Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:24 PM Title: Driving Lessons
I have a love/hate relationship with this story. I love the angst and tension, but at the same time I hate it! I love the sexual tension and want it to last, but I also want them to stop being so stubborn and just admit their feelings and give in! GAH! This story is such sweet sweet torture. Update soon please!
Date: 19 Nov 2010 4:50 AM Title: Driving Lessons
My favorite part was the first time he called her baby :)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 4:46 AM Title: Driving Lessons
love the names by the way. perfect for snails. lol I'm soo happy something is going to happen between them. hopefully something lemony fresh. :) keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:49 AM Title: Driving Lessons
Assward certainly makes for interesting reading.. Glad to know this is the last chapter without anything happening between the two of them.. ready for them to get down to business.(hey,,, it's why i read FF) thanks for posting... they are so hell bent on thinking the other hates them, they can't see in front of them Pam b.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:03 AM Title: Driving Lessons
Okay i don't know what the quote was but send me a teaser anyways! PLEASE!!!!!! I think my favorite part was the bit about the snails. Love the names Edward came up with. Can't wait till next week.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:59 AM Title: Driving Lessons
They dont hate each other anymore and dont no how to handle that.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 1:39 AM Title: Driving Lessons
Yeyyyy so things are going to start happening now between them?
Date: 17 Nov 2010 9:38 PM Title: Driving Lessons
I love the names for the snails very funny....love the story post again soon :)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 9:37 PM Title: Driving Lessons
My favorite was him snaggin the pic b/c he liked it!!!!! AWWW!!!! Can't wait for the next update!
Date: 17 Nov 2010 9:33 PM Title: Driving Lessons
Loved Hildegard and Percy. And Bella telling Esme to have her son activate the snails. Really, what's he supposed to do, show them snail porn?
Who would have thought Edward would come around and face his feelings so quickly? Definitely not me. It's good though. Progress is good.
See you next week!
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 17 Nov 2010 8:54 PM Title: Driving Lessons
Low blow for him to tell her that it doesn't matter what a girls name is and then including her name. I'm guessing he might get a clue about being nicer when they are in Hawaii.
Date: 17 Nov 2010 8:10 PM Title: Driving Lessons
Great chapter...I'm kind of curious to know whether or not Esme understood Bella's meaning by her comment about Edward.
Two weeks in Hawaii will probably get very interesting. I can't wait.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 2:35 AM Title: Black Angel
Mine too, the only thing that would have made it better was if they hadn't had an audience and she got to feel his morning wood! ;)
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 6:15 AM Title: Black Angel
mine was when he comforted her.......that was sooooooo sweet.
cant wait for next update
Date: 11 Nov 2010 2:05 AM Title: Black Angel
I think that was my fav allso. There friends all know that are into each other when are they going to get it.
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:56 AM Title: Black Angel
The quote is from Titanic right? :) as for this chapter it was too adorable. When Edward let a couple tears fall so did I. he has guilt just like Bella does and needs to let it out. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 11 Nov 2010 1:47 AM Title: Black Angel
OHHHHHH! Edward was so sweet in the night! I love how they are still in denile and things are moving along!
Date: 11 Nov 2010 12:08 AM Title: Black Angel
i wish they would have kissed
Date: 10 Nov 2010 10:00 PM Title: Black Angel
I loved the entire chapter...Great job. I'm curious what Edward will think when he wakes up and Bella isn't there.
I hope you have the chance to update again soon.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 9:14 PM Title: Black Angel
The quote was from Titanic: "You think a first class girl (straight A student) can't drink?" Good chapter!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 8:41 PM Title: Black Angel
I liked how he fell asleep holding her. If you truly disliked someone you wouldn't do that!
Date: 10 Nov 2010 7:55 PM Title: Black Angel
Aaawwwww. Cute. Bella's getting a bit self destructive though. She should be careful. Can't drink to passing out with just anyone. Has to be friends you trust, and right now, she doesn't have any of those.
I hope Alice doesn't put the pics on Facebook. It's rude to take pictures of sleeping people and post them for all the world to see. Just saying.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 10 Nov 2010 7:46 PM Title: Black Angel
another great chapter. i loved how Bella was woken up by everyone laughing and taking pics of her and edward. I think the quote came from titanic but was changed from "first class girl" can't drink (in the movie) to "straight a student" can't drink Can't wait til next week.
