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Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 24

SHOW ME THE MONEY, im glad bella didn't pass out i sure as hell would of, holy shit thats better than winning the lottery wish we could all have a fairy money maker like alice, can't wait to find out about the bubs

on another note....how in the hell did she turn down doing naughty things with the major, let me tell you , iwould of been front and center, waiting for my orders then let him carry on any way he pleased,PMSL,i'm sure you agree LMAO, anywhooooo,,excellent ch. can't wait for more.until next time .c.



Author's Response:

I guess she was upset about being caught, don't forget she'd never used a BOB before! LOL I would have been there with nothing but bells on Baby! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of chapter 24. Here’s your Sneak Peek into chapter25.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 25 (JPOV)

“Before I turn this picture into 4-D, I need to know if you two want to know what you are having? The fetus’ outline will be quite clear from this new angle.”

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2010 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

YAY!!  Here comes pictures of the baby!!!!!

 

I am mostly excited of seeing the baby  :)

 



Author's Response:

Well, let me help you out there with the name of the next chapter. Chapter 25 is named: It's a What? So yep you will find out on Tues if it is a Boy or A Girlie! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of chapter 24. Here’s your Sneak Peek into chapter25.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 25 (JPOV)

“Before I turn this picture into 4-D, I need to know if you two want to know what you are having? The fetus’ outline will be quite clear from this new angle.”

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 24

yuppers.  dont think I get that much interest but I send 15% of every paycheck to mine.



Author's Response:

I looked it up and compound interest at the LOWEST rate in 1961 was 12% interest! Damn, now we are lucky to get 4%, and those are getting harder and harder to find! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of chapter 24. Here’s your Sneak Peek into chapter25.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 25 (JPOV)

“Before I turn this picture into 4-D, I need to know if you two want to know what you are having? The fetus’ outline will be quite clear from this new angle.”

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

*tries to catch breathe*

HAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That shit was funny right there!!  :)  *busts out laughing again*

Great chapter!  Peter is awesome!  Nuff said.  ;)

 



Author's Response:

Peter is a twisted and cleaver soul, I will give him that!!! He's also a crazy assed Mother, who needs the help of many mental health care professionals, but who wants to split hairs about him? LMAO! I had a ball writing that chappie.. It is one of my favorites so far... Hugs~Izzy PS: I think I am going to pick you guys a differnt Sneak Peek every time you review, what do you think, should I try that?

So here's another snipet from Chappie 24 I hope you like it! ;)

Chapter 24 (BPOV)

My hands were working my exposed breasts, as I started making good use out of Rosalie’s birthday present to me. I never knew what a vibrator could do for a girl, but I was really starting to enjoy myself. As my BOB started making me feel unbelievable pleasure, I closed my eyes and was lost in the sensations that were coursing through my body.

Hugs~ Izzy

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2010 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hilarious!!!!!



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you enjoyed it! I loved writing the ending... Hug~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 23. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 24.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 24

(BPOV)

I was having a shitload of trouble holding in both my laughter and my smile. I knew that Edward was not happy with the trick that I’d played on him last night, but I had to get him back for the Charlie and Kate mating comment. He should have expected nothing less of me, damn it!

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: kimee0479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 23

omg! The last past of the chapter gave me the most hilarious mental picture! I laughed so hard my sides hurt. 3hanks for sharing that!



Author's Response:

I hope you didn't pull something! LMAO... I really should have named this chapter Bi.-Polar! Hugs!Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 23. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 24.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 24

(BPOV)

I was having a shitload of trouble holding in both my laughter and my smile. I knew that Edward was not happy with the trick that I’d played on him last night, but I had to get him back for the Charlie and Kate mating comment. He should have expected nothing less of me, damn it!

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Nette91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 23

awesome awesome awesome chapter... went from tears to lmao....   thanks



Author's Response:

You  know I was half tempted to name this Chapter Bi-Polar? LOL hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 23. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 24.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 24

(BPOV)

I was having a shitload of trouble holding in both my laughter and my smile. I knew that Edward was not happy with the trick that I’d played on him last night, but I had to get him back for the Charlie and Kate mating comment. He should have expected nothing less of me, damn it!

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 23

hmmm the Aaron and Renee thing has me worried about what he might do.

 

Great chapter as alwasy



Author's Response:

Well, Aaron had to call her, and tell her. But you never know with Renee she does seem to be a wild card half of the time... Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 23. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 24.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 24

(BPOV)

I was having a shitload of trouble holding in both my laughter and my smile. I knew that Edward was not happy with the trick that I’d played on him last night, but I had to get him back for the Charlie and Kate mating comment. He should have expected nothing less of me, damn it!

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: kimee0479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 22

This is such a neat story. Why is Jasper taking Bella's truck? Or is the answer in the next chapter? I know if someone was going to take my truck I wouldn't be as easy going about it! 



Author's Response:

The people most likely to take my truck from me is FORD!!!! lol I know that i'd be out there with a bat, LMAO! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 22. Here is your Sneak a Peek at Chapter 23.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 23 (JPOV)

“Isabella Swan and Jasper Whitlock,

 You are both invited to the first ever Cullen / Whitlock Family Night.

*Clothing is optional*

Meet your family in the living room no later than 7pm.

Snacks and party to follow.

RSVP: by yelling ‘Hell Yeah’ NOW!”

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 22

*gets the subtle hint to review*   lol

This was a great chapter!  I know that Carlisle is in medical heaven, being able to not only research this pregnancy, but also to be the practicing physician for it.  He is a scientist at heart!!

 

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

Add a soon to be Grandpa to that list! LOL Yes Carlisle is loving this.. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 22. Here is your Sneak a Peek at Chapter 23.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 23 (JPOV)

“Isabella Swan and Jasper Whitlock,

 You are both invited to the first ever Cullen / Whitlock Family Night.

*Clothing is optional*

Meet your family in the living room no later than 7pm.

Snacks and party to follow.

RSVP: by yelling ‘Hell Yeah’ NOW!”

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

i think bella may blow a fuse if carlisle keeps up with the tests and counting,,,,she is not a science project! 

   excellent ch. is there more trials and tribulations to come,one can only hope,,as you can see i am a fan of the angst,lol.and the major,yum.

until next update,thanks for the story.c.



Author's Response:

Yes, these is always in the blowing in the wind these two, or three now! LOL  Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 22. Here is your Sneak a Peek at Chapter 23.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 23 (JPOV)

“Isabella Swan and Jasper Whitlock,

 You are both invited to the first ever Cullen / Whitlock Family Night.

