Date: 02 Nov 2022 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
So glad he's Jasper from the start and not preppy Jasper Hale! Great chapter!!
Date: 03 Aug 2019 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 47
I absolutely loved your story. It was amazing. That whole Resolute Connection thing was so creative! I wish that you'd consider writing a sequel. Maybe a war with Renee, Caius, & Aro wanting to kidnap little Joshua Whitlock for his talents & for revenge on Bella, for turning her back, on the Hippie Bitch. Lol. I loved that nickname. I never really liked the canon versions of Renee, Phil, Jacob, Edward, or Alice. I think Stephanie Meyer got it all wrong & should have made Jasper & Bella the main characters & the main couple. Doucheward & Malice the Pixie Bitch really would be perfect for each other just like the Major & Bella are. I mean in canon, how in the world would an empath be able to stand having the crazy energizer bunny, shopoholic, midget for a mate? It would drive him insane. I know it would me if I was in his shoes in canon. Anyways, keep up with the excelllent work! Yeah, Mama4dukes rocks, too! I know how challenging it wis to write a good fanfiction. I started writing a Twilight/Supernatural Crossover one on Wattpad called "Crimson Apocolypse" by one of my pen names: "bellawhitlock81." In my story, Bella & Sam Whinchester are twins, trying to get Dean back out of Helll, while struggling with being forced by a possessed by Azazel, Jasper. Whom had been secretly, & unknown to Bella, force-feeding, an unwitting, while sleeping Bella, demon blood. Which caused both siblings addictions to become supernaturally chaotic and they head down a path of self destruction & insanity withtheir newfound powers and lack of self control over their shared addiction for demon blood. They spiral down, while heading to Bobby Singer's house to try to fiqure a way to get Dean out of hell. Meanwhile, Crowley, Rowena & Lucifer have their own psychotic agendas of controling the doomed duo, as future Vessels for the True King & Queen of Hell. Yup, my story is a little intense, but I have so many ideas for it, but I hate getting stuck with writer's block in which direction to take my story. I loved how you incorporated all the different characters' POV into your story and the whole Elven theme of yours fit so flawlessly, in with the Twilight Universe. Keep up your excellent work! You are an amazing writer. Thanks for writing your story. Please conider a sequel, I think it would be awesome to read one.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 47
Love this fic, you did an amazing job.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I have had several readers who couldn't stand it, and let me know how they felt about it! Only in PM's mostly though! Getting a good review is a wonderful feeling right now! Thanks for reviewing!
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 17 Jun 2011 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 6
I find this chapter even more entertaining than most chapters I have read in general of all fics. The sheer fact that you mention a historic hillbilly feud to relate the tension between Shifters and Vampires is too funny, and ironic. Probably, Ironic for the sheer fact that most don't understand that history. And also more-so because well, unfortunately in some degrees, that is a part of my personal history. Yep, McCoy blood runs through my veins. And my best friend and practically sister, Hatfield. Runs deep enough that my great grandmother, (yes I was able to spend time with her before she passed when I was 10 ) remembered that situation with great detail. The point to it's humor, though the situation was negative in history, is that the fued was based off something very trivial. The fact that you used that trivial basis for comparison is quite ingenious. Showing a bit of depth to the silliness of one side hating the others. Very good job on this fic, so far. On to reading more :) Just had to share that with you. ;)
Author's Response:
Thanks Chickie! I tried to bring something true but real into the story, and the Hatfields and McCoys was the easiest way for me to do just that! Thanks for reviewing! Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
I can see he falling apart. I mean her mother is gone and her life is something out of a book right now. Plus poor Chrarlie, he got the shock of his life.
Author's Response:
CHarlie and Jasper are my two favorite Characters to write! I love Charlie! I hope that you keep reading and enjoying THaTH! Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
Her mother just ran off and didnt tell her. Not to mention the other stuff about her own family.
Author's Response:
I really didn't like Renee in the books, so I had to make her evil in my story! Sorry, if you're a Renee Lover, but I can't stand her! Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
So is Aaron he real dad or her uncle or something? If would have to be somehow related to Renee. I am with Bella, what is going on?
Author's Response:
I know just keep on reading you'll find out! I Promise! Hugs~Izzy ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
I thought it was funny that Bella knocked over Alice and Rose. LOL . Also Bella really seems to have "fallen" for Jasper too.
Author's Response:
Alice and Rose were the bowling pins and Bella was the ball! Good thing Jasper makes such a great Bumper! LOL Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2011 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapter. Why did she think Charlie would say No he is her dad.
Author's Response:
I guess Bella would think that her dad may not want her, just like her own mother truly didn't! Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good start to a story. I really want to know what Renee found out.
Author's Response:
Renee knows a hell of a lot more than she ever told ANYONE! Keep reading and you will find out!
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 47
I just wish it hadn't of ended!!!!! Thank You!
Author's Response:
I know me too! But it was time... I miss writing, and am trying to thinking of a new storyline! Thanks for reviewing! Hugs~Izzy
Date: 01 Mar 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 47
that was good i liked it and how you wrote it and i liked jasper and bella storues
Author's Response:
Thanks! I really loved writing it... It's hard to believe that it's done... The last few days, I have been like a lost puppy... I don't know which way to turn now that I have nothing to write at the moment!
After tax season, i will have to think up another one!
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 28 Feb 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 47
Well I found your story about 5 days ago and have been reading it almost everyday when I get time (I work FT and can only read after work). This has truely been a wonderful story, I laughed, cried and a few WTF didn't see that coming moments. I am sorry to see that this is the last chapter. M
Maybe down the road you will write a story with Josh growing up soon. I will be adding your to authors favorites. Again a really great story.
Author's Response:
Thanks Tucker, I loved writing it... I do have a one shot ready but my Beta is vacation so it hasn't been Beta'd yet... It is two very SMALL sceens that I wrote, but they never fit into the story... Plus, the timeline... I had quite a few ppl ask me about the timeline so I added it to the OS...
Thanks for reading, reviewing, and sticking with me.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
i really like ur story it has a great plot going but i noticed that u have alot of mispelled words and grammer errors. also the way u word some of ur sentences doesnt alway make sence. as far as the lemon it was ok. for me peronally it could have been more descriptve but like i said thats me. im really excited to read the rest of ur story and i think ur doing a great job. :)
Author's Response:
HI Heather,
I did try to write this story the best that I could, but I have a heard time with comma's and spelling. But my Beta, that I did get eventually, is a comma nazi! So the writing does get much better once she gets involved!
I hope that you continue to read, and enjoy THaTH!
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 26 Feb 2011 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 47
I have loved this story the up's and down. Bella is a really strong character and I loved the conection between her and jasper. it has been one ride from start to finish and i always looked forward to reading the next chapter.
Thank you for all your hard work that you put into writing this stroy it was one of my faviourietes.
i look forward to any future stories that you may write, and will keep you on my faviouries. thank again
Author's Response:
Thanks Chickie! It's hard to stop writing THaTH, but it was time to end the story... Now that Josh is there, they are complete!
I will be writing another story, just not for a while! I am working now, and tax season doesn't end until April 18th, so it will be after that!
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 26 Feb 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 47
surprised aaron is behaving. lol
been a great ride. ty for taking time to write.
Author's Response:
Aaron is really a nice guy! but his people skills SUCK! He has an air about him that he thinks that everyone should do as he says without question! That is were is fault lies!