Date: 10 Nov 2010 7:43 PM Title: Black Angel
funny story thanks :)
Date: 04 Nov 2010 6:54 PM Title: Catching snails
aww.........look at them getting nice with each other btw luved it
Date: 04 Nov 2010 4:08 PM Title: Catching snails
The end almost sounds like a variation on Dr. Seus; it made me think of green eggs and ham....sorry I got off track with my review there.
I love the bantering that they have and can only imagine that their supposedly dislike for each other is only because they refuse to be honest about their real feelings. I'm curious to know what Edward's reaction was when Bella got out of her jeans. And I can't wait to find out if Bella goes to Alice's planned Halloween Party at Edward's house.
I will anxiously await for the next update. Love it!!!
Date: 04 Nov 2010 2:53 AM Title: Catching snails
Geez, but the two of them certainly love to aggravate the crap out of one another.. and yes, noticed the sexual tension has begun to rear its ugly head. Looking forward to next update.. wonder who is gonna get action first, the snails or Bella and Edward..lol.. thanks for the post..Pam b.
Date: 04 Nov 2010 12:32 AM Title: Catching snails
lol the OOOGLING!!! I loved it. and the clothes sharing and EVERYTHING. lol I can't wait for more. next week is a long time but oh well. its worth it. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 04 Nov 2010 12:21 AM Title: Catching snails
I dont think they will last much long with out attacking each other
Date: 04 Nov 2010 12:08 AM Title: Catching snails
Fav. part?? Don't know,because the whole chapter was one o your best! The tension between them was great . Can't wait for more.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 9:33 PM Title: Catching snails
Favorite part: can't decide on one. Loved the arguing in the boat, Edward being a dick about getting in the car wet, Bella in Edward's clothes, and Edward pointing it out that she must have a thing for his clothes and when he was gonna get his hoodie back, to Bella thinking about how the scent helps calm her, GOD I LOVE IT ALL. Can't wait for more. Oh, BTW, quote is from Pretty Woman "slippery little suckers" when she was talking about the snails/escargo. hahahahaha Quick question-can you post more quickly, i really can't wait a whole week without an update.
Date: 03 Nov 2010 8:27 PM Title: Catching snails
I think the quote is from Pretty Woman... Slippery little suckers.
Date: 29 Oct 2010 4:07 AM Title: Life from a new perspective
My favourite part was when edward was like
"how the hell can she not blame me?"
and
when she coughed and he smirked....................feel so weird about jake dying
Date: 28 Oct 2010 11:14 PM Title: New Girl
Funny quote, I love 10 Things I Hate About You!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:58 AM Title: Life from a new perspective
Are they gonna let up on the hatefulness soon? Thanks for the chapter!
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:35 AM Title: Life from a new perspective
Edward is still and ass...and someone needs to whip Lauren's ass for what she did to Bella.
I am still loving the new Bella, and I can't wait for things to heat up between Bella and Edward.
Date: 28 Oct 2010 12:23 AM Title: New Girl
I love the new Bella. She's standing up for herself and is a lot more fiesty!!!
I still can't stand Edward. :)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:58 PM Title: Life as we knew it
I know the quote:
"The absence of him is everywhere I look. It was like a huge hole had been punched through my chest."
That's from New Moon.
I am sad about Jake...What a tragedy. Edward is still an ass.
Date: 27 Oct 2010 11:40 PM Title: Rocking Car
Luv your Assward...and he IS a HUGE ASS!!! :)
Date: 27 Oct 2010 9:43 PM Title: Life from a new perspective
oh those two. they need to be locked in a room and have at each other. lol I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
Date: 27 Oct 2010 8:16 PM Title: Life from a new perspective
Alice knows how he feels about Bella and I think he is getting the idea. Has he had sex in a whail has he????
Date: 27 Oct 2010 7:13 PM Title: Life from a new perspective
I know tell me about it ....lol bella and edward on the swings reminds me of my ex and myself the first time i tried to smoke only edward did not fall off the swing laughing at bella.
Date: 27 Oct 2010 6:52 PM Title: Life from a new perspective
I believe that Alice will get her way on the Halloween costume. If she does, I can only imagine the possiblities.
Great chapter...