*Clothing is optional*

Meet your family in the living room no later than 7pm.

Snacks and party to follow.

RSVP: by yelling ‘Hell Yeah’ NOW!”

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

poor carlisle.  gotta be hard to do that to your daughter with the deadly son right there.  lol



Author's Response:

Yeah, but I would NEVER wear my socks to that doctors appt, would you? LOL.. At least Jasper kept his cool this time around.. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your Review of Chapter 22. Here is your Sneak a Peek at Chapter 23.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 23 (JPOV)

“Isabella Swan and Jasper Whitlock,

 You are both invited to the first ever Cullen / Whitlock Family Night.

*Clothing is optional*

Meet your family in the living room no later than 7pm.

Snacks and party to follow.

RSVP: by yelling ‘Hell Yeah’ NOW!”

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2010 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 20

Nice one!  I sthere venom?  Isn't there venom?  I love it; I especially love the banter between Bella and Jasper!  It's always easy, never forced or made up.  Kudos!



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am so glad that you are enjoying the story. I love J/B scenes in my head, and they are EASY to write. They make the story worth writing for me. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 21. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 22.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 22

(BPOV)

What are you holding back from me, Jasper Whitlock? I know that you are trying to hide something so you might as well spill it before I have to go dig through that mind of yours. I said, while crossing my arms over my chest. I’d rifle through his thoughts if I had to, and he knew it.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

I forgive you ;)  lol

I LOVED IT!!!!  This chapter was great.  I really cant wait until Bella is better.

Aaron still rubs me the wrong way. Sneaky little elf... *grumbles*

I look forward to your next update!  :)



Author's Response:

Yep, Aaron still has a 'I'm better than you' attitude! That's not going to change anytime soon though. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 21. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 22.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 22

(BPOV)

What are you holding back from me, Jasper Whitlock? I know that you are trying to hide something so you might as well spill it before I have to go dig through that mind of yours. I said, while crossing my arms over my chest. I’d rifle through his thoughts if I had to, and he knew it.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

excellent ch.,yay, a baby,really looking forward to what you got cooking next, it has so many possibilities !?, i have had a total mind blank for question's so sorry on that part,,anyway................hope you up date soon and again, excellent ch..cheerio.cheryl.



Author's Response:

I  know it, I feel like I'm a kid in a candy store right now... Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 21. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 22.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 22

(BPOV)

What are you holding back from me, Jasper Whitlock? I know that you are trying to hide something so you might as well spill it before I have to go dig through that mind of yours. I said, while crossing my arms over my chest. I’d rifle through his thoughts if I had to, and he knew it.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 21

just knew he (aaron) was gonna do that.



Author's Response:

Yep, Aaron always seems to have a reason for everything he does. At least he's trying to help out a lil bit now though. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 21. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 22.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 22

(BPOV)

What are you holding back from me, Jasper Whitlock? I know that you are trying to hide something so you might as well spill it before I have to go dig through that mind of yours. I said, while crossing my arms over my chest. I’d rifle through his thoughts if I had to, and he knew it.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

pregnant?



Author's Response:

We'll see ... ;) Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 20. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 21!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 21

(BPOV)

He walked over to my side of the bed, and gave me the once over again.  I knew that my fever was high, but Aaron had warned us beforehand that it would be. He checked my pulse, my temperature, and my eyes and ears. Same old, same old really.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wow, I really enjoyed Carlisles POV. It was nice after the POV of one very pissed off Resolute mate Major.  Poor Jazz.

Now, I have a question for the other resolute couple.

Is conception possible, and if so, what is the gestational period and what is the result?

*giggles*

The answer to the first part of that question, I feel, will be a resounding YES!  *snickers*

See you next update, I cant wait!!



Author's Response:

That sounds like a great question to ask them, thanks for letting me know what you would like to know. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 20. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 21!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 21

(BPOV)

He walked over to my side of the bed, and gave me the once over again.  I knew that my fever was high, but Aaron had warned us beforehand that it would be. He checked my pulse, my temperature, and my eyes and ears. Same old, same old really.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Nik2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

is she preggers?



Author's Response:

What? preggers? Huh, I haven't heard that one yet. *Walks away shaking my head.. and laughing like a loon* Hugs~Izzy ;) You'll see on Tues.

Thanks for your review of Chapter 20. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 21!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 21

(BPOV)

He walked over to my side of the bed, and gave me the once over again.  I knew that my fever was high, but Aaron had warned us beforehand that it would be. He checked my pulse, my temperature, and my eyes and ears. Same old, same old really.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: mz_cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 20

OMFG i totally love ur story but that bit at the end was not at all nice hunny bun otay that was down right horrible meanie butt :P jk but ur story is fraking awesome yo yo yo



Author's Response:

Go and ahead and tell me how you really feel. LMAO ;) One of my friends on FF called "The Queen of the Fucking Cliffies," and threaten me with her kids if I kept all of you readers, out there on that cliff for to long. The only thing I can promise is you is that I swear by Tuesday, you and everyone else with know the anwswers to your questions! I don't even end chapter 21 with a cliffie! Well, I don't think so anyways .... *Runs and hides under the bed. While you throw pillows at my head!!!* LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 20. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 21!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 21

(BPOV)

He walked over to my side of the bed, and gave me the once over again.  I knew that my fever was high, but Aaron had warned us beforehand that it would be. He checked my pulse, my temperature, and my eyes and ears. Same old, same old really.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

come out ,come out ,where ever you are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh izzy,,,,you are fantasticaly cruel ,loved your cliffy,pmsl......plz ,plz,plz update soon,i will continue to beg,if i have to too,might even ask jasper to join in ,LMAO,,,,,,,,,so did bribery with the major work,,bet it did,,,hehehehehe..until next time .c.

p.s,,,coffee too.



Author's Response:

Peek A Boo! Here I am! LMFAO I love being cruel ya know... Jasper makes me that way sometimes. LOL Jasper NEVER BEGS... LOL ok he does but o nly when it's really good ... I accept the coffee, and will still make ya wait til tues. HEHEHEHEE~ Hgus~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 20. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 21!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 21

(BPOV)

He walked over to my side of the bed, and gave me the once over again.  I knew that my fever was high, but Aaron had warned us beforehand that it would be. He checked my pulse, my temperature, and my eyes and ears. Same old, same old really.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 20

well  I'm guessing she's prego already.   lol



Author's Response:

Jaspers a vamp, he can't get anyone prego! Remember? Rose told us all that in like Chapter 5 or something ... So what else could it be? Hummm ? *walks away laughing**  Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 20. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 21!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 21

(BPOV)

He walked over to my side of the bed, and gave me the once over again.  I knew that my fever was high, but Aaron had warned us beforehand that it would be. He checked my pulse, my temperature, and my eyes and ears. Same old, same old really.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: kimee0479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 19

wow! I cant wait for the next chapter! I love this story!