I loved writing it!
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2011 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 47
Oh wow!
Im gonna miss this one like crazy!!!
*hugs you tight*
Author's Response:
I will be around! I may wirte another story, but not right now with work! I will start thinking of something new though!
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 46
OMG only one chapter left?!?!
*cries hysterically while spinning in circles*
Im gonna miss you! This story is the total shiznit!
Love the name btw... ;)
Author's Response:
I know I can't believe it's over! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 46… Here’s the LAST Sneak Peek to THaTH!
(JPOV)
Today’s my first day on the job as a ranch hand with Peter. We used to do this type of shit when we were human, and here we are doing it again. It feels right for me to be sitting here saddled to my favorite horse, Tink. Yes, I have a horse named Tinkerbell! Char named her. With my gift animals aren’t that hard to tame. Back in the day I’d had to break horses in the hard way, but not now. Being an empathic vampire does come with its advantages.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 23 Feb 2011 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 46
woo hoo love the name.
Author's Response:
I had do something to remember Jasper's human family!
Thanks for your review of Chapter 46… Here’s the LAST Sneak Peek to THaTH!
(JPOV)
Today’s my first day on the job as a ranch hand with Peter. We used to do this type of shit when we were human, and here we are doing it again. It feels right for me to be sitting here saddled to my favorite horse, Tink. Yes, I have a horse named Tinkerbell! Char named her. With my gift animals aren’t that hard to tame. Back in the day I’d had to break horses in the hard way, but not now. Being an empathic vampire does come with its advantages.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 23 Feb 2011 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 45
WOW!!! OMG!!! AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH HOW SWEET!!!!!!! AND YES YOU MADE ME CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THANK YOU;)
Author's Response:
Don't cry! I am going to post another Chapter again today! There is only Chapter 46 and 47 left to THaTH! I can't believe it's done! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 45… Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 46…
(BPOV)
“It’s definitely a boy!” Ashling squealed as I watched a river of pee shoot over the side of the bed.
“Plumbing works!” Jasper yelled, causing Carlisle and Ashling to laugh like loons. I was still trying to figure out which way was up, and having a hell of a time doing just that.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 45
*sinks teeth into your delectible neck*
*pulls away and lick lips*
Mmmm...mouth-watering my dear ;)
Loved that chapter, seriously! I was just saying to myself as I went to click on the link..."my goodness! Its chapter 45 already and no baby yet, WTF?"
(I truly did say WTF... bad habit I know)
Now we have the little one... Alexander Davis Swan-Whitlock-Cullen-Volturi-Bayne-whatever else. *cackles loudly like Alice ditching in line on Black Friday*
love you so effin much bb!!! See you next chappie!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Alexander Davis Swan-Whitlock-Cullen-Volturi-Bayne-whatever OMG! Now , how would someone Monogram that onto a towel??? ROFLMFAO! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 45… Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 46…
(BPOV)
“It’s definitely a boy!” Ashling squealed as I watched a river of pee shoot over the side of the bed.
“Plumbing works!” Jasper yelled, causing Carlisle and Ashling to laugh like loons. I was still trying to figure out which way was up, and having a hell of a time doing just that.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 21 Feb 2011 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 45
ACKKKKK ya gonna make us wait for the name....I hate you..... ok I dont hate you but that was mean. ROFL
Author's Response:
I know that I am evil! That's part of my Charm! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 45… Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 46…
(BPOV)
“It’s definitely a boy!” Ashling squealed as I watched a river of pee shoot over the side of the bed.
“Plumbing works!” Jasper yelled, causing Carlisle and Ashling to laugh like loons. I was still trying to figure out which way was up, and having a hell of a time doing just that.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 21 Feb 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 45
Loved the birth scene
Author's Response:
THanks CHickie! It brought back some BAD memories for me though! OUCH! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 45… Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 46…
(BPOV)
“It’s definitely a boy!” Ashling squealed as I watched a river of pee shoot over the side of the bed.
“Plumbing works!” Jasper yelled, causing Carlisle and Ashling to laugh like loons. I was still trying to figure out which way was up, and having a hell of a time doing just that.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 16 Feb 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 44
great job hun. glad they are having a fun honeymoon
Author's Response:
Thanks CHickie! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 44… Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 45…
JPOV
I caught her in the kitchen of our small home here in Montana, reaching for something on the very top shelves. Why is it that the something she’s craving at the moment has to always be on the top shelf where she has ta stretch out using her tiptoes to grab it? She’s been caught more times than I care to count, red handed, in the kitchen stretching herself beyond what a women who’s about to give birth in less than two weeks should be doing.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2011 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 44
Wow! Nice, hawt steamy smexin honeymoon!
Love it :)
*tries to shake off perverted thoughts about sand in hidden places on Jazz*
Author's Response:
Yes, I love sand in places that it should NEVER be! LOL Gotta to love those images! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 44… Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 45…
JPOV
I caught her in the kitchen of our small home here in Montana, reaching for something on the very top shelves. Why is it that the something she’s craving at the moment has to always be on the top shelf where she has ta stretch out using her tiptoes to grab it? She’s been caught more times than I care to count, red handed, in the kitchen stretching herself beyond what a women who’s about to give birth in less than two weeks should be doing.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 43
Oh wow!
*wipes sweat off brow*
that was a hell of an induction to the Mile High Club I'd say :)
Awesome sauce, is what it was! ;) lol
LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
I'd join the mile high club with him any day! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 43… Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 44…
Chapter 44
(BPOV)
I was only half listening to Jasper’s side of the conversation. If there was trouble, I’m sure that I’d know about it before too much longer. ‘Don’t go chasing trouble, it’ll always find you,’ I think to myself. Here lately that statement held so much truth that I was surprised that it wasn’t perpetually tattooed on my skin.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 09 Feb 2011 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 43
Boutique Island... sounds like an Alice named island. lol.
Author's Response:
It's located in the Turk Islands off of Cuba... Look it up! God, what I wouldn't do to be there right now! Hugs~Izzy PS... The only white stuff I like on the ground, is white sandy beaches...NOT SNOW! LOL
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 43… Here’s your Sneak Peek of Chapter 44…
Chapter 44
(BPOV)
I was only half listening to Jasper’s side of the conversation. If there was trouble, I’m sure that I’d know about it before too much longer. ‘Don’t go chasing trouble, it’ll always find you,’ I think to myself. Here lately that statement held so much truth that I was surprised that it wasn’t perpetually tattooed on my skin.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 02 Feb 2011 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 42
omfg its renee isnt it.......oh the suspence is killing me!!! Great chapter i love the wedding, and petey got what he deserved lol!!!! keep up the amazing work
Author's Response:
I loved writing the wedding! My lips are sealed on who is fighting though! See ya Next Tues! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 42. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 43.
(JPOV)
After waiting for what seemed liked forever, I finally got my bride back on the dance floor where we both belonged. Yeah, we needed to go and thank everyone for coming, but I really just wanted to spend every second of our special day together, alone in our own lil world. The song that was playing was perfect for our wedding reception it was talking about how the singer would stay with his love forever.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 02 Feb 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 42
great chapter. evil cliffie. Hmmm wonder is hippie bitch got away from caius?
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait to find out Chickie! LOL I know I am evil! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 42. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 43.