Date: 23 Oct 2010 8:50 PM Title: New Girl
"I know you can be overwhelmed, and you can be underwhelmed, but can you just be whelmed?"
"I think you can in Europe"
I love that quote, from 10 things i hate about you
Great job, and thank you for writing.
Date: 22 Oct 2010 5:50 AM Title: Rocking Car
Awesome chapter keep up the good work. The quote is from Ten Things I Hate About You. "I know you can be overwhelmed, and you can be underwhelmed, but can ever just be whelmed?
Date: 21 Oct 2010 8:03 AM Title: New Girl
"I know you can be overwhelmed, and you can be underwhelmed, but can ever just be whelmed?" 10 things I hate about you. One of my fav movies. Edward doesnt know what to do being turned on by Bella what is the boy to do???? lol I think Bella is doing the best she can right I am happy she came out of her room
Date: 21 Oct 2010 3:08 AM Title: New Girl
Great chapter! I'm really loving this story!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:14 PM Title: New Girl
10 things I hate about you! :D now as for this chapter, I feel bad for Edward. that poor guy is trying but in defense for Bella, not hard enough. I can't wait for more. keep up the great work. thanks again bye
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:12 PM Title: New Girl
wow..such as awesome story so far. Can't wait for the nextupdate
Date: 20 Oct 2010 10:35 PM Title: New Girl
Loved it!
Date: 20 Oct 2010 9:07 PM Title: New Girl
Ok I cried on the last few chapters. So sad to loose someone you are close to. Love the story and can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
I cried while writing them..
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:48 PM Title: New Girl
Good chapter. I'm actually surpprised she's come this far already.But I completely approve of throwing Edward for a loop. Tooo bad she wasn't more successful with avoiding him the next morning.
BTW, I don't usually play this game, but it totally jumped out at me. The quote is
"I know you can be overwhelmed, and you can be underwhelmed, but can ever just be whelmed?" she asked in her nasal voice.
"I think you can in Europe,"
and it's from 10 Things I Hate About You.
Love that movie.
Cheers, Balti K
Date: 20 Oct 2010 8:29 PM Title: New Girl
I can see little changes in Bella...I loved what she said to Lauren and I really do hope that she becomes friends w/ Alcie and Rosalie. She deserves to have friends.
Great Chapter...I look forward to next weeks update.
Author's Response:
We'll see if she can trust the girls enough. I know I would have problems with that ^^
Thank you!
xx
Gelix
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:22 PM Title: New Girl
The chapter's quote is from 10 Things I Hate About You. Originally asked by Chastity and answered by Bianca.
"I know you can be overwhelmed, and you can be underwhelmed, but can ever just be whelmed?" she asked in her nasal voice.
"I think you can in Europe," was Jessica's clever answer.
Date: 20 Oct 2010 7:08 PM Title: New Girl
"I know you can be overwhelmed, and you can be underwhelmed, but can ever just be whelmed?" "I think you can in Europe,"- from 10 Things I Hate About You
Good chapter.
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:14 AM Title: Could it be any harder?
Couldn't find the quote,hmmm. Great job, I love the story. Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2010 11:55 AM Title: Could it be any harder?
Loved it
It was nice
It was fabulous
I even cried
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:06 PM Title: Could it be any harder?
I was really hoping Edward would of tried harder! Thanks for the chapter!
Author's Response:
It's better than nothing at least ^^ and it's just the beginning.
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 14 Oct 2010 1:28 AM Title: Could it be any harder?
COuln't find it! I am liking this here little story. New Bella here we come.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 13 Oct 2010 9:34 PM Title: Could it be any harder?
"I guess I was more like the suffering in silence type" from Twilight. I had tears in my eyes the hole time breaking my heart.
Author's Response:
That could have been it. I didn't even realized it. But it isn't the quote I'm looking for this time...
I'm glad I was able to touch you with my words!
xx
Gelix
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:44 PM Title: Could it be any harder?
I didn't find the quote this time because I was too busy crying my eyes out. that was sad. I love Edwards trying to get Bella out of bed attempt though. too cute. keep up the great work and please PLEASE don't make her goth. lol thanks again bye
Author's Response:
Thank you! And no, Bella won't become a goth! ;)
xx
Gelix
Date: 13 Oct 2010 8:28 PM Title: Could it be any harder?