Author's Response:

Thanks Kimee, I would give you and Sneak Peek at Chappie 20, but how's about I just post the whole damn Chappie instead? It'll be up in five minutes~ Hugs~Izzy ;)

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!!!!! I'm soooo excited to see how Bella gets through this!!!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story! How will Bella get through this? I do know the answer, but that wouldn't be any fun now would it? LOL *Runs and hides under the bed!* ; ) Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 20

(JPOV)

All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into his box.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 19

Oh no!!  helluva cliffie!

 

LOved the update, the battle was awesome :)

Did everyone on Bella's side survive??  Whats going to happen about her injury?!

I am so excited to see what happens next!!



Author's Response:

We'll have to wait and see! LOL **walks away laughing evilly** Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 20

(JPOV)

All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into his box.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: sherry-2010 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Oct 2010 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 19

:)



Author's Response:

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 20

(JPOV)

All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into his box.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 19

loved the action, as your last reply stated,you are first in line but i reserve 2,3,4,5..... and all the rest for jasper, i just love the major,PMSL.this could seriously start a fightlol,although i don't think he's wiling to give up bella!bummer! looking forward to what's going to happen next,,,,until next update,cheerio.c.



Author's Response:

As holding back Bella. You hold her down for me, and i'll do the same for you! *Wink Wink* No fighting, just lovin' girlie! ;) Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 20

(JPOV)

All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into his box.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

hmmm  Bella gonna be a vamp soon rather than later because of it?



Author's Response:

You think so?!?! Maybe, but than again maybe not! LOL ;) I guess we'll just have to wait and see. *laughing all the way to Chapter 20* Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 20

(JPOV)

All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into in box.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

Good lord!  Citrus allergy?  That means I could be of the Fae!  Yes!  I love the action and Charlie's reappearance.



Author's Response:

Yes! All Elves, Faries, and Deamons are allergic to citrus! Thanks for your kind words.. Hugs~Izzy ;)

Thank You for your Review of Chapter 19. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 20.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 20

(JPOV)

All I could do was stand there, holding my mate in my arms, and growl when I thought someone was too fuckin’ close to her. I knew mentally that she was right, and that Carlisle needed to look at her. But I couldn’t seem to put the Major back into in box.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 18

hmmmm....I cant wait to hear about alice/edward and the other resolute mates, as well as see Bella's relationship with her granddad get better!!! I love love love Jasper and Bella together!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks I love J/B together myslef! Yeah, the other Resolute couple should be intersesting. ep, Aaron and Bella neeed to get closer as well i agree. You know that today is tues. so that means another update... ;) Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 18. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 19.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 19

(BPOV)

My reverting back into a second grader did nothing for Jasper’s mood at that moment. So I used his gift on him. I pushed as much happiness as I could at Jasper at that moment. He was trying to be completely hardnosed and bad assed, but he lost it when I started singing.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2010 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18

Wow, are the dogs really that stupid??  Goodness gracious, they need to knock that shit off.  Bad dog!!!  lol

I loved this chapter, I cant wait to see how things go with Charlie and what other magic Bella can do!  :)

 



Author's Response:

You know what they say about old dogs and new tricks! LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 18. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 19.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 19

(BPOV)

My reverting back into a second grader did nothing for Jasper’s mood at that moment. So I used his gift on him. I pushed as much happiness as I could at Jasper at that moment. He was trying to be completely hardnosed and bad assed, but he lost it when I started singing.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2010 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 18

woo hoo   bout time she put aaron in his place.



Author's Response:

I agree... ;) Aaron is a little too self centered for me!!! Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 18. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 19.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 19

(BPOV)

My reverting back into a second grader did nothing for Jasper’s mood at that moment. So I used his gift on him. I pushed as much happiness as I could at Jasper at that moment. He was trying to be completely hardnosed and bad assed, but he lost it when I started singing.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: renren Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 18

You are a fantastic writer, and have a wonderful story!

Author's Response:

Awww, Thank you. THaTH has been in my head since March 2009, and I finally was doing my reseach on in July 2010. I started writing it Sept 2010, and I just can't put it down. I idea's are running through my head like crazy, and sometimes it just won't stop. I am glad that you are enjoying it. I post on Tues and Sats. just so you  know. Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 18. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 19.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 19

(BPOV)

My reverting back into a second grader did nothing for Jasper’s mood at that moment. So I used his gift on him. I pushed as much happiness as I could at Jasper at that moment. He was trying to be completely hardnosed and bad assed, but he lost it when I started singing.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 18

omg,12 times,that's hot. excellent ch. does everything with charlies change go ok? when are the tribe going to pull the sticks out of their asses?

can't wait to see what happens next????!!!!????? until next time, heres coffee.c.



Author's Response:

Wouldn't it be such a hardship in life to have to reconnect with JASPER, during sex? NOPE NOPE NOPE! I have the first ticket in line, so don't even bother cutting in line for that one girlie. LMAO ;) Hugs~Izzy

Thank you for your review of Chapter 18. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 19.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 19

(BPOV)

My reverting back into a second grader did nothing for Jasper’s mood at that moment. So I used his gift on him. I pushed as much happiness as I could at Jasper at that moment. He was trying to be completely hardnosed and bad assed, but he lost it when I started singing.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: grace1979 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 17

really great chapter I absolutely love this story!

Author's Response:

Thank You, now that I have a Beta hopefully the stroy will flow better for y'all. The flow of the story and my comma's I know have to be driving y'all crazy. Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 17. I love that Chappie. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 18.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 18

(JPOV)

Carlisle walks up to the front door as an old pickup truck comes into view. I see Billy Black in the passenger seat, and Harry Clearwater is drivin’. As they get out of the truck and Harry gets Billy’s wheelchair outta the back, nine wolves come to stand behind their leaders.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: janjan2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

good story, i just found it!!!! but i personally would like to see Bella get closer to her grandfather...after all she is his only family and i think they need each other...Can't wait for more!!



