'.
Date: 08 Feb 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 32
They are so much nicer then me. If someone did to my daughter what they did I would of pushed to have them charged with assault. They were to little to be charged with withholding evidence and hindering a police investigation, but they knew better when they physically hurt Bella. I wouldn't want them to go to jail. But community service and a nice black mark on their record is exactly what they deserve.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
So much anger! I'm glad she is finally going to be able to get it out.
Date: 07 Feb 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
I understand the need to want to protect your children but there is no excuse for what will and cat are going to do. I see world war 3 in the near future. I would take them to court and have their parental rights terminated. .
Date: 06 Feb 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
I can't wait for Rosalie and Alice to find out what Jessica and lauren did. They will defently mess them up.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Carlisle is right it is amazing that she let anyone near her at all.
Date: 06 Feb 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have read so many of your stories but completely missed this one. What a powerful first chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
My heart just dropped into my stomach...
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 32
Again with the tears...this tiem for Jessica and Lauren...