(JPOV)
After waiting for what seemed liked forever, I finally got my bride back on the dance floor where we both belonged. Yeah, we needed to go and thank everyone for coming, but I really just wanted to spend every second of our special day together, alone in our own lil world. The song that was playing was perfect for our wedding reception it was talking about how the singer would stay with his love forever.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh man!!!!
I cried the whole FREAKIN CHAPTER!!!!!
I love you, man!
You are like the freakin greatest writer of these two! OMG!
*hugs you so frickin tight*
I cannot WAIT to see who gets the smack down for startin shit at the MAJOR'S weddin'.
*waggles eyebrows in a very Emmett fashion*
lol
Author's Response:
Balti K... My beta, said that she cried reading the chappie the first time too! I asked if i should have added a tissue warning, but we decided againist it! Maybe, we were wrong?? I loved writing this chappie.. You know that I am evil with my cliffies! I love them so! LOL
Thanks for the wonderful compliments! I love writting this story!
Hugs~Izzy ;)
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 42. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 43.
(JPOV)
After waiting for what seemed liked forever, I finally got my bride back on the dance floor where we both belonged. Yeah, we needed to go and thank everyone for coming, but I really just wanted to spend every second of our special day together, alone in our own lil world. The song that was playing was perfect for our wedding reception it was talking about how the singer would stay with his love forever.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 01 Feb 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 42
Golly what a fantastic story, it just gets better each time!!!
Author's Response:
I am glad that you are enjoying THaTH! It's a ball to write... It's only as good as it is, because of my Beta... She is great with a red pen! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 42. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 43.
(JPOV)
After waiting for what seemed liked forever, I finally got my bride back on the dance floor where we both belonged. Yeah, we needed to go and thank everyone for coming, but I really just wanted to spend every second of our special day together, alone in our own lil world. The song that was playing was perfect for our wedding reception it was talking about how the singer would stay with his love forever.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 31 Jan 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 17
love it!
Author's Response:
Yep, Yep, Yep! Gotta love it... THere are things that I as a writer I wish I could have added during this chapter, but I loved writing it! Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 41
Holy wowsers! Its a wonder Charlie didnt go all Newborn on their condecending asses!
Love it!!!
Author's Response:
Great self control remember?? LOL But that would have been good, too! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 41… Here’s you Sneak Peek at Chapter 42..
(BPOV)
I took a deep breath and watched as Jasper gave me his famous shit eating grin, and I knew in that moment that I would love the man in front of me for as long as I lived.
Forever, Jasper said mentally to me.
Yes, for Eternity.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 25 Jan 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 41
hmm making him take a plwdge he doesnt understand the words too seem dangerous. great chapter though. gets rid of bitchy mom and sets up good rules. go charlie.
Author's Response:
Yep, you gotta love Charlie... I just love writing his POV... Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 41… Here’s you Sneak Peek at Chapter 42..
(BPOV)
I took a deep breath and watched as Jasper gave me his famous shit eating grin, and I knew in that moment that I would love the man in front of me for as long as I lived.
Forever, Jasper said mentally to me.
Yes, for Eternity.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 20 Jan 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 16
interesting
Author's Response:
A lot of ppl were not happy with me and Chapter 16... Everyone wanted the next chapter to be about the date... I guess, the date was just a means to an end for me as a writer... I loved writing all of the flashbacks though... I hope that you continue to read and enjoy THaTH, it's a blast to write... Hugs~Izzy
Date: 20 Jan 2011 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 40
Yea for Bella's real support system where they are.
GOOOOO Charlie. Fucker needed a good slug.
Author's Response:
Don't just love that the Lil Fucker, is gonna have to beg too??? LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 40… Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 41!
(Charlie POV)
Here is am standing on the wings of a stage set up at the Marriott, in Seattle, muttering to myself about the monkey suit that I’m wearing. Everyone’s nerves have been on the fritz since last weekend when the all hell broke loss, but things have been settling down nicely as far as I’m concerned.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 40
*falls over laughing hysterically*
HAHAHAAA! Lil Fucker now has to rely on Charlie to go through this Aquisition for Bells....
Karma is a bitch, just like your daughter, eh Aaron?
*wipes away tears streaming down my cheeks*
Loved this chapter! I cant wait to see what happens next! :)
Author's Response:
Yep, Yep, Yep... Karma will diffently come back and bite you in your ass... When you least expect it to! Gotta love it... Aaron has to do some time on his knees I believe... LMAO ;) Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 40… Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 41!
(Charlie POV)
Here is am standing on the wings of a stage set up at the Marriott, in Seattle, muttering to myself about the monkey suit that I’m wearing. Everyone’s nerves have been on the fritz since last weekend when the all hell broke loss, but things have been settling down nicely as far as I’m concerned.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 19 Jan 2011 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 40
Good job, awesome like always......
Author's Response:
I am so glad that you enjoyed the update... With me working, I can't update like i wish i could, but I am still doing my best to get updates out on time... Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 40… Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 41!
(Charlie POV)
Here is am standing on the wings of a stage set up at the Marriott, in Seattle, muttering to myself about the monkey suit that I’m wearing. Everyone’s nerves have been on the fritz since last weekend when the all hell broke loss, but things have been settling down nicely as far as I’m concerned.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 19 Jan 2011 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 40
i love the he cold cocked aaron just great and he has to beg charlie for a favor
Author's Response:
The begging will be good let me tell ya, and there are going to be some rules too... Gotta love that! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 40… Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 41!
(Charlie POV)
Here is am standing on the wings of a stage set up at the Marriott, in Seattle, muttering to myself about the monkey suit that I’m wearing. Everyone’s nerves have been on the fritz since last weekend when the all hell broke loss, but things have been settling down nicely as far as I’m concerned.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 12 Jan 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it so far and sl love that Peter and Char are in it, hope they're in it more I love them both :)
Author's Response:
Meeting the Cullen's was a great Chappie to write! What a way to meet your mate, HUH?? LOL Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 39
You know, right before she opens her eyes, the brief section of time between the last beat of her heart and her first unneccessary first breath, would be the opportune time to just rip her head from her shoulders, that way they could all be saved from her annoying voice when she awoke as a vampire.
But, that is just my mind going off in a tangent. I really, really don't like Renee. ;)
Great chapter, I cant wait to see how leaving effects Bells.
Author's Response:
THat would be great, but guess what??? Let me tell ya my plans with Renee... Oh, I forgot what I was going to say now! Sorry! ROFLMFAO! Hugs~Izzy PS I know that I am pure Evil! LOL
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 39. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 40…
BPOV
Jasper tightened his grip on me, as the full impact of had happened really started to kick in. How in the hell did Caius think that making that self-centered, hateful, egotistic, self-absorbed, narcissistic, bigheaded, arrogant, Hippie Bitch a vampire, that would live forever was beyond me, and I wanted N.O.T.H.I.N.G. to do with it.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 12 Jan 2011 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 39
SOMEBODY need to punch the lil fucker in the face. Hell Renee and Caius are perfect for each other. no one can really stand either of them
Author's Response:
OHHHHHHH, Just wait Aaron is going to on his and hands and knees soon Begging a certain someone for his HELP! I know I am evil, but you will love it! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 39. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 40…
BPOV
Jasper tightened his grip on me, as the full impact of had happened really started to kick in. How in the hell did Caius think that making that self-centered, hateful, egotistic, self-absorbed, narcissistic, bigheaded, arrogant, Hippie Bitch a vampire, that would live forever was beyond me, and I wanted N.O.T.H.I.N.G. to do with it.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 39
Love it!!