I feel so bad for Bella and Edward. How was did Edward feel when he saw Bella break down in the garage? Is that what provoked him to come to her room? Is he going to keep his promise to Jake.
I didn't recognize the quote...or if I did I was too absorbed in the story to notice...sorry.
Love the story, can't wait to find out with the shopping trip and discovering the new Bella.
Author's Response:
Thank you. New Bella might appear in the next chapter! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 13 Oct 2010 6:50 PM Title: Could it be any harder?
Please Bella, enough is enough, move on!! LOL. Edward making her say the magic word...not cool,he is an ass, but funny anyway!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Things like that take their time. And yes, Edward is an ass, but a very sexy one ;)
xx
Gelix
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:24 PM Title: Life as we knew it
The quote was " the absence of him was everywhere I looked. It was like a hole had been punched through my heart"
Great story.....
I feel so bad for Jake.....
Date: 06 Oct 2010 11:39 PM Title: Rocking Car
Love it - Please keep going...
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:34 PM Title: Life as we knew it
OMG so sad and now Edward and Bella will both blame themselfs. I could never leave you I am hooked on your stories. Edward needs to tell dumb and dumber just to stay the fuck away from him and Bella.l
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:20 PM Title: Life as we knew it
I can see that Bella blames herself and Edward blames himself. I hope they will be able to work through their pain together.
Date: 06 Oct 2010 8:05 PM Title: Life as we knew it
poor Jake. I'm sad to see him die, now Edward and Bella both blame themselves. I can't wait to see where this goes. and the quote was from New Moon. Finally, I got one right. lol thanks again bye
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:43 AM Title: The Party
i am liking it already.....
but hoping the edward will be an ass for not too long....
they realize their feeling soon....
but luving their tidbits..alot....
waiting for next update
Date: 30 Sep 2010 11:23 AM Title: The Party
i so love it cant wait for more
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:50 AM Title: The Party
aww Jake and Bella are sweet but Edward can be an ass all you want as long as him and bella start up with their hotness soon. like the next chapters soon. lol I'm kidding. so far every story I've read from you has been good and hard to put away so I have faith this one will be awesome as well. :D thanks again bye
Date: 30 Sep 2010 12:01 AM Title: The Party
Awesome. I love your stories btw. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 8:22 PM Title: The Party
It was nice of Jake to get her back home... I hope that everything will be ok...I NEED NEXT ONE :)
Date: 29 Sep 2010 7:37 PM Title: The Party
That was a very good chapter. It makes me really curious to know why Bella is so uncomfortable around people and her fear of spending the night at someone's place. Did something happen? Also any other reason as to why Jake and Edward are always teasing her about sex? Is Jake going to have enough time to avoid an accident on the motorcycle?
I hope you have the chance to update again really soon.
Date: 29 Sep 2010 7:01 PM Title: The Party
Edward is being such an ass I hope his dick does not fall off before he gets to use it on Bella LOL. How is she going to change are they going to reck ????????
Date: 29 Sep 2010 7:00 PM Title: The Party
Nooo, can't wait until next week! LOL. Great chapter, and I'm already imaging Edward's reaction to the accident, oh boy, next one will be good...
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2010 6:59 PM Title: The Party
OMG That was so good!!!!
Titanic!
I can’t wait for the next update. It’s gonna kill me.
You are wonderful as usual girl!!!
Date: 27 Sep 2010 10:42 AM Title: Rocking Car
interesting!
can't wait for more!
Date: 26 Sep 2010 10:23 PM Title: Rocking Car
Excellent :-)
Date: 23 Sep 2010 1:27 AM Title: Rocking Car
Your quote is from Twilight, and please keep writing this story
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2010 11:54 PM Title: Rocking Car
I loved it! Please continue, can't wait to see where this one goes. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 22 Sep 2010 7:17 PM Title: Rocking Car
I think you have another winner I love the way it is going so far and cant wait til Wed for an update
Author's Response:
Thank you, I hope you'll like it just as much as Married to the Enemy! :)
xx
Gelix
Date: 22 Sep 2010 6:53 PM Title: Rocking Car
I'M UNCONDITIONALLY IN LOVE keep writing this is great
Author's Response:
Thank you SO SO much! :D
xx
Gelix