Author's Response:

Thanks, and we'll wait adn see what happens between B and A. Thanks for your review. Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 17. I love that Chappie. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 18.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 18

(JPOV)

Carlisle walks up to the front door as an old pickup truck comes into view. I see Billy Black in the passenger seat, and Harry Clearwater is drivin’. As they get out of the truck and Harry gets Billy’s wheelchair outta the back, nine wolves come to stand behind their leaders.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Ashira Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 17

beautifuel story, i love it.

please update soon.

blessed be

Ashira



Author's Response:

Awww, how sweet are you? Thanks for the compliment. THaTH is a fun story to write. Hus~Izzy ;)

Thank You for your review of Chapter 17. I love that Chappie. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 18.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 18

(JPOV)

Carlisle walks up to the front door as an old pickup truck comes into view. I see Billy Black in the passenger seat, and Harry Clearwater is drivin’. As they get out of the truck and Harry gets Billy’s wheelchair outta the back, nine wolves come to stand behind their leaders.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 17

OMG that was beautiful, wonderful, fun, and amazing!!

I absolutely love this chapter!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that I could make you happy chickie. Lol Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 17. I love that Chappie. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 18.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 18

(JPOV)

Carlisle walks up to the front door as an old pickup truck comes into view. I see Billy Black in the passenger seat, and Harry Clearwater is drivin’. As they get out of the truck and Harry gets Billy’s wheelchair outta the back, nine wolves come to stand behind their leaders.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

I would have embarrassed Aaron by asking what he did to the bracelet before I put it on.  I surely wouldnt trust him.



Author's Response:

Well, she can't go throught the Arising twice. What else could his magic do to her? Right?!? LOL

Thank You for your review of Chapter 17. I love that Chappie. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 18.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 18

(JPOV)

Carlisle walks up to the front door as an old pickup truck comes into view. I see Billy Black in the passenger seat, and Harry Clearwater is drivin’. As they get out of the truck and Harry gets Billy’s wheelchair outta the back, nine wolves come to stand behind their leaders.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2010 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 17

excellent ch. as always,can't believe charlie get's to become a vamp before bella,looking forward to what's to come,,,,,,,hop you update soon.c.



Author's Response:

YEP, Charlie is first. Bella needs to learn control of her Elf crap, before taking on the vampire crap too.

Thank You for your review of Chapter 17. I love that Chappie. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 18.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 18

(JPOV)

Carlisle walks up to the front door as an old pickup truck comes into view. I see Billy Black in the passenger seat, and Harry Clearwater is drivin’. As they get out of the truck and Harry gets Billy’s wheelchair outta the back, nine wolves come to stand behind their leaders.

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 16

Awesome!

Little Aaron is starting to rub me the wrong way.  He seems like he is up to something, and not just creating an heir. 

I cant wait to see what happens next!



Author's Response:

Aaron is a complaicated dude! LOL

Thank you for your review for Chapter 16. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 17. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 17

Happy Birthday Bella

(BPOV)

I was in no mood to be level headed right now. I just wanted to kick the shit out of something and then throw a tantrum like a three year old. How come everyone in my life with the exception of Jasper or the Cullen’s always seem to want something from me? Why in the hell do I allow myself to be put into those positions?

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

nice ch.,thank god bella has takin' to being an elf,i'm so jealous that she get's the major,*sighs*,,,,don't get me wrong i'm team edward all the way but on ff and others,oh my,it's got to be the cowboy!

really looking forward to finding out who's behind the attacks,feel sorry for both J/B with having charlie around,parental sex ,BLUUUAAAAHHH,brain  bleach. lol. wonder what jasper has planned for  her birthday surprise!!????!!.looking forward to what's coming next....until next time.c.



Author's Response:

Bella's Birthday is gonna be good! LOL ;)

Thank you for your review for Chapter 16. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 17. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 17

Happy Birthday Bella

(BPOV)

I was in no mood to be level headed right now. I just wanted to kick the shit out of something and then throw a tantrum like a three year old. How come everyone in my life with the exception of Jasper or the Cullen’s always seem to want something from me? Why in the hell do I allow myself to be put into those positions?

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

hmmm wonder if Aaron is going to try and kidnap her now too.  If he doesnt watch it, the vamps are gonna drain his ass.



Author's Response:

I guess we'll just have to wait and see. LOL But yeah one of the vamps just might snap on his ass, if he can't pull it together soon.

Thank you for your review for Chapter 16. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 17. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 17

Happy Birthday Bella

(BPOV)

I was in no mood to be level headed right now. I just wanted to kick the shit out of something and then throw a tantrum like a three year old. How come everyone in my life with the exception of Jasper or the Cullen’s always seem to want something from me? Why in the hell do I allow myself to be put into those positions?

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 15

Awesome, now we're gettin' somewhere!

 

Yee Haw y'all, lets get this shit storm started!!

 

*stops channeling inner cowgirl*



Author's Response:

Cowgirl Up! LOL Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 15. Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 16. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 16 (BPOV)

Ten Long Days

He was standing behind me looking at my body from the reflection in the mirror. He pulled back a little and unclasped my bra from behind, and he watched as he brought both of its straps fell down my arms.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: culleniwish Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

I feel so bad for Charlie. Babies change so much in those first few years and he's going to miss out on so much. You described Renee perfectly - selfish.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review of Chapter 15. Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 16. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 16 (BPOV)

Ten Long Days

He was standing behind me looking at my body from the reflection in the mirror. He pulled back a little and unclasped my bra from behind, and he watched as he brought both of its straps fell down my arms.

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: Webbie298 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 15

Ok, I need to ask what does "OSM" mean?  The internet says it means awesome but I do not think so in the context in which you use it.



Author's Response:

OSM=Oh Shit Moments.

When my kids were younger instead of saying Oh Shit. I got in the habit of saying OSM instead. LOL

Thanks for your review of Chapter 15. Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 16. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 16 (BPOV)

Ten Long Days

He was standing behind me looking at my body from the reflection in the mirror. He pulled back a little and unclasped my bra from behind, and he watched as he brought both of its straps fell down my arms.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

yay go on bella,can't wait to see how everything goes down from now on,

excellent ch.,can we get another fast up date,love this story.c.



Author's Response:

Saturday is about as I can do. I mean three chapters in three day's was tough! LOL

Thanks for your review of Chapter 15. Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 16. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 16 (BPOV)

Ten Long Days

He was standing behind me looking at my body from the reflection in the mirror. He pulled back a little and unclasped my bra from behind, and he watched as he brought both of its straps fell down my arms.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 15

Sorry but Renee had is coming.  I still think Bella should have gotten the first punch into Grandpa's face.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but then Jasper couldn't have had his fun. Bella knows that she needs him to help her, and that is why she didn't let him have it.