Author's Response:
Howdy, Jill! Thanks for the review! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 39. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 40…
BPOV
Jasper tightened his grip on me, as the full impact of had happened really started to kick in. How in the hell did Caius think that making that self-centered, hateful, egotistic, self-absorbed, narcissistic, bigheaded, arrogant, Hippie Bitch a vampire, that would live forever was beyond me, and I wanted N.O.T.H.I.N.G. to do with it.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 06 Jan 2011 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 38
I'm really enjoying this story, can't wait to read some more.
Author's Response:
Thanks... I am so sorry that it has taken me so long to get back to you... I started back to work, and as you can only imagine, my life is completely crazy right now.... Tax Season! Yicks! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for Reviewing Chapter 38. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 39!
JPOV
She’s been through too much, and I have got to do something and do something now. I know that she is not able to handle all of the fuckery that is going on around her, and she has hit her breaking point. It’s not like I don’t blame her. If all of this shit had happened to me in such a short amount of time, I would’ve lost it long before now.
“Major, I know that this is goin’ get ugly and fast. I have a plan already setup for us, but we need to go and we need to now,” Peter whispered into my ear.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 05 Jan 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 38
I am a selfish woman...
So, naturally, I am afraid for Peter. I am worried about Peters safety and well being, and so that includes Charlotte as well.
Renee can just go away to Volterra with Caius and never be heard from again....
And she gets downgraded from motherpod to aunt!
Aunts dont contact their nieces and nephews all the time, so that works!
*falls over laughing uncontrollably*
Author's Response:
I swear that Peter and Char are going to be alright... Yes, there are a few bumps in the road coming, but for the most part as long as they both stay in Bella's good greaces they will be completely perfect! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for Reviewing Chapter 38. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 39!
JPOV
She’s been through too much, and I have got to do something and do something now. I know that she is not able to handle all of the fuckery that is going on around her, and she has hit her breaking point. It’s not like I don’t blame her. If all of this shit had happened to me in such a short amount of time, I would’ve lost it long before now.
“Major, I know that this is goin’ get ugly and fast. I have a plan already setup for us, but we need to go and we need to now,” Peter whispered into my ear.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 05 Jan 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 38
Liked all the POVs. Jeez Renee is such a selfish biach.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is... But I wonder who will yank her chain??? Gotta love that soon! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for Reviewing Chapter 38. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 39!
JPOV
She’s been through too much, and I have got to do something and do something now. I know that she is not able to handle all of the fuckery that is going on around her, and she has hit her breaking point. It’s not like I don’t blame her. If all of this shit had happened to me in such a short amount of time, I would’ve lost it long before now.
“Major, I know that this is goin’ get ugly and fast. I have a plan already setup for us, but we need to go and we need to now,” Peter whispered into my ear.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 04 Jan 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 38
great as always
Author's Response:
Thanks Chickie... I was trying to get out there what everyone else was thinking when the shit went down... It will be needed in a few chappies! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for Reviewing Chapter 38. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 39!
JPOV
She’s been through too much, and I have got to do something and do something now. I know that she is not able to handle all of the fuckery that is going on around her, and she has hit her breaking point. It’s not like I don’t blame her. If all of this shit had happened to me in such a short amount of time, I would’ve lost it long before now.
“Major, I know that this is goin’ get ugly and fast. I have a plan already setup for us, but we need to go and we need to now,” Peter whispered into my ear.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2011 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 37
Congratulation on such a wonderful story I only started reading it I find that I could not stop I love you have combine to different super natural charecters and mated them together and the way that Bella & Jusper are equal is another thing that I love about the whole story and the very funny bits thrown in between makes it a very special story to read thank you
Author's Response:
I am so glad that you are enjoying THaTH... I love writing it... Happy New Year chickie... Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38.
Hugs~Izzy
Carlisle’s POV
Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.
Date: 30 Dec 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 37
Wow never saw that coming!!! OK now we wait to see what's next....Good job :)
Author's Response:
I swear that I am going to post the next chappie on Tues... No one saw that one coming.... LOL Gotta Love it! Happy New Year... Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38.
Hugs~Izzy
Carlisle’s POV
Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 37
OH NO FUCKIN WAY?!?!?!
DAMNIT ALL TO HADES!!!!!!
Are you shittin me? Are you shittin me?!?!
Damnit....
I guess there is no getting rid of Hippie Bitch now...
Damnitol, its for when you just cant handle the fuckery anymore...
I cant wait to see the result of this mess :)
Author's Response:
Go ahead and tell me how you really feel??!!!?? ROFLMFAO! Too Funny! Happy New Year! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38.
Hugs~Izzy
Carlisle’s POV
Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 15
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks... I loved giving Renee the what for in that chappie... She had it coming if you ask me... Hugs~Izzy
Date: 29 Dec 2010 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 37
oh god hippie bitch and Caius.....hmmmm makbe he can keep her in line. oohhhh Grandpa needs his arse handed to him
Author's Response:
Damn Straight he needs his ass handed to him... Though I believe Caius is some hot shit himslef... I wonder how the elves are gonna handle this fuckery? Happy New Year Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38.
Hugs~Izzy
Carlisle’s POV
Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.
Date: 29 Dec 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 37
I gotta tell ya, this story is one of my favorites, it's funny and I like that it's Bella and Jasper.. I loved the whole bee gee's storyline, it was really funny..
thank you
pat
Author's Response:
Howdy Pat, I am so glad that you are enjoying THaTH... It's a blast to write... Though this last Chappie kicked my ass... I hope you have a great New Year.. Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38.
Hugs~Izzy
Carlisle’s POV
Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2010 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 37
OSM...... didnt see that coming,amazing,hope bella will be ok? lil' fucker is about to have a near full vamp family lol find it totally ironic and the fact that renee is now part of the vamp royalty. oh well hope they can sort through it?.....
excellent as always =) hope you have a nice new year.c.
Author's Response: OSM, is right! LOL Gotta love that NO one saw this coming... Hugs~Izzy Happy New Year to you too! ;) Thanks for your Review of Chapter 37. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chpater38. Hugs~Izzy Carlisle’s POV Esme and I had left the house early today. Carmen and Eleazar wanted to meet up with us early. Jasper’s and Bella’s shower was not to take place until the early afternoon, so we had a few hours to kill before our presences would be needed at the Tea Cottage.
Date: 28 Dec 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
interesting
Author's Response:
Yeppers, the whole story started before B was even born... Hugs~Izzy
Date: 26 Dec 2010 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 36
awww poor b
Author's Response:
Yeppers, and the shower has it's own surprises! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chappie 36. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chappie 37!
BPOV
Today was the day of wedding shower, and I knew that there weren’t going to be that many women attending, not to mention anything that I wanted before or after the wedding I’d get on my own. I wondered if I’d even know the women that were attending this shindig, at Chris’ Tea Cottage? Geez, Tea Cottage? Who the hell came up with that name?
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2010 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 36
Loved it!
She can throw a fit if she wants to!
lol
Author's Response:
I agree, but sometimes she needs to where and when to throw a fit! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chappie 36. Here is your Sneak Peek at Chappie 37!
