Date: 25 Feb 2018 9:16 PM Title: Embellishment
I loved it! They are so good together. But I need to know about Alice and Jasper...
Date: 24 Oct 2012 6:38 AM Title: Embellishment
Love love love it! Please wwrite more of these two!
Date: 06 Jan 2011 10:55 PM Title: Embellishment
keep on going dont stop i like this story
Date: 02 Nov 2010 1:28 AM Title: Embellishment
Awww. Super cute. I really like this. It would make a great multi-chapter story. :D
hearts!
Date: 21 Sep 2010 8:39 AM Title: Embellishment
You can't just leave this a one shot, it was just too good !
Date: 19 Sep 2010 6:11 PM Title: Embellishment
Luv it! Update soon!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 5:59 PM Title: Embellishment
oh my this is good!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:40 PM Title: Embellishment
Beautiful story! Loved it!
Date: 19 Sep 2010 3:41 PM Title: Embellishment
this is cute, any chance of making this a full story?
Date: 19 Sep 2010 2:27 PM Title: Embellishment
Luv it!!!!! You might be able to keep up with it. I kinda think you could add a few chapters. That is so sweet.
Date: 19 Sep 2010 10:32 AM Title: Embellishment
Omg loved it!!! You have to make this in to a story and not just a one shot. Pleasssseeeeee
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Date: 19 Sep 2010 4:57 AM Title: Embellishment
Oh, I just loved it! No wonder why you won And Congratulations!
I knew it would be hot, because your stories are always fantastic. But I didn't expect all of the love.
Sometimes connections are instant. And curiosity can't be pushed away.
I love that Edward borrowed a ring to meet her. And that Bella ended up doing exactly what she set out not to do- pick up a hot officer! And she got to keep him.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It was such a fun story to write! I must have been in a very wistful mood whe I did write it... lol
Luv BBxx
Date: 19 Sep 2010 3:42 AM Title: Embellishment
I like it. very sensual writing. Really good short one shot.
Author's Response:
Than you. It was fun to write!! Luv BBxx