Thanks for your review of Chapter 15. Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 16. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 16 (BPOV)

Ten Long Days

He was standing behind me looking at my body from the reflection in the mirror. He pulled back a little and unclasped my bra from behind, and he watched as he brought both of its straps fell down my arms.

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Webbie298 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

I am totally entranced with this story line.  It is just so original.  I love it.  Charlie and Kate?  Yeah!!!!!



Author's Response:

Gotta love Kate. Thanks for reviewing. Hugs~Izzy PS I'm updating again TODAY ;)

Thanks for your review of Chapter 14. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 15. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 15 (BPOV)

Family Ties

There have been times over the last almost four days when I’ve wanted nothing more than to rip my own skin from my body, and just pull out every strand of hair out of my head. The pain is all consuming and overpowering.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

Renee is still an idiot.  Did she really think that her dad would let Bella walk away.   I hope Bella kicks his ass for forcing it on her before she was ready for it.



Author's Response:

You'll see in Chapter 15! I promise!! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 14. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 15. Hugs~Izzy

 

Chapter 15 (BPOV)

Family Ties

There have been times over the last almost four days when I’ve wanted nothing more than to rip my own skin from my body, and just pull out every strand of hair out of my head. The pain is all consuming and overpowering.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

i don't mind that the major likes it when i beg,,,,LMAO,i will do it any time if it will get another update,,not ashamed,pmsl,,,,,,anyway,can someone smack the selfish cow that calls herself  'mom' aka renee,could she honestly be any more annoying ,it's all about what her and phil need, not what she could of done for bella,i really could not have seen myself at 10 being able to run a house and it's finance's, have a feeling it will get worse when phil turns up,ok i think renee will be first on bella's shit list followed by phil,just cause he sound's like an ass,then it could be tie between the Black's and grandaddy elf,,can't wait till bella's awakening has finished and she lets rip on them,heeehehee, should be fun,,,,,

amazing again,can't wait for more,,,will continue beggin' if i need to,lol.c.



Author's Response:

I can't stand Renee, not even in the real books! Grrrr, that woman has always been to nervery for me! Oh ya... You're are Kind of Close in assuming! hehehehehe

Thanks for your review of Chapter 14. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 15. Hugs~Izzy

 

Chapter 15 (BPOV)

Family Ties

There have been times over the last almost four days when I’ve wanted nothing more than to rip my own skin from my body, and just pull out every strand of hair out of my head. The pain is all consuming and overpowering.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

Aww, sweet Charlie and Katiedid, so cute!

 

Loved this chapter!



Author's Response:

Yes Gotta love Kate, she's cool!

Thanks for your review of Chapter 14. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 15. Hugs~Izzy

 

Chapter 15 (BPOV)

Family Ties

There have been times over the last almost four days when I’ve wanted nothing more than to rip my own skin from my body, and just pull out every strand of hair out of my head. The pain is all consuming and overpowering.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 13

Arrggg!!  Cliffies are my enemy  *sulks in corner*

Love this chapter, I never get tired of the Major's story :)

 

Until next chapter  *uncrisses arms, waves, re-crosses arms and sulks more*



Author's Response:

Smile Cuase your wait WON"T be long! Tomorrow at 3pm CCT how's that? I need to Proof read it a couple of more times. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 13. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 14. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 14

JPOV

Next fuckin’ thing I know the lil fucker’s up here and in my girl’s room. He’s runnin’ away from a girl vampire like the true pussy he really is. He must’ve pushed his way past Irina to get his sorry no good fuckin’ elfin ass up here. 

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Emo585 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

It's totally wierd that I've read Charlie/ Tanya stories and this is completely epic


This is truely a one of a kind cuz this is the shit!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks i wanted to write something completely new and fun... I don't hate tonya, but she isn't one of my favorites. Kate on the other hand is a pistol, and i love her. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 13. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 14. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 14

JPOV

Next fuckin’ thing I know the lil fucker’s up here and in my girl’s room. He’s runnin’ away from a girl vampire like the true pussy he really is. He must’ve pushed his way past Irina to get his sorry no good fuckin’ elfin ass up here. 

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 13

great chapter hun.    Wish someone would have decked grandpa and hippie biatch though.



Author's Response:

It's coming i swear it is. In either one or two Chapters. Jasper let's the SOB have it! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 13. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 14. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 14

JPOV

Next fuckin’ thing I know the lil fucker’s up here and in my girl’s room. He’s runnin’ away from a girl vampire like the true pussy he really is. He must’ve pushed his way past Irina to get his sorry no good fuckin’ elfin ass up here. 

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 13

noooooo,another evil cliffy*pouts*no fair ,PMSL, only joking,excellent ch., what an unreal connection between jasper and bella,looks like everyone is catching the love bug,heeeehhehhe........so when do we find out about where 'hippy bitch' has been? when bella's 'arising' has finished who's first to get on bella's bad book?

anyway,already said but will do it again,,,,,excellent ch.,dying to know what happens next,,,,pppppppllllllleeeeeeaaaaaassssssseeeeeeee!,,,,,,see not ashamed to beg,lol,bye for now.c.



Author's Response:

You know that Jasper really loves it when a girl begs right? LMFAO i'm so sorry about the another cliffie. i just couldn't find a better way to make the chapter stop. i have so many idea's running throught my head as i write that just wont fit inside of one chapter, that i have to stop writing to put them down on paper somewhere. if i dont stop, then i lose them completely.

anywho, your answers are coming and soon! i'd say within the next two or three chapters. i have some major decisions to make about the book itself. like i am trying to figure out if i should write the whole story in one book or break it up into two. i am thinking two, but it will depend on how it writes itself out. so well have to wait and see.

Sorry i got so long winded Hugs~Izzy 

Thanks for your review of Chapter 13. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 14. Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 14

JPOV

Next fuckin’ thing I know the lil fucker’s up here and in my girl’s room. He’s runnin’ away from a girl vampire like the true pussy he really is. He must’ve pushed his way past Irina to get his sorry no good fuckin’ elfin ass up here. 

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh wow!!  OSM for sure!!

I love, I cant wait to read more :)



Author's Response:

OSM yep yep yep! ;) Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 12. It’s starting! L Your words are keeping me writing, and giving me the motivation to try and write at couple of chapters a week. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.

.Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 13.  Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 13(JPOV)

Why do the elves have to be so secretive if we’d a clue about this Arising shit? I could at least kick the lil fucker out of the house if I knew more, as it is he and his daughter ain’t moved a muscle yet. That could be the horse sized wolf breathin’ down their necks. Maybe those foul smellin’ things will come in handy after all.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 12

somebody needs to kick some elfin ass



Author's Response:

I Completely agree! Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 12. It’s starting! L Your words are keeping me writing, and giving me the motivation to try and write at couple of chapters a week. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.

Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 13.  Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 13(JPOV)

Why do the elves have to be so secretive if we’d a clue about this Arising shit? I could at least kick the lil fucker out of the house if I knew more, as it is he and his daughter ain’t moved a muscle yet. That could be the horse sized wolf breathin’ down their necks. Maybe those foul smellin’ things will come in handy after all.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: emmeylou Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 12

This is probably the most unique and interesting story i've read in a really long time. I love J/B and i love the way you have incorporated the vampire world with "alternate" worlds. It really works and i'm looking forward to reading the rest. Just please promise that you won't just randomly stop writing it... because as a reader that is the worst.



Author's Response:

I can promise you as a reader and now a writer I will never do that to you.

That is why most of the stories that I do read are completed stories. One of my favorite authors pulls that shit on me constantly. But she's such a talented writer that I can't keep myself from reading her newer stories. I can't promise two chapters a week like I have been doing, but I will do my best to keep up with what I've been doing. Which is Two Chapters a week. I can tell you that I am already writing Chapter 15, and I am more then half way throw it already.

I have my next two chapters waiting to be Beta'd. My new Beta, can only Beta on the weekends so hopefully I can get two chapters done a week and shipped to her by Friday nights. I'd like to Publish once on late Saturday nights, and again late on Tues nights. That seems to work out best for me.

Sorry I got carried away. Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 12. It’s starting! L Your words are keeping me writing, and giving me the motivation to try and write at couple of chapters a week. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.

Just so you know, I have server dyslexia. When I read or write. I start at the right and memorize the letters going one way. Then read them going the other way. So you can imagine how difficult this is for me. That’s why I use so many commas in my story. They help me keep my place in a sentence. Just a little 411 for you so please know that I don’t add them to piss you off. They just help me as the writer.

 

Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 13.  Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 13(JPOV)

Why do the elves have to be so secretive if we’d a clue about this Arising shit? I could at least kick the lil fucker out of the house if I knew more, as it is he and his daughter ain’t moved a muscle yet. That could be the horse sized wolf breathin’ down their necks. Maybe those foul smellin’ things will come in handy after all.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

EVIL,EVil.evil,excellent cliffy, :),really hope you update soon, i'm sitting bouncing,waiting for what's gonna happen next,bye............c.



Author's Response:

I am so sorry about the Cliffie....cough...NOT!!!! LMAO I'm running and hiding now! Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 12. It’s starting! L Your words are keeping me writing, and giving me the motivation to try and write at couple of chapters a week. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.

Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 13.  Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 13(JPOV)

Why do the elves have to be so secretive if we’d a clue about this Arising shit? I could at least kick the lil fucker out of the house if I knew more, as it is he and his daughter ain’t moved a muscle yet. That could be the horse sized wolf breathin’ down their necks. Maybe those foul smellin’ things will come in handy after all.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: jvcoleman Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loving the story, but you are right you are evil. Hate the cliffie. Cant wait for more. Update soon.



Author's Response:

I know it. Sorry ;) Hugs~Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 12. It’s starting! L Your words are keeping me writing, and giving me the motivation to try and write at couple of chapters a week. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.

Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 13.  Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 13(JPOV)

Why do the elves have to be so secretive if we’d a clue about this Arising shit? I could at least kick the lil fucker out of the house if I knew more, as it is he and his daughter ain’t moved a muscle yet. That could be the horse sized wolf breathin’ down their necks. Maybe those foul smellin’ things will come in handy after all.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 8

so neat



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks foir your Review! hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: shiftyless Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: Webbie298 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

This was so wonderful and so sweet.  I am totally addicted to this story line.  It is so fresh and original.  I am so glad I ran across it.  Cannot wait to see where this goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks, as a reader I got tired of the same old same old. So I thought something new and different would be nice. The only problem is now that I'm writing, I have NO time for reading. LMAO. Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for review from Chapter 11. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 12.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Chapter 12

(BPOV)

 

“What’s there to work out this better not be over my mark. Peter told me that the wolves bit there imprints so this wasn’t going to be a big deal.” I said scared about what this could mean.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

Well done!  I loved it!  Great lemon, written perfectly for this story :)



Author's Response:

Thanks, I just couldn't do something way out there. I figure you readers get that enough craziness with the story. LOL!

 

Thanks for review from Chapter 11. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 12.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Chapter 12

(BPOV)

 

“What’s there to work out this better not be over my mark. Peter told me that the wolves bit there imprints so this wasn’t going to be a big deal.” I said scared about what this could mean.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

 

 

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 11

aaawwwww,they are so cute,you were right that was one hell of a ch.excellent job once again,,,,,ok ,so ,some of my questions have been answered but i have new ones is renee in trouble?is she going to bring it to forks?in what order will bella be changed,full elf then vamp or vice versa?

for your first lemon ,have to say, you did very good,can't wait for future lemons,heeehee,hope for an up-date soon.bye.c.



Author's Response:

Renee is a crazy lady, and is she in trouble? ummm....Let me see? ;) LOL

Bella has already started the Arising Process. So I'd say Elf first then Vampire. I mean unless something goes complete wrong with her Arising. I know I'm Evil. You'll see I promise! Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for review from Chapter 11. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 12.

Hugs~Izzy

 

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Chapter 12

(BPOV)

 

“What’s there to work out this better not be over my mark. Peter told me that the wolves bit there imprints so this wasn’t going to be a big deal.” I said scared about what this could mean.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: Rie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks I had to take it down after I posted it last night. I'd got a messege from a really nice reader who informed me that the spelling and Puncuation was Crap! So I tried to fix it on my own. I have sever dyslexia.When I read or write. I start at the right and memorize the letters going one way. Then read them going the other way. So you can imagine how difficult this is for me. That's why I use so many comma's in my story. They help me keep my place in a sentence.

So I did start using Window 7 instead of word processor. Hopefully now I should alright. I think I might even have another Beta to help out. Thanks Hugs~Izzy

Thanks for review from Chapter 11. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 12.

Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 12

(BPOV)

 

“What’s there to work out this better not be over my mark. Peter told me that the wolves bit there imprints so this wasn’t going to be a big deal.” I said scared about what this could mean.

 

Hugs~Izzy

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 11

Better hun.



Author's Response:

Thanks, that's as good as I can do on my own. I stayed up tp almost 3am working on it. Then did a couple hours more work this morning! I can't tell you grateful I am for your suggestions. Hugs~Izzy ;)

Reviewer: kimee0479 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 10

great chapter! This is probably a stupid question but what does OSM mean?