BPOV
Today was the day of wedding shower, and I knew that there weren’t going to be that many women attending, not to mention anything that I wanted before or after the wedding I’d get on my own. I wondered if I’d even know the women that were attending this shindig, at Chris’ Tea Cottage? Geez, Tea Cottage? Who the hell came up with that name?
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 22 Dec 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
Golly I love this story!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Chickie! I love writing it! I will post again on Sat! Just so you know! Have a great Christmas! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 35! Here is your Sneak Peek at Chapter 36! I hope that Everyone has a Great Christmas and enjoys the ones that you are with this year! Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 36
(BPOV)
You need to get outta here for a while. Do ya wanta go for a ride with me? Jas asked as I sighed after inhaling his wonderful scent.
Yeah, but it will have to wait until after I eat and get some blood into me. Your son ... I stopped and pocked my finger into Jasper’s chest … is a demanding little bugger
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 35
OMG I loved this chapter so much!!!!!!!
Petey is SO gonna get it *snickers*
I am gonna love readin it too!
Author's Response:
Yeppers! LOL Gotta Love It!
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 35! Here is your Sneak Peek at Chapter 36! I hope that Everyone has a Great Christmas and enjoys the ones that you are with this year! Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 36
(BPOV)
You need to get outta here for a while. Do ya wanta go for a ride with me? Jas asked as I sighed after inhaling his wonderful scent.
Yeah, but it will have to wait until after I eat and get some blood into me. Your son ... I stopped and pocked my finger into Jasper’s chest … is a demanding little bugger.
Date: 21 Dec 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 35
Sounds like a great place. Woo Hoo for the pool
Author's Response:
Yep, she needed a place to do her stuff, but i looked it up and the closest pool was all in the billings! So i had add a pool to the house! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 35! Here is your Sneak Peek at Chapter 36! I hope that Everyone has a Great Christmas and enjoys the ones that you are with this year! Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 36
(BPOV)
You need to get outta here for a while. Do ya wanta go for a ride with me? Jas asked as I sighed after inhaling his wonderful scent.
Yeah, but it will have to wait until after I eat and get some blood into me. Your son ... I stopped and pocked my finger into Jasper’s chest … is a demanding little bugger.
| I like it! It's a lil confusing right now, but I am sure that you are planning on giving us the details lil by lil! Great way to keep the readers coming back! I start back to work in a few weeks so I wont be able to read or write like I want to. I also have a couple of teenage sons that need to be looked after! I hope that you keep up the great work, you have a great start to your story. Hugs~Izzy |
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Thank you that made my day :) And all the details will come out little by little like why Bella was born or why JAsper dont remember or even why Maria is her mom :) So thank you and I will keep up with your story because it is wonderful and amazing. |
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Thank you for your Review of Chapter 35! Here is your Sneak Peek at Chapter 36! I hope that Everyone has a Great Christmas and enjoys the ones that you are with this year! Hugs~Izzy Chapter 36 (BPOV) You need to get outta here for a while. Do ya wanta go for a ride with me? Jas asked as I sighed after inhaling his wonderful scent. Yeah, but it will have to wait until after I eat and get some blood into me. Your son ... I stopped and pocked my finger into Jasper’s chest … is a demanding little bugger. I like it! It's a lil confusing right now, but I am sure that you are planning on giving us the details lil by lil! Great way to keep the readers coming back!I start back to work in a few weeks so I wont be able to read or write like I want to. I also have a couple of teenage sons that need to be looked after! I hope that you keep up the great work, you have a great start to your story. Hugs~Izzy |
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Thank you that made my day :) And all the details will come out little by little like why Bella was born or why JAsper dont remember or even why Maria is her mom :) So thank you and I will keep up with your story because it is wonderful and amazing. |
Date: 21 Dec 2010 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 35
great chapter... go sox
Author's Response:
There is a girl on FF, that is a HUGE Cubs fan. We talk and she's constantly downing my Sox! I couldn't take it, and promised her payback! So she got it! Chicago fans are really big on their favorite teams and we can't stand when someone says" Yes, i'm a Cubs fan." when can't stand the Cubs, and visa versa! You can mess with a lot of stuff but when it comes to our favoirte teams, we can get down right pissy! LOL Hugs~Izzy
PS I agree GO WHITE SOX!!!
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 35! Here is your Sneak Peek at Chapter 36! I hope that Everyone has a Great Christmas and enjoys the ones that you are with this year! Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 36
(BPOV)
You need to get outta here for a while. Do ya wanta go for a ride with me? Jas asked as I sighed after inhaling his wonderful scent.
Yeah, but it will have to wait until after I eat and get some blood into me. Your son ... I stopped and pocked my finger into Jasper’s chest … is a demanding little bugger.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 34
thank you for taking time to feed our addiction while your family life is in turmoil.
Author's Response:
No Problem...2010 has NOT been the best year for us as a family, but we are hanging in there together... I started writing as a way to leave my problems behind, and find a way to realease some pent up juices! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 34! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 35~
Hugs~Izzy
I couldn’t believe that my girl had pulled the wool over my eyes like that. I’m an empathic vampire, for fuck’s sake. She really had Peter, Char, and me going there for a few minutes, and I was starting to really wonder what in the hell teacher’s were teaching this new generation.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 34
Heehee, the fun that is messin' with Petey.
I love it!
Author's Response:
Gotta love getting one over on Yoda! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 34! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 35~
Hugs~Izzy
I couldn’t believe that my girl had pulled the wool over my eyes like that. I’m an empathic vampire, for fuck’s sake. She really had Peter, Char, and me going there for a few minutes, and I was starting to really wonder what in the hell teacher’s were teaching this new generation.
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 34
Shit (sorry best expression to put here), now I feel really old, I know all the popculture stuff (I was in middle school when Cobian died and some girl carved CC into her arm) and anchient items such as record, rotery telephone ect ect and Im not that old (born in the early 1980's)! Your story is great, a bit strange when it comes to elves, and enjoyable! :)
Jilly
Author's Response:
Thanks Jilly, I know it takes some getting used to, but I do have a plan for all of it! Most of the 'plan' comes together right before the wedding! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of Chapter 34! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 35~
Hugs~Izzy
I couldn’t believe that my girl had pulled the wool over my eyes like that. I’m an empathic vampire, for fuck’s sake. She really had Peter, Char, and me going there for a few minutes, and I was starting to really wonder what in the hell teacher’s were teaching this new generation.
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 34
lol for B picking on Petey
Author's Response:
Yep, B got him a couple of times, I wonder what he's going to do about it? LOL
Thanks for your review of Chapter 34! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 35~
Hugs~Izzy
I couldn’t believe that my girl had pulled the wool over my eyes like that. I’m an empathic vampire, for fuck’s sake. She really had Peter, Char, and me going there for a few minutes, and I was starting to really wonder what in the hell teacher’s were teaching this new generation.
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 33
major!!!!,,,,take me,take me,hopefully the order for the line is still the same you first me second everyone else can shove off,pmsl....the was one HOT,HOT lemon,looking forward to the pranks/ laughs in the new house,also i hope they kick some serious vamp butt with the pervs hanging out in the woods?????lol,,,,,,
excellent ch. can't wait for next up date....merry christmas,cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
Getting to the house is what Chapter 34 is about! I will post it on Sat! Hugs~Izzy Merry Christmas Chickie!
Thanks for your Review! Here is your Sneak-a-Peek at Chapter 34!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 34
(BPOV)
“Isabella, why are you doing this to us?” Jasper, or hell, I think it was the Major asking.
Charlotte was rocking with laughter at the two fools sitting at the table acting like five year olds, asked to eat there lima beans.
“Well, I thought that since you weren’t paying attention to me earlier that this might be a great way to get and keep your attention,” I boosted.
“Major, believe that your pregnant mate has lost her better judgment and took up smokin’ crack,” Petey all but growled out, causing Char and I to laugh even harder at them.
See you on Saturday! Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 33
I think that was a great chapter.
I really enjoyed reading his POV....
wow, I think I need a cold shower now.
*runs away from steamy screen*
Author's Response:
I gave you a warning! You can't say I didn't! LMAO Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review! Here is your Sneak-a-Peek at Chapter 34!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 34
(BPOV)
“Isabella, why are you doing this to us?” Jasper, or hell, I think it was the Major asking.
Charlotte was rocking with laughter at the two fools sitting at the table acting like five year olds, asked to eat there lima beans.
“Well, I thought that since you weren’t paying attention to me earlier that this might be a great way to get and keep your attention,” I boosted.
“Major, believe that your pregnant mate has lost her better judgment and took up smokin’ crack,” Petey all but growled out, causing Char and I to laugh even harder at them.
See you on Saturday! Hugs~Izzy
Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 33
loving this story!
Author's Response:
Thank You! I enjoy writing it! I post every Tues & Sat! Just so you know! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review! Here is your Sneak-a-Peek at Chapter 34!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 34
(BPOV)
“Isabella, why are you doing this to us?” Jasper, or hell, I think it was the Major asking.
Charlotte was rocking with laughter at the two fools sitting at the table acting like five year olds, asked to eat there lima beans.
“Well, I thought that since you weren’t paying attention to me earlier that this might be a great way to get and keep your attention,” I boosted.
“Major, believe that your pregnant mate has lost her better judgment and took up smokin’ crack,” Petey all but growled out, causing Char and I to laugh even harder at them.
See you on Saturday! Hugs~Izzy
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 33
another great chapter and i cant wait for more. your lemons are hot... and sure a story doesnt need them but they sure offset the drama of a story in an enjoyable way. thank you again for all the hard work you put into this.
sam
Author's Response:
Thanks, Sam! THaTH is easy to write except for the lemons! LOL I am a Preachers daughter! LOL Ya, I know hard to believe it, but I am! So lemons kind of put a kink in my armor! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review! Here is your Sneak-a-Peek at Chapter 34!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 34
(BPOV)
“Isabella, why are you doing this to us?” Jasper, or hell, I think it was the Major asking.
Charlotte was rocking with laughter at the two fools sitting at the table acting like five year olds, asked to eat there lima beans.
“Well, I thought that since you weren’t paying attention to me earlier that this might be a great way to get and keep your attention,” I boosted.
“Major, believe that your pregnant mate has lost her better judgment and took up smokin’ crack,” Petey all but growled out, causing Char and I to laugh even harder at them.
See you on Saturday! Hugs~Izzy
Date: 14 Dec 2010 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
Yumminess abounding.
Author's Response:
I agree, but it took me several days to write that lemon!!! It about killed me! LMAO Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review! Here is your Sneak-a-Peek at Chapter 34!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 34
(BPOV)
“Isabella, why are you doing this to us?” Jasper, or hell, I think it was the Major asking.
Charlotte was rocking with laughter at the two fools sitting at the table acting like five year olds, asked to eat there lima beans.
“Well, I thought that since you weren’t paying attention to me earlier that this might be a great way to get and keep your attention,” I boosted.
“Major, believe that your pregnant mate has lost her better judgment and took up smokin’ crack,” Petey all but growled out, causing Char and I to laugh even harder at them.
See you on Saturday! Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 32
OMG, the baby can throw his bloodlust at his daddy?!
Wow... That is awesome!
:)
Author's Response:
Yep, he's gonna give Jasper a run for his money, that's for sure! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 32! Here’s your HOT Sneak Peek at Chapter 33…
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 33
JPOV
I know that this is new to you, but want to show you all the ways in which you body can feel pleasure. Remember how we talked about gettin’ some pleasure from a lil bit of pain? Have I hurt you in any way since we started this journey together?
No, you’ve always been very caring with me, she answered.
I wouldn’t start harming you now, and you can tell me quit at anytime.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 11 Dec 2010 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 32
another great chapter and i cant wait for the next one. im glad bella is finally figuring out whats what...its hard not to worry about even the small stuff when your pregnat...and she has a very heavy load to carry.
sam
Author's Response:
Yes, Bella does, but she is getting it together! I will update again, on Tues, and let me tell ya... it has a 2400 word Grapefruit sized lemon in it!! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 32! Here’s your HOT Sneak Peek at Chapter 33…
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 33
JPOV
I know that this is new to you, but want to show you all the ways in which you body can feel pleasure. Remember how we talked about gettin’ some pleasure from a lil bit of pain? Have I hurt you in any way since we started this journey together?
No, you’ve always been very caring with me, she answered.
I wouldn’t start harming you now, and you can tell me quit at anytime.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 11 Dec 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 32
hope they find a new swim place for her at the new home.
Author's Response:
Me too! I know from experience how great it felt to be in a pool while preggers! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 32! Here’s your HOT Sneak Peek at Chapter 33…
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 33
JPOV
I know that this is new to you, but want to show you all the ways in which you body can feel pleasure. Remember how we talked about gettin’ some pleasure from a lil bit of pain? Have I hurt you in any way since we started this journey together?
No, you’ve always been very caring with me, she answered.
I wouldn’t start harming you now, and you can tell me quit at anytime.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 31
another great chapter and i cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thanks Chickie, it'll be out on Sat... It's supposed to snow here in Chicago that day, so I hope the power stays on long enough to post! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 31. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 32.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 32
(BPOV)
I mean let’s face it. This is not your normal human pregnancy and I am sure that things are bound to different with me than what the books are saying. But these damn nagging thoughts just wouldn’t leave me alone for very long, and I wanted answers. I was getting tired of the ‘let’s just wait and see,’ bullshit.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 09 Dec 2010 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 31
yumminess.... aro is going to be difficult i think
Author's Response:
I like to think of Aro a Big Kid... He wants what he wants, when he wants it... He thinks that others should just fall at his feet easily, and when they don't he pouts!! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 31. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 32.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 32
(BPOV)
I mean let’s face it. This is not your normal human pregnancy and I am sure that things are bound to different with me than what the books are saying. But these damn nagging thoughts just wouldn’t leave me alone for very long, and I wanted answers. I was getting tired of the ‘let’s just wait and see,’ bullshit.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 31
Sweet niblits!!! Poor Bells, the Major was a bit much for her.
I have a feeling it will get better though :)
Awesome update! Cant wait to read more :)
Author's Response:
Yep, the Major does seem to scare her, but I think she might start getting use to him soon! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 31. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 32.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 32
(BPOV)
I mean let’s face it. This is not your normal human pregnancy and I am sure that things are bound to different with me than what the books are saying. But these damn nagging thoughts just wouldn’t leave me alone for very long, and I wanted answers. I was getting tired of the ‘let’s just wait and see,’ bullshit.
Hugs~Izz
Date: 06 Dec 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 30
awww Bella playing peacemaker....