Author's Response:

There is NO such thing as a stupid question EVER! lol OSM= oh shit moments! it was way back there at chapter 2 or 3. i hope that helps!

 

 

Thank You for your review of Chapter 10. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 11.

Just so you know ahead of time. Chapter 11 is HUGE. I talking nearly 13,500 words. Almost triple my usual chapter size. 27 pages on Microsoft Word in 12 font. HUGE CHAPTER! Oh ya, it also holds a LEMON!!! Love those. Anyways, don‘t get use to my chapters being this long! ;) Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 11

(BPOV)

Then the full realization of my new revelation hit me. Jasper’s eyes grew wide while I was thinking. His face broke into the an absolutely gorgeous smile. Without saying any words, he knew. Then without warning, he projected his feelings back to me. It was the most euphoric feeling that I’ve ever experienced.      Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 10

ok my head hurts for poor bella and everything that she has to think about,,,,sssooooooooo are we going to see a j/b baby,could bella still be changed into a mix of elf/vamp?is she able to have kids after she is to  take over as an elf?

fab ch. can't wait for more,bye for now.c.



Author's Response:

I guess all of your questions will be answered in time... LOL I know I'm Evil! Sorry. Hugs~Izzy ;)

Thank You for your review of Chapter 10. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 11.

Just so you know ahead of time. Chapter 11 is HUGE. I talking nearly 13,500 words. Almost triple my usual chapter size. 27 pages on Microsoft Word in 12 font. HUGE CHAPTER! Oh ya, it also holds a LEMON!!! Love those. Anyways, don‘t get use to my chapters being this long! Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 11

(BPOV)

Then the full realization of my new revelation hit me. Jasper’s eyes grew wide while I was thinking. His face broke into the an absolutely gorgeous smile. Without saying any words, he knew. Then without warning, he projected his feelings back to me. It was the most euphoric feeling that I’ve ever experienced.       Hugs~Izzy

 

 

Reviewer: Rie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

Another great chapter... I wonder what a half human/half vamp mixed with elf child would be like....



Author's Response:

Any Child of Jasper's would have to be to cute for words... LOL... Thanks ~ Hugs~ Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 10. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 11.

Just so you know ahead of time. Chapter 11 is HUGE. I talking nearly 13,500 words. Almost triple my usual chapter size. 27 pages on Microsoft Word in 12 font. HUGE CHAPTER! Oh ya, it also holds a LEMON!!! Love those. Anyways, don‘t get use to my chapters being this long! Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 11

(BPOV)

Then the full realization of my new revelation hit me. Jasper’s eyes grew wide while I was thinking. His face broke into the an absolutely gorgeous smile. Without saying any words, he knew. Then without warning, he projected his feelings back to me. It was the most euphoric feeling that I’ve ever experienced.     Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

Interesting chapter... a lot of information to take in on everyone's part I guess.  Please update soon.



Author's Response:

I'm really trying to udate on Sunday's and Thurs. Chapter 11 will be up on Thurs. Thanks~ Hugs~ Izzy

Thank You for your review of Chapter 10. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 11.

Just so you know ahead of time. Chapter 11 is HUGE. I talking nearly 13,500 words. Almost triple my usual chapter size. 27 pages on Microsoft Word in 12 font. HUGE CHAPTER! Oh ya, it also holds a LEMON!!! Love those. Anyways, don‘t get use to my chapters being this long! Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 11

(BPOV)

Then the full realization of my new revelation hit me. Jasper’s eyes grew wide while I was thinking. His face broke into the an absolutely gorgeous smile. Without saying any words, he knew. Then without warning, he projected his feelings back to me. It was the most euphoric feeling that I’ve ever experienced.     Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 10

yea....  why do i have the feeling he's going to just start the process whether anyone agrees or not.



Author's Response:

I have no clue....  LOL. But i guess you'll just have to wait and see. Hugs~Izzy

 

Thank You for your review of Chapter 10. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 11.

Just so you know ahead of time. Chapter 11 is HUGE. I talking nearly 13,500 words. Almost triple my usual chapter size. 27 pages on Microsoft Word in 12 font. HUGE CHAPTER! Oh ya, it also holds a LEMON!!! Love those. Anyways, don‘t get use to my chapters being this long! Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 11

(BPOV)

Then the full realization of my new revelation hit me. Jasper’s eyes grew wide while I was thinking. His face broke into the an absolutely gorgeous smile. Without saying any words, he knew. Then without warning, he projected his feelings back to me. It was the most euphoric feeling that I’ve ever experienced. Hugs~Izzy

z88;

Reviewer: Lexigal1984 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 9

LOL. This story is Awesome. I have never laugh so hard on reading a story in my life. Thank you for the humor in this story. But it is a amazing story that you have created here. I can't wait to see what happens next.



Author's Response: Thanks for your comments. I love when a story has humor it. When i read. I do it to leave my real life behind. A good book can take you places that you'll never be able to go to in real life. You can face the vampires or elves and not be harmed. You can fight the drangons and win. All while never leaving the safety of your own home. That's what why i love reading and now writing. THaTH is my first story. It's coming along. I'm getting more and more comfortable in my writting style. Well, thanks again! Hugs~Izzy Thanks for your review of Chapter 9. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 10. See You on Sunday… Hugs~Izzy _______________________________ Chapter 10 (BPOV) My Grandfather was looking at the hardwood floor. Maybe he’s hoping it’ll swallow him up now? I thought but said, “Tell me what’s going on. Why were you in my dreams? Tell me about what you, being an elf means. What do you have to do as the King? And what will I have to do as your Heir?” Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Emmett...oh well. great job so far



Author's Response:

Emmett lost far and square. LOL He'll get his revenge I'm sure! hugs~Izzy

Thanks for your review of Chapter 9. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 10. See You on Sunday… Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 10

(BPOV)

My Grandfather was looking at the hardwood floor. Maybe he’s hoping it’ll swallow him up now? I thought but said, “Tell me what’s going on. Why were you in my dreams? Tell me about what you, being an elf means. What do you have to do as the King? And what will I have to do as your Heir?”

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: marlz85 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 9

I like the chapter. I was happy to see it on here since I am having trouble with FFN loading pages. I will now look forward to your updates for this site.



Author's Response:

Yeah, i heard that. FF is giving my Beta hell too. I've had a couple of issues, but they have been taken care of ASAP. so i ain't gonna bitch.