Author's Response:
Yep, I wonder why that is???? Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 30. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 31.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 31
(JPOV)
I instantly knew that there was no way to keep the Major from escaping the cage that I’d kept him in for so many years. I knew that Jasper Whitlock was a man known for his compassion and tolerance. And the Major on the other hand was a possessive and uncaring bastard that would only worry about what was his and his alone. I knew that he scared the hell outta our mate, but I couldn’t help but let him outta his carefully crafted cell to protect our mate and our child.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2010 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 30
Beautiful chapter, very insightful!
I love the way you write their interactions!
Author's Response:
Thanks, writing a conversation between people/couple is my favorite part of writing! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 30. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 31.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 31
(JPOV)
I instantly knew that there was no way to keep the Major from escaping the cage that I’d kept him in for so many years. I knew that Jasper Whitlock was a man known for his compassion and tolerance. And the Major on the other hand was a possessive and uncaring bastard that would only worry about what was his and his alone. I knew that he scared the hell outta our mate, but I couldn’t help but let him outta his carefully crafted cell to protect our mate and our child.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 04 Dec 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 30
wonderful
Author's Response:
Thanks, Chickie! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 30. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 31.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 31
(JPOV)
I instantly knew that there was no way to keep the Major from escaping the cage that I’d kept him in for so many years. I knew that Jasper Whitlock was a man known for his compassion and tolerance. And the Major on the other hand was a possessive and uncaring bastard that would only worry about what was his and his alone. I knew that he scared the hell outta our mate, but I couldn’t help but let him outta his carefully crafted cell to protect our mate and our child.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 30
omg ,i would like some lessons from the major,is this were the shit hits the fan?lol or is bella going to go all hormonal and kick some more ass?
excellent ch. hope you update soon.c.
Author's Response:
I guess we will have to wait and see... I know that i am evil! LOL hugs~Izzy I'll see you TUes like always!
Thank you for your review of Chapter 30. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 31.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 31
(JPOV)
I instantly knew that there was no way to keep the Major from escaping the cage that I’d kept him in for so many years. I knew that Jasper Whitlock was a man known for his compassion and tolerance. And the Major on the other hand was a possessive and uncaring bastard that would only worry about what was his and his alone. I knew that he scared the hell outta our mate, but I couldn’t help but let him outta his carefully crafted cell to protect our mate and our child.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 04 Dec 2010 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
for some reason my reviews are ending up in neverland...so please know that ive read and loved every chapter. and while yes my spelling is horid my grammer isnt as bad as it looks...for some reason not all the buttons on my phone work on this site.
im hopping this will go throu
stephannie
Author's Response:
Hello! I am so glad that you are enoying THaTH! I love writing it... Don't worry about your grammer, mine, is just as bad I promise you that! LOL I update every Tues and Sat. just so you know! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your review of Chapter 30. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 31.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 31
(JPOV)
I instantly knew that there was no way to keep the Major from escaping the cage that I’d kept him in for so many years. I knew that Jasper Whitlock was a man known for his compassion and tolerance. And the Major on the other hand was a possessive and uncaring bastard that would only worry about what was his and his alone. I knew that he scared the hell outta our mate, but I couldn’t help but let him outta his carefully crafted cell to protect our mate and our child.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 29
hmmm hope that unknown POV is someone else and not the other resolute couple
Author's Response:
I dunno??? HEHEHEee You're just gonna have to wait and see! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 29! Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 30!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 30
(BPOV)
I slowly rolled over and was staring at the ceiling as Jasper got up off the bed and made his way toward the bathroom. I heard the water in the sink running and a few short seconds late my mate walked out of the bathroom with a wet washcloth in his hands. After handing the cool cloth to me, I started to slowly rub my face clean and it felt wonderful to me.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 29
WTF?!?!?!
Yikes that is kind of a scary ending!
*shakes in my boots*
Author's Response:
You are calling it scary and someone else called it creepy! LOL I dunno???? I guess we will have to wait and see what the hell happens! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 29! Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 30!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 30
(BPOV)
I slowly rolled over and was staring at the ceiling as Jasper got up off the bed and made his way toward the bathroom. I heard the water in the sink running and a few short seconds late my mate walked out of the bathroom with a wet washcloth in his hands. After handing the cool cloth to me, I started to slowly rub my face clean and it felt wonderful to me.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 29
OSM,plz dont leave us hanging on too long ,excellent cliffy,,,,,maybe jasper should just hit the sex bible that is 'kama sutra'....*shivers*kama sutra and the major,,hehehehehe,pmsl.(i know your thinking about it izzy!!!!) =P
ANYWAY,,,,,,,,, another great ch. looking forward to next up date,cheerio for now ,.c.
Author's Response:
I hope you know that I am a Preacher's daughter! Yeah, No SHIT!!! and i would never never ever think anything like that! Nope, it ain't gonna happen! THoughts are pure, wonderful I like thinking about ..... ;O Nevermind! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 29! Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 30!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 30
(BPOV)
I slowly rolled over and was staring at the ceiling as Jasper got up off the bed and made his way toward the bathroom. I heard the water in the sink running and a few short seconds late my mate walked out of the bathroom with a wet washcloth in his hands. After handing the cool cloth to me, I started to slowly rub my face clean and it felt wonderful to me.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 29 Nov 2010 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 27
i"m so sorry to hear about your uncle.
sham
Author's Response:
Thanks Chickie! He was a great guy and his love and devotion to his wife was an awesome thing to watch. But when he lost her, that's when we really lost him! It's kind of nice knowing that they can be together again! she died in July, and he died in Nov. Hugs~Izzy
Date: 28 Nov 2010 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 28
hmmm wonder why he's worried about aro
Author's Response:
I dunno??? LOL Jasper was in Major mode just a while ago, maybe he is still not over it??? Maybe Not! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thank You for your Review of Chapter 28! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 29!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 29 (JPOV)
I’ve been trying since we found out that Bella and I are expecting the baby to be more open to the Lil Fucker, but he and I are like oil and water; we just can’t mix together. I’ll admit that he has been doing better and trying harder than I’ve ever known him to, but I always have a thought of ‘what if’ or ‘what’s he up to now’ in my head.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 28
Aaah!! Why were his emotions going haywire???
Eeek, I is Skeered nowz.
:)
Loved the update though!
Author's Response:
I dunno? LMAO Maybe, nah, I ain't giving anything away! Hugs~Izzy
Thank You for your Review of Chapter 28! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 29!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 29 (JPOV)
I’ve been trying since we found out that Bella and I are expecting the baby to be more open to the Lil Fucker, but he and I are like oil and water; we just can’t mix together. I’ll admit that he has been doing better and trying harder than I’ve ever known him to, but I always have a thought of ‘what if’ or ‘what’s he up to now’ in my head.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 28
oooooohhhhhh is jasper gonna get trouble from aro? so now that the pair need a break from the house are we going to see a naughty weekend in their plans? really want more,pppplllllllllllzzzzzzzz, really not ashamed to beg, pmsl.excellent ch. until next time,cheerio.c.
Author's Response:
OR are the other Resolutes gonna come soon?? Ummm ... I think the others are coming! (That sounds bad even writing it!! LOL) A weekend away will happen but there are a few lil things that pop up along the way... I know I sound like a politicain. dont I? I never give anyone a REAL ansewer! HUgs~Izzy
Thank You for your Review of Chapter 28! Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 29!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 29 (JPOV)
I’ve been trying since we found out that Bella and I are expecting the baby to be more open to the Lil Fucker, but he and I are like oil and water; we just can’t mix together. I’ll admit that he has been doing better and trying harder than I’ve ever known him to, but I always have a thought of ‘what if’ or ‘what’s he up to now’ in my head.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 27
so sorry about your uncle,my thoughts are with you.
excellent ch,looking forward to more,i'll send the major over with hugs,cheerio for now.c.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your thoughts! Ok, Senf the Major over! I need a back rub, and Oh yeah ... Never mind! LMAO!! Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 27. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 28.
Have a Great Thanksgiving!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 28 (BPOV)
I watched as Jasper normally butterscotch colored eyes turned into jet black orbs with his lust. As I took an extraordinarily, painfully slow time releasing each button on the shirt of his I was wearing. One by fucking one. Jasper’s body went to move off of the bed, but I made sure to hold my shield securely around him.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter hun. They dont always have to be long Take care of yourself and your family.
Author's Response:
Will Do! It's been a rough couple of weeks but I feel Like I'm finally getting back to were I need to be to write! Thanks again~ Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 27. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 28.
Have a Great Thanksgiving!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 28 (BPOV)
I watched as Jasper normally butterscotch colored eyes turned into jet black orbs with his lust. As I took an extraordinarily, painfully slow time releasing each button on the shirt of his I was wearing. One by fucking one. Jasper’s body went to move off of the bed, but I made sure to hold my shield securely around him.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 27
It may be a short chapter to you dear, but your readers appreciate it none the less :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks ... I really try to write between 10,000 and 15,000 words a week for y'all. That was such a hard week for me to write. So, i just finished where I was when the call came in, and sent it off to Balti K (My Beta). I just couldn't deal with writing anything happy right them. And i daught very much that y'all would have liked a sad chappie! Hugs~Izzy
PS: Thanks for being my 100th Reviewer on TWCS!
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 27. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 28.
Have a Great Thanksgiving!
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 28 (BPOV)
I watched as Jasper normally butterscotch colored eyes turned into jet black orbs with his lust. As I took an extraordinarily, painfully slow time releasing each button on the shirt of his I was wearing. One by fucking one. Jasper’s body went to move off of the bed, but I made sure to hold my shield securely around him.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
HAHA Loved it!!
I am so TEAM WHITLOCK!!!!
I have been since I read Colliding Meteors
Peter is a must have character in any Jasper story :)
Love it, cant wait to see more :)
Author's Response:
I agree girlie! Gotta love Peter! Lord, knows that Charlotte does! LMAO Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 26. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 27.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 27
(JPOV)
When Bella was awake during the day, I tried to read as much as I could about pregnancy, the birthing process, what the lil Peanut was doing on each giving day, how he was changing and growing. Anything I could get my hands on about this shit, I was taking to like a duck to fuckin’ water.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 21 Nov 2010 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
great chapter. peter is too funny
Author's Response:
I love Peter! I have tried to write from his POV before and just couldn't do it! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 26. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 27.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 27
(JPOV)
When Bella was awake during the day, I tried to read as much as I could about pregnancy, the birthing process, what the lil Peanut was doing on each giving day, how he was changing and growing. Anything I could get my hands on about this shit, I was taking to like a duck to fuckin’ water.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
awww, i think i want to kill alice she reaaly doesn't want to be on the receiving end of more hormonal bella,,,,i could see a few matches being lit,lmao.......i hate to say it but the major would be dead if he had said 'fat' things to me ,there would of been no chance of an apology,lol.....it's too quiet with the wolves and other elves whats happening?
excellent ch. really ,really want more,until next time .c.
Author's Response:
Ummm, the others??? Good question! ;)
Yep, and I think that Alice also has a death wish by pissing off a pregnant elf! LOL
Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your Review of Chapter 26. Here’s your Sneak Peek at Chapter 27.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 27
(JPOV)
When Bella was awake during the day, I tried to read as much as I could about pregnancy, the birthing process, what the lil Peanut was doing on each giving day, how he was changing and growing. Anything I could get my hands on about this shit, I was taking to like a duck to fuckin’ water.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 18 Nov 2010 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
what are you going to name the baby? That was such a sweet chapter!
Author's Response:
What am I going to name the baby? Ummm .... I had the name chosen months before i even started to write. I guess, you'll just have to wait and see. LOL I know that I am evil sorry! Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 25. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 26.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 26 (BPOV)
Alice was still talking about what she had planned for us to do today, and how Jasper and I had kept everyone from getting ready earlier. I kind of laughed at how one couple kept all of the others so busy that they were unable to get ready for their day. Especially since one half of that first couple, slept for several hours in the night.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG!!! I love this story! The voice that you're sharing with us through your writting is awe inspiring! Thank you for all the hard work you've put into this and I can't wait for the next chapter!
sam
Author's Response:
WOW, thanks for such a great compliment. I love writing this story! hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 25. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 26.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 26 (BPOV)
Alice was still talking about what she had planned for us to do today, and how Jasper and I had kept everyone from getting ready earlier. I kind of laughed at how one couple kept all of the others so busy that they were unable to get ready for their day. Especially since one half of that first couple, slept for several hours in the night.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
excellent ch. again .i can only imagine that bella is floating on a cloud of jasper fluffyness lmao.*sigh* i wish.until next update.c.
Author's Response:
LOL you gotta to love any type of floating around Jasper! ;) Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 25. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 26.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 26 (BPOV)
Alice was still talking about what she had planned for us to do today, and how Jasper and I had kept everyone from getting ready earlier. I kind of laughed at how one couple kept all of the others so busy that they were unable to get ready for their day. Especially since one half of that first couple, slept for several hours in the night.
Hugs~Izzy
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved Charlie's reaction :)
I was hoping for a boy as well.
Author's Response:
It's a Boy! Three words that had never been spoken to Charlie! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 25. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 26.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 26 (BPOV)
Alice was still talking about what she had planned for us to do today, and how Jasper and I had kept everyone from getting ready earlier. I kind of laughed at how one couple kept all of the others so busy that they were unable to get ready for their day. Especially since one half of that first couple, slept for several hours in the night.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
Its a Boy!! Woo Hoo. Can't blame Jazz for being suspicious of Ashling. The fact she works for Sneaky Grandpa is cause for worry. Hope they dont plan on stealing the child.
Author's Response:
Yep, it's a Boy. I couldn't saddle Jasper with a little girl. That poor lil girl would NEVER be able to date! LOL Hugs~Izzy
Thank you for your Review of Chapter 25. Here’s your Sneak Peek into Chapter 26.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 26 (BPOV)
Alice was still talking about what she had planned for us to do today, and how Jasper and I had kept everyone from getting ready earlier. I kind of laughed at how one couple kept all of the others so busy that they were unable to get ready for their day. Especially since one half of that first couple, slept for several hours in the night.
Hugs~Izzy
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 24
Twins a boy and a girl I hope.
Author's Response:
You'll find out Tomorrow when I update again! ;) Hugs~Izzy
Thanks for your review of chapter 24. Here’s your Sneak Peek into chapter25.
Hugs~Izzy
Chapter 25 (JPOV)
“Before I turn this picture into 4-D, I need to know if you two want to know what you are having? The fetus’ outline will be quite clear from this new angle.”
Hugs~Izzy