Thanks for your review of Chapter 9. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 10. See You on Sunday… Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 10

(BPOV)

My Grandfather was looking at the hardwood floor. Maybe he’s hoping it’ll swallow him up now? I thought but said, “Tell me what’s going on. Why were you in my dreams? Tell me about what you, being an elf means. What do you have to do as the King? And what will I have to do as your Heir?”

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Bella.    Glad Billy is taking some responsibility at least.   Aaron needs to fess up what he really wants from her.



Author's Response:

Billy's a good guy over all. he's just between a rock and a hard spot. he's mad at himself, and needs to find someone to take it out on.

Aaron will explain A LOT in chapter 10. i promise.

Thanks for your review of Chapter 9. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 10. See You on Sunday… Hugs~Izzy

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Chapter 10

(BPOV)

My Grandfather was looking at the hardwood floor. Maybe he’s hoping it’ll swallow him up now? I thought but said, “Tell me what’s going on. Why were you in my dreams? Tell me about what you, being an elf means. What do you have to do as the King? And what will I have to do as your Heir?”

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

cute little filler chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank You for your review of Chapter 8. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 9. See ya on Thursday!

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 9

(BPOV)

“Speaking of unanswered questions. You still need to complete two of my older one’s for me.” I re-asked Billy, “What did my mom say about that journal. And what’s in that treaty."

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 7

ok was thinking angel not elf.....but ok



Author's Response:

There is a reason for my craziness i swear...

Thanks for the review of Chapter 7. Here’s Sneak Peek at Chapter 8. I hope that you’re enjoying THaTH.

Hugs~Izzy

Chapter 8

(BPOV)

Jasper was laying beside me. Not so that anything but ingénue could be communicated. It just felt right. He had his right hand on my right hip, and he was rubbing small and firm circles. I closed my eyes again. Feeling utterly content for the first time in what felt like a lifetime. He never answered me, but I was comfortable with that. Safe and secure. Those two words, are going to have to get me through this ordeal. They should become my new motto to life. Safe and Secure.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 5

hmmm  I think I know what Aaron is.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I hope you are enjoying THaTH. Here’s your Sneak Peek! Chapter 7 will be out on Friday. And it’s a doozey! ;)

Hugs~Izzy

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(BPOV)

While I’m lost in my thoughts. I feel Jasper’s hands not only encircling me in protectiveness, but soothing my very frayed nerves when he answers, “You’re dad and what sounds like a few of his friends, sugar. Calm down. Everything’s gonna be alright. I’ll make sure of it darlin’. Shhhh” said Jasper with his southern drawl.

z88;

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 4

hmmm  long lost brother???



Author's Response:

Nope, but they are related~Izzy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

hmmmm    protective charlie is funny



Author's Response:

I love Charlie..I love writing him~Izzy

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 1

hmmmm "Not after everything that she now knew".  guessing this line is going to play a big part in this.



Author's Response:

TY fro your review~Izzy

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

WOW what's next? Good so far!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I hope you are enjoying THaTH. Here’s your Sneak Peek! Chapter 7 will be out on Friday. And it’s a doozey! ;)

Hugs~Izzy

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(BPOV)

While I’m lost in my thoughts. I feel Jasper’s hands not only encircling me in protectiveness, but soothing my very frayed nerves when he answers, “You’re dad and what sounds like a few of his friends, sugar. Calm down. Everything’s gonna be alright. I’ll make sure of it darlin’. Shhhh” said Jasper with his southern drawl.

z88;

Hugs~Izzy

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 5

so cool,keeping silent as requested,you are evil,lol.

so,where is renee?,can't wait for more.

thanks,c.



Author's Response:

Thank You for your review of Chapter 5. I know that for every question answered to THaTH, that two more pop-up. I thought that’s what a good story does. It draws you in, and always leaves you wondering what’s next. The next chapter will be out on Monday. Thanks for Your Review Here’s you Sneak Peek of Chapter 6. Enjoy! “Did you try her cell number? You know Renee, she most likely just forgot to pay her bill. There’s no need to be getting yourself so upset over this Bells. I’d bet my next paycheck that she’s just being her normal Renee-self.” Said Charlie. I could hear the wind in the phone. He must have already been on the road when I called him. Good, that means I can get home faster. I thought. ~Hugs~ Izzy

Reviewer: ShadowsInLight Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2010 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting. I'd like to see where this goes. You should try for a beta at the 'Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs' Blog, they have a soft spot for J/B fics or try posting a request at 'A Different Forest' and put your fic up on FanFic, It will get more views there aswell. You probably only need someone to sort out your paragraphs. Try to make your chapters longer cause you'll more than likely get loads of request to do that!

Looking forward to more!

Sal



Author's Response:

Thanks for you review

Sneak Peek Chapter 4

Think Bella, you can’t tell her the truth.

“Oh, you’re a terrible liar. You’re blushing, number one, give away. You’re not looking me in the eyes, number two. Number three, I’m sure your lack of sleep had nothing to do with the rain or squirrels.” Said Alice, finishing her statement, with a small laugh. As, I walked out of my room, into the hall. Turning around long enough to, roll my eyes at her. To which, she only laughed harder. I walked into the bathroom, shut the door, and started getting ready for the day.

~Hugs~

Izzy

“Umm, I’m not use to the rain, hitting the roof. It sounded like a whole family of squirrels, was up on their on the roof, all night. Pounding way, with little hammers.” I lied, as I grabbed, my bathroom bag. Trying to leave my room, as quick as I could.

Reviewer: chedoo28 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2010 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

have to say great start,way to leave a cliffy,so...did bella cut her self when she fell?way to meet a family of vamps! i love jasper /bella story,will defo be adding to favs,

i want more please ,lol.c.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. How would you feel if some of Chapter 5 was from Jasper’s POV? Well, some of it is. So here you go. It’s written, in the way a Southern man would talk. I hope I get it right. Enjoy!

Chapter 5 Sneak Peek

(JPOV)

Yes, she is My Isabella. She has been since the moment she was born. I’ve waited so long to be with her. And now she’s here, she’s freakin’ out, and I know she’s gonna run for the hills at any moment to get away from me. I just knew this was gonna happen. Fuck, I hate this shit.

“Jasper she will be awake in four minutes, and fifty-six seconds. Just calm down please.” said the little pixie. She can be calm. She’d spent the whole morning with my girl. Getting to know her. Being able to laugh and joke with her. I felt Alice’s emotions when she came back to the house. She was projecting nothing but amusement and confidence. Well, at least someone in the family thinks that this is gonna work alright. Alice, damn lil pixie know-it-all.

Thanks again!!

Hugs~Izzy

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